Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Dream_Traveller]

From what I recall, you make a post with all your current character info with links, then Erio will soon make a link to that post.

As for Hikki going psycho, who knows what he'll do to the people who stand in his way...

I can somehow imagine him going Jack Torrence on his foes.

"Here's HIKKI!"

[USB500]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

From what I recall, you make a post with all your current character info with links, then Erio will soon make a link to that post.

As for Hikki going psycho, who knows what he'll do to the people who stand in his way...

I can somehow imagine him going Jack Torrence on his foes.

"Here's HIKKI!"

I'd rather not think of that scene.

For record, Hikki has gone berserk for more than once. In most occasions, it happens every time he faces situations he is vastly outnumbered (or when he runs out of options).

Spoiler for click:

Information is based on files retrieved from the vault. Take note that events below happen in multiverses:

• 1st encounter: PWAB (Post War Administrative Bureau)'s Robo-Ky. Venue: Magnolia Village. (Heart of Melting Blood universe)
• 2nd encounter: NESTS Kusanagi. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (Heart of Melting Blood Universe)
• 3rd encounter: Gear Warrior Mriya. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (Heart of Melting Blood universe)
• 4th encounter: Robo-Ky II and his Iron Army. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (Heart of Melting Blood universe)
• 5th encounter: Magnolia Warrior Monks. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (HOMB: The Whistling Gale universe)

Spoiler for future fanfic events:

• 6th encounter: armed terrorists. Venue: somewhere in Commonwealth of Independent States (The Whistling Gale: Bullet & Blossom arc)
• 7th encounter: the Gunslinger Girls. Venue: classified. (The Whistling Gale: Bullet & Blossom arc)
• 8th encounter: Magnolia Warrior Monks. Venue: Magnolia Valley (The Whistling Gale: Lyrical of Time arc)
• 9th encounter: Council of Polaris (immortals & deities from Saga of the Timeless Realm). Venue: Siberia. (The Whistling Gale: Lyrical of Time arc)
• 10th encounter: Nagalintar. Venue: Siberia. (The Whistling Gale: Lyrical of Time arc)

So you see, his berserk tendency is rather high.

[Erio]

Originally Posted by USB500

I think my list's going to expand over the fence, so can you PM me on what to do?

lol Your list is OK for now. Once those with a LOT of multi-parts *glares at them * organize their links elsewhere, there will be a lot of space for more new stuff.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Those segments of yours, USB, rather...foreboding, might I say. Dark times lie ahead for Solo Wing Zero, I must say...

And on another note, before the Lettermen, and even before Marc, I had this character drawn out:

Spoiler for Alaeith:

ALAEITH KORZAUN
Age: Looks to be 15 (creation date unknown.)
Hair colour: Blonde
Eye colour: Celadon
Birthday: Unknown
Height: 165cm
Weight: 51kg
Affiliation: Knightly Order of the Holy Belkan Empire
Home world: 3rd Administered World -- Ristio
Device: Libelle (Dragonfly)
Device appearance: rapier
Magic System: Neo Belka
Magic symbol: triangle
Magic element: ice
Magic colour: aquamarine
Partner: none
Appearance: Alaeith wears a yellow and black barrier jacket on almost all occasions- when seen in civilian wear, he is usually wearing a long sleeved shirt with navy blue trousers.
Personality: he has a ‘slacker’ attitude, but will get the job done when needed. He also has something of a liking towards Vita, and has a habit of treating her like a ‘little sister’, so to speak.

BACKGROUND

"So I come from a world different from yours...does that really matter?"

Alaeith originated from the world of Ristio, created as a guardian of the Libram of Devotion, the Book of Darkness' counterpart. Having the appearance of a fifteen year old boy, he abandoned his duties as a guardian to explore the worlds beyond his, much to the chagrin of his comrades.

On his travels across the multiverse, he came across Belka, home of the Knightly Order of the Holy Velkan Empire, coming across this world not too long after the Book of Darkness incident, after visting Mid-Childa and a selection of other worlds.

He was enthralled by the Knightly Order, and had an aim to set for himself- to become a member of it. In his time in Velka, he honed his swordsmanship and speed, gaining the nickname of Schneewespe, due to both his speed and the color of his barrier jacket- yellow and white. (Yup, slight color change.)

He has a liking to the Wolkenritter, and respects them to a high degree. He has a certain liking towards Vita, who he treats very much like a sister.

He has no familiar, but operates alongside Ratiel and her group. Even so, he tends to be something of a loose cannon, and sometimes goes it alone. He is protective of his allies, however.

He does, however, despite his calm nature, hold a grudge with someone, namely Kha der Kleriker, who looks upon him with scrutiny for casting his duties aside. Alaeith just bears with it.

In his induction into the Knightly Order, he was also looked down upon by some other knights, namely those who had suspicion of warriors from Ristio- Alaeith soldiered on, nonetheless.

He is a B rank mage, his Linker Core holding a good amount of power. This, combined with his speed in battle, makes him stand out in combat. It has been his speed and skill in wielding his rapier Device, Libelle, that has gotten him out of many a bad situation and defeated others in the process.


Personality:

"We're all fighting for one thing, pal- a brighter future for this world and others. And that's a goal I've been wanting to fulfill for some time now."

Alaeith is loyal to his allies, and will carry out his duties with due course. However, he is also something of a loose canon at times, going it alone on certain operations and also risking his life, much to the worry of Ratiel and the others. He has a habit for coming out of said situations rather unscathed, but he still chooses to take one too many risks.

He understands that he, and others, must do what they can, and fight for their own beliefs. He sees battles as something that he has to do, and views them as part of his protocol- he does, however, respect the skill of certain foes he faces.

