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2013-08-29, 07:28 | Link #1 |
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Devil's Contract (Novel)
Hey guys,
I've recently started writing my first Novel I thought about getting some feedback. My english is pretty broken, since i'm not a native english speaker but when I write I somehow improve o.o ( I think.. ) My novel is called: Devil's Contract. Genre: Dark, Action, Drama, Fantasy, Shounen. Summary: Hell and Heaven are in war with eachother for decades now. Hell decided to send 7 devil's to earth to search for possible candidates to make a contract with. And when the 7 candidates formed a contract with the devil, they have to fight eachother, the strongest Contractor leads a special army into the war with heaven. Tetsuo is just an average school student with a rather harsh past that made his right hand 'Cursed' Follow the story of Tetsuo and his master Devil Axel to help eachother with their ultimate goal. Changing the world to protect their loved ones. -------------------------- Spoiler for Prologue:
"Triing!.. Triing!"
As I opened my eyes I see my alarm, I slammed the alarm and looked at the time. "Urgh.. 10:15.." I murmured in myself for a couple of seconds and then I realized.. "Hrm..School.." "OH SHIT I'M LATE FOR SCHOOL!" I jumped out of bed, but as a result to that my head starts to get dizzy.. ".." I stood still for a couple of seconds and started to run to the kitchen, I saw bread lying down on the kitchen counter, picked it up and putted it in my mouth when I did that I ran towards the bathroom. -Fluush! I flushed the toilet and walked towards the mirror to do my hair, as I was doing my hair I started to think. "Why am I in such a hurry to go to school while I'm already too late.." I looked at myself in the mirror, I looked down towards my lower body but when I saw my right hand I immediately looked away. "Tsch.." As I clicked my tongue I turned around and started walking towards my room. I came across my mother room who was, as usual, talking in her sleep. "Dear..I..I miss.." I didn't pay any attention towards her and continued walking. I opened the door of my room and saw a uniform hanging on my closet door. "School eh.." I walked towards the closet and took my shirt off, I picked up the hanging uniform and take a look at it. It was a dark blue uniform with a golden shield emblem, which was the school icon I put on my school uniform, when I was done with that I walked towards my bed and grabbed my phone. I flipped the case open and looked at the screen. -10:23, One new message! I clicked on 'Open' and looked at what was inside the message. "From: Mayu Subject: Come to school! Good morning Tetsuo! Why aren't you at school? Are you feeling sick? Should I come over after school? You miss allot of viable information for the test! -Mayu." ".. What's with all these questions.." I clicked on reply. "To: Mayu Subject: RE: Come to school! I overslept, I'm on my way to school. Could you make some notes for me?" -Sigh. I closed my cell phone and putted in my pocket. I walked towards the front door when I suddenly hear footsteps behind me. ".." I put on a fake smile. "Good morning mother!" ".." "Did you sleep well?" "Why are you still here.. go to school!" ".." I put on my shoes and faced the hallway with my back towards the door. "I'll be back soon!" ".." ´No reply huh.." I opened my door and walked outside, I looked up the sky, it was grey-ish with lots of clouds. "Looks like it's going to rain soon.." I walked down the stairs and went on my way to school. After a good 10 minutes walking I finally saw my school ahead of me, but then I heard a voice behind me. "Yo! Bit late for school aren't ya?" I turned around and I saw a blond haired boy, probably around my age, looking at me with a big smile on his face, he was pretty tall and had blue eyes. "Is He a foreigner.. a transfer student? .. Nah probably not, I don't remember any rumors about someone transferring into my school." I looked at his cloth, he's wearing a green T-shirt with the text: "Watch out, I'm hot!" on it, and a plain blue pants. "Hmm he's not wearing my school uniform.." "Uhh, Oh! I'm sorry! I haven't introduced myself yet, my name is Axel! Nice to meet ya." "Hmm he speak fluent Japanese.. maybe he's just a delinquent?" "Do you need anything?" "Hmm.. Aah! Yes.. Your right hand.. there's something special about it.." When he said that my face froze. "Wh-What did he just say?" I looked into Axel's eyes. He then said. "Yes.. You have something.. I like it! Do you want to make a contract with me?" "Wha!?" Spoiler for Chapter 1:
