2011-03-20, 11:25 | Link #141 |
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i started writing this poem after i kept singing the following song over and over in my head. here's a link...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7yRRqxJHQmA so it should sound something like that, have the same style or whatever. it should be noted that i purposely got drunk to try and write a poem. after a few meaningless rhymes i got what i wanted. and i just can't finish this poem/song. i know where the narrative is supposed to go and how it should end, but i just don't feel like it. makes me wonder how i composed poems 30 lines longer than this one... Spoiler for poem/song:
here are my random shitty poems, btw. they are bad, but sometimes amusing. Spoiler for shitty:
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2011-05-18, 18:10 | Link #142 |
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rise from the dead, oh good old thread.
been 2 months since my last poem. somewhat a continuation of my tired theme... From within born The theories we’ve forged and cut in stone Allegiance sworn To dreams into reality we’ve sown Same paths we’ve tread As others have, feared fall on steepest slopes It’s long been said We’ve long been mocked – still, values held have hope Question, defy stereotypes which ever are so vague We’d rather die Than hand the victory to social plague Break free of reigns Taboos, old rules. And not as slaves be sold Ignorance feign Rethink, change, stir and ever be so bold Let vision soar Imagination be your faithful guide Leave open door To stranger realms, dimensions new and wide
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2011-05-23, 01:12 | Link #144 |
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Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Elpis Colony, Jaburo, The hanger, Texas, Alkard
Age: 33
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This is randomly posted
We ponder to many things unanswered or explained ,but for who is the goddess of alabaster hair & skin , Demon or Divinity , was the porcelain sword a gift or curse of wrath , thou shall quest & find your intentions of ye , and to why i was given this item, has my imbalance gotten to the mold , why do these things happen to me in my sleep
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2011-05-27, 19:44 | Link #145 | |
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2011-09-06, 08:31 | Link #147 |
Join Date: Jan 2009
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Death
Hey! I've been trying to Call you. Did you know that He died? I was at his funeral. Yesterday. I couldn't help crying. He was Such a nice person. How he raised his children All alone After his wife died. Yeah. Mmh. He faced some rough times. I couldn't sleep All night. Thinking How odd it All was. Yeah. Mmh. What did you have for lunch? |
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