Due to his grudge with Kha, he finds it hard to converse with him, despite encouragement from others to make amends.


Barrier Jacket:

Alaeith's barrier jacket is white and yellow in color, taking the form of a white trench coat with yellow trim on the lower section and on the sleeves and collar. A yellow Belkan Cross is also emblazoned on the back of the coat. He wears a black gauntlet glove on his right hand, to enable him to wield Libelle as quickly as he usually does, though, without the glove, he is rather fast in strikes, nonetheless. His boots match the color of his trenchcoat, and are half yellow, half white in color.


Device:

"Libelle...Dragonfly. The winds of battle in rapier form."

Libelle takes the form of a rapier. Alaeith has honed his skills with it over the years, and his agility in using it is second to none. The Device itself is rather light, allowing Alaeith to perform quick flurries of strikes or single quick movements and attacks in combat. Libelle became quickly liked when Alaeith first used it years ago, and the Device is still well-liked by him to this day. To put it simply, Libelle is, as Alaeith himself says, "the perfect weapon to suit my style."



ABILITIES
Alaeith has a rather distinctive style of fighting, primarily due to the form of his device. He opts for speed, preferring several or single quick strikes in place of heavy attacks. His agility in battle is superb, and it is this that has gotten him out of many a tricky situation.

* Knight Armour: a yellow and black trench coat, with matching boots of the same colour and a gauntlet glove for Alaeith’s right hand.
* Triangle Shield: blocks all magical attacks coming from one direction with a triangular barrier, much like Fate’s or Nanoha’s Round Shields.
* Nachladen: this is not an attack, but refers to Libelle’s procedure of reloading a cartridge.
* Explosion: also not an attack; Libelle says this when using cartridges, similar to the English-speaking devices’ “Load Cartridge”.
* Panzer Hindernis: creates a domed shield that protects against everything in Alaeith’s field of vision, but fails to protect against attacks coming from behind. Translated as “Tank Barrier”.
* Pferd: briefly boosts Alaeith’s speed by summoning up a localized wind effect focused on his feet. Translated as “Horse Speed”.
* Schmutzvogel: Alaeith’s first attack. Translated as “Dirty Bird”.
* Eis Welle: Alaeith swings Libelle in a horizontal or vertical arc, forming an ice projectile in the form of a wave which is then hurled at any foe. Translates to “Ice Wave”.
* Gletscher Zorn: an instant cast, variably ranged spell that can be fired off in rapid bursts at instant speed or charged for a narrower, defence-piercing and highly accurate shot. Rune circles like Nanoha’s shooting mode appears along the sword when the spell is activated. Alaeith points Libelle forward, a circle of runes forming around the tip of the blade and firing off a series of shots imbued with the power of ice. The usage of more cartridges amplifies the power of blast. Translated as “Glacier Fury”.
* Licht Schwert: this spell, at its lowest level of power usage, requires no cartridges to keep it active. It transforms Libelle’s blade into a beam of light, thereby forming it into a thinner but more potent blade. With an increase in power level, more cartridges must be used for Alaeith to maintain the spell. (@Kha- since I did plan with him to be with Kha for some time, although this might require yours/USB's consent, same with his background, I did think of him "learning" this spell of of him as a derivative thing, but...)
* Aurora: Alaeith summons all magic residue left over from attacks previously used into his sword, and grants it with the power of the blizzards themselves, delivering either one or a series of rending slashes imbued with the blizzard’s strength, able to rend foes limb from limb, and distort the area-of-effect radius. He also names this skill Aurora for the coloured trail Libelle leaves behind after swings. This technique is very taxing on his magic power, and he himself has vowed to only use it in situations that are most dire.


Quotes by Alaeith added in, too.

Interesting character there.
So he's a program too....

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Time for PREVIEW TIME! On the rare occasions I do post previews, here's one of my upcoming profile histories, which will be required to understand one of the concepts of the chapter after it, continuing the Linebacker's story.

Spoiler for Data Log:

-Entry Log X105, Logged by Kaylin Mathis, 8-10-0074-

In the history of warfare, the advancement of the defense has always been developed in reaction to, or side by side to the advancement of offensive weapons and weapon systems. It is the second major element in the technological escalation of power: the need to defend against attack creates the need for superior offense to break the defense, which in turn results in the creation of superior defensive systems to counter the threat, and so on in a never-ending circle to achieve military parity.

There have been times when the development of a weapon system was spurred by the perceived inevitability of a future and yet non-existent threat. This logical, if rash foresight results in experimental armament systems that possessed incredible powers and combat abilities years, decades – or in the case of Type-X class Ancient Magic Civilizations – even centuries or millennia ahead of their time, and yet prove ineffective, due to rapid change in direction of geopolitical and military climates which renders the system redundantly costly, unnecessary, or plain useless. On the other hand, there are also systems so effective that their very existence threatens the tactical and strategic balance of power. At best, their powers are sealed away where they cannot be used irresponsibly, and at worse the civilizations possessing such technology commit planetary genocide and extinction through mutually assured destruction between opposing parties (A most famous example being the “First Fallout” incident that destroyed the legendary world of Alhazred several millennia ago.)

While such types of advanced research and development have always focused on the aspect of offense, development of defensive technologies have managed to be on par, and on some worlds, even surpass that of any attack system. Recently unearthed data from various storage mediums found in locked armed vaults throughout the Ordered Worlds have revealed several such systems, one of the most interesting so far being an ancient Belka technology called “Unison Armor”.

Interesting! Though I also got reminded of Yui and Tais.

Originally Posted by Kha

Yes indeed. It is in Twist's Fate where Vivio is first born, and after that we've still gotta send Vivio back in time into the NBC and canon timeline, ne?

I offered and used Kha/Kluize as da bomb, literally this time.

