Nanoha - Image Thread (wallpapers, fan art, gifs, etc.)

[Keroko]

Pervy Nanoha perving Teana in a lovely display of Nanoha/Teana?

Translation and source please!

Also, now that I've found these Due comics:



A translation for these would be most welcome too.

[Ararara-ra]

Originally Posted by LVD

@ Ararara-ra
My biggest beef with the BetrayerS doujin is the lack of grammar. Regardless, thank you for the work you've done. Can't comment on the translation itself, though I haven't heard the greatest things about it, sadly. Who really cares about how you've cleaned up the images when the raws were pretty bad.... Though I can't say I'm too keen on seeing gutter shadows, either.

Hello

Please let me know where the mistakes are so I make improvements for the HQ release

The good news is.. I am getting the doujinshi so I may scan it myself!

*crossfingers* Seems like the seller put it in the mail yesterday :X

Come get here quick! >.<

[Bananoha]

Oh, dokupan, did you want more PLUM doujins? I think the only ones I didn't send you are Magical SEED No.Due, Magical SEED Galaxy, Magical SEED BIND, Magical SEED, and Magical SEED A2, so I'm not sure which ones you don't have.... Is it safe for me to assume you have Magical SEED OTHER as well?

And we kind of sort of did three doujins - Lyrical Waha, Master, and I'm totally counting all those eggs as an entire entity.

So, I'm a paranoid procrastinating perfectionist, eh?

Originally Posted by Keroko

Pervy Nanoha perving Teana in a lovely display of Nanoha/Teana?

Translation and source please!

Magical SEED FREEDOM by PLUM. Non-h, don't worry, don't worry...

Originally Posted by Ararara-ra

Please let me know where the mistakes are so I make improvements for the HQ release

I'm not sure about other people, but I'm quite used to having sentences ending with a period, if not some other form of punctuation. >_>;

Being consistent is key. Another thing I just realized as I'm reading through, there are.... little to no contractions. I know when you're formally writing, you don't use contractions, but when we're talking about people speaking....

For example, on page eleven, someone is saying "IT... IT IS... !!!" It would flow a lot better if it was "IT'S... !!!" Besides, who'd say an extra word or syllable or something when you're seeing the White Devil who looks like she'll Starlight Breaker your rump?

Spoiler for Possible mistakes:

Page 01
Original - All citizens of all worlds that are under the charter of the Administrative Bureau in the name of justice and preserving social order promise therefore to forever relinquish their right to use non-magical devices techniques as weapons that can cause the loss of life nor will use the previous as weapons of war
Suggestion - All citizens of all worlds that are under the Charter of the Administrative Bureau in the name of justice and preserving social order promise therefore to forever relinquish their right to use non-magical device techniques as weapons that can cause the loss of life or will use the previous as weapons of war.
- I don't know how to correct legalese, so if anyone else would like to step in if there's anything else wrong with that part....

Original - As I have previously reported to you, the amount of cases involving the use of physical weapons are increasing in numbers
Suggestion - As I have previously reported to you, the amount of cases involving the use of physical weapons is increasing in number.
- Gah, is it "amount of cases are increasing in number" or "amount of cases is increasing in number".... Numbers should be changed to number, though.

Page 02
Original - Plus, there has been a drastic drop in morale. Rendering the Ground Defense Forces almost useless
Suggestion - Plus, there has been a drastic drop in morale, rendering the Ground Defence Forces almost useless.
- Defense is technically acceptable, but seeing FireFox telling me to correct it kind of irks me. Would this fall under the "all right" versus "alright" sort of deal, I wonder....

Original - Then we must make plans to arm small units with these weapons and set new strategies, at this point we can only fight 'poison with poison'
Suggestion - Then, we must make plans to arm small units with these weapons and set new strategies. At this point, we can only fight "poison with poison".

Original - Or, we must immediatly create a battle android unit, provide them with legal rights to fight and anex it to our forces
Suggestion - Or, we must immediately create a battle android unit, provide them with legal rights to fight and annex it to our forces.

Page 03
Original - To say it in other words, against the physical type weapons...
Suggestion - In other words, against the physical type weapons...