Chapter 1: The blond haired boy
"Hmm.. What should I do.." I stood on top of a street light, looking around for possible 'candidates'. "He looks.. interesting, but I don't feel anything special from him.. OH! Oho~ she looks hot!" I shook my head "No no I gotta take this seriously.. but she really is hot.." "Ugh I must not get distracted by hot girls all the time.." -Achum! I scratched my head but then I felt something.. special, I looked towards the place where I felt it. "This is it!" I stretched my arm's, closed my eyes for a second and my black wing's grew from my back. I jumped and spread my wings and flew towards this 'feeling'. As I flew closed to this 'feeling' it became stronger and stronger. "I'm close.. this is it! this is what I'm looking for!" I saw a guy with black hair in a dark blue uniform, I looked for a place where I could land unseen. I found a allay not too far away from the black haired guy. When I was on the ground I put my wings back inside me and I ran towards the guy. ".. It's him, he's the one!" I saw his dark blue uniform, it was from a local school. "A student.. probably around my age." "Yo! Bit late for school aren't ya?" The boy turned around and looked troubled. I quickly started the conversation. "Uhh, Oh! I'm sorry! I haven't introduced myself yet, my name is Axel! Nice to meet ya." As I introduced myself, he said something with a rather emotionless voice. "Do you need anything?" I looked at him, searching for the source of this 'feeling', and when I saw his right hand I immediately knew that his right hand was the source. "Hmm.. Aah! Yes.. Your right hand.. there's something special about it.." The guy's face froze, I decided to fire another question at him. "Yes.. You have something.. I like it! Do you want to make a contract with me?" "Wha!?" He stared at me for a couple of seconds with a deadly look on his face. "Is he going to fight me?" The boy then suddenly said. "Contract? Contract for what?" "Hahaha! A contract that will change your life!" ".." I laughed but the boy in front of me looked at me with ice cold eyes. He suddenly turned around and walked away. "Oh.. Wait!" ".. what, I need to go to school." "Hmm..tell me, what is your greatest wish?" "Why would I tell you that? I just met you." "My wish is that I can protect the people that I love, something that I couldn't do in the past." ".." "What's yours?" ".. I don't have a wish, this world is already rotten." "I see.." "What would you do if I say that I can give you the powers to change this rotten world?" ".. I'm not interested in becoming the Prime Minister of Japan." "Haha, it's not like that, what I mean is real power.." I put my right hand in front of the boy closed my eyes. -Flaash! A could see a white light through my closed eye, like a flashlight that someone aimed at my eye. -Krsst. I felt chains coming out of my hands and felt it going higher up my arm. I opened my eyes and looked at the boy who was looking surprised. "I have the power to summon water." ".." He stood there in silence looking at my hand. -Drip, drip. Water came flowing right out of my hand, I looked at the boy who was looking at my hand with his mouth open. "Would you like some water? You look thirsty." ".." "Haha! It's a joke." The boy closed his mouth and looked right at me. "Just.. who are you?" "Hm? I already introduced myself, I'm Axel, a Devil." "..Devil?" "Yep!" ".." "Well? Aren't you going to introduce yourself? you're not the most social person aren't ya?" ".. My name is Tetsuo." I put on a big smile on my face. "I see, Tetsuo, Tetsuo.. Tetsu-chan?" "Wha! Drop the -chan!" Tetsuo sighed and looked back at my hand. The chain's were gone and so is the water that came out of my hand. "Well then, Tetsuo.. would you like these powers..?" ".. I can.. change the world with those powers.." "Yes, with this power you can change the world, protect people.. kill people.." ".." "Are you interested in it?" ".. A bit." "I see.. Well then, let me take you somewhere." "Huh? I need to go to scho-" I grabbed Tetsuo's hand and summoned my 1,5 meter large black wings. "Wha! What's