SOTM 2008 - November (Military) - Entry Phase

[crazyhorse]

Originally Posted by KiNA

No no, whut I mean that explosion smoke usually more fluffy and usually lose its shape at top before dissipating.. your's kinda sharp and pointy.

Oh I see. Yeah I was trying to find some vids of smoke from bombings in a city background, but no luck.

[ren_db]

Project: Military #1, c&c please!

Spoiler for v1-v3:

[KiNA]

Outside her gun, what so militaristic about your sig? Because right now I saw a girl with a huge gun.

[ren_db]

Originally Posted by KiNA

Outside her gun, what so militaristic about your sig? Because right now I saw a girl with a huge gun.

oh, he/shes wearing a military suit.. i guess my effects drowned it. i'll keep that in mind with project #2.

heres the stock anyway:

Spoiler for image:

[Riker]

I don't know what to add anymore, so Final Entry for now.






@ren_db:

Ah, the image certainly looks military enough. It's just that we couldn't really see her(?) uniform in the sig.

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by ren_db

Project: Military #1, c&c please!

Spoiler for v1-v3:

Well besides the uniform thing, I think it's a bit bright. Especially on the right.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Sagasu

A very small update =]

I like it

Originally Posted by Kai the Reaper

How does this fit with the theme?



I was thinking of maybe adding some sort of symbol on his back/sleeve, since it doesn't look like a uniform anymore. C&C?

Tryt with the symbol, although the sig looks good anyway

Originally Posted by markesellus

Version 2

I pick this, nice efect on the render and the text is good

Originally Posted by Jean DeCusac

Hmmm... try without the light behind the text or put the light above the text, because behind the text looks a bit bad

Originally Posted by crazyhorse

With smoke and slower flashes:

Very nice although the smoke looks a bit paused

Originally Posted by Narona

Thank you. I will try to add another render in it. And maybe to do a different background.

For now, here an AS safe version

The bg looks a bit wierd @_@;
The text and the render look very good

Originally Posted by ren_db

Project: Military #1, c&c please!

Spoiler for v1-v3:

Try making the uniform a bit more visible and it would be great

[Arceon]

Well just made a few slight adjustments.

Final Entry



CnC would still be appreciated, but I'm content with the final outcome of this.

[KiNA]

There's only 5 final entries so far, so there wont be an update list yet .. First update will be on Friday.

[Mon Cheri]

Is this accepted?

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Malin

Is this accepted?

Quite militar for me

[Ratche]

Here's mine.
Is this acceptable?
v1



C&C is appreciated.

[Mon Cheri]

Ok, then final entry it is ^^

[Marskatta]

Final adjustment.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Ratche

Here's mine.
Is this acceptable?
v1



C&C is appreciated.

Lots of pices!

Cool light trick

Originally Posted by Jean DeCusac

Final adjustment.

Sorry, the light doesn't look good at all :?

[Marskatta]

*sigh* I know. Looked the best before.

[lsley]

My try for the first:

I hope that hits the military theme
And C&C would be appreciated

[Riker]

Originally Posted by Ratche

Here's mine.
Is this acceptable?
v1



C&C is appreciated.

That's alot of slices.
Anyways, cool effect.

Originally Posted by lsley

My try for the first:

I hope that hits the military theme
And C&C would be appreciated

Hmmm, the girls seem out of place. Why don't you try replacing them with girls in uniforms instead?

[ren_db]

anyhow, this is my 2nd attempt. scrapped the other stock, although i still have doubts about this one being agreeable with the theme.

text:


no-text:


some editing:

[KiNA]

Originally Posted by lsley

My try for the first:

I hope that hits the military theme
And C&C would be appreciated

Missed, sorry .. Read Riker's post above.

Originally Posted by Riker

Hmmm, the girls seem out of place. Why don't you try replacing them with girls in uniforms instead?

Originally Posted by Ratche

Here's mine.
Is this acceptable?
v1



C&C is appreciated.

45.966Kb D: .. I'm gonna sabotage your by removing one slice in the list >D