xLynx i want to start by thanking you for your praise, it spurrs my creative soul on, i'm happy to say that i will be creating further ninja as soon as i come up with some more ideas. on a side note, i'm planning some things that may well come to include your character, if you so choose.
now, on to the info.
Asano info continued-
Gear-
his robe has small plates sewn into it, making it the rival of most types of armor
his weapons have small serrations along their edge
his mask has a small amber lens in each of the eyeholes
Specifics-
bloodtype- o negative
favorite food- rare steak, stir-fry, pork rinds, and potatoes
dislikes- couples, children, large groups of people, and loud noises
likes- quiet clearings in forests, solitude, animals, long walks alone, sleeping under the stars
fears- being in a relationship, large groups of people, dying alone, and watching people die
personality/backstory-
Asano is a very shy individual, he tries to always help people so that he doesn't end up like his father. he has always wanted a relationship, but is afraid that if he gets into a relationship, he'll end up hurting the person he cares for. he loves animals, and will go out of his way to protect and care for them. his biggest pet peeve is couples, meaning he hates seeing people together because he is too afraid to find someone. many of his jutsu are very powerful, and as a warrior he is greatly feared and quite deadly to his enemies. while he is very important in the hidden rock village most of the residents are too afraid of him to talk. Asano went on a mission to the hidden leaf village to learn more about his mother's side of the family, by request of the raikage. while there he met hinata hyuuga, and quickly developed a crush on her due to her nature, which he thought was similar to his own. he learned that his mother had been the sister of the mother to the current head of the hyuuga clan. among the hyuuga clan his fighting skills had often been attributed to his doujutsu blending. after realizing that hinata was head over heels in love with naruto, he gave up on ever having a relationship with her. he quickly realized that the hidden leaf village was much more accepting of people like him, and vowed to try to join them. upon his return he made mention of his desire to join the hidden leaf to the raikage. the raikage immediately imprisoned him out of fear that he might join the hidden leaf and share his secrets. in a frenzy of rage Asano escaped his cell, killing many innocent people on his way out of the village. upon calming down he was wracked with guilt over the murders he had commited. he quickly realized that he was now a criminal and would be in everyone's bingo books, including his coveted hidden leaf's. filled with dispair and anger, still wracked with guilt, he has been wandering and killing criminals since. he has avoided capture and all larger cities for nearly 5 years, his special jutsu allowing him to have aged only a few months physically. a chance encounter with hinata, during a mission to fight pein led him to try to help her from the shadows from then on. a dream which was quickly forgotten when he sustained a life threatening injury from a wandering leaf ninja. he vowed then and there to never again help any village,but to instead remain in the forests, protecting them from outsiders. ever since his dicision to protect the forests, he hasn't left the forest that he settled in.
now that the back story has been brought to light i feel it important to mention that he never reveals his mask, because of the injury he sustained, it healed into a massive scar that warps his face. Asano is capable of summoning many different types of animals due to his affinity for animals. he is the utmost expert on animals that has ever lived. his mastery of animals makes the inuzuka clan seem like novices in the study of animal jutsu. while asano has no pets he can communicate with any animal that he comes across.
and thats all that i feel i need to divulge at this moment if you have questions or concerns feel free to pm me or even post them, i will adress anything that is said in the order that i recieve them. thank you all for reading this and for taking the time to comment(if you comment).
Weapons: Kunai, shuriken, paper bombs, and his two custom katana, Kokutan and Aibori. Both swords are made with a special material that contains bits diamond so they can cut through almost anything and are unbreakable. Katsu can also create many weapons out of wood. Tailed beast scrolls.
Strengths: Taijutsu, speed, agility, stealth, and ninjutsu.He specializes in capturing missions.
Weaknesses: Genjustu skills, and his curse mark.
Village: Leaf (former Sound)
Clan: None
Bloodline Limits: Curse mark, Wood release.
Hair and Eyes: Hair is light blue and, eyes are green.
Missions:
D rank: 24 successes
C rank: 11 successes
B rank: 71 successes
A rank: 103 successes
S rank: 45 successes
Personality: Usually calm, relaxed, and peaceful tries to avoid battle if possible but, and very intellectual.
Major Jutsu:
1. Wood release: Forest of Whim
Rank: A rank
Description: Creates a seemingly endless forest which Katsu can travel between trees by going underground and using the roots of the trees. Katsu can also manipulate the trees to attack, capture or even defend himself.
2. Water release: Acid Rain
Rank: A rank
Description: Katsu summons a hard rain that melts skin and burns flesh eventually turning opponent into nothing but a pool of blood.
3. Earth release: Great Fissure
Rank: B rank
Description: Katsu opens up a hole that can be any size necessary under his opponent(s) and then quickly closes it back up again, crushing his opponent(s).
4. Forbiden Jutsu: Tailed Beast Restrain
Rank: S rank
Description: Katsu runs up to a Jinchurikii and puts his hand on their seal and then slowly starts to remove the tailed best from the host and then permanently closes up the seal. Katsu then take the beast and seals it on to a scroll.
5.Water and Earth release: Mud Slide
Rank: B rank
Description: Katsu creates a mud slide that surrounds the enemy and quickly hardens trapping his opponent(s).
6.Curse Seal Release
Rank:S rank
Description:Katsu release the full power of his curse mark, increasing his speed to that of the 4th Hokage's, makes him strong enough to destroy a mountain in one single punch, and more then triples his amount of chakra. Although the after effects are devastating and Katsu will pass out after it resolves.
History: Shortly after his birth Katsu was abducted by Orochimaru (along with Yamato and 58 others).Orochimaru then infused all of their DNA with DNA from the Fist Hokage, 58 of the babies’ bodies rejected the DNA and then died. Shortly after Orochimaru fled Kohana, Orochimaru later hear news of a boy from the Leaf who controlled the same powers as the First Hokage and realize one of his experiments had survived. He quickly went back to Kohana and captured Katsu who was only 12 at the time. Orochimaru trained Katsu and gave him a curse mark. Katsu was one of Orochimaru’s subordinates for years until the war between the Sand and Sound against the Leaf. After Katsu saw what had happened to Orochimaru he got angry and went to the leaf in search of revenge. But once he got to the Leaf he saw a mother trying to save her child from a burning building and then the building collapsed not only killing the child but also falling on the mother. Katsu quickly realized that Orochimaru was the person responsible for all of this death and destruction. He became a member of the leaf and Katsu lived his life happily for several years slowly working his way up. Until one day, Katsu was going through some mission file when he stumbled upon Orochimaru’s profile and read it, learning that Orochimaru had actually kidnapped him, while he was with Orochimaru he had been brainwashed .Orochimaru was the reason he had never known his now dead parents, Katsu sore to never let this happen to anyone else , he swore to protect his village so, he then became an ANBU black ops.
Strengths: Taijutsu, speed, agility, weapons, genjutsu with short duration.
Village: none (former Whirlpool)
Clan: Uzumaki
Bloodline Limits: none
Hair and Eyes: long red hair and light steel blue eyes
Missions:
D rank: 64 successes
C rank: 124 successes
B rank: 271 successes
A rank: 143 successes
S rank: 23 successes
Personality: He's the silent type, cautious, mistrustful. He uses to work on his own, sometimes hires mercenaries to complete missions, but doesn't like that. He never hires the same person twice and checks his partners' backgrounds thoroughly.
Major Jutsu:
1. Earth release: Soil dragon
Rank: B rank
Description: Creates a dragon coming out of the ground. The dragon swallows the target and crushes the target's body underground.
2. Water release: Whirlpool
Rank: A rank
Description: A whirl of water is created and pulls the target towards its center.
3. Earth and Water release: Maelstrom of Death
Rank: S rank
Description: A giant maelstrom is created in a dry area by mixing water and earth. Everything within the radius of 40 yards is pulled underground in order to choke and die. The spatial recomposition makes it impossible to escape once caught by the heavy force of rotation.
4. Earth Style: Fists of the Titans
Rank: A rank
Description: Fists of soil shoot out of the ground and shoot at enemy targets.
History: He doesn't know anything about the Whirlpool country except that it's the place where he was born and that it's now gone. He was raised up in an orphanage of the Hidden Grass and when he was twelve years old, he was given a box with personal stuff in it after having graduated from the academy. In that box he found some jutsu scrolls and the silver-polished San Jie Gun. He left the Hidden Grass in order to train using that weapon for three years and returned to the academy because he lacked experience in spatial recomposition and elemental recomposition. He did not tell his teachers why he wanted to know what he wanted to know because he did not want to tell them, so he had to learn the rather simple jutsus, too (I did not mention them here because they are not spectacular or individual).
At the age of 19 he got the title Jounin of the Hidden Grass and after doing a lot of missions, he decided to leave the village at the age of 21 in order to become a freelancer. That's not a problem in the village of the Hidden Grass because everyone gets branded at the ninja academy and the applied seal is a very complex 128-points tenketsu seal that is able to seal all the tenketsu once the person turns against the village. The village can't afford to lose skilled ninjas to other villages and turn against them, so this has become the standard. It's a very complex blood seal that instantly kills the victim if someone tries to remove the seal.