that!" "Isn't that obvious? these are my wings." Before Tetsuo could give an answer I jumped in the air and spread my wings and took off, I held Tetsuo at both of his hands. "Ugh.. this right hand.." I flew with high speed towards the forest nearby and landed. "Hey Axel! Where are we going!" "Huh? oh.. We are going to Hell." ".. You're kidding right?" "Nope." I murmured a few words and a little purple-ish whirlpool came out of the ground summoning a black/red door. "Okay the portal is summoned, with a bit of my blood the portal will work." I bit my thumb to get a little bit of blood and a bit of blood came out of the cut and fell into the little purple whirlpool. -Fruuuuu! It sounded like a machine starting up. “All ready, let's go Tetsuo!” "Wait! I have to go to school!" "Eh! Let's skip.. You can go to school tomorrow!" ".." "Don't you want power?" "Wait.. let me send a message to a friend of mine." Tetsuo grabbed his phone and was making a message real slow, I got interested and took a look behind him. "Ma..yu? Mayu?" ".." "OH! IS SHE YOUR GIRLFRIEND!" ".." "Oho Tetsu~ you got a girlfriend already!" "Shut up idiot.. she's not my girlfriend she's just a friend.." "Hoo~ I see.." "Ok I'm ready, but I need to be back in a couple of hours, I need to make dinner for my mom." "Oooh, okay then let's go!" We both stepped inside the portal at the same time, a flash blinded us for a couple of seconds. -Fuuuush! "Okaay! Were here!" I opened my eyes and saw a blond haired boy in front of me with his arms wide open. "Axel.. Is this hell?" "Yep! This is my home!" I have read a couple of books which described 'Hell' as a place with lots of fire, smell of death, but this was different. I looked around and saw a dark red landscape with red sand, there were small animals running away from us but when I looked a little bit further I saw two red dots looking directly at me. “Don’t worry Tetsu~ they won't do anything if you don’t form a threat to them.” Just when I was about to nod I heard a pretty load roar behind me. I turned around and saw a gigantic monster in front of me. I heard Axel swallow and then said. “Uhh.. Tetsuo.. This one is dangerous.. RUN!” Axel who had wings jumped and took off, but of course a 'normal' human can't fly, I was standing perfectly still looking at the monster that came closer towards me. The monster had a green skin with on his head a bit of hair, surprisingly it had beautiful ocean blue eyes, but inside of his mouth there were loads of sharp teeth's. “M-Move! I have to run! I need to run!” I was paralyzed by the monster's figure and could only look at it with fear in my eyes. The beast was lowering his head towards me and opened his mouth, a terrible smell came out of the beast’s mouth. I knew what smell it was, it was the smell of death. Because of that my sense’s came back, I turned around and ran as hard as I could. A loud sound could be heard from afar, it was the stampede of the gigantic monster, and I who was nothing compared to this monster could only run as hard as I could. Axel was flying in the air looking at me to see what I would do in a situation like this. “Show it to me.. why do I get this feeling from you.. show me what’s so special about you.” "AXEL! HELP ME!" ".." "Shit! Am I going to die here.." "I've got do to something.." "I can't die here!" I stopped running and faced the monster who was running after me. "I have to fight it.. Even if I was running away it would catch up with me soon enough.." I made my right hand into a fist and took a rather unstable stance. My left feet was deeper in the sand then my right feet which make me unstable. "Ugh, well.. I got nothing to lose!" The monster was closing in on me, I saw steam coming out of his mouth, he was hungry for some flesh. “Not yet.. not yet.. not.. yet.. .. NOW!” When the monster came close I pushed my fist forward with lightning speed. -FUAAAH!! The monster let out a hard cry, the monster was drenched in water and felt down. I could hear applause behind me, when I turned around I saw a boy with blond hair, Axel, with a dark chain around his arm and his hand was wet. “Good job Tetsu~ you were about to face a 20 meters bloodthirsty monster, I’m speechless.” “Well you finished him off.” “Haha, It is only unconscious, how about we go to a place that's a bit safer?" Before I could respond I was picked up and