2013-05-02, 22:07 | Link #42544 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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@ Demi
Yeah, sort of. Most of the cadet only knew a little more, as they rise in age and rank they knew more and more. @ Eras Of course there's a plan The problem is WHEN to execute it
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2013-05-02, 22:15 | Link #42547 | |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system
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In terms of power armour, I was thinking about Fallout lol.
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2013-05-02, 22:24 | Link #42548 |
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Lack of words, though it's supposed to be a filler of sort, it's just that my brain stopped when trying to add more exposition and explanation.
Fallout armor is cool, but I need to emphasize 'abnormal' in badass abnormal. Since Chifuyu use snake suit made of carbon nanotube, I figure giving Ichika a more sensible but still down to earth design would be good, instead of alternative machine that serves nothing but embellishment.
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2013-05-02, 23:38 | Link #42554 | |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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Adding more elaboration? Anywhere from 5-20 extra words. This take less than ten second in real time in anime terms, or one page in most manga. This is what happened with chapter 14, it's 4000 word finished, but after fixing, no doubt it'll be at 6000 words at least. Record holder: ST chapter 12 is more than 11.000 words, SANS author notes which add like, 1.500
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2013-05-03, 01:25 | Link #42560 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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And hard for readers to digest
Average reader, assuming decent attention, have something like 200 words per minute of reading speed. More attentive reader would have half that speed or even less.
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