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[TkMacintosh]

Spoiler for More short Story/Idea splurts...:

Spoiler for First one...:

"Uhh...Fukiyose....Why...Why are you sitting on my lap?" Touma asked, a bite of rice in between his chopsticks when Fukiyose suddenly just sat on Toumas' lap.

"There's no other seats available, Kamijou." Fukiyose said as she munched on her bread, a faint blush on her face.

"But there's a seat right the-"

"I SAID there's no other seats available, UNDERSTAND?" Fukiyose said calmly, a dark aura filling the air.

"Yes..I-I understand." Touma said knowing that it was the end of the conversation.

Spoiler for Second one...:

Fukiyose had no clue when she finally came to terms that she was in love with Kamijou Touma, but even now...Fukiyose had NO friggen clue on why she EVER took advice from BOTH Tsuchimikado and Aoigami.

"Come on Fukiyose...If you wear this, you'll have Kami-yan all over you." Tsuchimikado said with his ever persistent grin.

"Yeah, yeah, come on Fukiyose. This'll be perfect." Aoigami said smiling happily as he held up a purple bunny girls for her to see. "All you need to do is put this on and wait for Touma at his place."

Fukiyose fidgeted in place as she tried to fix her tight outfit. Upon hearing the front door opening, Fukiyose jumped up quickly, her hand across chest, a red blush across her face.

"Fu-Fukiyose...Why are yo-you here...?" Touma asked when he saw her standing in his living room. "And why are you dressed like that?"

"Uhh...Do...Do you like it Touma?" Fukiyose said as she let her arm down from her chest and wrapping around her back.

Touma just stared at her in shock before his body could no longer take the sight before him as it propelled Touma back blood splurting from his nose.

The final thought that ran through Touma's head as he passed out was 'I...love bunny girls!'

[Mr.Kyon]

Familiar Troubles, Chapter 2.

As you can see, this is going into crazyness really fast.

Spoiler for Spoilers:

And cyborg pandas aren't even that insane compared to what's coming next!

Now to work on the ToumaxStiyl lemon crack I've been putting off.

To sum up what will happen to your mind if you read it:

Originally Posted by Harry S. Plinkett

I'm like Sinead O'Connor, and you're a picture of the Pope. Prepare to get torn up.

[Flere821]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Spoiler for Suggestion:

You could use Amata, definitely. Forced to be civilized and having to hold back his anger and swears, acting extremely polite around Touma and Gunha - to the point where it makes it scary compared to the Amata we know.

If you go that way, I have an idea.

During the tests, you could have Nayuta walk in to give her uncle a bento. She's being accompanied by Kihara-kun Junior - who internally is wishing that Nayuta would give him that bento and call him Onii-chan. Although when the two see Amata being respectful, they freeze in place. The two start shaking in terror - the implication being that Amata being nice is a prelude to bad, bad things.

Then, you could have Nayuta become seriously obsessed with Touma's right hand while watching Gunha vs Touma. She goes and talks with him, acting all cutesy around him, not even looking malicious (she's trying to be sneaky and learn more about IB before attempting anything). Junior fears the worse and mutters "Lolicon" and grumbles with crossed arms, picturing the many ways this could go terribly wrong.

Another loli is added to the Kamijou harem, with Junior keeping a close eye on Nayuta so she doesn't go near him again. Perhaps have Amata mention to Junior this test was Aleister's doing, thus strengthening his resolve to keep his loli cousin away from Touma. He definitely knows she'll attempt something - case in point: pitting Gunha against Mikoto that one time.

I'd only do this if I want to make my fic go into crack territory...

Though rest assured, I am planning on a including a OMAKE next chapter. It may or may not be crackish.

[faiz blaster]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Chapter 7 of Minds, Memories and Misfortune is out:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Spoiler for Question about writing next chapter:

Should I use Kihara Amata as the tester for Touma and Gunha, or use a generic one-use-only Kihara character? I had a idea forcing Amata to act civilised and not as much of a sadist jerk like in Vol12-3 fighting Accelerator, and inwardly cursing Aleister for pushing grunt work onto him (researching Touma this one time) as he on the surface tries to chat Yomikawa up to alleviate her suspicions about his ulterior motives.

Great work as usual. There is one thing that bothers me though.

Spoiler for spoilers:

I don't remember ever seeing that Gunha has a connection to the Kiharas in anyway. Is this something you came up for your fic, or is it canon and I just don't know about it?

[Mr.Kyon]

Originally Posted by faiz blaster

Great work as usual. There is one thing that bothers me though.

Spoiler for spoilers:

I don't remember ever seeing that Gunha has a connection to the Kiharas in anyway. Is this something you came up for your fic, or is it canon and I just don't know about it?

In the soon-to-be-translated Vending Machine SS, it is stated that Gunha's abilities were developed by the Kihara Research Institute.

[tsunade666]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Chapter 7 of Minds, Memories and Misfortune is out:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Spoiler for Question about writing next chapter:

Should I use Kihara Amata as the tester for Touma and Gunha, or use a generic one-use-only Kihara character? I had a idea forcing Amata to act civilised and not as much of a sadist jerk like in Vol12-3 fighting Accelerator, and inwardly cursing Aleister for pushing grunt work onto him (researching Touma this one time) as he on the surface tries to chat Yomikawa up to alleviate her suspicions about his ulterior motives.

Flere you can't call Misaki yet a mary sue because we don't know much about the original character. Few info's about her that makes it left to the fans to think of more about her personality which turn into the writers own version of Misaki. And I like your version of misaki so no problem there. Maybe I'm no good at explaining but she is still not Mary sue plus she is aiming to become perfect in her image or status so it's already to be a bit mary sue.