flew past a local city. I saw a few people, well not really people but half human half beast. Axel was looking in the same direction and gave me some explanation. “The people here in Hell are called “Demons” they live for the Devil's and when there is a war they are called and send to the warzone.” “Hmm is that so.” I wasn't that impressed by that, I kept looking at the small town and I saw some children with their parents. I clicked my tongue and looked away from the town. “I’ve got to say it’s actually pretty here in Hell, there’s less fire than I imagined.” I heard Axel laughing above me. “Haha, that’s what every special human say when they come down here." "Hey Axel? Is it true that when criminals die that they go to hell?" "Nope, murderers and other people that commits crimes goes to the 'Abyss', there is really nothing there, it's just a black universe, If I was you I wouldn't go there." "Oh.. So If I kill someone once I form a contract with you I will go to the 'Abyss'?" "No, Killing while under a contract with the devil is a special case, if you die you will go to hell, see at it as a second life, you will also keep you're powers but there is a high change that you will get fused with a animal like what happened with the Demons." "I see.." "So if I make a contract with you, I will get powers and when I die I will keep those powers but I will live on in hell, that's interesting, that way I always have to fight for the devils, that's a rather smart system that you guys put up." "Haha I know right! But there is a chance that you will get more powerful if you die." "Why is that?" "Well If you die there's a high chance that you will fuse with a animal, and if you get something from the monster that we've just defeated you will obviously be stronger, but if you get something from.. let's say a chicken, that would decrease you're power, it's all about luck. “Ooh so that’s a gamble, that’s funny, I like that.” “Now then, tell me a bit about yourself Axel.. I’m interested in the whole contract thing.” "Forming a contract with a devil is easy, you have to complete at least one of the three circumstances that we formed, those circumstances are, Relive the most beautiful moment in your life, Relive the most painful memory in your life and the last one is.. Kill someone you love..." "I see.. but you don't need to do all three of them right?" "No, and you can do them whenever you want, you just need to choose one right in the beginning to make a contract, but since those circumstances are your main source of power, if you chose to do one of the three circumstances then you won't be as a contractor that did two or all three of the circumstances, to help you draw out that power you will get a 'Contractor's tattoo' with the help of that tattoo you summon your power." "Hm.. And can you choose which power that you want? or is that going to be chosen for you?" "You will get your power chosen, it may be completely random or it's going to be something that you like, there are many rumors about how the power is given, but you need to see it for yourself." "Hm.. I see so that's the ba-" -BOOOM! -ANGELS!! "What was that? did someone screamed 'Angels'?" "Oho, another futile attack, hey Tetsuo do you want to see our enemies?" "Hm.. sounds interesting, sure lets go." "Alright!" With top speed Axel, who was holding me for 10 minutes already, went to the explosion at a fast speed. "It seems that we are just in time to see the main act!" When he said that Axel pointed his hand to the air where 13 people with white wings and a halo were flying. “Hmm so that’s an angel, they are prettier than you guys..” “OH! Don’t say that we got allot of pretty women here in Hell, or.. don’t tell me you swing the other way?” A fist flew up to Axel and hit his belly, I was looking angry at Axel, I clicked his tongue and angrily said. “Of course not idiot, let me see those ‘pretty women' of yours later.” -Ugh With a cough Axel then smiled. “Haha, ok! We got some sexy woman’s in the castle.” “Hm.. his punch was good but he don’t have any style behind it, I have to improve his Martial Arts.” While Axel was in deep thoughts I saw another devil heading straight for the angels with high speed, his wings were big, bigger that Axels, they were about 2 meters wide. "Axel! Who is that?" Axel looked at the devil rather surprised. "Oh that's my