2008-01-18, 19:05 | Link #301 | |
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WHAT THE ING HELL WAS THAT ?!!! Good lord that guy needs to know when he's crossed the line! Good lord! As for military camp, I'd be wondering wth if he was talking to me like he's my drill sergeant. I know how you feel somewhat, since I'm a retired Air Cadet, and was Drill Team Commander/Sergeant for a couple years. In terms of reviews, thats why I now adopt a policy of not saying anything, unless I have something worth saying, or it was an extremely well down chapter. Then I'll start flapping my fingers XD P.S. WOOT! PAGE CLAIM 2!! xD
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2008-01-18, 21:01 | Link #305 |
unique is normal
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Pleasanton, California
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24 hrs. nah that's nothing i once did a triple all nighter
... might explain me being on the line of insanity hmmm anyway i'm so glad it's finals time for me because that means i can finally progress on my fic. Oc profile and fic summary will be posted when second chapter is done. @Satashi anyway i want to say that i love SbtB so far and i apologize for not leaving a review. However i have long adopted not reviewing unless i have constructive criticism and besides typos i'm left dry when i read this. Well at least i'm not one of the annoying reviewers you have. |
2008-01-18, 21:02 | Link #306 | |
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Oh, and sorry. I got ninjad to ehal for Gruul's, Mag, AND Karazhan tonight >< Marathon run.*turns on vent, cracks a mountain dew, and cheers* let's do it!
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2008-01-18, 21:21 | Link #307 | |
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Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
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Now if only I have the time to read that dating sim being run nicely here (got lots of work to do and raids to attend), I'd love to join in... T_T And apologies to the thread for what has happened, we have our own radicals and moderates, and that was just the rads... ^^;
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2008-01-19, 00:48 | Link #308 | |
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2008-01-19, 14:11 | Link #310 |
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Double-post =3, and let me say I really like that pic. It makes SbtB seem more.... what word am I looking for...? Something good, I know that much....
*walks off, thinking.* EDIT: *snap* I got it! It makes it seem more official. Like, MORE than a fanfic. And that makes it all the more enjoyable to read, in my book. =3 |
2008-01-19, 15:05 | Link #311 | |
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edit: Here's a long teaser for you, just because Spoiler for SbtB VIII:
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2008-01-19, 17:19 | Link #313 | |
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........... *Wakes up a few minutes later* Oh crap my paint pots were left opened! At least I cleaned my brushes before I looked at this... Either way, good update, can't wait to see the whole chapter. P.S. Oh and before I forget, I do like how you portrayed Nanoha in this particular scene. Not only you managed to capture the purity of her character (albeit somewhat unbelievable for someone in the military during StrikerS due to her lack of a kill record), you also showed us that she's actually HUMAN!!! That's the one thing that always bothered me during StrikerS. She didn't seem like a person, rather just some mass of really powerful energy in human form. Anyways, keep up the good work. You've really portrayed Nanoha really well ^^
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2008-01-19, 20:11 | Link #314 |
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: P-Town
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The character interactions were nice. (Nanoha climbing all those flights of stairs due to her fear was cute.) Precia is such a great mother figure in your story. It makes me somewhat sad to look back on the actual series, and see what a broken mess she is.
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It's a bad fear I have of making the girls seem TOO out of it. Also, expect more school in upcoming chapters as well. as this is, after all, Saved by the bell lol Quote:
And Nanoha's fear is cute but I feel bad for her >.< She's obviously really bad if she would climb so many flights of stairs to avoid a 30 second elevator trip.
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2008-01-19, 23:33 | Link #318 |
Sleep beneath the flowers
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Lording above all of humanity >;3
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This revelation is as shocking as taco eating!
I'll look forward to it. Now if I could only actually get some ideas of how to do my chapter 3 this weekend would be a lot... Better
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2008-01-20, 01:15 | Link #320 | |
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Finland
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and i agree with the comments above, nanoha seems more human in this fic than in the actual serie, and precia is definitely better off than in the canon... and by far more likeable as she is. Can't wait to see more!
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