2012-09-02, 05:28 | Link #36321 |
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Nevermind, looks like I'm going full drive with yet another fic, anyone interested please help me. Grammar, spicing the mood, anything. It was the wincest AU story about slice of life (again) but this time withous mecha bullshit, but it's First Person POV. The cast as a whole is more or less based on Sacred Twins (so there will be OCs). What Kick start the plot is the arrival of Madoka to Orimura household... in less than sane condition
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2012-09-02, 05:34 | Link #36323 |
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The opening scene is Ichika took a level in badass by completing a 100-man Kumite. Then went straight to Houki's national Kendo tournament.
Should I keep the characterization as normal or not?
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2012-09-02, 05:46 | Link #36325 |
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Less lazy is somewhat understatement, in fact, he might actually a mild example of broken ace.
In fact, this is the reason he cannot comprehend the kind of romance a teen has to experience... until he met his sister that is, which is another can of worm. the main theme is a conflict about different kinds of love, how to distinguish them, and how they could overlap.
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2012-09-02, 05:52 | Link #36328 |
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@ Eras
Averted actually, Ichika's own plot is more or less subconscious quest for true love. (if that sound diabetic, don't forget that I tend to balance dark and fluffiness) But yes, Madoka more or less started it. Yes, they can, very common in third-world countries like us, especially if the law enforcement is a bit lacking. However, the risk is that they tend to be more reckless than proper adult. @ Jak So at least they can carry Humvee individually, interesting.
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2012-09-02, 06:03 | Link #36330 |
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No, it doesn't go straight to that. Though indeed, he did spend time with them in what could be considered a date in all but name during the course of the story.
My plan for his character development is for him to grow actual motivation as well as understanding the values of different relationship. Hotwiring is easy, just take time.
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2012-09-02, 06:26 | Link #36334 |
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Disfunctional family in a nutshell, probably not as bad as Evangelion, PROBABLY.
I mean he pull this
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