Original - But one of the main laws that the Space and Time Admin. was created on... That we would not rely on any mass destruction weapon to uphold peace... My decission alone can't...
Suggestion - But one of the main laws that the Space and Time Admin. was created on... That we would not rely on any weapon of mass destruction to uphold peace... My decision alone can't...
- You can add a comma after the first "but" if you'd like. I'm unsure if you tried to shorten Administration to Admin. or if the guy actually said it himself, as I do re-call Hayate shortening Mid-Childa to Mid in the manga. Personally, I'd try my best to keep it as Administration. lole, were you trying to avoid saying weapon of mass destruction?

Original - Today at 12:00 Standard MidChilda time
Suggestion - Today at 12:00 Standard Mid-Childa time,
- You could add a comma after "Today", too....

Page 06
Original - It has been a long time but I am sure there are some first time readers too. For all those first time readers that are feeling perplexed to the max, don't worry about it, it is the usual 'Himura' standard. The 'freedom' I give myself. Because the focus is Nanoha that hasn't changed. This is my 4th fantasy book.
Suggestion - It has been a long time, but I am sure there are some first time readers, too. For all those first time readers that are feeling perplexed to the max, don't worry about it. It is the usual "Himura" standard, the "freedom" I give myself. Because the focus is Nanoha, that hasn't changed. This is my fourth fantasy book.
- I'm not sure how it's actually written in Japanese to try and correct it, but "or all those first time readers that are feeling perplexed to the max, don't worry about it, it is the usual 'Himura' standard. The 'freedom' I give myself. Because the focus is Nanoha that hasn't changed." is quite awkward, unless I merge sentences together. I was thinking "It is the usual 'Himura' standard. The 'freedom' I give myself because the focus is Nanoha hasn't changed.", but.... yeah. Not like anyone really cares about what the artist thinks.

Page 09
Original - Then I will too...
Suggestion - Then, I will, too...

Page 10
Original - You mustn't Fate-san!
Suggestion - You mustn't, Fate-san!

Original - If we lose you now there won't be anybody to command the mage forces, it will be our end
Suggestion - If we lose you now, there won't be anybody to command the mage forces. It will be our end.

Page 13
Original - Based on their flight pattern it seems they are planning to attack headquarters
Suggestion - Based on their flight pattern, it seems they are planning to attack headquarters.

Original - It is allright.
Suggestion - It is all right.

Page 15
Original - In a normal unit that would bring problems in accomplishing the mission
Suggestion - In a normal unit, that would bring problems accomplishing the mission.

Original - There is a wide variety of androids, each specialized in a different field so the normal mages who fight with an all-around approach don't even pose a threat. Isn't about time you accept the effectiveness of the battle androids, Brigadier General?
Suggestion - There is a wide variety of androids, each specialized in a different field, so the normal mages who fight with an all-around approach don't even pose a threat. Isn't it about time you accept the effectiveness of the battle androids, Brigadier General?

Page 16
Original - Usually, when a mage switches sides and becomes an enemy there are no major repercurssions.
Suggestion - Usually, when a mage switches sides and becomes an enemy, there are no major repercussions.

Original - And, as I mentioned, magic lacks reliability and effectiveness
It can be called an "outdated source of power"
We can say that it isn't needed anymore
Suggestion - And, as I mentioned, magic lacks reliability and effectiveness. It can be called an "outdated source of power". We can say that it isn't needed anymore.

Original - A SS rank mage. To confront one you would need a squad... No, a batallion from the Armored Division.
Suggestion - An SS rank mage. To confront one, you would need a squad... No, a batallion from the Armored Division.
"An SS" or "A SS" depends on how you'd say it, as I have known a few people who'd read it as "A double S" as opposed to how I mentally read it as "An 'ess-ess'". If that made sense, argh.

Page 17
Original - 3rd Artillery Division return to support duty!
Suggestion - 3rd Artillery Division, return to support duty!

Someone should proofread my own "proofreading". I'm kind of a comma-holic. That, and I've only completed grade ten English, lol....

dlbdsfgadfsga;f I don't know why I'm bothering. A lot of the sentences just sound weird and I don't know enough Japanese to try and help re-phrase anything. Pretty much everything else just seems to be you missing a comma somewhere, with the odd spelling mistake and subject verb disagreeing. And stuff. Bleh.

[Vivio Testarossa]

Spoiler for NanoFate:

Anyone give a link to the doujins, in particular:


PM, if NSFW?

[dokupan]

/randomrandom

Originally Posted by LVD

Oh, dokupan, did you want more PLUM doujins? I think the only ones I didn't send you are Magical SEED No.Due, Magical SEED Galaxy, Magical SEED BIND, Magical SEED, and Magical SEED A2, so I'm not sure which ones you don't have.... Is it safe for me to assume you have Magical SEED OTHER as well?

