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StratoSpear · 2012-07-26, 10:13

I recalled something about students being recalled after the Academy invasion so I tried to insert a thing about it in this scene, how does it look?:

Spoiler for Space-shrunk hospital draft scene:

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-26, 10:19

houdini it is

The IS I have in mind would be created and piloted by people like Tabane. They're a separate faction from all existing ones, being wanted already as having stolen an IS core. It'll get even worse when it's found out where said core was put in. =))

Eratas123 · 2012-07-26, 10:23

Word count 600 and counting. I hope this chapter isn't going to get past 3000 word limit.

agetreme · 2012-07-26, 10:35

Yusha(as IS) has the motif of Unicorn (reason for choosing this is obvious)....

As a golem(?), he has the motif of a knight.... albeit a Centaur Knight.

As a joke, Yusha is "a little slow" in his head when it come to perverted stuff. It take him time to realize something is really wrong with a girl keep licking a banana.....suggestively.

Also he get angry very easily when somebody challenge his manhood...

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-26, 10:38

In Case of TLR Stratos... well, once German is desperate when the coup force curb-stomped their loyalist force. Then they use ballistic missile and I.S. to return the favor. Cue United Nations drop a frigging battalion of I.S. on them, the sole reason Rito doesn't want Schwarzer Hase involved in the war at all.

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-26, 10:47

the thought is the pilot and the creator are out to destroy IS. Until the time they can complete the anti-IS machine they use the IS as both weapon and data source.

Also they aren't beyond indiscriminate attacks to make IS look bad or cause international war.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-26, 10:55

That plot sounds very familiar.....

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-26, 11:03

just characters so far. But they are based off characters from another work of mine. Incredibly aloof killers

so far electricity is the only weapon I can confirm on the unit. Probably taser type

Eratas123 · 2012-07-26, 11:09

1600 words and still only intro:/

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-26, 11:14

Don't restrict yourself, you will regret it.

Eratas123 · 2012-07-26, 11:15

I need to end the chapter with both of them agreeing to date each other....at least for now. Laura's still not used to love and Ichika's a dreadnought level blockhead.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-26, 17:49

How would 崩山 translate to Chinese I wonder?

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-26, 19:48

my browser can't read kanji or japanese text :|

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-26, 19:57

Hou-Zan (Collapsing Mountain) was the closest one I find context-appropriate, BT Trans refer it as Landslide instead

It's the name of Ling's packet in V3.

agetreme · 2012-07-26, 20:39

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

How would 崩山 translate to Chinese I wonder?

*Age whipped out his dictionary*

Beng1 Shang1
therefore:
Beng Shang (the Chinese would probably put this down as its official name...)

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-26, 20:56

Beng- if my guess is correct in character since I can't see the character, means bump or crash.

Shang - should probably be shan if you mean mountain. The only shang that fits context here and still by a longshot means "up" or "above".

DarkJak2050 · 2012-07-26, 22:21

Another Fanfic.

The IS misadventures of the Orimura Triplets

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-26, 22:32

Beng....??

Eratas123 · 2012-07-26, 22:55

In all likelihood, what's the chance for Ichika to defrost Laura on his own without using the VT as an insta-win button?

EthernalRain · 2012-07-27, 02:33

Work, girlfriend, copious amounts of anime, manga, movies, light novels, actual novels, and overdosing on crack can take alarming amounts of time.

And thus, overdosing on crack has the side effect of extremely prolonged procrastination and absences from writer's forums.

So I haven't even started on getting ANY of my work done... HOTM is still in the rewriting phase, having handwritten notes all over the place that detail my plans. Various oneshots have had concepts struck up somewhere. ATM is moving at a decent pace, and has taken a different turn from most of my stories. Everything is in the extremely well polished planning phase, and even then I haven't done any work even though all I need to do is find the time to type.

Ah... Summer vacation. The glorious days of having all your motivation to do anything productive sucked away due to the lack of school feeding said motivations.