OMFG! Once my mind ran a simulation that saw the Twist's Fate timeline blowing up and sending debris crashing into other timelines, several Time Paradoxes are happening at an alarming rate!

Firstly, the Stahlritter:

Spoiler for AAAAAH!!!:

Alaeith - The Original, but looks like Otto having undergone recoloring. (Possibly? )
Cindy - Looks remarkably like Cinque
Sei - Looks remarkably like Sein
Reiner - Looks remarkably like Wendi
Dlaucia - Looks remarkbly like Dieci

I see a few more things appearing, and includes sending the older Caro carrying Signum's Laevantine back to be discovered, permanently amnesiac, by Tiara.

Of course Vivio gets sent back in time to become the Seat of the Cradle. But that's not right, she appears in the Twist's Fate timeline prior to destruction...



AAAAAAH!!! TIME SPACE IS FALLING APART!!!

How....... CAN YOU KEEP UP WITH THIS MUCH INFORMATION!!!!:frustrated :
This is insane!

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Well, here goes, (Ex)Treize's profile...

Spoiler for Numbers: Ex-Treize:

Name: Treize, because it was how she was called by Sein, the first 'sister' she met.
Age: 13 (physically)
Height: 145cm
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Jet Black
Eye Color: Blood Red
Mage Rank: Unknown (Flight-capable)
Magic Color: Jet Black/Purple
Homeworld: Mid-Childa, Scaglietti's laboratory
Fighting Style: Mimic the adversary and assimilate its style. After analysis of skills is complete, disable the target with a tactic that explores its weakness.

Seiyuu: Mikako Takahashi (Ren (Reveric Metherlence) of Erementar Gerad / Machi of Nagasarete Airantou) (I think it's the same VA )

Personality: Quiet, stoic, empty and lacks ability to express emotions. Curious too...


Appearance: Check the picture

Inherent Skill: Absolute Emulator
Allows her to copy and possibly improve spells and other IS' she sees or experiences (as in, being casted on her or taking damage from it).

If the said spell/attack requires a specific equipment to use, she can temporarily replicate that item (and maintain as long as she wants) in order to use it.
Every skill she 'learns' is then memorized and stored for future use.

Though her IS is amazing, some things she can't replicate, magics that require a deep insight and a connection with the that magic.
Summon magic and Rare Skills, like Carim's and Acous', as well as Hayate's Knight system are good examples of what she can't replicate.


Equipment:
Scanner Circlet: A circlet she wears on her forehead that Scaglietti prepared for her when she would wake up.
It increases the effectiveness of her IS' analytic abilities.


Story:
Unlike other the Numbers, she was created from combined DNA, creating a new life.
Her growth was accelerated and then implanted with Sentoukijin technology, basic knowledge, speech capabilities and her Inherent Skill.

Much like her IS, she's empty at the beginning, copying whatever she sees and learning it for future application.

Due to having such a complex IS, her body had a hard time assimilating it, requiring constant monitoring inside a Life Pod.
Everytime she woke up, she would only stay conscious for a few minutes, falling back to sleep afterwards.

Her project was made isolated from the other Numbers, to prevent premature activation of her IS.
But Sein, was so curious about that 'Forbidden Room' that she entered it, becoming the first person who Treize met, and also the first IS Treize learned, Deep Diver.

As time passed, Treize wouldn't wake up, and also because his 'dream' was about to begin, Scaglietti decided to stop this project until further notice.
So, Treize was stripped of her name and number (reassigned to Ginga, whom the captured) and sealed away in that room.

But, unknown to them, she was functioning within the acceptable parameters, and with a strong will to see her sister, she phased through the Life Pod and breathed for the first time.
Using whatever she had as support to stand up, she headed to the door, only to find out it was sealed, she tried to phase through it, but couldn't, as there was a barrier in the way.

Seeing that she couldn't get out, she used that time to learn to stand up on her own, to walk and run, and her body quickly memorized anything she would learn.
Realizing how fast she was doing things, she assimilated whatever she found in that room, whether it was information or objects.

Finding the armor that was intended for her, she put it on and became aware of her abilities as they now activated whenever she wanted to.
Practicing on phasing through things, she quickly mastered it, and saw that barrier that kept her away from her sister as her next challenge...

You've seen her picture already, but here it is again
Ex-Treize

Now...I also would like to explain a few things about Koji and Yui:
Who taught them and what did they teach!

Spoiler for Koji's Case:

Signum:

• Kendo
• Belka fencing style
• Belka magic style

Fate:

• Cerimonial magic
• Magical melee/ranged fighting
• Elemental magic

Nanoha:

• Flying (with help of Yui's Falcon Wing)
• Shooting arts
• Buster-like spells

Shamal:

• Healing and Restoring magic
• Detect magic

Hayate:

• Bombardment magic - Fimbulvetr (combination magic with Yui)

Self:

• Wind-based Neo Belka style

Spoiler for Yui's Case:

Nanoha:

• Mid-childa magic style
• Flying
• Shooting arts
• Buster-like spells

Fate:

• Cerimonial magic
• Weather control magic
• Elemental magic

Shamal:

• Healing and Restoring magic
• Support magic

Hayate:

• Bombardment magic - Fimbulvetr (combination magic with Koji)

That was how things went for them (excluding TSAB training)
I don't think I missed anything... If I did, I'll add later...

Interesting. At least you moderated EX-Treize's ability.

Originally Posted by Erio

Attention!

Well, I got some bad news here.

The OC List has reached its size limit. I cannot add any more links.

EDIT: Suggestion: I can keep all the individual character links, EXCEPT for biography update links. As for stories related to these characters, I can also link to the first parts of these stories only. You guys can include links to other parts in your character's and/or story's original post, to which I will be linking on the list.