He sent 40% of his pay directly to the Hidden Grass and saved the rest for himself and that's what he still does. Up to now, he has never returned to the Hidden Grass. He stays in motion and never really stays at a certain place. He does not feel at home anywhere and has never stopped looking for leftovers of the Whirlpool country.
Location: Where the lava and the waterfall are struck by the shadows
Age: 32
Kakumei
Hey guys,
Long time, no time to get on and post or review . Anyway I'm back quickly to post a new organisation and some weapons from them. Members are coming soon maybe.
Spoiler for “Revolution”:
Background: Kakumei or Revolution is a group mainly made up of D-Ranked or C-Ranked missing-nin (at least this is their rank according to their villages), usually Genin and some low Chunin. This group is based on the theory that, with enough numbers they can do anything. They specialise in infiltrating villages because they can easily mask themselves as civilians due to their low chakra capacities and when looking for saboteurs you wouldn’t automatically accuse a teen. Despite their specialty there is a direct combat unit in Kakumei. This group is made up of teens that have trained for or been born with enlarged chakra capacities. Every strike unit is made up of 10 to 15 members. It has been said that one of Kakumei’s strike units have taken out an ANBU unit that was hunting them, though whether the ANBU were taken out in the fight or though the suicide seal that each member of Kakumei has tattooed to their chest it is unknown. It is basically an enlarged explosive note turning the shinobi or kunoichi’s whole into one big bomb (though they don’t usually use this as a method of sabotage and only use it when they are outnumbered or outmatched as a take your enemy down at any costs). They basically have their own villages located in multiple different locations spread across the elemental nations; 1 in Bird country, 1 in River country, 1 in between Taki and Oto and 1 on an island in the triangle between Konoha, Kumo and Kiri are the know locations.
Spoiler for ”Weapons”:
Weapon: Name: Kakumei kunai (Revolution knife) Appearance: Has a 20cm katana-like blade attached to a kunai-like handle. Other facts: Forged with chakra-channelling metal it is used for elemental channelling or special assassinations. After seals are carved into the blade with a fine 0.2mm blade, each Kakumei kunai is soaked in chakra-infused ink creating the seals that are designed to release highly potent neuro or cardio toxins (depending on the seal) when chakra is correctly applied, one mL of which can kill a healthy adult. Permanently wrapped around the handle, under the leather grip, is an extended explosive tag. This tag can go off in three ways; deliberate activation by the owner of the kunai (each tag is specifically linked to a Kakumei member by a part of the seal and the seal on the Kakumei member’s chest), the death of the owner and tampering of the seal by anyone who does not understand the links between the seals. On the event of a Kakumei member’s death the tag (along with the seal on the owner’s chest) will explode half an hour after the last beat of the owner’s heart. Remote activation of the tag by the Kakumei leader is possible upon a member’s desertion. The tag contains enough power to destroy Hokage Mountain.
Name: Kakumei Taii kunai (Revoltion Captain knife) Appearance: Has a 30cm katana-like blade with a squared off point attached with a metal base to a kunai-like handle with a rectangular prism pommel. Other facts: Forged with chakra-channelling metal it is used for elemental channelling or special assassinations. After seals are carved into the blade with a fine 0.2mm blade, each Kakumei Taii kunai is soaked in chakra-infused ink creating the seals that are designed to release highly potent neuro-inhibitors when chakra is correctly applied, one mL of which can reduce a healthy adult to a vegetable. Permanently wrapped around the handle, under the leather grip, is an extended explosive tag. This tag can go off in three ways; deliberate activation by the owner of the kunai (each tag is specifically linked to a Kakumei Taii by a part of the seal and the seal on the Kakumei Taii’s chest), the death of the owner and tampering of the seal by anyone who does not understand the links between the seals. On the event of a Kakumei Taii’s death the tag (along with the seal on the owner’s chest) will explode half an hour after the last beat of the owner’s heart. Remote activation of the tag by the Kakumei leader is possible upon a member’s desertion. The tag contains enough power to destroy Hokage Mountain. Another feature of the Kakumei Taii kunai is the scroll in the pommel. This scroll contains a blood seal for each Kakumei member. This is designed for identification purposes, when the blood for a member is applied to their seal the seal glows indicating a confirmed identification.
Name: Wana-tsukurite kunai (Trap-maker’s knife) Appearance: A double-ended kunai, one head at each end. other facts: Difference is that, half-way between the two heads, when twisted can come apart and are connected by a length of shinobi wire.
Name: Kunai-o-kusari (Kunai-on-chain) Appearance: Looks like a normal kunai. Other facts: Head detaches from grip. When a pin is removed chain unspools and it becomes a kunai blade with a chain connecting to the handle.
Name: Gansaku kunai (Fake knife) Appearance: Looks like a normal kunai. Other facts: Is actually made of material that is supported by a chakra tag in the handle that is obviously hollow. The head can be filled with many substance; tracking powders, lime powder, poison powders, even explosive or flammable powders, that seep through the material.
Name: Hari kunai (Fish-hook knife) Appearance: A kunai that has fish-hook-like barbs along its length. Other facts: Blade edge is fragile due to its uneven nature.
Name: Yuuki kunai (Organic knife) Appearance: When painted looks like a real kunai. Other facts: Kunai made from wood and bone. They are cheaper and easier to make than real kunai. Not as solid as the real thing but when used right are just as deadly. In flight they do not fly the same as a normal kunai due to weight and balance though when mixed in with a volley of real kunai enemies rarely get the chance to notice.
And that's a wrap for my five minute allotment of time to Animesuki. Hope you like, I'll try to get back soon to have a look at the characters everyone been posting.
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I have stolen princesses back from sleeping barrow kings. I burned down the town of Trebon. I have spent the night with Felurian and left with both my sanity and my life. I was expelled from the University at a younger age than most people are allowed in. I tread paths by moonlight that others fear to speak of during day. I have talked to Gods, loved women, and written songs that make the minstrels weep.
Like sasuke with kirin how he was able to control natures lightning. I think it would be awesome for naruto to be able to control natures wind. 1 It could be used as an awesome shield against sasukes kirin and other lightning based jutsu. 2 is for the next part.
Similar to gaaras ability to disintegrate himself into sand particles - naruto make himself part of the wind. He can use it to travel distances with relative ease. Definitely not as quick as the Hiriashin but he does away with the seal needed - particularly if he is traveling in uncharted territory etc. Would be great for scouting, escaping. May even do away with the need to do kage bushin in order to find someone like when sasukes scent split up after the fight between sasuke and deidara (after sasuke healed up).
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the idea of this weapon came from hidan's abilities.
name: Blood Tracer Kunai
description: if the user has drawn the enemies blood with the blade (s)he can activate the seal on the hilt and then throw the kunai. this kunai will then hunt down the enemy either until the target has been hit or the user runs out of chakra. the blade will NOT go around and inanimate objects such as a tree or a rock. these objects will stop the blade fom reaching its target.
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Name: Razor Desert (in development )
Description: the ground within the jutsu is transformed into a Kunai, these kunai can become projectiles at the users will. This jutsu takes up a lot of Chakra do to its effectiveness and depending on range it stretches. Can be used Anywhere but most useful in areas such as the desert.
Location: Where the lava and the waterfall are struck by the shadows
Age: 32
As I said I've managed to pick up some time so have reviewed every character and idea on the last couple of pages. Just look for your name . Oh and for those who know my previous reviewing style, I've seriously relaxed (I blame alcohol) so my harsh, spirit-shattering reviews are a thing of the past. IN PROGRESS (not finished because it's late and I have to go to bed for uni tomorrow. I'll let you know when it's finished.)
Spoiler for Xexos:
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Heres my character and 5 of his own jutsus
Name:Helov
Pet:Hyil (Rare White Tiger)
Jutsus
Favorite Jutsu:Animal Control(Makes all animals fight along side you (or other stuff))
Secondary Jutsu:White Lightning(makes both the user and the pet become white blurs of lightning that cannot stop moving and once they do their speed goes back to normal( still able to attack through))
Jutsu:True Form(turns the user into its animal form for Helov it is a White Wolf)
Jutsu:White Storm(Makes mist clones of White Tigers and turns the user into a White Tiger)
close to death Jutsu:Animal fusion(Fuses the user with a chosen near-by-animal turning it into Half-Man Half-Beast and once stopping the user both the user and the animal are weak and close to death if they dont get treatment)
and there is my character and its jutsus. oh and forgot one thing.
Rank:Sage
This is an interesting character though it is a little OP. This OP impression could be reduced if you gave him more of a background. If you look at, for example, Kyubi's characters you will see a massive block of detail. Sure you don't need to put this much in but just a little bit of it will increase the quality of this character or any other character exponentially and that I'd very much like to see. I hope to see more of your work soon.
