Naruto Creation Contest September 2008 Unusual Element Manipulators

[Zaku Hyuga]

Naruto Character Creation Contest September 2008 Unusual Element Manipulators

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Naruto Character Creation Contest: This month is September and the theme " Unusual Element Manipulators "

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Naruto Character Creation Contest September 2008 Our theme is ( Unusual Element Manipulators )

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Welcome to the Naruto Character of the Month Contest!!!!!!


It’s September and our theme is “ Unusual Element Manipulators ”
Any ninja or other type of character who excels at using any natural force of nature outside of the conventional elements of earth, fire, wind, and water.

If you want to list elemental examples, some could be magnetism, gravity, time, light, darkness, sound, etc.



The winner of this contest will decide the theme for next months contest.




This thread is for submissions into the Character of the Month contest.
Contest Rules are as follows:
1. Every contest will have a theme. Each contestant must abide by the theme. Themes cannot be picked twice in a row.

2. Every Character Must be put in spoiler tags. This is to save space.

3. Contest submissions begin on the first day of each month. The entry period will last until two weeks from that date.

4. On the day after the submission date, a poll will open and it will last for one week. When the poll closes, the winner will be allowed to choose a theme for the next contest.

5. The next contest will not begin until the first of the month, when submissions are allowed once again.

6. Only one official submission per contestant. You may create as many character as you want, but you can only enter one official character. So please put “final or official entry in your post when your ready to turn in your finished character.

7. You are allowed to wait until the final day to turn in your entry. If you wish to keep your entry private until the day the poll opens you can request it in the submission thread or by private message to the organizer (me, Zaku).


This months entry period officially starts September 9, 2008 and lasts until September 20, 2008. Entries will be gathered and put up for voting on September 21, 2008. Voting will end on the following Sunday.***





Entries can either be private messaged or posted in the submission thread. The submission thread can also be used to post works in progress to gather feedback from other posters. You do not have to post your entries in the thread if you don't wish to (for those who want to be private about what they are working on), until the last day of submissions. The whole idea is to promote quality entries but it's not required to submit early if you are confident in your entry but want to keep your submission secret until the due date.I will periodically update the thread to keep track of the names of all contestants and list those names here. Those who wish to keep entries private until the due date should still inform me they are entering so I can keep track of who is competing.

If anyone has any questions, feel free to post them here or private message me, I'll do my best to answer.

***A few notes about due dates and other "stuff"***
The due date ends at 11:59 (midnight basically) . The polling will be up one day later after 11:59 (again, midnight). I will try to be as lenient as I can with last minute submissions but only slightly.

It is up to you as a contestant to know what your time zone is in relation to UTC/GMT. I cannot do this for you. Here is a site that can help you figure that out: http://www.worldtimeserver.com/convert_time_in_UTC.aspx

* this format is the original work of Solace. I have merely edited it to fit this contest.

[mace58]

Spoiler for Ryan Yimimoto:

Hair Style: Long Sauske style, brownAge: 4 (currently)

Head: He looks like his dad(Yimimoto Jeremy) (read post) just a more serious look when hes older and longer hair.

Clothes: When hes young he wears american clothes but when he becomes a chunin he starts wearing a ninja vest and of course his head band.

Occupation: Son of Yimimoto Jeremy and Jessica, Grandson of Yimimoto James, Konohagakaru's ANBU Squad Leader(older)

Gekkai-Genkai:Sharing-Byakugan(read Yimimoto Jeremy for more info), Byaku-Sharingan

Chakra type: Fire, Earth, Water, Lighting, Wind(due to Byaku-Sharingan read Yimimoto Jeremy on why)Jutsu: Mostly Ninjutsu and Taijutsu never uses Genjutsu(thinks its cheap)

Jutsu techniques: Mainly any technique his father has(besides the all seeing eye).Chidori 1st shot, 2nd shot, 3rd shot, 4th shot. Yimimoto Ryan's Rendan(barrage). Ultimate Speed. Radora Nagashi. Infinite Darkness Jutsu. Chidor 500 chirping birds 1st shot, 2nd shot, 3rd shot, 4th shot. Ninja Style: No Genjutsu.

