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Old 2009-06-20, 13:17   Link #13981
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Old 2009-06-20, 18:25   Link #13982
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Crossposting in here for anyone that cares.

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what a good feeling, waking up to a new installment/short of your fic! *w*

as always, i cannot give any constructive, scholarly criticism (lol!) but i can fangirl damnit! i can fangirl and squeal and pasteurize ants---wait i'm going terribly off topic *rubs eyes* sleepy still wahh..

*cough*

anyway i shall just copy paste what i said:
>>> ...
>>> D: DX!!! nooooooooooooooOOOOOoo!!
>>> Noland
>>> i wonder when, Noland turned from insane creepy "gah please die monster" to likeable character for me. ahh i love this fic yes ^^

yup that was my reaction. yay! \o/ KeroNoland oh ho ho ho--*bricked*

oh and btw this one needs to be edited (unless it was intentional @.@)

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and that's about it. waiting for your next one.
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Old 2009-06-20, 21:40   Link #13983
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My goodness... I'm actually posting something!

Kind of a short omake, really, possibly foreshadowing to a story that I'm considering writing for my ViCia universe... though the discovery of this particular skill will be much more serious than it's presented here.

Spoiler for Burning Glory's Close Combat Form:


... Heh.

Spoiler for Author's Notes:
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Old 2009-06-21, 00:05   Link #13984
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My goodness... I'm actually posting something!

Kind of a short omake, really, possibly foreshadowing to a story that I'm considering writing for my ViCia universe... though the discovery of this particular skill will be much more serious than it's presented here.

Spoiler for Burning Glory's Close Combat Form:


... Heh.

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*chortle* I'm guessing it's the same person who lets Bardiche watch all that anime. *innocent whistle*

(Did Vivio and BG actually shoot down the assorted Crossfire projectiles that got through her shield? And if so, was this in any way inspired by our discussion of Himeko's combat style in "Black Dog"? )
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Old 2009-06-21, 05:51   Link #13985
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Yo Folks, I'm back. Unfortunately, my laptop's screen is dead so I'm forced to use my dad's computer. And due to my idiocy, the start of my Nanoha/Star Trek crossover is still on my laptop! Now I either have to start from square one, or write a different story alltogether.
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Old 2009-06-21, 11:03   Link #13986
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Yo Folks, I'm back. Unfortunately, my laptop's screen is dead so I'm forced to use my dad's computer. And due to my idiocy, the start of my Nanoha/Star Trek crossover is still on my laptop! Now I either have to start from square one, or write a different story all together.
Try this, most laptops have a hookup for a monitor, either VGA, HDMI, ect. the chances of yours having one is VERY VERY high. Just run down to your friendly neighborhood walmart/radio shack and buy a cable, shouldn't be more than a few bucks (or heck, unplug the one to your tower and use it to go to your laptop), plug it into your laptop then to your computer monitor and it should automatically dual screen. Mine instantly went to my monitor and my laptop screen when I used my HDMI cable.

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Old 2009-06-21, 11:12   Link #13987
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Try this, most laptops have a hookup for a monitor, either VGA, HDMI, ect. the chances of yours having one is VERY VERY high. Just run down to your friendly neighborhood walmart/radio shack and buy a cable, shouldn't be more than a few bucks plug it into your laptop then to your computer monitor and it should automatically dual screen. Mine instantly went to my monitor and my laptop screen when I used my HDMI cable.
I'll see what I can do. But I won't hold my breath.
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Old 2009-06-21, 11:20   Link #13988
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If you're sure the only thing wrong is the screen and not the video chips in the laptop itself, then Satashi's suggestion will definitely work. If your laptop's interface is standard VGA, you don't even need to buy a cable. Just plug a monitor's cable into the slot.
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Old 2009-06-21, 18:09   Link #13989
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I'll see what I can do. But I won't hold my breath.
Also, by doing what Satashi said, you could transfer the fic to your dad's computer, with the simple help of an USB memory unit or with a LAN conection transfer all the memory from your laptop to a new computer (yes, even a desk one), the cable pointed by Satashi and the LAN cable are not that expensive either, maybe $9.99 at much.
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Old 2009-06-21, 18:29   Link #13990
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I'll concur, I'm pretty tech savvy fyi

Damn this Iran thing, I won't be writing for awhile much less reading, sigh.
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Old 2009-06-22, 16:44   Link #13991
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Old 2009-06-22, 20:14   Link #13992
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Amber dreams is finally released <3 click image to read it ^_^

Enjoy!
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Old 2009-06-22, 21:27   Link #13993
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Amber dreams is finally released <3 click image to read it ^_^

Enjoy!
Great! I can't wait to see how it ends! Really awesome artwork, too.

Edit: Oh, darn--chapter break! Still excellent work, though...and now, I really can't wait to see how it ends!

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Old 2009-06-22, 21:32   Link #13994
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Amber dreams is finally released <3 click image to read it ^_^

Enjoy!
Never seen this one before...

Which probably means I should check it out.
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Old 2009-06-22, 21:33   Link #13995
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Amber dreams is finally released <3
It's good, but I hate to say that your habit of using inappropriate passives tripped up several heartfelt scenes. Please be aware of it when you write future fics, since you're not likely to be able to do anything to this one anymore.
I think I have an idea about your usage of passives. You seem to use them for "tiny" actions where you trip up. That's not how they're used.
You have to do something to break this habit, ok? It's really hurting your fics.
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Old 2009-06-22, 22:11   Link #13996
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Just out of curiosity Satashi, is it a oneshot?
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Old 2009-06-22, 22:49   Link #13997
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Great! I can't wait to see how it ends! Really awesome artwork, too.

Edit: Oh, darn--chapter break! Still excellent work, though...and now, I really can't wait to see how it ends!
I couldn't' release a 15-20k chapter XDD

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Never seen this one before...

Which probably means I should check it out.
Hope you enjoy <3

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Just out of curiosity Satashi, is it a oneshot?
Nope, it hasn't ended yet
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Old 2009-06-23, 00:36   Link #13998
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Nope, it hasn't ended yet
That's good to know.
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Old 2009-06-23, 05:16   Link #13999
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Amber dreams is finally released <3 click image to read it ^_^

Enjoy!
And enjoy I did Wonderful tone (it doesn't come off repulsively emo for me).
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Old 2009-06-23, 07:57   Link #14000
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A fun little romp, as usual

There are a couple formatting issues; perhaps from the copy-paste?

Where in the timeline does this split off from canon, again? I've forgotten.

While Sigrid shows a nice willingness to try to assimilate the culture that's around her, Forseti's actions were slightly odd. I mean, is he revelling in his freedom so much that he's going to do something significant without the permission, or even the knowledge of the master he's only ever parted with once?

And Elly's revelation makes a lot of sense. Can't wait for Sigrid's side of that one.

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Amber dreams is finally released <3 click image to read it ^_^

Enjoy!
I shall get to it and review over there
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