Spoiler for Kyubi Jinchuuriki:
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Originally Posted by Kyubi Jinchuuriki
thnx Xexos for bringing the forum back to what it was made for, OC naruto jutsus or characters: Which I am now going to post a character that my characters (from my previously brought up fan fic) are going to meet.
Name: Tensai Nara (First: Genius)
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Favorite Food: Chicken and Rice
Hair Color/ Style: Black / Horizontal clock wise Spikes
Eye Color: Green
Blood Type: A-
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 145 Ibs.
Birthplace: Konohagakure
Clothing: Dark Blue shirt with long open sleeve ends and white line going around the collar and down over the shoulders down the arm, metal cuffs beneath the sleeves to deflect kunai, shuriken, swords, etc. equipped with a hidden blade, matching dark blue pants, black shoes with a white lining around the bottom.
Personality: Tensai has a very well rounded personality. He can be nice with friends, or a calm angry with enemies.
Bio: Tensai is a descendant of Shikamaru. Though he was born without chakra. So he could match up with his siblings he learned how to battle with a sword and long bow. As he had more time on his hands since he didn't have to go to the academy, he constantly worked on the logical side of being a ninja, making him very intelligent. As he grew though he lost interest in becoming a chakra less ninja, and instead also took interest in art and sculpting. Soon enough he was recognized as a great artist and inventor and traveled a lot as people were hiring him to make paintings or sculptures. So due to his jobs pertaining around (location of first mission) he decided on moving to make his travels easier. Also due to the fact he was offered a studio in the town so the ruler could request paintings and such with haste.
Well done mate. High grade as usual. There is only one thing I'm not so sure on; when you say
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... Though he was born without chakra. ...
this isn't possible as far as my understanding goes. As far as it is explained, every living thing in the world has chakra, even Rock Lee though he cannot access it. To have no chakra is to be dead. So yeah that's just one little point. Keep up the good work (why am I saying this? I know you will unless you quit the biz. Is it even possible for you to make a bad character?)
Spoiler for doubleflamerasengan:
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Originally Posted by doubleflamerasengan
Hi im new and im gonna try a character so dont bite my head off if its rubbish.
Rank:He was a elite member of the anbu black ops before becoming a rogue ninja
Birthplace: Konoha
Blood type:AB
Personality: Unforgiving but calm and smart
Weapons:Kunai,Shuriken
Main Jutsu:
Blinding White Dance Of The Chimera:The user spins on the spot and reaches out a hand and light expands from his/her hand and sight is obscured for all within a half a mile radius including the user. The effects of this jutsu last for 10 min.
Disadvantage:The user is effected to.
Summoning Jutsu:Painful Spirits: The user summons 4 spirits who are each armed with a weapon the weapons used are: A Scythe, A Spiked Knuckle Bracer, A Katana, A Kunai With Chain.
Disadvantage: Do summoning jutsu's realy have a downside except from chakra loss.
Painful Spirit: Dance Of Pain:The summoned spirits Spin around while moving closer to the target.Once all four spirits meet at the point of where they aimed they form a tornado and attack while spinning.
Disadvantage: Once aimed the spirits can not change route,Therefore this is usualy used after Blinding White Dance Of The Chimera as the spirits would of not been affected due to being summoned after the jutsu.
52 Punches Of Judgement:51 Lightning fast blows are dealt to the target and then a powerful final blow.
Disadvantage: Constant use causes muscle pain.
Genjutsu:Severed Hands Of Constriction:The affected target vision goes blurry and when it comes back all of his joints appear to be held down by severed hands when nothing is there but there body acts as if there held down.Perfect for final blows.
Disadvantage: The users vision is slightly blurry for a minute and when it comes back a stinging pain can be felt.
Background:His family had disappeared 2 years after his birth except from his sister but his sister hated him because of his parents spending all there time with him before there disappearance.His sister had many attempts to kill him but one time when he was just 5 his sister brang a kunai to his room little did she know he was practicing jutsu in his room and she caught a powerful 52 Punches Of Judgement and was injured severly.Passing his exams with flying colours he got bored of every day life in konoha and decided to runaway to join a new band of rogues, The Itai Shi, His actions with the Anbu Black Ops was just to enhance his power for when he descended to darkness.
well i hope you like it
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Yeah i know its rubbish but i would like advice on how to make it better if possible.
Au contraire I think this character is really good. A fine, detailed character that doesn't seem too OP, each jutsu has drawbacks and disadvantages which is one sign that it is worth the space. This is a very good character especially for someone new to the thread. If you continue this high quality I think you are more than welcome here and I hope you keep posting.
Spoiler for AuroraFlash:
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Originally Posted by AuroraFlash
Kurotsuchi (black soil):
Range: mid-range
Level: A-Rank to S-Rank
This jutsu takes a lot of chakra to initiate it.
The user bites his finger and lets some blood flow into the palm of his hand, thenpresses his palm on the ground and releases a high amount of chakra into the ground.
The chakra pulls magma from deep underground to under the surface. Only the chakra creates some kind of barrier between the surface and the magma chamber beneath.
The user then can control it.
It's possible to shoot a fountain that looks like a pillar of lava from the ground into the air and it's possible to create several fountains.
One of the major drawbacks is that the ground turns black before the fountain shoots out of the ground, so the target can actually see it and dodge it if it can move at high speed. By creating several fountains, the user can lure the target and trap it. This needs practial and tactical skills.
One does not have to create magma or anything like that, the jutsu rather resembles kirin, but you can't guide the magma, just make it appear the way it was described before and of course it uses a lot of chakra and the user has to keep in contact with the ground which makes it easy to attack the user unless he is willing to sacrifice himself and create a fountain right at his position. Even creating fountains around him would not work because of the heat and the splashing lava.
Very good, very good indeed. A unique jutsu indeed, even though it is similar to the kirin and the ... I think it's one of the Mizukage's techniques combined. I just have one question (partially because I don't understand kirin that well) does it help if the user has a fire or an earth affinity rather than just normal chakra or doesn't it matter?
Spoiler for SuigetsuKun:
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Originally Posted by SuigetsuKun
Hiru Jūin: (leeching cursed seal) The user bites the target, thus curses the target in order to be able to leech chakra from the target and increase the own power.
The bad thing of course is that it's hard to apply the seal in battle. You probably need to be able to use effective genjutsu to paralyze the target in order to bite it. You also get pretty close to the target, so that you need to move away quickly because applying the seal disturbs the chakra flow and thus removes the genjutsu.
On the other hand, using the seal is very painful to the target. It's hard to control the pain and continue fighting and the target feels the drain, thus experiences a lack of strength and energy. The user can drain all the chakra from the target and kill it.
Ok this is a good idea and application. I was wondering though is there any other drawbacks apart from the application method of close-range biting? Maybe like a slight chakra drain when first applying the seal or a slight pain feedback through the seal so the user feels some of the pain too? I know that Oro-teme's curse seals had nothing like that he was a particularly powerful shinobi.
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Name: Fuuma Hazumi aka "Kuro"
Age: 17
Height: 1,67 m
Weight: 56 kg
Hair Color: black
Eye Color: green
Affiliation: Otogakure
Elemental Affinities: Suiton, Doton
Background:
Hazumi is the daugher of that Fuuma guy who became one of Pain's bodies and was killed by Jiraiya.
Spoiler for here's a picture:
Her father left her with her mother and was never seen again. Nevertheless, Hazumi grew up together with other leftovers of the Fuuma clan, who have a strong company and are overall rather poor. When Orochimaru made his offer to the Fuuma clan, Hazumi's mother had a bad feeling about it and tried to get away with her daughter. They got caught and Hazumi's mother was being tortured before her eyes for three days. It was decided to hang her mother from the gallows and Hazumi (at the age of four) was given the chance to save her life by cutting the rope with a kunai. She actually threw the kunai, but pierced her mother's throat. Not to mention that her mother died.
Hazumi's will seemed to be broken and she was trained in the ways of a ninja of the Hidden Sound for several years, but back then, there was no such thing as a village of the Hidden Sound or a nation, just Orochimaru's henchmen and hidden training camps. She was talented and at the age of 12 she was allowed to join "Souon", a team of bounty hunters who were working for Orochimaru's organization in order to make the cash tills ring.
At the age of 13 she was given a scroll with the Fuuma Clan's jutsu(s) at Orochimaru's desire. She was interested in it and trained hard in order to master the different techniques. That's when she acquired the taste for the big shuuriken.
[...to be continued.]
Very good. A nice back story and lots of beautiful, beautiful detail. I can't wait to see the rest of her.
Spoiler for DKN117:
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Originally Posted by DKN117
I've come up with a Kekkei Genkai. It's called the "Death-Foreseeing Eye". Basically, it allows someone to see a person's near-future death; technically, it allows the user to see how much "entropy" the person possesses.