And story wise.... well yap the fight is lacking but it's alright. I don't expect much fighting here to begin with because when you said you will be writing a fic about Misaki, Touma and Misaka I expect plot driven story and not action wise. But here's a problem. Your setting an experiment for Touma to Fight Gunha. It means it will be an awesome fight so I'll be expecting here

[MrTerrorist]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Chapter 7 of Minds, Memories and Misfortune is out:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Spoiler for Question about writing next chapter:

Should I use Kihara Amata as the tester for Touma and Gunha, or use a generic one-use-only Kihara character? I had a idea forcing Amata to act civilised and not as much of a sadist jerk like in Vol12-3 fighting Accelerator, and inwardly cursing Aleister for pushing grunt work onto him (researching Touma this one time) as he on the surface tries to chat Yomikawa up to alleviate her suspicions about his ulterior motives.

Spoiler for spoilers:

Touma vs Gunha? Hell Yeah!
I think you should use Amata since it will be very funny to see him being forced to be nice. And i hope Nayuta makes an appearance as well. (But not Kihara Junior since that's Mr. Kyon's creation and is an OC).

PS. I don't think the way you wrote about Misaki is a Mary Sue since she has both good and bad traits and is not really that perfect. Plus i love how you portray her.

Keep up the good work!

[Mr.Kyon]

Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

Spoiler for spoilers:

Touma vs Gunha? Hell Yeah!
I think you should use Amata since it will be very funny to see him being forced to be nice. And i hope Nayuta makes an appearance as well. (But not Kihara Junior since that's Mr. Kyon's creation and is an OC).

PS. I don't think the way you wrote about Misaki is a Mary Sue since she has both good and bad traits and is not really that perfect. Plus i love how you portray her.

Keep up the good work!

Actually, the SS in question makes a mention of Kihara-kun having a son involved in the Dark Side. He's not my property alone.

[MrTerrorist]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Actually, the SS in question makes a mention of Kihara-kun having a son involved in the Dark Side. He's not my property alone.

Wait, i thought i remember reading somewhere that Gensei had another son.

Also, even if he wasn't your property, your version of him being an over protective lolicon over his cousin who defies his own family is just..

*puts on sunglasses*

Crack.

[Mr.Kyon]

Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

Also, even if he wasn't your property, your version of him being an over protective lolicon over his cousin who defies his own family is just..

*puts on sunglasses*

Crack.

Have you read Familiar Troubles? That's the real crack right there.

[chrono9472]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Have you read Familiar Troubles? That's the real crack right there.

...how about this story "the three heroes are stuck in the middle of 50-100 girls(of course some of the girls from the main series are there too) all lusting over them because of a experiment and they have to escape before they fall victim to them and accel can't use his abilities" can this beat familiar troubles?(i doubt it but w/e)


EDIT: i forgot to say but if they get caught,then they can be infected

[Mr.Kyon]

^So... L4D minus the girl in the group and the zombies are horny girls?

[chrono9472]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

^So... L4D minus the girl in the group and the zombies are horny girls?

i didn't notice it was so similar to l4d but yeah although i added the infected part later, also in l4d they kill the zombies but in this one the girls are still alive so....no killing either.

i only added girls because i thought it would be funny....but i guess having males in the infected would be hilarious too(Infected fiamma: *while restraining touma*: k-kamijou-sama....i'm sorry i can't hold it any longer.......ITADAKIMASU!!*does unspeakable things to kamijou touma*)

[Breidaluk]

Arghh! It hurts! This is too much even for a crack fic!! I like the zombie idea but Fiamma!!Blergh!

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by tsunade666

Flere you can't call Misaki yet a mary sue because we don't know much about the original character. Few info's about her that makes it left to the fans to think of more about her personality which turn into the writers own version of Misaki. And I like your version of misaki so no problem there. Maybe I'm no good at explaining but she is still not Mary sue plus she is aiming to become perfect in her image or status so it's already to be a bit mary sue.

If you read the reviews you'll know that it's what someone said, and Flere821 is just taking note of it.

Anyways,

@Flere821:
Great work as usual. Loved how he settled the fight with the two girls. I was thinking you're gonna pull a <insert what happened between Touma and Aurreolus(?) here>, but it'll be too implausible and besides, they're just girls

[chrono9472]

Originally Posted by Breidaluk

Arghh! It hurts! This is too much even for a crack fic!! I like the zombie idea but Fiamma!!Blergh!

don't worry, just replace fiamma with someone else thats not as bad and you should be fine....maybe

[Hyakimaru]

Well after nearly two months I finally finished a new chapter of my crack fic .

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6825798/3/

Now with even more crack!

With that said I'm also working in another chapter to my oldest Laura/Aleister crack fic, I'll post it here when it's done.

[Mr.Kyon]

Originally Posted by Hyakimaru

Well after nearly two months I finally finished a new chapter of my crack fic .

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6825798/3/

Now with even more crack!

With that said I'm also working in another chapter to my oldest Laura/Aleister crack fic, I'll post it here when it's done.

Terra...bad move...

Oh Fiamma, you magnificent bastard.

Damn it Accel and Vento, you're getting out of hand

[ellifeedn]

Is there a fanfic that features Awaki interacting with Misaki?

[Mr.Kyon]

Originally Posted by ellifeedn

Is there a fanfic that features Awaki interacting with Misaki?

Not in English fandom.