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demino_hellsin · 2012-08-25, 05:47

You can't really hold it against a guy if the girl takes advantage of him right?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 05:55

@ Eras
Never read that one, let me see it.

@ Demi
I don't understand what that question about

Eratas123 · 2012-08-25, 05:56

Most guys kinda do. There's a reason the term "Whipped" is thrown around a lot.

demino_hellsin · 2012-08-25, 06:00

@zero and eras: take advantage in the worst way possible

Would a sane guy in a gaggle of naked screaming girls decide to reason with them and clear his name? or escape praying they don't recognize him the next time they meet?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 06:03

If possible, try the reasoning, if not, run the fuck out.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-25, 06:04

I'd run, then reason

It's not like you can't talk while running.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 06:05

oh and don't forget covering your eyes, COMPLETELY, proof of innocence.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-25, 06:12

@ Senpai - I'm going to be making a draft later or tom that'll be.......different. Can you please read it?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 06:19

Go ahead, nobody forbid you. About comments however...

Hey! New Character
====================

Name: Sousuke Futagami
Born: August 7 2001
Affiliation: Japanese
Height: 160 cm
Weight: 54 kg

Profile:
Born form a normal family in rural Tokyo, he shocked the entire world with his arrival. Being the first, and possibly the only one male pilot with S ranked synch ratio. He used to suffer Jupiter Syndrome and one of the first people volunteered as test subject for the new medical treatment.

Even though he has such great potential, he has erratic and fluctuative overall performance as a pilot, professionals all agreed that quite possibly related to the nanomachines implanted in his nerve system, since Riko Yuusaki has similar progress in her development.

Personality:
Timid and oblivious to romance, so much that Saruyama dubbed him Rito 2.0 at first. He however possess a calm demeanor, even in the state of anger he tend to be tranquil in terms of temperament, which sometimes quite unnerving.

He likes arcade games and is Ichika fanboy, though eh also admired Rito after he saw his first sortie in german.

Too bad he's brainwashed and crazy, dear god...

StratoSpear · 2012-08-25, 06:24

Not sure if I went overboard with this one, especially Houki's line at the end:

Spoiler for Con't from previous scene:

Eratas123 · 2012-08-25, 06:51

@ Senpai - I will warn you now that this is one of the most depraved, dark and hard to write chapters I've had to do in a while. As such, it will be less detailed than normal for any readers sake.

Thank you.

Spoiler:

demino_hellsin · 2012-08-25, 07:07

Oh! It's doppleganger guy! Zero really has a thing for that writer's works XD

EDIT: All that's lacking now is Black Cat and Mayoi Neko Overrun.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-25, 07:11

@ Stratos - Not really. Females tend to have privilege to jokes like that.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 07:25

Ikaron?! MY BODY IS READY!

Ahem.

First of all, looks like something out of gory grimdark story... except it's not. Hilarious, but it could also tell how much of a stranger Irish are to common sense. He prefer death over loss of dignity... in a school theater play. Flat What indeed.

Either way, a nice job there.

@ Demi
Sven is actually Dan's mentor in terms of gunfight, now he could even give Charlotte a run for her money in that department. Though it was so much that Dan suffer overspecialization, that is, CAN'T GO MELEE WITHOUT A GUN IN HAND(S).

Kyouko is Lun's idol partner as per canon basis, characterization is mix of both version. (mostly TLR version since that one is more mature). And Train... he did appear later but unfortunately, as Black. Fortunately, Saya is alive and there will be a point where they met, and Creed... well, he did too, and a bad guy to boot. Creed vs Zastin will appear for the hell of it.

Eratas123 · 2012-08-25, 07:29

@ Senpai - Been a while since I wrote about him, so I decided to do a draft

Anyway, i thought the festival date would be a good one

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 07:33

Oh god

*HHHHHHHHHHNGGGGG~*

Eratas123 · 2012-08-25, 07:37

Though I did change some things up about them. Namely, that their relationship becomes a mix of "Savvy guy, energetic girl" and "When a jerk loves a tsundere". Both of them tend to have snark dialogue instead of Irish defaulting to "....."