"If someone has a terminal disease, the user can see dark markings that signify the symptoms of the disease. It is also possible to see the “Death marks” on a subject a few minutes before their death. If someone is about to get fatally struck by a well-placed kunai, they might develop a dark spot where the thrown knife will go. If they are about to drown, they may develop black markings on the skin above their lungs. If someone is about to get put through a wood-chipper, they might develop intersecting black marks along their entire body."
On a side note:
"Sharingan" = "Copy Wheel Eye"
"Byakugan" = "White Eye"
"Rinnegan" = "Samsara Eye"
What would "Death-Foreseeing Eye" translate as?
Interesting ... I like it. A useful doujutsu but not all that useful if the user doesn't have the strength to stop the death while also being very useful in the medical profession, a good idea indeed. As for the translation, no idea. I suggest looking up a translation program particularly kanji though I don't know if that will help because as far as I can tell 'gan' isn't eye in Japanese though I haven't been able to find a kanji translater that has told me it isn't, the translaters just didn't work .
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Hey guys i'm new i was just searching up make your own naruto charater and this came up
Name: Rei Nakamura (Law/rule in the village)
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Birthplace: Takigakure
Personality: Friendly yet solitary
Element: Water
Weapons: Katana, Kunais
Background: Rei Nakamura, a native of Takigakure lived a normal life being trained under his father. After the the death of his mother, Rei's brother Hiraku abanndoned the village in a blind rage killing two members. Hiraku was killed shortly after. Following that event, hatred towards Rei and his father had grown in the village over time. Framed for many crimes, Rei and his father were finally sentenced life to imprisionment. 2 years later Rei's father was executed for unexplained reason, now leaving Rei alone in his cell. Sometime later, the group known as the Akatsuki invaded Takigakure in search of the Seven-Tailed Horned Beetle. In this destructive event the prison in which Rei was captive, had been destoryed thus releasing him. Although he was discovered by the Akatsuki and almost killed, one member sugested that Rei be to their advantage. With that he alligned with the Akatsuki serving as a spy gathering scrolls and information.In following the Akatsuki Rei discovered the necklace that belonged to his brother which he now wears. Shortly after the death of Sasori, missions assigned to Rei ceased and he secretly disbanded from the Akatsuki.
Present: Rei now serves as a Cook in a resturant in the inner city of Konoha. From time to time is offered a mission that requires his ninja skill.
Ninjutsu
*Water Release: Water Bullet - Send a high speed water projectile. Minimum damage yet effective after many shots.
*Water Release: Bullet Barage - Send multiple high speed water projectiles. Medium damage highly effective
*Water Release: Water Cannon - A giant pressurized water cannon leaving the target soaking wet and possibly knocked down.
*Summoning Jutsu: Levisan - A scaled down version of the legendary Leviathan. requires considerable amout of chakra and small body of water must be present
*Summoning Jutsu: Leviathan - The legendary sea dragon. Requires large ammount of chakra, Rei must be at 100% to perform this justu and a large body of water must be present
Genjutsu:
*Water Prison: Endless Depth - Trap the victim in which they appear to be drowning and try to reach the top in an infinite sea. The victim must be wet for this genjustu to work, Rei tries to stay close to a body of water incase his opponent is able to dodge his other justus.
*Liqufication: Rei can make it appear as though he himself or his opponent is made of water. For the victim to be affected they must be wet.
Taijutsu:
*Rei is very skill with a katana, but as far as hand to hand combat he would lose just about every match.
Weakness:
*Lightning, dry areas. extremely hot areas
Strength:
*Rain, anywhere near a body of water
SO GUYS HOW DID I DO?
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Name: Yoshikazu Aki (Volume sparkle)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Birthplace: Iwagakure
Personality: Wild, wreckless acts with out rational thought.
Element: Earth
Weapon: Kunai
Background: Yoshikazu Aki, being brought up in an average family lived a normal life in Iwagakure. However, Yoshikazu was always known for hanging around the wrong crowd, and actions from his younger age proved to be the result of him joining a small time criminal organization. Their hunt for wealth eventually lead the oragization to Otogakure in which they encountered a ninja by the name of Orochimaru. Promising them wealth, the group followed Orochimaru to his lair in which they were now held prisoner for Orochimaru's experiments. Orochimaru, trying to achieve the perfect ninja of defense fused DNA from stones with many ninja which resulted in failures. Finally perfecting it, he used his new discovery on Yoshikazu in which he gained the ability to turn his skin to a thick layer of stone at will. Later, when Orochimaru is killed by Sasuke, Yoshikazu roams the ninja world joining with criminal organizations for wealth. Some groups of which he decided to kill the leader and take charge of.
Present: In a small village we find Yoshikazu terrorizing citizens, in which he encounters a ninja by the name of Rei Nakamura who has been sent to stop him. The Defeated Yoshikazu now searches for Rei in order to obtain revenge.
Ninjutsu:
*Earth Release: Iwao (Stone Man) - Turn his skin into a think layer of stone, making him considerably strong and rendering most physical attacks useless, but reduces his speed making him an easy target.
*Summoning Jutsu: Turtle Shell - Summons a Turtle shell used for the ultimate defensive, but leaves the person wearing it immoblie. Yoshikazu has been practicing moving with the shell on, but he has only reached jogging level.
Taijutsu:
*Judgement Hammer - Can transfer ammounts of chakra to specific body parts and cause a devasting blow. Which ever part the chakra is drawn from becomes a weak spot, but a direct attack from this can mean death.
HOW ABOUT THIS ONE GUYS!!!!???
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My ninja guy is this! He's very original
Name: Sairo
Jutsu: he uses many justsu but his main are all jutsu is with his sword called subeta no shinkan ( sword of silence) he uses it as his weapon and it is a special sword with the ability to be a sword and also when it comes into contact with an enemy it takes blood and if it gets blood it can morph into other forms, he also has an eye jutsu he created himself by killing a ninja with the sharingan and mixing it wit a dark power and creating the permanent eye jutsu called the bikougan( shadow eye) that lets him go invisible and do dark jutsus.
Quotes: silence! and your life will be over soon.
Story: born in the village hidden in the mist, he was one o the best swordsman in the village so was introduced to the life of a jonin at age 12 and the Mizukage decided he would do better as a mist village front line soldier but he wanted to continue his life as a child in the village but the Mizukage sent him away. after taking out a full unit of cloud ninja he returned to his village and killed the mizukage in a large battle and the next mizukage banished him and dubbed him an S-rank criminal and a rogue ninja.
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Name:Reikon Genkai no jutsu - soul limit
Type: special transformation jutsu
Effect: soul limit jutsu pushes you ki and chalkra to full power while still gathering it after activating you must use your chalkra and ki to stop from harming your chalkra coils or body.
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the basic look of this weapon is of a large scythe. this is a weapon similar to kisame's sword in the way that it can obsorb chakra form anyone that it comes into contact with. another similarity is that is can change chape to co-inside with its wielder's fighting style. it can vary form the size of a small kama for concealment to a double length scythe in a matter of seconds.the look of the scythe is that of a lions jaws with the blade being the protuding tongue.
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the idea of this weapon came from hidan's abilities.
name: Blood Tracer Kunai
description: if the user has drawn the enemies blood with the blade (s)he can activate the seal on the hilt and then throw the kunai. this kunai will then hunt down the enemy either until the target has been hit or the user runs out of chakra. the blade will NOT go around and inanimate objects such as a tree or a rock. these objects will stop the blade fom reaching its target.
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Name: Sendai Bokuwa Age: 29 Blood-type: B- Location: Earth Country- Iwagakure Clan: Onara Kekkei-Genkai: Kitai - the ability to fart whenever he likes (it's disgusting) creating a lethal and poisonous gas. Skilled members of the Onara clan can control and guide it. It's weak against wind techniques. Appearance: white skin, ruby eyes, athletic, green hair, all clothes are made of extra stretchable and breathable cloth, he constantly wears two headbands to keep the long hair away from his farting ass. Personality: Bokuwa is a proud member of his clan. The dense and lethal poisonous gas they produce by farting is a noiseless and very efficient tool. Only the more powerful techniques can be heard. He likes to eat very spicy and prefers fizzy drinks. For some reason he's even popular with the ladies... Hobbies: eating, drinking, training and the girls. Battle phrases: "I'm gonna blow off!" Weapons+gear: ballons (to fill in the deadly poisonous gas), kunai, explosion tags, shuriken, two butterfly knives
Techniques: Kitai - Gasworks: He farts and then directs the gas towards the enemies. Fire jutsu or explosion tags ignite the invisible gas. Kitai - Unscented death: He creates (you know how he does it by now) an odorless gas and directs it. Once the enemy breathes, the lungs are being chemically burned. Kitai - Flamethrower:Turning his back towards the enemy, he releases gas and uses fire to immediately ignite it. This is used for short distances and can also be used for defense while escaping Summoning technique - Skunks: He can summon several skunks to attack the enemies. Of course these are ninja skunks and their spray can be ignited and is poisonous, too. Summoning technique - Big Itachi: He summons Big Itachi, the god of the skunks (not Uchiha Itachi). It's a giant skunk, as big as Gamabunta or Shukaku and it's fast and can cover whole areas with a lethal spray. Those areas are devastated for decades. Katon Hahonryuu: Creates a dragon of fire who swallows and burns the enemy. This technique can also be used to miss the enemy and ignite the invisible gas. The shockwave then surprisingly hits the enemy target.
