2012-08-25, 22:55 | Link #36022 |
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I like it more since the supposed "Supernatural monster" doesn't actually DO anything. He just.....stands there....MENACINGLY! To be honest, the human character's seem to do more damage than he does.
Side note - Another new draft (Man, I've been writing a lot lately). How weird do you find people with cat ears and a tail?
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2012-08-25, 23:04 | Link #36023 |
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Funny thing, I myself is a believer of supernatural in real life (and to be honest, not a stranger to it, living in backwater country and all), and except possession, those monster/ghost/phantom/whatever NEVER seems to do anything, any death or injury is caused by the person running away without paying attention because of overt fear. Though, it get worse if those creatures LEAD us to harmful path as we ran from them. Nothing is scarier indeed.
The first thing I thought will be a cosplayer, and depending on the environment, it could be very mundane or very weird. You don't cosplay in school, you did it in a fair or mall.
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2012-08-26, 01:41 | Link #36033 |
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Buh, so it was the prank you talked about long ago....
The mood shift between your writing is incredible, either way. To think that it's about friggin high school antic (okay, more like strange kids in high school), I feel like having a broken neck. Also, updated the crossover
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2012-08-26, 02:45 | Link #36035 |
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Not much, though still better than the most obscure one. (Gundam and old Nanoha fics)
Honestly I want to say so but considering I.S. verse... You can just always introduce a rival of similar age though, to balance it out.
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2012-08-26, 03:05 | Link #36038 |
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Aria doesn't do vigilante work:/ Part of their dynamic is that while Aria is more skilled and supported, she doesn't have the will or moral flexibility that Saito does. They do work together later on, but that's only because he's forbidden from going off by himself lest he get killed.
How about Laura's kid? Seems to have both the skillset and ruthlessness, especially if she takes after her mother. The foe yay aspect will be a huge factor as well.
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