2012-07-26, 10:13	Link #34741
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	I recalled something about students being recalled after the Academy invasion so I tried to insert a thing about it in this scene, how does it look?: Spoiler for Space-shrunk hospital draft scene: ========== In a personal ward at the Tōkyōrinkai Hospital ========== Jinrai rests on a cushioned seat, flipping through an automobile magazine next to the bed where the unconscious Inami lays. He pauses and looks to him. ‘It’s been days and he’s not even shown any signs of waking up… Not even a twitch…’ He looks over to the desk on the opposite side of the bed where Inami’s azure teardrop pendant is glowing softly. ‘And to think she’s addressing him as “Master” now… Inami, such influence is—’ BRRRT BRRRT “Hmm?” Jinrai looks down to his pocket and reaches for his phone which has been set to silent mode and pulls it out the notices the flashing public caller ID. He presses the answering key and brings the phone next to his ear. “Hello?” “Jinrai-san? It’s me.” “Tsurugi? What’s up?” “Well, nothing much aside from a couple of new transfer students.” “To fill in the seats left by those who got pulled out after the attack, I presume?” “I suppose… In any case, how’s Ina-kun doing?” “Still in a coma I’m afraid…” “I see…” Tsurugi then heaves a sigh over the phone. “What’s wrong?” “Well, I told my parents about his condition. While I assured them that he will be fine, they insist to pay him a visit…” “Ah… So that’s why.” “Yeah. I’m glad that they’re coming to visit but… The fact that Ina-kun’s still not waking up… I just—” “Why not pay him a visit as well?” “Eh? But I—” “I’m pretty sure Kiyoshi-san and Reika-san will be happy to see their daughter all fine and well.” “Jinrai-san…” “It’s the best you can do to ease their worries, Tsurugi.” “Hmm… I understand.” __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2012-07-26, 10:23	Link #34743
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Word count 600 and counting. I hope this chapter isn't going to get past 3000 word limit. __________________

2012-07-26, 10:35	Link #34744
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	Yusha(as IS) has the motif of Unicorn (reason for choosing this is obvious).... As a golem(?), he has the motif of a knight.... albeit a Centaur Knight. As a joke, Yusha is "a little slow" in his head when it come to perverted stuff. It take him time to realize something is really wrong with a girl keep licking a banana.....suggestively. Also he get angry very easily when somebody challenge his manhood... __________________ Ara Han

2012-07-26, 10:38	Link #34745
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	In Case of TLR Stratos... well, once German is desperate when the coup force curb-stomped their loyalist force. Then they use ballistic missile and I.S. to return the favor. Cue United Nations drop a frigging battalion of I.S. on them, the sole reason Rito doesn't want Schwarzer Hase involved in the war at all. __________________

2012-07-26, 10:55	Link #34747
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	That plot sounds very familiar..... __________________

2012-07-26, 10:19	Link #34742
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	houdini it is The IS I have in mind would be created and piloted by people like Tabane. They're a separate faction from all existing ones, being wanted already as having stolen an IS core. It'll get even worse when it's found out where said core was put in. =))

2012-07-26, 10:47	Link #34746
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	the thought is the pilot and the creator are out to destroy IS. Until the time they can complete the anti-IS machine they use the IS as both weapon and data source. Also they aren't beyond indiscriminate attacks to make IS look bad or cause international war.

2012-07-26, 11:03	Link #34748
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	just characters so far. But they are based off characters from another work of mine. Incredibly aloof killers so far electricity is the only weapon I can confirm on the unit. Probably taser type

2012-07-26, 11:09	Link #34749
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	1600 words and still only intro:/ __________________

2012-07-26, 11:14	Link #34750
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Don't restrict yourself, you will regret it. __________________

2012-07-26, 11:15	Link #34751
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I need to end the chapter with both of them agreeing to date each other....at least for now. Laura's still not used to love and Ichika's a dreadnought level blockhead. __________________

2012-07-26, 17:49	Link #34752
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	How would 崩山 translate to Chinese I wonder? __________________

2012-07-26, 19:48	Link #34753
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	my browser can't read kanji or japanese text :\|

2012-07-26, 19:57	Link #34754
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Hou-Zan (Collapsing Mountain) was the closest one I find context-appropriate, BT Trans refer it as Landslide instead It's the name of Ling's packet in V3. __________________

2012-07-26, 20:56	Link #34756
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Beng- if my guess is correct in character since I can't see the character, means bump or crash. Shang - should probably be shan if you mean mountain. The only shang that fits context here and still by a longshot means "up" or "above".

2012-07-26, 22:21	Link #34757
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Another Fanfic. The IS misadventures of the Orimura Triplets

2012-07-26, 22:32	Link #34758
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Beng....?? __________________

2012-07-26, 22:55	Link #34759
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	In all likelihood, what's the chance for Ichika to defrost Laura on his own without using the VT as an insta-win button? __________________

2012-07-27, 02:33	Link #34760
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	Work, girlfriend, copious amounts of anime, manga, movies, light novels, actual novels, and overdosing on crack can take alarming amounts of time. And thus, overdosing on crack has the side effect of extremely prolonged procrastination and absences from writer's forums. So I haven't even started on getting ANY of my work done... HOTM is still in the rewriting phase, having handwritten notes all over the place that detail my plans. Various oneshots have had concepts struck up somewhere. ATM is moving at a decent pace, and has taken a different turn from most of my stories. Everything is in the extremely well polished planning phase, and even then I haven't done any work even though all I need to do is find the time to type. Ah... Summer vacation. The glorious days of having all your motivation to do anything productive sucked away due to the lack of school feeding said motivations.