Should I change it back?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 07:42

No, please do not change it. However, Irish might be confused since he NEVER talk that much, at all, to anyone.
====

@ Demi
I am conflicted whether to have Amane in PT or Tabane faction, the former justifies her joining the hero faction very early, the latter justifies her having a personal I.S. despite her age.

an I.S. that Most-defintely-not-a-copy-of-Mysterious-Lady </joke>

either way, her reason of fightin are the one and the same, revenge for her dead brother.

demino_hellsin · 2012-08-25, 07:50

who killed him?

EDIT: Does Nanbei Azusa sound like a rich girl's name?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-08-25, 08:01

In manga canon, his own Id (Doppleganger).

In case of (Mega)crossover, these are the possibilities
1. Black Golem = He just happen to be there when it go nuts and he try to use his own machine to stop it.
2. Black I.S. = He still use the same machine, FNC want to stole it.
3. Id = his own AI copy came into existence THEN gone rogue as it took over said machine.
4. Mixing all of above

Basically Athena gone wrong, will ask Stratos if he's here.

2012-08-25, 05:55	Link #35982
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Eras Never read that one, let me see it. @ Demi I don't understand what that question about __________________

2012-08-25, 05:56	Link #35983
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Most guys kinda do. There's a reason the term "Whipped" is thrown around a lot. __________________

2012-08-25, 06:03	Link #35985
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	If possible, try the reasoning, if not, run the fuck out. __________________

2012-08-25, 06:04	Link #35986
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I'd run, then reason It's not like you can't talk while running. __________________

2012-08-25, 06:05	Link #35987
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	oh and don't forget covering your eyes, COMPLETELY, proof of innocence. __________________

2012-08-25, 05:47	Link #35981
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	You can't really hold it against a guy if the girl takes advantage of him right?

2012-08-25, 06:00	Link #35984
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	@zero and eras: take advantage in the worst way possible Would a sane guy in a gaggle of naked screaming girls decide to reason with them and clear his name? or escape praying they don't recognize him the next time they meet?

2012-08-25, 06:12	Link #35988
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - I'm going to be making a draft later or tom that'll be.......different. Can you please read it? __________________

2012-08-25, 06:19	Link #35989
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Go ahead, nobody forbid you. About comments however... Hey! New Character ==================== Name: Sousuke Futagami Born: August 7 2001 Affiliation: Japanese Height: 160 cm Weight: 54 kg Profile: Born form a normal family in rural Tokyo, he shocked the entire world with his arrival. Being the first, and possibly the only one male pilot with S ranked synch ratio. He used to suffer Jupiter Syndrome and one of the first people volunteered as test subject for the new medical treatment. Even though he has such great potential, he has erratic and fluctuative overall performance as a pilot, professionals all agreed that quite possibly related to the nanomachines implanted in his nerve system, since Riko Yuusaki has similar progress in her development. Personality: Timid and oblivious to romance, so much that Saruyama dubbed him Rito 2.0 at first. He however possess a calm demeanor, even in the state of anger he tend to be tranquil in terms of temperament, which sometimes quite unnerving. He likes arcade games and is Ichika fanboy, though eh also admired Rito after he saw his first sortie in german. Too bad he's brainwashed and crazy, dear god... __________________