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Name: Asano
Rank: ANBU
Village: Lightning
Age: 18
Height: 6'1''
Weapon: 2 dai- katanas, with handles that link together so that the blades become a staff of sorts.
Armor: a special robe that covers his whole body and has a hood
ANBU Mask: a bear with 4 eyes and thin lines all over it in jagged patterns
Bloodline limit: Rinnegan, and Byakugan, gathering from both parents
Signature Jutsu: Shadow Murder- creates a cube of shadows that entraps the target and steals their chakra, giving it to the user, and steals their life, giving the equal amount of life energy to the user. downside- this jutsu causes extreme pain, and the pain gets worse the longer the shadow cube is up.
Other Jutsu: Shadow Coffin- similar to the sand coffin, using crystalized shadows instead, destroys the body upon entrapment, getting rid of the need for a sand burial. downside- causes pain to the user, enormous pain
Shadow Cyclone of Doom- creates a vortex of shadow crystals that destroy anything within it , and it can be shaped into anything at the user's will. downside- using this jutsu takes 1 year off the user's life, and causes extreme pain
Falcon Shadow- creates a small bird out of shadows, this bird can fly faster than the fastest falcon, and doesn't ever tire, the entire time it is in existance, the user feels pain, the user can speak through the bird and hear what it hears, as well as see what it sees downside- causes pain, and requires extreme focus.
Shadow Sting- sends out a kunai or shuriken made out of crystalized shadows, it explodes on contact, sending shadow crystals out in all directions. downside- the user is in pain during use.
Shadow Leech- sends out a single senbon shaped shadow crystal, anything that it hits gets its chakra drained out to the user, also if the user sacrifices a year of his life, he can control the target for approximately 5 hours. downside- the user is in extreme pain, and if he controls the target, he loses a year of his life.
Shadow Cloak- covers the user in special shadows that make him invisible to anyone looking at him, and it erases his scent. downside- extreme pain for the user.
Secret Techniques from bloodline limit- eye of the shadowed fallen angel- lets the user control anything that looks into his eyes, including other people, animals, plants, including jinchuuriki. downside- causes extreme pain and in the case of a jinchuuriki it costs one year of his life.
eye of the broken soul- kills anything the user looks at, and allows the user to destroy anything he chooses, also lets the user absorb any life from anything killed in this way. downside- using this jutsu causes pain, and can cause blindness if used more than 3 times in a year.
eye of the miracle shadow- lets the user create anything out of crystalized shadows, copying anything that he sees, including keys and weapons also lets the user copy any jutsu he sees used, and lets him remember any jutsu he copies indefinately. downside- costs 5 years for any jutsu copied, 2 for anything created thats larger than a sword and 1 for a sword or anything smaller, also extreme pain.
Background story- Asano comes from a dark, twisted world, his parents were abusive and his father was a murderer. his father killed his mother when he was 5 Asano soon after that developed his bloodline limit, and used it to kill his father accidentally. after a tough childhood where everyone in his village was afraid of him and avoided him. his mother was a runaway branch family member from the hidden leaf, and his father was nagato's twin brother Chisho. Chisho was seperated at birth, and was lost in the mountains during his training, he met Asano's mother, Hinsa, who was hiding from hunter ninjas. Asano joined the closest village, the Lightning Village. upon graduating the acadamy he was immediately invited to join the hidden rock's ANBU, where he was trained and molded into a horrifying monster. due to an incident where he stole the life of a Jinchuuriki, his chakra capacity and control as well as his strength and intellegence are at a superhuman level. the same incident caused his life to be extended to a level where he could outlive every living person in his village.
after suffering an injury at age 16, that cost him one of his arms from the middle of his forearm down, he has a special shadow crystal replacement. his ability to create shadow crystals is another effect of his mixed bloodlines, and special training from Guren, one of orochimaru's former followers. although he is technically an ANBU, he is the Raikage's personal bodygaurd. he is nearly overpowered, but suffers for all of his abilities. due to the incident with the jinchuuriki he has superhuman speed. utilizing his superhuman speed, he has trained his reactions and his weapon skills to create a style of combat that uses taijutsu and bojutsu and is more deadly than even the gentle fist style.
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xLynx i want to start by thanking you for your praise, it spurrs my creative soul on, i'm happy to say that i will be creating further ninja as soon as i come up with some more ideas. on a side note, i'm planning some things that may well come to include your character, if you so choose.
now, on to the info.
Asano info continued-
Gear-
his robe has small plates sewn into it, making it the rival of most types of armor
his weapons have small serrations along their edge
his mask has a small amber lens in each of the eyeholes
Specifics-
bloodtype- o negative
favorite food- rare steak, stir-fry, pork rinds, and potatoes
dislikes- couples, children, large groups of people, and loud noises
likes- quiet clearings in forests, solitude, animals, long walks alone, sleeping under the stars
fears- being in a relationship, large groups of people, dying alone, and watching people die
personality/backstory-
Asano is a very shy individual, he tries to always help people so that he doesn't end up like his father. he has always wanted a relationship, but is afraid that if he gets into a relationship, he'll end up hurting the person he cares for. he loves animals, and will go out of his way to protect and care for them. his biggest pet peeve is couples, meaning he hates seeing people together because he is too afraid to find someone. many of his jutsu are very powerful, and as a warrior he is greatly feared and quite deadly to his enemies. while he is very important in the hidden rock village most of the residents are too afraid of him to talk. Asano went on a mission to the hidden leaf village to learn more about his mother's side of the family, by request of the raikage. while there he met hinata hyuuga, and quickly developed a crush on her due to her nature, which he thought was similar to his own. he learned that his mother had been the sister of the mother to the current head of the hyuuga clan. among the hyuuga clan his fighting skills had often been attributed to his doujutsu blending. after realizing that hinata was head over heels in love with naruto, he gave up on ever having a relationship with her. he quickly realized that the hidden leaf village was much more accepting of people like him, and vowed to try to join them. upon his return he made mention of his desire to join the hidden leaf to the raikage. the raikage immediately imprisoned him out of fear that he might join the hidden leaf and share his secrets. in a frenzy of rage Asano escaped his cell, killing many innocent people on his way out of the village. upon calming down he was wracked with guilt over the murders he had commited. he quickly realized that he was now a criminal and would be in everyone's bingo books, including his coveted hidden leaf's. filled with dispair and anger, still wracked with guilt, he has been wandering and killing criminals since. he has avoided capture and all larger cities for nearly 5 years, his special jutsu allowing him to have aged only a few months physically. a chance encounter with hinata, during a mission to fight pein led him to try to help her from the shadows from then on. a dream which was quickly forgotten when he sustained a life threatening injury from a wandering leaf ninja. he vowed then and there to never again help any village,but to instead remain in the forests, protecting them from outsiders. ever since his dicision to protect the forests, he hasn't left the forest that he settled in.
now that the back story has been brought to light i feel it important to mention that he never reveals his mask, because of the injury he sustained, it healed into a massive scar that warps his face. Asano is capable of summoning many different types of animals due to his affinity for animals. he is the utmost expert on animals that has ever lived. his mastery of animals makes the inuzuka clan seem like novices in the study of animal jutsu. while asano has no pets he can communicate with any animal that he comes across.
and thats all that i feel i need to divulge at this moment if you have questions or concerns feel free to pm me or even post them, i will adress anything that is said in the order that i recieve them. thank you all for reading this and for taking the time to comment(if you comment).
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I've got an original character here--comment plz!!!! My cell phone has a lousy camera, so sorry if the pictures are sorta unclear...but i drew all of them myself =)
Name- Ryuuken Hayasa (竜巻はやい, lit. Curled Dragon, Speed)
Age-15
Gender- Female
Hair color- Black and dark brown
Eye color- Dark green
Blood Type- O
Height- 5’3’’
Weight- 95 lbs
Birthplace- The Akuma Division
Rank- Chunin
Village- Konohagakure
Affinity- Fire, Lightning, a little of Wind.
Animal Familiar- Falcon, named Teikan（諦観, lit. Clear Vision）
Quotes- “Of course I know I’m arrogant. Deal with it.”
Likes- Steamed fish, ice, silver, pushing her limits, taking walks.
Dislikes- Tofu, pink, distrust, war, fear.
Skills- Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, a bit of genjutsu
Clothing- Simple, short-sleeved black shirt plus black trousers, red sash at hips, wrist-forearm guards (black too), tattoo on left calf and on back. (see picture)
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(animal familiar, ignore the chinese characters, those aren't its name)
Personality- Hayasa has a very pessimistic and paranoid view of the world, but hides her insecurity with a bitchy, fiery temperament. She’ll do whatever she has promised, even if it involves risking her life. Hayasa is for most of the time reasonable, but usually subjects people to unwarranted bouts of barbed sarcasm. She is also stubborn to a fault.