Ninja Tools: Golden Shuriken, Kunai, and Ninjutsu Kunai. Zanpakto:Kimimagato

Info: Ryan is the strongest that was ever born into his clan. Even though he dosent know how to use Genjutsu he dosent even know how to counter it. He just uses the Byaku-Sharingan and sees whats real. He dosent like to copy jutsu with his Gekkai-Genkai. He likes to intimmidate his opponnet to go all out so that he can humiliate them when he wins. Yimimoto Jeremy reccomends him to be the next Hokage but he turns it down. He thinks that since all the Hokages are alive(Yimimoto Jeremy used Earth Style: 2nd chance Jutsu to bring the First, Second, Third and Fourth Hokage back and almost died from it) that he shouldnt be Hokage and thinks that the work will be too hard so instead he takes the position of the ANBU Squad leader. Ryan uses a Space-Time Ninjutsu to go into the past to when he was the age of 4 commanded by his father to train his younger self. He teaches him his techniques and tells him parts of his future of what must be done and when to do so. Eventually in the future Yimimoto Ryan and Jeremy take over the Ninja Villiages bringing order and peace to the villiages, but the villiages still got to keep their customs and some of their rules. Yimimoto Ryan went into a rampage once and almost killed his father but Naruto and Yimimoto James got in the way and stopped him.

special chakra type:nature

abilities: nature chakra allows Ryan to manipulate anything and everything that has to deal with nature. their are four hand seals(3 are made mainly for humans also able to be used on animals and demons),body-able to manipulate parts of body(like blood bending from Avatar),mind-controls the mind making the target a puppet,spirit-able to rip the soul from the body causing instant death also able to rip body parts away and seal others,and nature-able to manipulate anything without a brain or having a weak brain. Their are different types of this chakra type but this is the true form. For some odd reason hes immune to its uses.Nature allows him to also backfire techniques thrown at him.He can surround himself in natural "armour" and makes him harder to beat. If a fire starts or storm,lighing,tornado,etc. he can get rid of it and negates what it did. The only way to learn this form is by Ryan himself.

heres a pic of him

If u dont see it heres the URL http://forums.animesuki.com/album.ph...pictureid=4441

if u want more info just contact me and i can even help u make your own character thx for reading (sry if i spelled words wrong im not good at spelling!!)

made by:mace58

[Evil Rick]

I personally misslike Naruto, but I have lots of OCs and I found one who seems to fix in this contest

Final Entry

Spoiler for Sadako 7 Swords:

Name: Ginga Sadako
Nickname: Sadako 7 Swords
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Origin: Tokaido, Japan
Aligment: Good

Spoiler for Aspect:

Spoiler for Backstory:

Born in a small village at the south of Tokaido, Japan, since the age of 8, Sadako was bounded to live in a path of blood when her village was slaughtered by an invation of Oda, leaded by Nobunaga.

Sadako lost all her family during the attack and was forced to run into the forests, tring to escape from the soldiers of Oda, she passed 7 days without food or water, at the point of death, she was found by bandits, who saved her.

The bandits were the Gang of Osumo Twinblades, a group that was dedicated to steal the richones and help the poor ones, Osumo took Sadako as his desiple and durig the years he trained her in a forbiden technique called "The Dancing Swords" This tecnique allowed Sadako, to manipulate 7 swords phsiquically, im other words, she was able to control her swords with her mind.

Sadako became a master of the tecnique, but once more, the bloody curse punished her again, when the Gang of Osumo Twinblades along with himself, was destroyed, this time by the imperial army, of the shogun Ieasu.

Sadako was once again alone, but this time she could fight back, focusing her wrath against the military strenght, she killed lots of soldiers through 2 years in vengance for the slaughter to her gang, although after this time, she discovered that the rue justice wasn't focused on the vengance.

She then became an alone warrior, helping the inocents from anyone who dare to hurt them, bandits, soldiers, whoever, all who ever dare to abuse of inocent people would know the name of Sadako 7 swords.

Spoiler for Swords:

Silver Tears: Two light Katanas, these swords have their name because their blades are made totally of Silver, the sords are light as a feather, Sadako can wield them really quickly, the blade is so light, than the foes of Sadako doesn't feel that they have been cuted until they are alredy bleeding to death.

Knifes of the Emperor: Two small swords, for unknow reasons, the color of their blades are black as opal, it si though that they have that color because the blade is poisoned, but noone is totally sure, although they have short reach, these blades are ablt to penetrate through rock, metal and steel with ease.

Dragon Fangs: These descomunal swords are really heavy, a strong wrrior would only be, able to wield one grabing it with both hands, perhaps Sadako's ability to control her Swords with her mind is what allows her, to carry one Dragon Fang peer hand, the leyend says that these blades were made out of Dragon's Fire and steel from the east mountains, these powerfull blades could slash a mountain in tow all by themselves.

Ying Yang Blade: A little blade that Sadako puts in her mouth, she uses this sword as a boomerang, lauching it from her mouth as a projectile and using her abilities to return it to her mouth, it is belived that the blade was made by priests of China as a tribute to a Dragon God, is unknow how did this blade end in the hands of Sadako.

Spoiler for Combat Skills:

As said, Sadako is able to wield her swords using her mind, normally, she carries two swrods in hands and Ying Yang Blade in mouth while fighting, the other 4 swordas are moved by her ability, as if the blades had life by themselves, the swords block the attacks of Sadako's Foes, the fly in circles around her, slaing anyone fool enough to aproach, they are launched as deadly projectiles and after taking down their objetives, they return to theit master, ready for the next attack.