2012-08-25, 06:24	Link #35990
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Not sure if I went overboard with this one, especially Houki's line at the end: Spoiler for Con't from previous scene: The conversation fades into the distance while Cecilia still maintains her stare, oblivious to the queue gap in front of her as Houki peeks over her shoulder and lightly nudges her. “Cecilia?” “D’ah—! W-What is it, Houki-san?” Houki, huffing at her sudden rude tone, points to the gap prompting Cecilia to briskly walk towards the counter while her face reddens in embarrassment. Houki follows suit along with other students in the queue and prods Cecilia’s shoulder as she receives her tray. “What’s with you spacing out like that?” “I-I wasn’t spacing out! I was just… umm…” “…Were you hit in the head or something this morning?” “Of course not! I’m not that clumsy…! Geez…” Tilting her head slightly, Houki arcs a brow at her. “Why are you so flustered anyway?” “That’s because you keep pelting me with nonsensical questions…!” Cecilia quickly takes her tray and scoots over to Ichika as he settles at a table, sitting by his side while putting on a sudden gleeful smile which confuses Ichika. Stunned by her antics, Houki suspiciously narrows her eyes on her as she grabs her meal from the counter. ‘Just a couple of questions and she’s all agitated… Is it her time already…?’ __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2012-08-25, 06:51	Link #35991
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - I will warn you now that this is one of the most depraved, dark and hard to write chapters I've had to do in a while. As such, it will be less detailed than normal for any readers sake. Thank you. Spoiler: The lights burned brightly all around him. The sounds of laughter and cheering echoed all around him, something which aggravated him to no end and made his headache worse. He was lying on his back and the feeling of the hard wood against his back wasn't very pleasant. At the back of his head, something urged him to get up, that he had to do something before he got killed. He ignored it. He didn't really see the point of getting up or trying to fight. After all, wasn't he dragged here against his will? Forced to play this sick game for the amusement of others? They knew of his weakness, and that there was nothing he could do against it. His protection was gone; all he had with him was a toy knife and this impractical outfit. Maybe being killed here was a good end. "Target found. Proceeding to terminate threat." Through forced eyes, he could see her. She stared down at him, golden eyes deprived of emotion. He couldn't see anything but her face and the sword she had leveled at his neck. His vision was all but gone; all he could see was the inky blackness that surrounded the two of them. With a smile, he refused to show her any fear. Maybe he was going to die here, and maybe he would die with regrets, but he wouldn't let her get the satisfaction of seeing any fear on his face, "Do it...." He grabbed the sword and slid it closer to his neck. He shivered slightly at the cold steel, but he wouldn't die a coward. He would leave this world on his terms As he closed his eyes, he felt a weight release off his shoulders. Maybe death was the release that he had been craving for, for so long. If so, maybe fate put him here, at this place. Finally, he would be free. ".....get up...." The voice was faint. It didn't come from his attacker, that much was certain. It sounded higher pitched and more frantic, a far cry from the last voice he had heard. Was it the voice of an angel come to welcome him? "...Get up!" More forceful this time. He found his vision clearing slightly, a slight comfort to him. With the light, he could see the red stain on his chest, no doubt due to his attacker. It didn't matter if the voice was urging him to get up or save himself. He was too weak, too injured to do anything. The only choice he had left was to accept death and- "I said get up, you IDIOT!" Instinct immediately took over. Just as his opponent raised the sword to slash at his throat, he rolled back and dodged the strike. Following the momentum, he wielded the knife in his signature reverse grip and slashed at her, straining the sword's durability when she moved to block him. He felt his strength returning to him and all the thoughts of death leave. "It looks like the hero has recovered from his injury!" An excited voice shouted out, followed by more cheering, "Can he muster enough will to save princess Karon? Let's found out!" The darkness receded, and in its place was a stage brightly lit gigantic stagelights. All around him, he could see the props of a play such as holographic tree's and even a gigantic tower with a lone occupant. He stared down at his clothes, a blue and impractically frilly prince costume, and grimaced in disgust. He really would've accepted death if it meant getting away from this horrendous outfit. "Irish, don't be such a drama queen!" Karon yelled at him from the tower prop, arms flailing in the air comically as she berated her would be date, "I know you don't like being dragged to do a play, but come on! You don't have to be such a spoilsport about it! At least try to make it look like you're a prince trying to save me!" The crowd laughed in response to her yelling. Irish looked down and a small redness spread across his cheeks, "Shut up! I told you I don't do well with crowds!" He yelled back at her, "And why do I have to play as the rescuer? Can't you just use your IS to get out of there?" He was also mad that his gynophobia was acting up again. He wasn't allowed to use the skullsuit for the performance. "It's a play! I'm not supposed to be rescuing myself, the prince is! Come on, it shouldn't be that hard for you to pretend you want to rescue, at least!" Irish just sighed. There was never any way to argue with her. Why did he ever start going out with her? She was loud, annoying, and would never let him win a single argument. He wasn't a masochist or anything. "Alright, fine," He lowered his stance and focused, "But after this we're going where I want to go! I'm tired of going to maid cafe's and goldfish scooping." As he charged his opponent, who looked like she was about to collapse from laughter, he heard her voice reply to him. "Just say you want to kiss me already! It can't be that hard!" __________________