Here's an example:

Created by An Hero in Disguise

• TSAB Intelligence Department Special Section D Commanding Unit "Vanguard"
  • Serge Blanc Romardo <- Link to the character's post
    - Dance of the Demons <- Link to the story's first part
    - World's Colors <- Link to the story's first part
  • Anatoly "Bison" Belov<- Link to the character's post
  • Sarah "Siren" S'Zet
  • Ramsus "Headhunter" Lakarn
  • Mirian "Ruby" El Meyruun

Additional Biography and Story parts can be organized in those first posts.

I guess this will also help the list look a lot better.

The OC List right now has all the links up till page 268.


Aaron008R, AImost Pure, KBTKaiser, LoweGear, Nightengale, tshouryuu please get back to me as soon as possible.

Ok. Send me the PM and I'll handle it.

Originally Posted by Keroko

The most important thing to me is balance. If Keroko`s h4xx are needed to keep balance, then its okay with me.

*nods*
We'll get there, eventually. I expect maybe Saint X can readily HAXX an OC in short notice.

Oooh, now I see. Still, poor Tesla-chan.

[/QUOTE]Mini-update! In my manga gathering spree, I finally decided on the identity of the last Rogue.

For those of you who may know her: Unit type M.A.M.E.T.

For those of you who don`t:

Spoiler for heavy spoiler, but nobody cares, right?:

She`s an android originating from a manga called `Junk Force` and the best way to describe her would be a combination of Nakajima level awesomeness and Vivio level moeness. Including a certain mommy program. Shell help explaining why Keroko is so comfortable being a mama.

[/QUOTE]

Now you've got me curious!

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

I'm looking for something like that... these'll be the Dunamist opponents in LegendS, so feel free.

And as to time, I won't start writing LegendS until StrikerS is over, and even then it'll take some time to get to the Dunamists - you've probably got 7-10 weeks to come up with one.


AND I NEED THE GENDER!!!

Very well... I'll get to work on one later.

Originally Posted by Kha

Now if the Stahlritter were to regroup, I suppose another super robot combination has been unlocked... I think Aaron's gonna pounce on me for thinking the above.

<Prepares to yell KHAAAAA! again...>

Originally Posted by USB500

That Widuri is different person.

Fine...

Hikki is indeed Big Daddy Yo's son, remember?

And to think Hikki actually sekuharas Widuri at her appearance-age!

Originally Posted by USB500

I'd rather not think of that scene.

For record, Hikki has gone berserk for more than once. In most occasions, it happens every time he faces situations he is vastly outnumbered (or when he runs out of options).

Spoiler for click:

Information is based on files retrieved from the vault. Take note that events below happen in multiverses:

• 1st encounter: PWAB (Post War Administrative Bureau)'s Robo-Ky. Venue: Magnolia Village. (Heart of Melting Blood universe)
• 2nd encounter: NESTS Kusanagi. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (Heart of Melting Blood Universe)
• 3rd encounter: Gear Warrior Mriya. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (Heart of Melting Blood universe)
• 4th encounter: Robo-Ky II and his Iron Army. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (Heart of Melting Blood universe)
• 5th encounter: Magnolia Warrior Monks. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (HOMB: The Whistling Gale universe)

Spoiler for future fanfic events:

• 6th encounter: armed terrorists. Venue: somewhere in Commonwealth of Independent States (The Whistling Gale: Bullet & Blossom arc)
• 7th encounter: the Gunslinger Girls. Venue: classified. (The Whistling Gale: Bullet & Blossom arc)
• 8th encounter: Magnolia Warrior Monks. Venue: Magnolia Valley (The Whistling Gale: Lyrical of Time arc)
• 9th encounter: Council of Polaris (immortals & deities from Narulia Saga). Venue: Siberia. (The Whistling Gale: Lyrical of Time arc)
• 10th encounter: Nagalintar. Venue: Siberia. (The Whistling Gale: Lyrical of Time arc)

So you see, his berserk tendency is rather high.

Berserker indeed...

[Aaron008R]

Sorry for double post and repeating An Hero's quote...

Originally Posted by Mirificus

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Originally Posted by Thisguy

Spoiler:

Summer Vacation Special! Riot Force 6 Q&A!!

Question 1: "Sei-Oh's bleh bleh", what do those do?

You mean Vessel of Sei-Oh and Cradle of Sei-Oh, right? What are these good for, CO?

Cradle of Sei-Oh is a huge battle ship. When positioned at orbital track, it can draw magic power from two moons and able to perform some ridiculously dangerous attack to surface.
It's a powerful weapon even capable of combat inside dimensional space, and Vessel of Sei-Oh = Vivio is the key of this weapon. These informations are from Yuuno-kun, so I'm sure of it.
Vivio seems to have more secret, but I'd like not to talk on speculation for sake of Nanoha-chan. Anyway, both of them are VERY dangerious objects that require extreme caution when we deal with them.

T... that sounds really dangerous. Don't even dream of using it, little girls and boys.

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Question 2: That Geek Scaglietti must be up to something terrible. It's scary.

Yeah, indeed. He's been up to something quite dangerous like Genetic Manipulation. CO, your opinion please?

Surely, he's a serious criminal and has been up to bad stuffs.
However, he only wants to study on something he's interested in; mainly biological researches... It's not that he wish to destroy or dominate worlds, or willing to eradicate anyone on his path.
According to Fate-chan's investigation note, his obsession to biology somehow relates to his origin... Maybe we can see more about this matter as we investigate more, or from their side's talks.

...Boys and Girls, be well prepared for video recording!

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Question 3: RF6, GC, and High Councils... it's so confusing! Who's the top!?

She seems to be confused by the complicated organization structure. Let's do her a favor, CO.

