2011-02-28, 22:06 | Link #921 |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system
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Guys, it's up. Please review.
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2011-02-28, 22:38 | Link #922 | |
Banned
Join Date: Jan 2009
Age: 34
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I recommend you to make the character to set a certain condition in order to copy the ability, a condition that will make scientists (probably, unknown to them) to label her as a Level 0. |
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2011-02-28, 22:58 | Link #923 | ||
SHSL Lurker
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Academy City
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If she can copy other people's abilities, wouldn't that mean it would be an active power similar to Rikou's AIM Stalker and as such cannot be labeled a Level 0? Other than that, I think it's good.
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2011-02-28, 23:38 | Link #924 | |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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2011-03-01, 02:24 | Link #925 | |
Enraged and Suicidal
Join Date: Mar 2008
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Touma with memories should mean less angst and more wtf pwn on the bad guys. |
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2011-03-01, 07:30 | Link #926 |
Ritsu's boyfriend
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: in Ritsu's hands
Age: 27
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OK I'll find a new name for Accelerator 2 and Misaka Misae (that's Misaka's daughter) will have to touch the original ability user in order to copy the ability. I was thinking for making her power to copy magic too , but maybe it will be too much and I'll make her super strong again. In the meantime this explains why the scientists made her level 0 and one of the original reasons for that was because she copies the level of the ability too so she doesn't have her own level of powers. She's like level changer. She can only have one ability copied at a time I mean she have to copy the loosen ability like the first time when she copied it. If she can copy magic attacks then it's meaningless to make her touch the person and it'll be better to touch the ability in order to copy it. Something like Touma's Imagine Breaker. He has to touch the power and then blocks it the only difference is that Misae don't block , she take the damages and then is she's still alive attacks the enemy with his own magic or ability.
Tell me which version is better. This time I plan to put some magic in the fanfic so it'll be better to copy magic too , but I'll let you to decide this fact , because The last time I decided something like that I made Ted level 6 and multiple power user with 16 powers.
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2011-03-01, 14:08 | Link #927 |
Banned
Join Date: Jan 2009
Age: 34
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If the character can copy magic this will mean she didn't passed trough esper development curriculum. And every studen has to pass through it which means their brains are messed and using magic will made them explode like Tsuchimikado.
Touma with memories was a dubious guy who will ran away. |
2011-03-02, 02:35 | Link #928 | |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2011
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He ever show it once when he must choose to run or save Index And this where the real character shows up! And this one of reason why I make him with memories XD |
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2011-03-02, 03:04 | Link #929 |
We're Back
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Redgrave City
Age: 35
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Simply put, if it's to save himself Touma would run. If it's to save someone else, Touma would fight. This has been the same with or without memories, but in the beginning it looked like Touma was taking the first steps to becoming a hero by putting away his doubt in his powers and in himself (reference to PSI-Missing's lyrics) , much like what Accelerator is struggling to do with himself except Accelerator has this huge bottomless pit behind him that he calls his 'past'.
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2011-03-02, 06:08 | Link #933 | |
We're Back
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Location: Redgrave City
Age: 35
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Working as in you can physically see an effort being done, or working as in it's in my head kind of working...? Depending on your answer you might be disappointed...
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2011-03-02, 09:29 | Link #937 |
Ritsu's boyfriend
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: in Ritsu's hands
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then it's decided. Misae can copy only esper powers and , because of her unknown level the scientists are taking her like level 0 , because it's really hard to find her real level and they're too lazy to do it. I hate scientists sometimes!!! So can someone give to Accelerator 2 a good male first name? Not Hisashi because the antagonist of the first fanfic is called Hisashi Nakamura.
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2011-03-02, 23:07 | Link #939 | |
Working the bags...
Join Date: Mar 2009
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Not sure why people make that assumption since he did help Index and he did well try to help Misaka even though she didn't need to with his noggin intact... I'd say his character wouldn't be so guarded and have a more open personality with memories. Without memories he has to second guess himself whether or not he has a history with whoever he might meet... BTW blitz, that was a good little oneshot. I normally don't read gender switched stories, but gave it a shot and was thoroughly entertained... |
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