2012-08-25, 07:07	Link #35992
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Oh! It's doppleganger guy! Zero really has a thing for that writer's works XD EDIT: All that's lacking now is Black Cat and Mayoi Neko Overrun.

2012-08-25, 07:11	Link #35993
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Stratos - Not really. Females tend to have privilege to jokes like that. __________________

2012-08-25, 07:25	Link #35994
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Ikaron?! MY BODY IS READY! Ahem. First of all, looks like something out of gory grimdark story... except it's not. Hilarious, but it could also tell how much of a stranger Irish are to common sense. He prefer death over loss of dignity... in a school theater play. Flat What indeed. Either way, a nice job there. @ Demi Sven is actually Dan's mentor in terms of gunfight, now he could even give Charlotte a run for her money in that department. Though it was so much that Dan suffer overspecialization, that is, CAN'T GO MELEE WITHOUT A GUN IN HAND(S). Kyouko is Lun's idol partner as per canon basis, characterization is mix of both version. (mostly TLR version since that one is more mature). And Train... he did appear later but unfortunately, as Black. Fortunately, Saya is alive and there will be a point where they met, and Creed... well, he did too, and a bad guy to boot. Creed vs Zastin will appear for the hell of it. __________________

2012-08-25, 07:29	Link #35995
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Been a while since I wrote about him, so I decided to do a draft Anyway, i thought the festival date would be a good one __________________

2012-08-25, 07:33	Link #35996
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Oh god *HHHHHHHHHHNGGGGG~* __________________

2012-08-25, 07:37	Link #35997
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Though I did change some things up about them. Namely, that their relationship becomes a mix of "Savvy guy, energetic girl" and "When a jerk loves a tsundere". Both of them tend to have snark dialogue instead of Irish defaulting to "....." Should I change it back? __________________

2012-08-25, 07:42	Link #35998
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	No, please do not change it. However, Irish might be confused since he NEVER talk that much, at all, to anyone. ==== @ Demi I am conflicted whether to have Amane in PT or Tabane faction, the former justifies her joining the hero faction very early, the latter justifies her having a personal I.S. despite her age. an I.S. that Most-defintely-not-a-copy-of-Mysterious-Lady </joke> either way, her reason of fightin are the one and the same, revenge for her dead brother. __________________

2012-08-25, 07:50	Link #35999
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	who killed him? EDIT: Does Nanbei Azusa sound like a rich girl's name?

2012-08-25, 08:01	Link #36000
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	In manga canon, his own Id (Doppleganger). In case of (Mega)crossover, these are the possibilities 1. Black Golem = He just happen to be there when it go nuts and he try to use his own machine to stop it. 2. Black I.S. = He still use the same machine, FNC want to stole it. 3. Id = his own AI copy came into existence THEN gone rogue as it took over said machine. 4. Mixing all of above Basically Athena gone wrong, will ask Stratos if he's here. __________________