Well, organizations are by nature complicated, so it can't be helped.
First, High Councils are the people who established TSAB.
Ground Center is a part of TSAB, and Mr. Regius is the big man of there.
RF6 is... in rather unique position in TSAB, that it doesn't have many restriction but will be in more danger instead.
Of course, RF6 is not a higher-rank, and the CO is as young as 19 years old (it's me).
About the High Councils... I think we'll see more about them soon.

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Question 4: So, Nanoha or Hayate, which is stronger?

...Why Fate-chan's not included? Anyway, how's it, CO?

Me, fight against Nanoha-chan? Nanoha-chan will win, hands down(0 second answer).
Among the Forwards of RF6, only one I'd win against in serious fight would be Caro (w/o her dragons, it is), I suppose. Well, Fate-chan will kill me for that though, heh.
My fighting style requires either co-working with Wolkens, else I'd better off providing support from back-line. In other words, at the point of me getting into serious 1 on 1, we're already lost.
Like how it is in Shogi or Chess, "Able to take strong opponent at 1 on 1" is merely one of many choices in tactical point of view.
Mind you, it's not my sour grape, it's just that people have different role.

Was that a good lesson?

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Question 5: Are Nanoha-chan and Fate-chan possibily in love-love!?

Good point there. They are girls of good age, yet both of them never had any rumor of romance.
On top of that, they now share the room... well, CO?

Ah, these two. Well, they've been togather since 10 years ago anyway.
It's funny to see that in front of Vivio, Nanoha-chan plays the role of strict but kind mother, while Fate-chan does the father going all so sweet to daughter.
Weather they're love-love or not aside, they complement each other very well.
However, in our next action, they'll be taking separate route... so you'd better watch their friendship while you still can.

...You good boys and girls out there, make a good friend like them.

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Question 6: How dare you let such a little kids to fight! You ARE sure they'll be alright till the end!?

RF6 members are getting to their last mission.
How battles will turn out? Let us ask about that to our CO.

Once we leave Athra for mission, we won't be able to come back until everything settled down... it'll be the serious battle.
Forwards are descending to surface, Fate-chan will be going after Scaglietti, and Nanoha-chan and us are heading toward the Cradle... There will be fights in different place, at the same time.
Each of us will be questioning ourselves "Why and for what I fight" as we fight with memory of our precious daily life.
Maybe it's good idea for you to revise the record of our days in RF6, before it starts once and for all.

...Got it, everybody?

...No, I'm not smoking
It's slightly liberal translation, but I tried to stick with original texts as much as possible.

Looks indeed interesting. And...
Question and Answer number 4... She's kidding about just Caro, right? Exaggeration, I say! Maybe she's talking about herself in limited mode...

In any case... Hayate's revelations about her abilities will have some bearing in future scenarios. This is kinda... disheartening.

And wait... If Fate's going after Scaglietti, and Nanoha-tachi are going to the Cradle... Isn't Scaglietti at the Cradle in the first place?

[USB500]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

And to think Hikki actually sekuharas Widuri at her appearance-age!



Berserker indeed...

1: *flails arms* but they're made for each other!

*moments of silence*

What?

2: not even Big Daddy Yo has that kind of trait.



Halp! Author needs ideas for this scenario. Suggestions to make it even more awesome?

P/S: don't read posts before it.

[Reiji Tabibito]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Very well... I'll get to work on one later.

Thanks! And I'm sending you a couple of PMs outlining guidelines for creating the chars - inspired by An Hero's post.

Originally Posted by USB500

Halp! Author needs ideas for this scenario. Suggestions to make it even more awesome?

P/S: don't read posts before it.

You are permitted to borrow my works, and go crazy! Just let me in the back door for the afterparty, OK?

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by USB500

For record, Hikki has gone berserk for more than once. In most occasions, it happens every time he faces situations he is vastly outnumbered (or when he runs out of options).

Spoiler for click:

Information is based on files retrieved from the vault. Take note that events below happen in multiverses:

• 1st encounter: PWAB (Post War Administrative Bureau)'s Robo-Ky. Venue: Magnolia Village. (Heart of Melting Blood universe)
• 2nd encounter: NESTS Kusanagi. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (Heart of Melting Blood Universe)
• 3rd encounter: Gear Warrior Mriya. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (Heart of Melting Blood universe)
• 4th encounter: Robo-Ky II and his Iron Army. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (Heart of Melting Blood universe)
• 5th encounter: Magnolia Warrior Monks. Venue: Kiev, Ukraine. (HOMB: The Whistling Gale universe)

Spoiler for future fanfic events:

• 6th encounter: armed terrorists. Venue: somewhere in Commonwealth of Independent States (The Whistling Gale: Bullet & Blossom arc)
• 7th encounter: the Gunslinger Girls. Venue: classified. (The Whistling Gale: Bullet & Blossom arc)
• 8th encounter: Magnolia Warrior Monks. Venue: Magnolia Valley (The Whistling Gale: Lyrical of Time arc)
• 9th encounter: Council of Polaris (immortals & deities from Saga of the Timeless Realm). Venue: Siberia. (The Whistling Gale: Lyrical of Time arc)
• 10th encounter: Nagalintar. Venue: Siberia. (The Whistling Gale: Lyrical of Time arc)

So you see, his berserk tendency is rather high.

Whoa, didn't think he was that ... unstable (point noted)

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Looks indeed interesting. And...
Question and Answer number 4... She's kidding about just Caro, right? Exaggeration, I say! Maybe she's talking about herself in limited mode...

In any case... Hayate's revelations about her abilities will have some bearing in future scenarios. This is kinda... disheartening.

And wait... If Fate's going after Scaglietti, and Nanoha-tachi are going to the Cradle... Isn't Scaglietti at the Cradle in the first place?