Bio- Hayasa was born to a clan of shinobi who used wind jutsu exclusively. She had a younger twin, a brother name Sairi who wasn’t physically weak, but lacked the drive to become a ninja. Her uncle trained her in various types of jutsu at a young age, finally realizing that she had a destructive affinity with fire. Her father, insisting that she was a danger to the clan, sent her to a nearby academy. Her village, also known as The Akuma Division, was in a arid desert, and the members of her clan had evolved into a bloodthirsty group of people. When they angered their food suppliers, those suppliers cut off all economic activity with the Akuma Division. They began to starve, and in the end resolved to cannibalism. When Hayasa returned from her studies, she was appalled at the conditions in the village and after disposing of the few people remaining, left her home forever. Her brother remained at the division, but she thought he didn’t have a chance to live. In fact, Sairi was found by a few passing shinobi, and, spurred on by hate, resolved to enact revenge on his sister for leaving him behind.
Thus starting her life of drifting from place to place, Hayasa became a mercenary, manipulating her skills as a ninja in order to survive. Betraying her allies became a routine action for her, and the Ryuuken, though not unduly powerful, was renowed for her speed, and soon became a wanted person in many places. She stopped fighting one day, when she realized that she was killing and damaging the lives ot too many, just by fufilling her basest needs. In a battle with Konohagakure shinobi, she waited for her death. Much to her dissatisfaction, Hayasa found herself hauled to the village and given the option of prison or full loyalty to the Leaf. Reluctantly, she promised the latter option to the 3rd Hokage.
She stayed at the Konoha hospital to recuperate, while attempting to rebuild her disused muscles. The main reason why she carried a blade was because it offered her a far wider range of attacking possibilities and she found it easier than hand-to-hand combat. Some time later, she received news of her brother, who was going on a killing rampage. Hayasa decided to undertake the mission of reconciliating and apologizing to her brother.
After living in the Leaf, she also decided that while it might a waste of space for her to continue living, she now had purpose—to fight for a village of her own, which was something incredibly precious to her, as she had been a person who used to live solely for herself. Hayasa never thanked Konohagakure for welcoming her into the village and giving her purpose—no words would ever sum up her gratitude. She never was a one for flowery, sweet words anyway.
Jutsu-
Hayasa does not have many signature jutsus, but rather mixes and matches elements in each battle. However, there are a few that she is fond of using.
1. Crimson Lightning (see picture):
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Rank: B (ninjutsu)
It’s a variant of the Chidori, with fire rimming the lightning, hence the name ‘Crimson Lightning’. The strength of the electricity isn’t as strong as the Chidori—it only serves to enhance the power of the fire.
Disadvantages: absorbs more chakra to combine both elements.
2. Teikan:
Rank: -
It is one of the few techniques of her clan she was able to master. ‘Teikan’, as mentioned above, means ‘clear vision’. With a moderate amount of chakra, she can clear her mind from all genjutsu below A rank and clarify her vision.
Disadvantages: can leave the user drained and exhausted if there actually isn’t any genjutsu.
3. Blade of the Immortal:
Rank: A (ninjutsu)
She feeds her life force into the blade, rapidly enhancing the power of the weapon but drastically weakening her body. When the blade penetrates a person’s skin, it transfers Hayasa’s fire element into the body, incinerating the person from inside out.
Disadvantages: Her entire body is like one enormous Achilles’ Heel.
4. Speed of the Gods:
Rank: C (taijutsu)
It’s not so much a jutsu as a skill—Hayasa has been honing her speed ever since being trained as a ninja.
Disadvantages: Sometimes she moves too fast for her eyes to catch up with her opponents’ parries or new attacks. Then she has to use Teikan to enhance both, leaving her drained of chakra.
5. Queen of the Ghosts
Rank: B (ninjutsu/genjutsu)
The falcon on her left calf had been given to her by a wise man during her travels. The ink was made from a mixture of crushed herbs, bone ashes, and her blood. It provides a link towars the spirits of the underworld. Hayasa can summon to mind the grief, fear and regret of otherworldly spirits and the tortures of the underworld. The jutsu takes the appearance of several spirits in a cloud of fire. To the victim of the jutsu, people whom he or she has wronged appear and torture the victim. Meanwhile, the fire mist begins to burn away their skin, slowly killing the victim.
Disadvantages: it results in short-term paralysis of her left leg, leaving her vulnerable to further attacks. She will only use this jutsu if there aren’t any more options.
6. Hell and Heaven
Rank: S (ninjutsu)
Fire rises up from the ground in torrents and combines with lightning, incinerating everything in a ten-meter radius of her. Before using the jutsu, she plants a circle of kunai around the victim to attract the lightning. In the core of each of the five tornadoes, her fire element and lightning element fully merge to become a new element—Light, all the while creating shockwaves and superheating the air to 300 degrees Celsius.
Disadvantages: For each of the tornadoes that miss her target, her chakra decreases by thirty percent. If all five miss, death is imminent. Even if all five reach their target, Hayasa will be severely exhausted by the attack and will need immediate medical attention.
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I just a noob i only 11 so dont make fun of my ideas
I came up with a weapon that is like a shuriken launcher that turnsinto in ax
it all so has a kurenai does
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I came up with a new character! YAY!
ok here it is ....
This is when naruto is the rokudaime ( Sixth Hokage ) and akatsuki is back with new members! A young kyugi (havent come with last name) he was born into the fifth great shinobi world war it was leaf and sand vs rain waterfall and grass. Kyugi's parents were killed by rain ninja and i then wnted my revenge on amegakure the rain ninja saw me there and came for me i grabbed my fathers sword ( pheonix feather ) and slayed them. my entire clan got slayed that nite exept the other half in the mist village. then i remembered what my father told me under is breath to go to his room and behind a wall scroll that would open a secret room where the scroll of five dragons was and the six chakra blades ( they're blades that when stabbed sucks out chakra i went in and grabbed them and went to sleep. the next morning i went to the academy for class it was graduation day i passed x barely x and became a genin. on my tenth mission my team was slaughtered infront of me by a rain ninja they to came after me nd i too killed them. many years passe i became an anbu black-op. i got a secret mission about akatsuki and had to handle them with a team. i recruited members i knew were stinkin awesome owaku he was weapon master with the weapons i said before in scrolls on his back rose is a flower lover a master at genjutsu and can control plants at will with a special iraton it means thorn style and finally tristan one of the seven nija swordsmen with talon that equips onto his wrist for battle and also has mastered raikiri each of the people on our team has a blade or special weapon naming the team kiri (blade) then we set off on our journey along the way we find two akatsuki members hidan (a guy found him and sewed him up) and kakuzu hidan restocked his hearts i took on hidan alone while th three others took on kakuzu. i kill hidan by revrsing hyis curse by i make him lick his own blood and he stabs into his heart. the others kill kakuzu by destroying his hearts and decapitate him so he'll never be able to rise again. later we run into another weapon master owaku's cousin they battle it out and owaku wins. then one night IT happened in the scroll i was carrying the five dragons scroll i opened it up and read it said to get dragon style (fire + wind + lightning) i had to obtain the three weapons of honor pheonix feather the six chakra blades and the scroll of fie dragons i had it all but i didnt know why i didnt know it yet but then i figured it out i had to know lightning style i learned it from tristan and got it. thats all i have so far does any body like my story line???????????????????????????????
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Name: Hayai Katsu
Age: 25
Height: 6’1”
Weight: 170lbs.
Rank: ANBU (mask resembles a cat)
Weapons: Kunai, shuriken, paper bombs, and his two custom katana, Kokutan and Aibori. Both swords are made with a special material that contains bits diamond so they can cut through almost anything and are unbreakable. Katsu can also create many weapons out of wood. Tailed beast scrolls.
Strengths: Taijutsu, speed, agility, stealth, and ninjutsu.He specializes in capturing missions.
Weaknesses: Genjustu skills, and his curse mark.
Village: Leaf (former Sound)
Clan: None
Bloodline Limits: Curse mark, Wood release.
Hair and Eyes: Hair is light blue and, eyes are green.
Missions:
D rank: 24 successes
C rank: 11 successes
B rank: 71 successes
A rank: 103 successes
S rank: 45 successes
Personality: Usually calm, relaxed, and peaceful tries to avoid battle if possible but, and very intellectual.
Major Jutsu:
1. Wood release: Forest of Whim
Rank: A rank
Description: Creates a seemingly endless forest which Katsu can travel between trees by going underground and using the roots of the trees. Katsu can also manipulate the trees to attack, capture or even defend himself.
2. Water release: Acid Rain
Rank: A rank
Description: Katsu summons a hard rain that melts skin and burns flesh eventually turning opponent into nothing but a pool of blood.