And we kind of sort of did three doujins - Lyrical Waha, Master, and I'm totally counting all those eggs as an entire entity.

So, I'm a paranoid procrastinating perfectionist, eh?

Got all those~ And OTHER as well, yes. Magical SEED DESTINY and Magical SEED 総集編X too. It's all the newer ones I can't find. :<

Okay, sure, we've done 3 then.

Are you going to deny it? :>

Originally Posted by LVD

That, and I've only completed grade ten English, lol....

So does that mean you're in eleventh grade or a dropout? :O

Blargh, I'm not going to be doing anymore translating until my eyes've healed.

[Nei Tsukishime]

http://yiffa.net/uploads/1198816395/...8_36_59515.jpg

[Seraph42]

Reinforce Zwie



Hayate



Cute moment

[KiNA]

lol.. feito in musubi's body shop

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by KiNA

lol.. feito in musubi's body shop

The face seems shopped...

Cuídense y sigan sonriendo

[KiNA]

Yes.. its a shop .. I've said it, it is Musubi's body shop ^^

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by KiNA

Yes.. its a shop .. I've said it, it is Musubi's body shop ^^

Oh, you're right, I got confused with the Musubi thing when I read it the first time
BTW, nice avatar!

Cuídense y sigan sonriendo

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by dokupan

These are some pretty pwnage pictures.

[Vivio Testarossa]

@BPHaru Could you translate http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/a...oi_Extra_7.jpg?

Thanks

[JINNSK]

Originally Posted by Ararara-ra

Ladies and gentlemen!

(Though I have a feeling there would be more Gents in here due to the nature of the thread )

I just finished translating the Doujinshi Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha BetrayerS~!

Download here~

I am currently waiting for the Doujinshi to arrive via mail to me~ Once I get it in my hands there will be better quality scans released~

Please bear with these for now~

Enjoy~

I'm sorry to bother you,

Spoiler:

(Blue text is original.red text is your translation)

Originally Posted by Nanoha-betrayers0014.jpg

Hayate:"但し 初弾は威嚇な 当てたらあかんよ"->"Also Shoot to kill"

Originally Posted by Nanoha-betrayers0057.jpg

Teana:"回線がパンクする勢いですよ"->"They are ready to start a revolution"

The above translating are quite different from original meaning.Did you change them intentionally?Or is it a mistake?

Originally Posted by Nanoha-betrayers0033.jpg

Nanoha:"なんてね やっぱりやめとく"->"I think.I'll just stop"
Fate:"なのは 理解って-"->"Nanoha I know..."

Fate's remark was made to stop.If I complement it,I think it would be like the following.
Fate:"なのは 理解ってくれたのね"->"Nanoha You finally accept..."

Originally Posted by Nanoha-betrayers0050.jpg

Nanoha:"大隊長殿"->"Vice captain"

In this comic,Vita becomes major.(Is "Vice" a spelling error,isn't it?)

Originally Posted by Nanoha-betrayers0060.jpg

Vivio:"ママはね 自分で決めなさいって言ったの 強くなりなさいって…言ったの"->"Mama said that she made her own decision.And I should grow to be strong"

I think
Vivio:"ママはね 自分で決めなさいって言ったの 強くなりなさいって…言ったの"->"Mama said that I have to decide by myself.And she said that I shoud grow to be strong"

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa

@BPHaru Could you translate http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/a...oi_Extra_7.jpg?

Thanks

It's just a poem, so it's not that easy to translate. This was made by our dear doujinshi editor and fanfic writer Naymco (who also redrew Hazukashikunai no ga Koi) for a thread in our forums that is for role playing as canon Nanoha characters (the thread is fun because now everyone is 'rolling' their chracters in the whole forum xD). Our Fate is marrying our Nanoha soon, so she drew it for the occasion, and maybe the poem is for her votes...? We'll have to wait until the weeding to know ^^

Also is hard for me to translate from Spanish to English, but I'll give it a try if you want (but I can guarantee that it will sound weird, and some sentences would have to be reworded )



If I were an angel
I would fly to you
forever
I would do it
I would do anything
to be by your side
I would do
the impossible
to hold your hand
You are my life
my destiny, my day by day.
You are
what I dream
what I yearn.
I need you,
like flowers and the waters
drops in a umbrella
heart in a soul
I feel that way
I feel something beautiful
I have a feeling and tell you
I tell and repeat
that I just...
fell in love with you.


