2010-10-30, 12:18 | Link #27622 |
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Twin Fates chapter 5 is up~
...hope you guys don't mind me giving Nanoha even a little background in her family's techniques.
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2010-10-30, 15:39 | Link #27624 | |
Cute things, sharp teeth.
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Indeed! Obviously I myself got around to a fair bit of procrastination, but this was inspired by you: Spoiler for A half windsor:
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2010-10-30, 18:23 | Link #27625 |
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Heh. The punchline had me chuckling for a while.
Also, the tension's really building now; I'm getting rather curious about how the eventual confrontation between Yuuno and Material-D is gonna go down.
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2010-10-30, 18:35 | Link #27626 |
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Hi!
Hi! I thought I'd join in with a little something that's bean bugging me for some time now, it'll give me something to do well I wait for the next chapter of Future Tense.
As a note, boys might not want to read this. Spoiler for Time of the Month:
Well, that didn't turn out like I expected, for one thing it was supposed to be longer, and the plot was different. Doesn't matter though, it was great to get that plot bunny off my chest. Last edited by Diamonds Dream; 2010-10-30 at 19:20. Reason: fixing some mistakes |
2010-10-30, 18:50 | Link #27627 | ||
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It looks awesome. And really, I actually love Lulu's expression there; I always imagined her either blanking out or freezing up when Vivio flirted with her like that, so I thought it fit her. ^^ Thank you very much! Quote:
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2010-10-30, 19:11 | Link #27628 | |
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2010-10-30, 20:35 | Link #27629 |
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Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
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@Diamonds Dream: If it wasn't for the title, I would have thought that Fate was dying bloodily or something! The tone leading up to that last sentence really gave off this ominous air .
A rough update...Fate's testimony and the end of Trial Day 2. Looks like things aren't going so well between the three Aces... Crime Never Sleeps Part 11: Trial Day 2 end “The worst things we do are always by our own choice.” Spoiler for Crime Never Sleeps, part 11: Trial Day 2 end:
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New Part 1-4A New Part 4B New Part 5: Trial Day 1A New Part 5: Trial Day 1B New Part 5: Trial Day 1C and New Part 6 New Part 7 Part 8 and Part 9: Trial Day 2 Part 10: Trial Day 2 Sadly, this will likely be my last update before NaNo swallows me alive!
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2010-10-30, 20:40 | Link #27630 | |
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Major ouchies all around here, on? I mean... ouch. I admit to having been a little disenchanted with NanoFate recently, but damn if Hayate doesn't know how to hit where it hurts. ... Also, I think it says something when my imagination takes the Hayate/Nanoha confrontation and somehow turns it into a Vivio/Nanoha confrontation in the main Shadow storyline. Oi.
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2010-10-30, 20:50 | Link #27631 | |
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Disenchanted with NanoFate recently? =O Do you mean in Crime Never Sleeps, or in the general fandom? *Already feeling pity for Nanoha in the main Shadow storyline....*
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2010-10-30, 21:07 | Link #27632 | |
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Not following your fic, deathcurse, but RB's comments made me curious and I took a quick look. One line jumped out of me:
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2010-10-30, 21:26 | Link #27633 | |
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I may take out the word "persuasive" in the final version, to maybe take attention away from the fact that Hayate is making an argument there, so that readers will see that it's more about Fate's reaction to Hayate's backstabbing? I'll think about it, thanks ^^.
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2010-10-30, 21:32 | Link #27634 | |
Beta by Accident
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Argh! I haven't even reviewed Part 10 yet! *headdesk* (Read eagerly yes, reviewed no) Thank heavens for NaNoWriMo...which gives me the chance to catch up on my reviews for the fics written by all you people who are doing it! |
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2010-10-30, 21:56 | Link #27637 | |
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Good point--edited!
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2010-10-31, 01:02 | Link #27639 |
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Was surfing around when I found this:
http://forums.animesuki.com/showthre...133#post708133 Anyone up for some Fate X Arf? Last edited by Diamonds Dream; 2010-11-15 at 23:38. |
2010-10-31, 10:44 | Link #27640 | |
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In general, most of the writers here are people are like that, so it's not likely that challenges get answered, although it does happen. Your better bet is to focus on writing something, as the more information you give, the more likely someone is to take you up on it. The shorter the fic, the more likely someone will write something. Good luck.^^ |
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