If she really can't do a thing in close combat she may be not kidding actually

I just hope she doesn't kick the bucket by the end of the season

Seems like he isn't I'd do the same at his place.

[LoweGear]

Yosh! As per the request to organize the OC, here's the roster on my creations, Organized version

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• Kaylin "Kay" Mathis [Rogue Archaelogist/Anthropologist/Historian]
  
  
  
  • Main Profile
  • AI Profile: Asuka
  • AI Profile: Trivia
  • Final Thoughts
    
    Stories
  • Zubaida Arc I
    
  • Kay Stories: Confinement
    

• 2nd Lieutenant Glock Heckler [TSAB Clerk, 79th Ground Battalion]
  
  
  
  • Main Profile Part I
  • Part II
  • Part III
  • Part IV
  • Part IV+
  • Part V
  • Part VI
  • Part VII
  • Part VIII
  • Part IX
  • Part X
  • Part XI
  • Part XII
  • Part XIII
  • Part XIV
  • Part XV
  • Part XVI
  • Visit
    
  • Spell List Part I
  • Spell List Part II
    

• Mai Enna [Codename "Hell Girl", Enforcer-in-training]
  
  
  
  • Introduction
  • Part I
  • Part II
  • Part III
  • Part IV
  • Part V
    
    PAST
    
  • Part I
  • Part II
  • Part III
  • Part III Gaiden
  • Part IV
  • Part V
  • Part VI
  • Part VII
  • Part VIII
    
    FAMILIAR
    
  • Xealot
    
    Magic Circle
    
  • Midchilda Chaos Array
    
    Random
    
  • Image: Atashi no Yume
  • Enforcer Exam I: Result
  • Enforcer Exam II: Ponder
  • Enforcer Exam III: Fall
  • Enforcer Exam IV: Recorder
  • Enforcer Exam V: Shelter
    

• LineBackerS
  - Private First Class Remington Smith
  - Private First Class Colt Wesson
  
  
  
  • Introduction
  • Part I
  • Part II
  • Part III
  • Part IV
  • Part V
  • Part VI
  • Part VII
  • Part VIII

• Device Profiles
  
• Rhythm Edge - Goddess of the Azure Sky
  • Part I
  • Part II

• Matsuri Miyama [Living Peacefully in Florida]
  
  
  
  Ai no Shinji
  
  • Part 1: Evening
  • Part 2: Searcher
  • Part 3: I.M.
  • Part 4: Matsuri
  • Part 5: Collision
  • Part 6: Sunrise
  • Part 7: Waiting
  • Part 8: Breathing
  • The Melancholy of Matsuri Miyama
    

BELKARANGERS

• Asagi Colwell [Fiery Adventurer BelkaRed]
  
  
  
  • History
  • Spells and Abilities
  • Special Moves and Techniques
  • Miscellaneous Trivia
    

• Mayura Lee Labatt [Honest Heart BelkaYellow / Ebony Justice BelkaBlack]
  
  
  
  • History
  • Personality
  • Weapons and Devices
  • Spells and Abilities
  • Special Moves and Trivia
    

• Julie Liu Ming [Blue Magician / Ninja of Ninja Belkablue]
  
  
  
  • History
  • Personality
  • Barrier Jacket
  • Skills and Devices
  • Spell List
  • Special Moves and Trivia
    

TASK ONE: Prologue
TASK ONE: PART ONE

***

• Epsila Synaisthima Labatt [The Shattered Girl]
  
  
  
  • Main Profile
  • Attributes
    

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

If she really can't do a thing in close combat she may be not kidding actually

Nigh improbable. Regardless of close-combat skill, her SS rank should also entail monstrous defenses that certainly can't be pierced by ANY attacks of the forwards (except maybe Subaru's IS). So she's gotta be kidding! I say she has at least a minimal amount of close-combat ability to be able to pull away and throw in the nukes.

I just hope she doesn't kick the bucket by the end of the season

They wouldn't dare kill off one of the main cast... I hope.

Seems like he isn't I'd do the same at his place.

So they'd really be going separate, huh? Ah well... I'm still hoping for a triple-Breaker.

[USB500]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Yosh! As per the request to organize the OC, here's the roster on my creations, Organized version

--------------------------------

• Kaylin "Kay" Mathis [Rogue Archaelogist/Anthropologist/Historian]
  
  
  
  • Main Profile
  • AI Profile: Asuka
  • AI Profile: Trivia
  • Final Thoughts

• 2nd Lieutenant Glock Heckler [TSAB Clerk, 79th Ground Battalion]
  
  
  
  • Main Profile Part I
  • Part II
  • Part III
  • Part IV
  • Part IV+
  • Part V
  • Part VI
  • Part VII
  • Part VIII
  • Part VX
  • Part X
  • Part XI
  • Part XII
  • Part XIII
  • Part XIV
  • Part XV

• Mai Enna [Codename "Hell Girl", Enforcer-in-training]
  
  
  
  • Introduction
  • Part I
  • Part II
  • Part III
  • Part IV
  • Part V
    
    PAST
    
  • Part I
  • Part II
  • Part III
  • Part III Gaiden
  • Part IV
  • Part V
  • Part VI
  • Part VII
  • Part VIII
    
    FAMILIAR
    
  • Xealot

• LineBackerS
  - Private First Class Remington Smith
  - Private First Class Colt Wesson
  
  
  
  • Introduction
  • Part I
  • Part II
  • Part III
  • Part IV
  • Part V
  • Part VI
  • Part VII

• Device Profiles
  
• Rhythm Edge - Goddess of the Azure Sky
  • Part I
  • Part II

The more I look at S&W, the more I want Mai to lay smackdown upon them Damn, they're literally disaster magnet.