3. Earth release: Great Fissure
Rank: B rank
Description: Katsu opens up a hole that can be any size necessary under his opponent(s) and then quickly closes it back up again, crushing his opponent(s).
4. Forbiden Jutsu: Tailed Beast Restrain
Rank: S rank
Description: Katsu runs up to a Jinchurikii and puts his hand on their seal and then slowly starts to remove the tailed best from the host and then permanently closes up the seal. Katsu then take the beast and seals it on to a scroll.
5.Water and Earth release: Mud Slide
Rank: B rank
Description: Katsu creates a mud slide that surrounds the enemy and quickly hardens trapping his opponent(s).
6.Curse Seal Release
Rank:S rank
Description:Katsu release the full power of his curse mark, increasing his speed to that of the 4th Hokage's, makes him strong enough to destroy a mountain in one single punch, and more then triples his amount of chakra. Although the after effects are devastating and Katsu will pass out after it resolves.
History: Shortly after his birth Katsu was abducted by Orochimaru (along with Yamato and 58 others).Orochimaru then infused all of their DNA with DNA from the Fist Hokage, 58 of the babies’ bodies rejected the DNA and then died. Shortly after Orochimaru fled Kohana, Orochimaru later hear news of a boy from the Leaf who controlled the same powers as the First Hokage and realize one of his experiments had survived. He quickly went back to Kohana and captured Katsu who was only 12 at the time. Orochimaru trained Katsu and gave him a curse mark. Katsu was one of Orochimaru’s subordinates for years until the war between the Sand and Sound against the Leaf. After Katsu saw what had happened to Orochimaru he got angry and went to the leaf in search of revenge. But once he got to the Leaf he saw a mother trying to save her child from a burning building and then the building collapsed not only killing the child but also falling on the mother. Katsu quickly realized that Orochimaru was the person responsible for all of this death and destruction. He became a member of the leaf and Katsu lived his life happily for several years slowly working his way up. Until one day, Katsu was going through some mission file when he stumbled upon Orochimaru’s profile and read it, learning that Orochimaru had actually kidnapped him, while he was with Orochimaru he had been brainwashed .Orochimaru was the reason he had never known his now dead parents, Katsu sore to never let this happen to anyone else , he swore to protect his village so, he then became an ANBU black ops.
TBC
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I have stolen princesses back from sleeping barrow kings. I burned down the town of Trebon. I have spent the night with Felurian and left with both my sanity and my life. I was expelled from the University at a younger age than most people are allowed in. I tread paths by moonlight that others fear to speak of during day. I have talked to Gods, loved women, and written songs that make the minstrels weep.
Location: Where the lava and the waterfall are struck by the shadows
Age: 32
The continuation of my previous post (darn word limit).
Spoiler for KaiokenAttack:
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Originally Posted by KaiokenAttack
Spoiler for prolly manga??:
Name: Hitokage Kansou
Age: 42
Height: 8’3”
Weight: 192lbs.
Rank: Sounin
Weapons: San Jie Gun (staff with three links?)
Strengths: Taijutsu, speed, agility, weapons, genjutsu with short duration.
Village: none (former Whirlpool)
Clan: Uzumaki
Bloodline Limits: none
Hair and Eyes: long red hair and light steel blue eyes
Missions:
D rank: 64 successes
C rank: 124 successes
B rank: 271 successes
A rank: 143 successes
S rank: 23 successes
Personality: He's the silent type, cautious, mistrustful. He uses to work on his own, sometimes hires mercenaries to complete missions, but doesn't like that. He never hires the same person twice and checks his partners' backgrounds thoroughly.
Major Jutsu:
1. Earth release: Soil dragon
Rank: B rank
Description: Creates a dragon coming out of the ground. The dragon swallows the target and crushes the target's body underground.
2. Water release: Whirlpool
Rank: A rank
Description: A whirl of water is created and pulls the target towards its center.
3. Earth and Water release: Maelstrom of Death
Rank: S rank
Description: A giant maelstrom is created in a dry area by mixing water and earth. Everything within the radius of 40 yards is pulled underground in order to choke and die. The spatial recomposition makes it impossible to escape once caught by the heavy force of rotation.
4. Earth Style: Fists of the Titans
Rank: A rank
Description: Fists of soil shoot out of the ground and shoot at enemy targets.
History: He doesn't know anything about the Whirlpool country except that it's the place where he was born and that it's now gone. He was raised up in an orphanage of the Hidden Grass and when he was twelve years old, he was given a box with personal stuff in it after having graduated from the academy. In that box he found some jutsu scrolls and the silver-polished San Jie Gun. He left the Hidden Grass in order to train using that weapon for three years and returned to the academy because he lacked experience in spatial recomposition and elemental recomposition. He did not tell his teachers why he wanted to know what he wanted to know because he did not want to tell them, so he had to learn the rather simple jutsus, too (I did not mention them here because they are not spectacular or individual).
At the age of 19 he got the title Jounin of the Hidden Grass and after doing a lot of missions, he decided to leave the village at the age of 21 in order to become a freelancer. That's not a problem in the village of the Hidden Grass because everyone gets branded at the ninja academy and the applied seal is a very complex 128-points tenketsu seal that is able to seal all the tenketsu once the person turns against the village. The village can't afford to lose skilled ninjas to other villages and turn against them, so this has become the standard. It's a very complex blood seal that instantly kills the victim if someone tries to remove the seal.
He sent 40% of his pay directly to the Hidden Grass and saved the rest for himself and that's what he still does. Up to now, he has never returned to the Hidden Grass. He stays in motion and never really stays at a certain place. He does not feel at home anywhere and has never stopped looking for leftovers of the Whirlpool country.
Spoiler for ragnos007:
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Originally Posted by ragnos007
These are more for Jutsus for Naruto
Like sasuke with kirin how he was able to control natures lightning. I think it would be awesome for naruto to be able to control natures wind. 1 It could be used as an awesome shield against sasukes kirin and other lightning based jutsu. 2 is for the next part.
Similar to gaaras ability to disintegrate himself into sand particles - naruto make himself part of the wind. He can use it to travel distances with relative ease. Definitely not as quick as the Hiriashin but he does away with the seal needed - particularly if he is traveling in uncharted territory etc. Would be great for scouting, escaping. May even do away with the need to do kage bushin in order to find someone like when sasukes scent split up after the fight between sasuke and deidara (after sasuke healed up).
Spoiler for Kyero Fox:
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Originally Posted by Kyero Fox
Name: Razor Desert (in development )
Description: the ground within the jutsu is transformed into a Kunai, these kunai can become projectiles at the users will. This jutsu takes up a lot of Chakra do to its effectiveness and depending on range it stretches. Can be used Anywhere but most useful in areas such as the desert.
NEWS: Naruto Gyaku is now posted and a link is in the "Naruto Fan-Fiction Thread". Oh and Kyubi and anyone else who's characters are up for use in the story, those chapters are coming soon.
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I have stolen princesses back from sleeping barrow kings. I burned down the town of Trebon. I have spent the night with Felurian and left with both my sanity and my life. I was expelled from the University at a younger age than most people are allowed in. I tread paths by moonlight that others fear to speak of during day. I have talked to Gods, loved women, and written songs that make the minstrels weep.
Location: Right next to you.... no the other way.... NO THE OTHER WAY ........ NO!!!! THE OTHER... nevermind
Age: 28
Keikan, epic reviewing spree lol. And my character Tensai, since after ur information about everyone being born with chakra, i guess he is like rock lee and cannot access his chakra.And yes i could make a bad character if i wanted to lol.
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Time flies like an arrow, fruit flies like a banana.
Im new here so i dont really know what to expect. Are we able to for groups and fight with our characters here?
But anyway, name is Kenji Soto. My element is fire and i plan to form my own group while here (1 water, 1 wind, 1 lightning, 1 earth). Im a bad guy. Dont know the village i was born in and i am in no clan. Shoulder length black hair, red eyes and a scar on my right arm from a fire. Not very strong with hand-to-hand combat but has a jutsu that I will use if it comes down to it. Can use Ninjutsu and has 1 Genjutsu, but not strong with Taijutsu.
Im new here so i dont really know what to expect. Are we able to for groups and fight with our characters here?
But anyway, name is Kenji Soto. My element is fire and i plan to form my own group while here (1 water, 1 wind, 1 lightning, 1 earth). Im a bad guy. Dont know the village i was born in and i am in no clan. Shoulder length black hair, red eyes and a scar on my right arm from a fire. Not very strong with hand-to-hand combat but has a jutsu that I will use if it comes down to it. Can use Ninjutsu and has 1 Genjutsu, but not strong with Taijutsu.
You're just nuts...
As mentioned on the very first page...
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-Come one, come all to the "Create Your Own Justsu or Naruto character" thread. Here you can post your creations. There's no real purpose to this thread other than to collect creativity from the fans of the Naruto series. There are however a few small rules:
1) ORIGINALITY, ORIGINALITY, ORIGINALITY, I cannot stress that enough.
