2011-11-20, 03:22 | Link #8545 |
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I'm actually not afraid to give her a bigger role in Vandam. After all, the initial plan did call for Houki and Cecilia to appear. I later reduced it in case I caused a canon paradox.
But perhaps I should have someone worthy of being called a Representative Candidate do a little more... Houki still gets pranked by Tabane. But in a good way. Laura remains a cameo however. The 'villainous plot' scene I have for her is too cheesy to pass up. I'll just face-drop Charlotte, Ichika and Lingyin for completeness.
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2011-11-20, 04:06 | Link #8548 | |
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I planned on using the whole day to write Ch. 4 out, but because of "personal matters" offline (the kind that's not all that important), hours were lost. If I didn't loose those hours, Ch. 4 would've been done hours ago. Oh and as for an Opening that you guys talked about a few pages ago; I think I have something for Project Silverback. It's something that some of you guys are familiar with... Spoiler for Possible Project Silverback OP:
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2011-11-20, 05:00 | Link #8552 |
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@ Box - Still sucks though Only reason I went to sleep is because no one here was posting
@ Zero - I posted a re-hash of Irish's epilogue on 426. Please tell me if it's okay or not so I know whether I can start on the first part of chapter 5.
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2011-11-20, 05:05 | Link #8555 | |
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There's only one modem in the house, one steam powered PC without ethernet card and one high end laptop, do the math.
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2011-11-20, 05:06 | Link #8556 |
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Well if you must know, Vicky is a guerrilla ace trained since he was a zygote, he's been fighting giant watermelon mechas on fire, blind-folded, underwater, in space for 1312342 centuries now, fighting for the sole purpose of attaining modern conveniences, I hope that clears all your doubts.
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2011-11-20, 05:13 | Link #8558 | |
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Irish is a recon/ assassin type guy, and while he wouldn't bother to remember people's physical appearance, he MIGHT pay a lot of attention to the environment itself.
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2011-11-20, 05:20 | Link #8559 |
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@ Zero - Thank you! Ichika does tend to monologue and act as Mr. exposition in chapter 2/3 so I have no problem with that.
Pay attention to the environment more? As in: Take note of things like lighting, possible escape plans, trying to see if there's guards on the outside etc etc? Like that?
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1. Analyzing if they're allies or foe. 2. Whether they're dangerous or not. 3. Anything else that's slightly more trivial.
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