brother.. Nero." "Oo So you have a brother, what kind of guy is he?" “He used to be a kind brother, who protected me from everything, but now.. he has changed.” Axel said that with a tone of sadness in his voice. “Ooh” I looked at the devil with the big black wings, Nero. -Krrssch!! I heard a loud sound and then I saw a flash around Nero. What happened before me was a surprise. A black aura was surrounding Nero and he had chains all over his body, Axel who was hovering in the air then went down to the ground. “Oi Axel! What are you doing? Get in the air!” “…” I looked back at Nero who was flying mid air with 13 angels in front of him, but for some reason they were on the ground just like Axel. “Why are they on the ground?” “Don’t you feel it Tetsu?” "What?" Axel put me down on the ground, I tried to stand but some kind of force pinned me down on the sand. “Wh-What’s this!?” “It’s Nero’s power, he can control gravity” "..Gravity.. I have to say, that's much cooler than water.." “…” We both didn't say a word, Axel picked me up from the ground so I could watch the battle. “Umpf, Well let’s just watch this battle, oh and Tetsu, this could get a little bloody.” “Bloody?” I was looking at Nero, I blinked and when I wanted to look at Nero again.. he was gone. I looked around searching for Nero, I saw a black blur heading for the angels with high speed. He stopped in front of the 13 angels. I looked at Nero but for some reason in front of his hands there was a blur in the air. "Look at his hands Tetsu, Nero is making the air into a highly sharp blade." "What!" I looked at his hand and saw that this blurred vision had a figure of a sword. Nero ran towards the 13 angels, one angel ran towards Nero, when they confronted each other I saw one white wing spinning around in the air. -GUAAAH!! The angel who stood behind Nero screamed and blood gushed out of his decapitated wing, and he fell on the ground. Nero turned around and walked towards the angel. He putted his gravity controlled sword into the angels chest. He then used his left hand to lift up the dead angel’s body using gravity control and threw it to the other 12 remaining angels. The angels looked at Nero with fear in their eyes, I could see a cold smile on Nero’s face, he was enjoying this scene. 7 angels tried to fly, when they finally succeeded they flew directly at Nero, they weren’t fast so Nero could dodge them easily but they made a format, a wall of angels was headed directly at Nero. Nero stood still and he increased the black aura around him, the vague blurred sword in Nero’s hand increased in size and he pointed his sword towards two of the seven angels, he then laughed and waited for the seven angels to come close to him. “…” Axel looked seriously at the battle, his brother, Nero wasn't even fighting serious, the 7 angels were scared to death by him, but they had a mission to fulfill. As the angels surrounded him and closed in with swords in their hands, Nero laughed loud. Nero who stood surrounded by seven angels wasn’t standing there anymore, he stood outside the circle with blood scattering around him. Two angels were cut in half and that made a path for Nero to escape. The remaining 5 angels who were surrounding Nero then looked shocked at the two bodies that were separated from each other. When they saw that they immediately flew back to the other 5 angels that were the back-up for the other 5 angels, they looking shocked at Nero. " He is dominating them isn’t he?” When I said that to Axel he nodded. “Yeah, of the 7 devils who have gotten the mission to recruit humans, Nero is the strongest of them.” “So.. he is stronger then you.” “Sadly yeah, my water powers doesn’t stand a choice against his gravity control.” “..” “..” We both remained silent after that and kept looking at the battle scene in front of us. Nero who was slaughtering angels like their butter noticed us and looked at us. “Was he looking at us?” Axel nodded but remained silent. “.. He isn’t going to attack us right?” “Hmm.. Not sure” “Eh.. EH! Let’s get away he is way too strong! And I don’t even have any power.” Axel then put of a smile and looked at me. “Do you want power to change the world? Save people? Kill people? Defeat my brother?” When he said that we were both silent, I was in deep thoughts. Nero, who was slaying the remaining 10 angels easily didn’t even used