@ Reiji: thanks for the suggestion. I see if I can incorporate it.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Nigh improbable. Regardless of close-combat skill, her SS rank should also entail monstrous defenses that certainly can't be pierced by ANY attacks of the forwards (except maybe Subaru's IS). So she's gotta be kidding! I say she has at least a minimal amount of close-combat ability to be able to pull away and throw in the nukes.

Well, we actually never saw her defending against something as well as engaging in close combat And there're different kinds of tests for mage ranks so SS doesn't have to mean this level of proficiency in most of the fields.

They wouldn't dare kill off one of the main cast... I hope.

This translation and some lines in the spoilers made me worry a bit ...

So they'd really be going separate, huh? Ah well... I'm still hoping for a triple-Breaker.

Quite unlikely to see it imho ...

[Nightengale]

Nighty, reporting...

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Before Nanoha : Chronicles of Gil Graham
~Magical Boy Classical Graham~

A.R.I.A
[Artificial Receptionary Intelligence Android Type-Weapon]

• Story of Aria

Florentina "Flora" Chrysler Lieze
[TSAB Rear Admiral, Dimensional Navy Fleet]

• Story of Flora

--------------------------------

BEFORE Saga
~Before the Preludes of Tragedy~

• Before Belka
  
  Birth of Belka : A Separation From Mid-Childa:
  • Chapter I: Belka: The Birth of 2 Kingdoms
  • Chapter II: Belka: The Desert Empire

• Before Zerstroritter
  
  • Isdera Saleen [Sword Knight of Belka]
    
  • Wira Res-Brusche [Guardian Beast Knight of Belka]
    
  • Astra Sol-Kry-Ea [Shield Wind of Belka]

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SAGA of Saga
~The Belkan Ataraxia Romance of the Night Sky~

• Saga [The Knight of the Night Sky]
  
• Null [The Blessed Wind of Saga]
  
  • Part I
  • Part II
  • Part III
  • Part III-2nd
  • Part III-Final
  • Part IV
  • Part ZERO : Future
  • Part V
  • Part VI
  • Part VII
  • Part VIII
  • Part IX
  • Part IX-2nd
  • Part IX-3rd
  • Part IX-Final
  • Part X
  • Part XI
  • Part XII
  • Part XII-2nd
  • Part XII-3rd
  • Part XII-4th
  • Part XII-5th
  • Part XII-6th
  • Part XII-Final
  • Part XIII
  • Part XIII-2nd
  • Part XIII-Final
  • Part XIV
  • Part XIV-2nd
  • Part XIV FINAL
  • Epilogue 0
  • Epilogue I
  • Epilogue II
  • Epilogue FINAL

--------------------------------

AFTER Saga
~A Story of Promise of Time Immemorial~

• Future Zerstroritter [Ancient Knights under the Present Skies]
  
  • Part ZERO
  • Part I
  • Part II
  • Part II-Final
  • Part III
  • Part IV
  • Part IV-Final
  
  ~Side Isdera AFTER : Zest vs Isdera
  • Complete
  
  ~Blank of 6 Months~ [A Different Path]
  • Pilot Chapter

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TSAB : Behind the Light of AceS and StrikerS
~There are always those who exist beyond what we seel~

• Joseth Hai-Ma bin Kassim
  [TSAB Intelligence Officer, Intelligence Dept.]
  
  • Story I
  • Story II
  • Story III
  • Story IV

• Austin Gloster Abrams
  [TSAB Air Force Drill Instructor, Ground-Agressor]
  
  • Profile

--------------------------------

UNKNOWN
~Who...are...you?~

• Zone [Dimensional Pirate]
  
• Hona Zwei Fuwa [On Hold Indefinitely]

[Nightengale]

Sorry, for the double post, but that's that for my part, Erio. Just redirect the linking to the page. That was tiring... Far worse than writing bluecheese. Now I know it really feels to organize all these mountains of cheese and backlog.

Anyway, that's the regular gist of it at the moment, occupying all the actual character-based details held.

As for some other universe-based stuff, I'll get around to recompiling some Alternate MC-verse stuff along with some of Satashi's works here and there. Btw, you should visit the Fanfic thread. I dunno if you read it or not, but the last few Fatuuno pieces Satashi wrote in the last 3-5 pages of that thread are works of gold. Same with the Hayuuno.

Anyway, AFTER Saga V is 10% atm. I haven't decided on the timeskip, but it'll not be 10 years yet. For now, it's more or less some insight on their new lifestyles on Earth. AFTER Saga VI or VII should be the one where they actually shift to Mid-childa, since Hayate does so as well. (( Since Saga is the stalker he is... ))

Should be ready within a day or 2.

[KBTKaiser]

*Feels something in his mind pop as he tries to reprocess...*

• Tennoka Mabiko
  - Ascension part 1, part 2, part 3
  - Origins part 1, part 2, part 3, part 4, part 5, part 6, part 7, part 8, part 9, part 10, part 11
  - Beginnings part 1, part 2, part 3, part 4, part 5, part 6, part 7, part 8, part 9
  - Light and Darkness Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6
  - Misc Mabiko's Theme
  -----------------
  
• Bakuretsu Kongou Kyoudai
  - Atarana Bakusou!! part 1, part 2, part 3, part 4, part 5, part 6, part 7, part 8, part 9, part 10, part 11
  -----------------
• Arrowhead Squadron

Now to go about editing each post to have cross linkings..

[Satty]

Man..it's hard juggling an OC story, a cross over, another profile, summer assignment, and a brother who wants to play around. I'll just give previews for now...After watching Rush Hour 3, I want to work on these now...