2) The justsu or character cannot be proclaimed as "flawless" or "beats everything" once put into picture.
3) Have fun (I know it's cheesy but I needed a 3rd non-consequential rule).
4) *NEW RULE* Aside from characters and jutsu, should a person desire itso, they are allowed to create weapons and other accessories for the character they create. Of course, all the rules that apply to the jutsus and characters also apply to the weapons as well.
That's not hard to get, is it? You simply create a character. There are lots of examples right here. You are a fool not to look at least at one of the 161 pages. I bet you're just an immature teenager (there are mature ones, but you're not among them). Why do I say so? You ask silly questions instead of using the gift of reading. It's so simple. You don't enter a forum to get attention you don't get from your parents, you use it to communicate...
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Communication is a process of transferring information from one entity to another. Communication processes are sign-mediated interactions between at least two agents which share a repertoire of signs and semiotic rules. Communication is commonly defined as "the imparting or interchange of thoughts, opinions, or information by speech, writing, or signs".
That does not include living in a fantasy world or asking questions that have been answered on the very first page. Can I just cut your head off and play football with it? Touchdown! Touchdown!!
You're just nuts...
As mentioned on the very first page...
That's not hard to get, is it? You simply create a character. There are lots of examples right here. You are a fool not to look at least at one of the 161 pages. I bet you're just an immature teenager (there are mature ones, but you're not among them). Why do I say so? You ask silly questions instead of using the gift of reading. It's so simple. You don't enter a forum to get attention you don't get from your parents, you use it to communicate...
That does not include living in a fantasy world or asking questions that have been answered on the very first page. Can I just cut your head off and play football with it? Touchdown! Touchdown!!
i read it before but forgot about it. im just new to the site so dont know how things are here. No sure why you need to get so upset about it
Location: Where the lava and the waterfall are struck by the shadows
Age: 32
Wow kirisute way to bite a guys head off. Ease up a bit mate. Don't forget you are new too so don't judge others harshly lest you be judged harshly too even though you make good characters.
All you need to do is welcome Kenji to the thread, say that we just do character creations not battles, not call him a fool and immature and that line about his head was just unnecessary. You'll find that many people on this thread won't welcome it if you continue to post like this no matter what characters you post, believe me I know.
Also it doesn't say anywhere I've read (and I've read every single page) that you can't do a battle if you want to, so unless a moderator comes on and says not to it then it's allowed. Hell its a way to further develop your characters creatively because you'll find that people will pick up faults in the characters and exploit them making you have to think of a way to cover the fault with a different ability while still not being OP.
Personally I think it would be interesting though extremely hard to do a battle over a forum.
@Kenji_Soto: Hey mate, that's a interesting idea you have there (the character more so than the battles), I would like to see that character expanded on with some good detail. I look forward to seeing more of your characters in the future.
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I have stolen princesses back from sleeping barrow kings. I burned down the town of Trebon. I have spent the night with Felurian and left with both my sanity and my life. I was expelled from the University at a younger age than most people are allowed in. I tread paths by moonlight that others fear to speak of during day. I have talked to Gods, loved women, and written songs that make the minstrels weep.
Holy shi-- Where I have been for, what, a year?! (probably less, an exaggeration)
It's sad to think that I have been roleplaying OC characters for a long time-but never once attempted to make one for Naruto. ^.^; Hm~ I might do a little quicky so that this isn't all i'm sayin' on here. *ahem*... This would be much better if it was the real character and not my pathetic attempt to turn him Naruto style.
And kirisute! That's just rude... Be nice.
Spoiler for Read at the expence of the loss of your brain cells:
Kiel Aurelius (No. It's not Japanese. Sorry.)
Age and Date of Birth: He is 16 years of age, and was born on April 12
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Blood Type: B+
Home Village: . . .o.o How do I do this for a character who's supposed to be a Roman elsewhere? Um. Sunagakure, I suppose.
Overall Personality: Yay, personalities. . . My worst nightmare. .-.
Kiel Aurelius a sweet, sensitive kid who tries to love everything. Most of the time, he ends up failing to do so and gets depressed when he realizes it's practically impossible for him. Kiel has a fear of loud noises and, more importantly, thunderstorms. If it starts storming out, he'll start shaking uncontrollably and possibly attempt to cling to something. If he can't cling, just wait a couple seconds and he'll go into the fetal position. Despite everything, Kiel is a relatively serious person who knows how to get the job done(unless it's raining, or something). He is an introverted person, and also tries to learn as many things as possible. . .
Likes:
-Silence
-Cold weather/snow
-Life
-Projects
-Hanging out with his close-knit group of friends
-Reading books
Dislikes:
-Fire
- Thunder Storms
- Loud noises
- People who are mean to him and others
-Women(Um... He might not be a roman in this little quicky, but romans were very... sexist)
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Kiel Aurelius is not a ninja, but he does know how to fight. He taught himself how to use throwing daggers, although his aim was mediocre. Aurelius's father also taught him how to fight hand-to-hand. Naturally, however, he prefers not to fight at all.
Element: Water
Weaknesses: Not a good shot with daggers, loud noises frighten him, and... well... he just basically fails at life when he tries to fight people.
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~Appearance~
Hair: Kiel has chestnut brown curly hair.
Eyes: His eyes are usually hazel colored, and in the middle his eyes are dark green.
Location: Where the lava and the waterfall are struck by the shadows
Age: 32
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Originally Posted by Mitsu
Holy shi-- Where I have been for, what, a year?! (probably less, an exaggeration)
It's sad to think that I have been roleplaying OC characters for a long time-but never once attempted to make one for Naruto. ^.^; Hm~ I might do a little quicky so that this isn't all i'm sayin' on here. *ahem*... This would be much better if it was the real character and not my pathetic attempt to turn him Naruto style.
And kirisute! That's just rude... Be nice.
Spoiler for Read at the expence of the loss of your brain cells:
Kiel Aurelius (No. It's not Japanese. Sorry.)
Age and Date of Birth: He is 16 years of age, and was born on April 12
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Blood Type: B+
Home Village: . . .o.o How do I do this for a character who's supposed to be a Roman elsewhere? Um. Sunagakure, I suppose.
Overall Personality: Yay, personalities. . . My worst nightmare. .-.
Kiel Aurelius a sweet, sensitive kid who tries to love everything. Most of the time, he ends up failing to do so and gets depressed when he realizes it's practically impossible for him. Kiel has a fear of loud noises and, more importantly, thunderstorms. If it starts storming out, he'll start shaking uncontrollably and possibly attempt to cling to something. If he can't cling, just wait a couple seconds and he'll go into the fetal position. Despite everything, Kiel is a relatively serious person who knows how to get the job done(unless it's raining, or something). He is an introverted person, and also tries to learn as many things as possible. . .
Likes:
-Silence
-Cold weather/snow
-Life
-Projects
-Hanging out with his close-knit group of friends
-Reading books
Dislikes:
-Fire
- Thunder Storms
- Loud noises
- People who are mean to him and others
-Women(Um... He might not be a roman in this little quicky, but romans were very... sexist)
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Kiel Aurelius is not a ninja, but he does know how to fight. He taught himself how to use throwing daggers, although his aim was mediocre. Aurelius's father also taught him how to fight hand-to-hand. Naturally, however, he prefers not to fight at all.
Element: Water
Weaknesses: Not a good shot with daggers, loud noises frighten him, and... well... he just basically fails at life when he tries to fight people.
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~Appearance~
Hair: Kiel has chestnut brown curly hair.
Eyes: His eyes are usually hazel colored, and in the middle his eyes are dark green.
Weight: 125
Height: 5'6"
. . . Is it alright if I stop the fail here?
Cool character. Do I sense a link to a certain imperator in this character ... maybe Marcus? It's always good to see a familiar setup and detail, also I'm pretty sure it's not fail.
NOTE: I don't care about names anymore so use any name to your heart content!! Also look to page 159 fourth post, there's a message for you.
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I have stolen princesses back from sleeping barrow kings. I burned down the town of Trebon. I have spent the night with Felurian and left with both my sanity and my life. I was expelled from the University at a younger age than most people are allowed in. I tread paths by moonlight that others fear to speak of during day. I have talked to Gods, loved women, and written songs that make the minstrels weep.
Wow kirisute way to bite a guys head off. Ease up a bit mate. Don't forget you are new too so don't judge others harshly lest you be judged harshly too even though you make good characters.
I did not critisize his creative work but his stupid question and ignorance towards the traditions of this thread. Nevertheless you're right about me being too straightforward and aggressive towards him and although I'm not sorry for him, I can apologize to the steady members of the thread.
Sumimasen.
You're also right about me having to continue with the creative work instead. I'm about to release a new character, but it'll take some time.
2010-05-26, 22:44
. Anyway I'm back quickly to post a new organisation and some weapons from them. Members are coming soon maybe.
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