anything other than his razor sharp gravity sword, and cut them in half. “This is his strength even without using a contractor he is this strong.” Axel shrugged when he said that. “So do devils get stronger with a contractor?” “No they need to train their own powers to become stronger but a contractor can watch your back, some contractors are stronger than their masters, although that is a very rare case.” “Hoo, so I could be stronger than you?” Axel nodded. “Yep, you can become stronger than me but that’s extremely rare because contractors are controlled by their masters and their tattoo, but if the master or the tattoo are somehow loosening their control of the contractor his power can tenfold and can easily destroy a country.” “That’s very interesting, destroy a country.. oh yeah about that contractor’s tattoo, how is it like?” “It’s called a ‘Fusion’ the reason behind the name is because the ink of the tattoo is fused with the contractor, the better the place for the tattoo the more power it will bring and the better you can drain out its power” “Hmm, what is a good place for the tattoo?” “A good place is somewhere with history, like your right hand.” “… I see.” “Interested?” He said that with a smirk on his face. “I’m kind of interested.” “Aah~ almost forgot to mention this, you can’t get away from your contract once it’s formed, you will be my servant for the rest of your life, and If you form the contract you will lose everything, if the angels find out who you are they could kill your family.” “That doesn’t matter, what if the contractor’s master die?” “Tetsu your smart aren’t ya?” “..” -Uchum! “If the master dies then the contractor will be free, his tattoo stay’s but he can’t draw power of it, but there is a method to still use your powers even though the master is dead but I’ve never seen it before.” “Could you-“ I was interrupted by Axel who looked at the devil who was flying towards us. When Nero came closer he looked Tetsuo right in his eyes. “Oho.. You actually managed to get a contractor, Axel.” “.. Actually he isn’t my contractor, I'm just showing him around.” “Are you stupid? You bring a mere human to Hell? What are you thinking!?” A laughter could be heard from Axel. With a cough I broke Axel’s laughter and introduced himself. “My name is Tetsuo, nice to meet you.” “Hmm Tetsuo eh.. My name is Nero, I’m this idiot's brother.” He took his hand out and held in front of me. I looked at his hand which was covered in blood. We shook hands, my hand which was clean before, is now covered in blood. “…” “Ooh yes! Brother, do you already have a contractor?” “Nope, I don’t need a contractor just yet, I’m strong enough by myself for now.” “Ooh… Is that so.” Axel had a smile on his face like he was a little child that wanted to test something. He summoned a blue aura around him with chains only crossing his right arm. “Let’s test it, brother” “Haha, you want to try it again, sure!” A big black aura went around Nero, giving chills to me while I was watching this before my eyes. “Eh.. EEH You are going to fight while I’m here!?” “Ooh right haha, Tetsu~ can you move to that small mountain over there.” I walked towards the small mountain, I looked to my left and saw the dead angels lying there, wings were ripped apart, bodies in half. “This isn’t normal.. he did this only with that sword, what else does he have.. and why am I not bothered by this scene of death?” I shook my head and turned around, looking at the two brothers who were about 75 meters away from me. In terms of aura, Axel who had a blue aura around him lost easily to Nero who had a big dark aura around him. This time Nero didn’t summon a sword but he just used his bare hands, Axel who was always smiling putted on a serious face and then he changed his arm into water, this sight is something that opened my mouth. “He..He changed his arm into water!? How is that possible?” Axel’s arm was fluid and transparent, all of the sudden allot of steam came out of his crystal blue transparent arm. “You made the water warm? You have trained haven’t you Axel?” “Yes, the water is above 100 degrees right now, if anyone touch it he will get burned.” Axel swing his arm with rapid speed and 4 steaming hot water bullets came out shooting in lightning speed, but Nero who can control gravity easily stopped the water bullets in air. “Hmm still not fast