Sadako likes to taste her opopnents skills before using her deadly tecnique, normally she begins the fight, wielding just two swords and Ying Yang Blade, many foes are lucky, been killed quickly before she could use her deadly ability.

[Keikan]

Hey guys and gals.
On holidays so I thought I would create and post a character. A very unoriginal and lame character probably but a character none-the-less. OFFICIAL ENTRY.

Spoiler for Akihiro Sen:

General:
Name: Sen Akihiro (Surname, First Name)
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Height: 186cm
Weight: 85kg
Village: Missing-nin (Iwagakure)
Clan: -
Surviving Clan/Family Members: -

Kekkei Genkai: -
Kekkei Genkai ability: N/A

Appearance:
Hair: Short black hair. At the back it is tied into a small ponytail.
Eyes: His eye’s are affected by a genetic mutation, they have no pupils and are blood red (think Hyuuga cross Kyuubi).
Clothes: Wears black, orange or red battle kimonos, usually with blood splatter on them (not a pattern, real blood). Wears a pair of dark sunglasses over his eyes.



Personality:
Ahikiro is serious and has some serious anger issues due to his childhood. Doesn’t talk much, prefers to slice and dice.

Ninja Info:
Strengths: Sword play, ninjutsu, his eyes (can see like it is day at night and can see through genjutsu)
Weaknesses: Taijutsu (useless without his swords), his eyes (can’t see at daylight or in bright light)
Affinity: Metal (Kinton) and Heat (Kaonton)
Summoning Pact: -
Weapons: Kunai, shuriken, senbon, demon-windmill shuriken, long sword (to scale) and short knife (to scale).

Ninja Rank: Missing-nin (was Jounin)
Team: -
Missions Completed Successfully:
D-Rank: 231
C-Rank: 103
B-Rank: 25
A-Rank: 7
S-Rank: 2

Commonly Used Jutsus:
Name: Kaonton: Kinzoku Kaon no jutsu (Heat Release: Metal Heating jutsu)
Type: Heat
Rank: C-Rank
Effect: Heats metal almost to melting point in a second with a touch.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Using too much chakra can melt the metal.
Hand Seals:

Commonly Used Jutsus:
Name: Kaonton: Kaon Settou no jutsu (Heat Release: Heat Stealing jutsu)
Type: Heat
Rank: C-Rank
Effect: Takes the heat from objects around Akihiro.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Hurts friends.
Hand Seals:

Commonly Used Jutsus:
Name: Kinton: Hagane Suji no jutsu (Metal Release: Steel Muscle jutsu)
Type: Metal
Rank: B-Rank
Effect: Hardens and strengths muscles, makes them really hard to cut.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Too much chakra and they can turn to steel permanently.
Hand Seals:

Commonly Used Jutsus:
Name: Kinton: Katana Henshu no jutsu (Metal Release: Sword Mutation jutsu)
Type: Metal
Rank: B-Rank
Effect: Changes the shape, size and style of a any blade that Akihiro is touching at his will.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Uses lots of chakra otherwise the blade turns back to normal.
Hand Seals:

Commonly Used Jutsus:
Name: Kaonton: Kaon Tama no jutsu (Heat Release: Heat Ball jutsu)
Type: Heat
Rank: B-Rank
Effect: Compresses lots of heat into a ball that Akihiro can thrust or throw at enemies.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Could burn Akihiro.
Hand Seals:

Commonly Used Jutsus:
Name: Kinton: Kinzoku Sesshoku no jutsu (Metal Release: Metal Touch jutsu)
Type: Metal
Rank: A-Rank
Effect: Turns anything or anyone to metal as long as Akihiro is touching it.
Advantages/Disadvantages: With not enough chakra could only partially turn an object to metal.
Hand Seals:

As well as the usual jutsu.

Brief Life Story:
Usual story of someone with a genetic deformity; parents abandoned him, picked on, dismissed as worthless, forced his way back, showed them all. You know the usual.

Well that's him.

Also for anyone that is lacking ideas here are some different types I came up with:
Kinton – Metal release
Neton – Sound release
Jouton – Cane release
Keiton – Thorn release
Chiton – Blood release
Santon – Acid release
Keton – Hair release

Hope it helps someone.

[Dan the Man]

Awesome character Keikan! I personaly love the background story.

Anyway, I hereby present my entry...