Done.
I think it sounded better in Spanish, but anyway I'll be pleased if someone tells me what should be corrected (grammar, wording, spelling). It's mainly because I had some problems translating this and I want to know where are any mistakes.

Cuídense y sigan sorniendo

[Vivio Testarossa]

Some doujins (worksafe):

Spoiler for PV6:

Spoiler for PV7:

[Kiba_Portugal]

Originally Posted by BPHaru

It's just a poem, so it's not that easy to translate. This was made by our dear doujinshi editor and fanfic writer Naymco (who also redrew Hazukashikunai no ga Koi) for a thread in our forums that is for role playing as canon Nanoha characters (the thread is fun because now everyone is 'rolling' their chracters in the whole forum xD). Our Fate is marrying our Nanoha soon, so she drew it for the occasion, and maybe the poem is for her votes...? We'll have to wait until the weeding to know ^^

Also is hard for me to translate from Spanish to English, but I'll give it a try if you want (but I can guarantee that it will sound weird, and some sentences would have to be reworded )



If I were an angel
I would fly to you
forever
I would do it
I would do anything
to be by your side
I would do
the impossible
to hold your hand
You are my life
my destiny, my day by day.
You are
what I dream
what I yearn.
I need you,
like flowers and the waters
drops in a umbrella
heart in a soul
I feel that way
I feel something beautiful
I have a feeling and tell you
I tell and repeat
that I just...
fell in love with you.


Done.
I think it sounded better in Spanish, but anyway I'll be pleased if someone tells me what should be corrected (grammar, wording, spelling). It's mainly because I had some problems translating this and I want to know where are any mistakes.

Cuídense y sigan sorniendo

I don't see any mystakes, I think the poem sounds beautifull in all languages . I tanslated the poem in portuguese and sound good.

[Shinzantetsu]

Originally Posted by Keroko

*blink* Green eyes? Yuuno? No its not Yuuno... Fate? But those green eyes...

Wow, looks like Yuuno and Fate's child grew up nicely.

It's actually a picture of Due.

[Vivio Testarossa]

I have the following Safe for work doujins:
[0422SHOP] Lyrical Nanoka
[AMR] Decade Eins
[Briest] LMR 02
[CHA know-me DO-JI] Lyrical Jyoutoh!
[D-Cube] Fate in Stay Night
[Daikakudou] Roshinante Go Ahead
[Einsatz Gruppe] No.1 White Devil
[Fukashigi] Nanoha no Hon
[GRINP] Lyrical Bonus!!!!!
[Kawaisounako] Kawauso Vol. 02
[Kikakugai.Extend] Fate Out of Standard
[Kohakunosima] O Yakusoku wa Zettai! Muteki Nano~
[mstl-60997] NR-01
[Parukusu] PV6
[Parukusu] PV7
[PLUM] Magical SEED FREEDOM
[Rental Senkan] Midori
[Rimitubureiku + T-A-C-O] Nanoha-san no Technique
[Romantic Sintai-Kensa] pop x pop
[Subitan] Vivio no Oekakichou
[Upagoya Endori] Standby Ready Clock Up!
[Utsura Uraraka] Rein Ganbaru Desu!

Already in english
[RAID SLASH] Thunder Bird
[GiB] Lyrical Waha
[Iceky] The Same Feel [ENG]
[Aterier Miyabi] Sky Colors [ENG]
[MoruHouse] Koiwa Mutekinano [ENG]
[Nagomutei] Sleeping Butterfly [ENG]
[RAID SLASH] Fake Jewel [ENG]
[UnisonBell] Nanohana [ENG]
[SEA STAR] KISS [ENG]
[SEA STAR] LOVE LOVE LOVE [ENG]
[SEA STAR] Punyu Punyu [ENG]
[SEA STAR] Sweet Home [ENG]
[SEA STAR] Velvet [ENG]
[Rocket Guy] Akuma demo Nanoha! nano [ENG]

Anyone want me to post any of these?

[dokupan]

Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa

Anyone want me to post any of these?

[AMR] Decade Eins
[Briest] LMR 02
[GRINP] Lyrical Bonus!!!!!
[Kikakugai.Extend] Fate Out of Standard
[Kohakunosima] O Yakusoku wa Zettai! Muteki Nano~
[Upagoya Endori] Standby Ready Clock Up!

If it's not too much trouble. @_@