enough, little brother.” -Tsch! With a click of his tongue Axel ran towards Nero, Axel was running very hard towards him but after a couple of steps he went slower and slower, the gravity was pushing Axel down. Axel then pointed his steaming arm towards Nero and shoot another 4 water bullets, but this time they were aimed at the sand underneath Nero, Nero didn’t stop them because they wouldn't hit him. He shot more and more bullets, some toward Nero and some on the sand. “Hehe” Axel laughed a little, he then putted his steaming hot hand in the sand, the sand underneath Nero was wet and created a sinking effect, Nero who was sinking little by little suddenly sank with his whole body in the sand. I looked by surprise when I saw Nero falling under the sand. "Did he win?" But a dark heavy aura came out of the sand, Axel looked shocked jumped back. Nero who was stuck under the sand came back to the surface in a rapid speed, he pushed all of the wet sand away from him and was hovering in the air with his black wings. “Ooh~ so you’re not that dumb but that is not enough lets finish this Axel..” “…” Nero flew towards Axel with rapid speed, Axel then summoned his wings and wanted to take off, but he couldn’t, Nero was pointing at him, he couldn’t fly because of the gravity. “Shit!” Axel came within hitting range for Nero, Nero made a fist with his other hand and hitted Axel in his stomach. -UGH! A bit of blood and allot of saliva spurted out of Axel’s mouth. “Give up, I give up!” Nero, who wanted to punch Axel again then restrained himself and backed away. “Still not strong enough Axel..” “..” I looked at the sight of Axel losing the battle, I blinked and I saw Nero right in front of me. "What! He.. what is he doing in front of me!" The air around me became heavy and pushed me on the ground. Nero whispered in my ear. “Your pathetic, I felt a strange feeling in you and so did Axel but you’re nothing, thrash, your just plain thrash!” “..” I couldn't say anything, I.. was scared to death. “Do you want power! Do you want to defeat the enemy, do you want to defeat me?” “..” “Then make a contract with Axel, his mission is to defeat me, prove me that you’re not thrash, pathetic scum.” I couldn't take it anymore and clenched my right hand into a fist and shot it towards Nero. -Bam! I punched Nero in the face. “SHUT UP! I’ll form a contract with Axel, and when we are both strong enough we will defeat you!” Nero was laughing, he looked at me with a big smile. Axel came flying towards me and Nero and when he landed he heard something unbelievable. “Axel! Let’s make a contact..” “EH? .. Umh.. Are you sure? This will change your whole life..” “I was interested in it already and my life is already ruined, I don’t give a damn about this world anymore, I want to change it.” “..” “Hoo, you got yourself a daring one, little brother making the whole world into an enemy.” "Haha, Isn’t he great, he is definitely special.. but Tetsuo, there are 3 circumstances in making a contract you know that right?.” "I don't give a damn about those circumstances, let's just get this over with.." "Well.. Ok then, shall we get started?" "Yeah" "Let's go to my house, we can form a contract there, Nero could you please clean this up?" Nero looked at Axel and then signed "Hmm.. Yes, Yes." “Well then! Let's get going!” Axel picked me up and we flew with high speed to the east, after 5 minutes I saw a big castle, and I've been hearing a annoying noise above me for a while now. “Hmm..HmmHmmmmmm!!” Axel was singing by himself. "Ugh.. So annoying.." "Hey Tetsu-chan.. do you want to see something funny?" “Don't call me Tetsu-chan! Sure.. It's boring down here.” Axel rose his speed and flew towards the castle, while closing in he raised his speed little by little. “Hey.. Axel! Stop.. STOP!! YOU'RE GOING TOO FAST!” “Hahahaha!” I saw a small opening in the castle, a window? Axel threw me in the room. “No!! NOOOOO!!” While I was rolling on the floor, Axel came in normally. “Haha wasn't that funny!” “.. No.. It wasn't funny at all!” “Hahaha look at your face! That's funny!” “Just start already.” “Oh! Right, yes right away, follow me! Don't get lost in here, the people in here don't know you're a contractor yet.” “Yeah yeah..” Thank you for your time! -Dean Last edited by AnimeDean; 2013-09-11 at 12:31. |
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