Spoiler:

Name: Jigen Arno
Age: 23
Village: Kikaigakure
Rank: None



Bio: While only recently known among the ninja world, Jigen Arno has garnered much more attention than an ordinary person ever normally gets. Having been known earlier as Kikaigakure's greatest scientist in the field of quantum physics, Jigen's reputation was top knotch. Also known as a genius inventor, Jigen was credited to dozens of inventions used by the ninja community. Eventually, through his constant months of research and development, he cracked the greatest scientific development ever seen in Kikaigakure. Jigen had developed a method to traverse through different dimensions.
After making his discovery, Jigen took a brash step, and attempted to traverse through a dimensional portal. However, the journey didn't end without it's problems. While traversing through the portal through different dimensions, Jigen did not take air into account, and suffered from oxygen depravation. When he returned to his own dimension, Jigen's mind had suffered a great deal of damage, and was warped beyond his original self. Kikaigakure's greatest scientist had descended into madness.
Having lost all sight of his original goals, Jigen constructed machinery to control the dimensional portals at will, and placed the machines in special pieces of armor. After mastering the use of these portals, Jigen began using them for his own selfish reasons. With time, he learned how to use them for fighting, and eventually became a marked target by Kikaigakure shinobi. It came as a surprise to the ninjas that many of the hunter ninja sent to kill Jigen turned up dead. Now listed in various Bingo Books throughout ninja villages, Jigen has left Kikaigakure, and continues to abuse his powers for his own devious reasons.

Abilities: Jigen Arno posesses the ability to manipulate dimensions. The ability works by using energy to tear a hole in time-space, effectively ripping a hole in the fabric of space, and connecting the tear through a different location. The devices that control these portals are located in his gauntlets and greaves. To prevent further problems breathing through inter-dimensional travel, the helmet that Jigen uses contains a breathing device, as well as a rebreather, removing the need to carry an air supply.



Combat: Jigen has had no official combat training, nor has he had any training to manipulate chakra, so his dimensional portal machines are the center point of his combat techniques. For attacks, Jigen's gauntlet's contain hidden blades, allowing quick, killing moves.

Techniques:

Perpetual Fall - A cruel technique in which Jigen creates a portal directly underneath an enemy, and one directly above. Unless the enemy can escape, they'll fall through the portals continuously, gaining speed until the reach terminal velocity. Once this is reached, Jigen removes the portal on the ground, leaving the victim to hit the ground at a potential speed ov 200mph. Needless to say, very few survive.

Vault - A quick traveling technique in which Jigen leaps off of a high structure, and before he hits the ground, creates two portals, one below him, and one in a direction he wishes to travel. The velocity of his fall is maintained through the portal, allowing him to go extremely long distances with no real effort.

Disconnection - A technique that is performed by dodging an enemy by going through a portal. While the portal is still open, Jigen coaxes his enemy to follow, and closes the portal while they're going through it. This generally severs the parts of the body divided by the portal, and can remove arms or even cleave people entirely in half.

Perpetual Slam - A technique modeled after the Perpetual Fall. Jigen begins by creating portals above and below himself, and falling through them until he reaches terminal velocity. The difference in the technique is that once the maximum speed is reached, a portal is then created directly above the enemy, hitting them with a downward kick at 200mph. Even with the shick absorbers in the leg armor, Jigen finds this technique rather painful to perform, especially when it misses, so it's usually reserved for when it's really needed.

Pincusion - A technique in which Jigen creates a series of portals surronding his enemy, and two near him. After extending his gauntlet-blades, Jigen thrusts each arm into a portal, and each comes out of every other portal made, creating dozens, if not hundreds of duplicate arms, each with it's own blade. Any enemy dumb enough not to get away as fast as they can doesn't really stand much of a chance.

Burial - A simple transportation technique that allows Jigen to dispose of enemies quickly. The technique begins by Jigen throwing an enemy into a portal, and setting an exit in an area that is inescapable. The most used location is about 2000 feet below the sea. At that depth, the water pressure alone crushes anyone unlucky enough to get caught. However, since the location isn't directly accessible most of the time, this technique is a challenge to perform, and Jigen usually settles for about 50 feet directly below ground.

Annihilation - The most powerful technique Jigen has to offer. It is essentially the Perpetual Fall move using portals large enough to move an entire city. The technique requires a great amount of power, which makes this a nearly impossible feat to perform almost all of the time, but it has been used before, and the devastation caused by it was enough to put Jigen on every Bingo Book in the ninja world.

Alright, that's my character for the month, hope you guys like him!

[Deneiro]

i rly like urs keikan! well done.
sugoi

srry for not being on the forum for so loong(( and damn i missed another creation deadline about a theme i already had a character for!))


anyways. as alredy said above , I truly love you characters story. a simple story but not boring like most stories getafter reading for a while.

tough its not as original as some characters it shows you can rly make something out of such themes.

tough the others were pretty good aswell its clear whom im gonna vote for
1+ for keikan



gr deneiro