Spoiler for SearcherS/part 5 preview:

“Well…if it isn’t Satoshi.” Aurion said after looking out from anyone who was going to talk to him. “Hey there, Aurion.” Satoshi replied. “So, Armay’s here too…” he noticed, and started to do his trick. Taking his left arm off, he managed to terrify Satsuki, Margaret, and Armay, while Vincent looked in surprise and Satoshi chuckling. “Aurion-sama!” Armay replied, scared and mad. “Do you HAVE to do that when I’m around?”

“It’s funny to see your face when I do this; never gets old.” he said happily, chuckling to himself. “How did he-?” Vincent said out loud, surprised. “W-who the hell is this guy?” Aurion, seeing that his prank worked, revealed his own prosthetic arm and Device. “Well, that was fun, right Cipher?”

“[Yeah. It scared all of them, and you had a kick out of it. Very cold, there.]” Cipher replied. “I still wonder how you do that…” Satoshi said, wanting to know. “I just don’t know…” Aurion replied.

“Wait…you mean that he’s the guy that’s supposed to repair my arm?” Vincent said again, shocked. “Yeah, he is. Why? You have any problems with him?” Satoshi replied. “It’s either working with him or letting your Device stay in disrepair.” Vincent just shuddered a bit. “He’s the best chance I got. I’m gonna regret this….” he thought.

Spoiler for Magical Hour 2/ part 2 preview:

"What?" Yunno said again, before Nanoha pushed him towards Chrono. He managed to grab on, but the pipe bent down more, trying to take the pressure of two people holding on. "Who the hell was that?" Yunno screamed, as Nanoha smiled and left. "Lord, Jesus, I don't wanna die!" he screamed again as he looked down. "Chrono, help me, man."

"Don't worry, these pipes are very strong." Chrono said, trying to calm Yunno down.

The pipe was strong enough, but the fasteners holding the pipes was starting to give. "You sure, man?" Yunno asked.

"I'm sure." Chrono assured, though his voice was sounding desperate. He probably jinxed it, though, as the fasteners broke off. They fell for a bit before hanging on, but the other fasteners broke off. They fell down a bit, screaming all the way through before another fastener managed to hold on. Both of them smashed onto the pipes, and Yunno lost his grip, sliding down a bit, before holding on to Chrono's legs. "Let go!" he yelled, not being able to hold both the pipe and Yunno for long. "I can't believe I flew ten thousand miles for this shit..." Yunno said, still holding on to Chrono. The pipe finally broke and they fell down, landing on a small stall below them.

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Erio

@FlameSparkZ Nice list. What shall I call your story? BreakerS?

Yep.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Nice, Ex-Treize has the same VA as Caro! And so Treize has more in common with the Nakajima's than the Numbers in their origin

On Koji and Yui... "Shooting Arts" ? I'm sorry to have to do this , but...

Spoiler for *places ION CANON targetting beacon*:

Repost from Generic Discussion:

シューティングアーツ - Shooting Arts
Melee combat techniques focused on using magic-powered rollers. Used by Subaru.
The main feature of Shooting Arts is that the user can maintain their balance freely while on rollers, by controlling the advance, acceleration, and braking of the rollers. Therefore, this allows the entire body's force to be used in assaulting or offensive maneuvers.
The basics of Shooting Arts includes a combination with the Belka magic style, a style used by front-liners interested in weapons, body-enhancement, and direct combat.

*runs from blast wave*

lol...now that you mention it...yeah, it's Caro's VA...but it Caro's case, it's cuter...while on Ex-Treize is more like the examples I gave.

Oops
I thought the meaning of Shooting Arts was literally what the name was....but it still works for Koji, doesn't it?
[EDIT:] Guess not...

[Aaron008R]

Original Characters Created by Aaron008R

Spoiler for SCRAPPED OLD PROFILE AND WORKS:

• Aurion Dauer
  - Character Bio part 2, part 3
  MSLN: Post-StrikerS/OVA: RevivalS UNDER INDEFINITE HIATUS
  - Aurion Meets Caster part 1, part 2, part 3.1, part 3.2, part 4.1, part 4.2, part 4.3
  - A Visit to RF6 part 1.1, part 1.2,part 2.1,part 2.2,part 3.1, part 3.2, part 3.3, part 4.1, part 4.2, part 4.3, part 4.4
  - Chapter Pending
  Aces: Resolution,
  The Other Side of Identity: Deals,
  Enter: Sophia,
  Tyrfing: The Baptism of Fire

• Rebuilt of Aurion Dauer
  Part 1, Part 2
  
• ~Phantom Squadron~
  • Brevis Altezza
  • Cressida Rush
  • Vinson Forenza
  • Liana Forsa
  • Barabus
• ~A Glimpse into the Past: Before MSLNanoha~
  • Almaria Corvette
    - Character Bio Part 2
  • Aurion Dauer (17 years ago)
• Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha OVA: GenerationS: A Story of Dreams, Love and Revenge
  - OVA Trailer
  • Grandis Lacetti (Scrapped Version)
  • Rebuilt of Grandis Lacetti
    - Chapters 1.1, 1.2, 2.1, 2.2, 2.1-.2 Omake
• Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha: GuardianS: From the Edge (Manga and Sound Stage)
  - Chapters 1

Whew. Here it is. Just link it here, Erio. I'll do the updates.

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Oops
I thought the meaning of Shooting Arts was literally what the name was....but it still works for Koji, doesn't it?

Never trust Japanese for literalism. I mean, the moment the manga revealed that Shooting Art was the family's (( Nakajima's )) arts, I knew it was Japanese being Japanese again. There is absolutely nothing about the knuckles or rollers being "shooting", and it's even worse since Shooting Arts is purely for the leg side. I mean, at least the knuckles have some attack called Shoot or Cannon...

Unless you intend to give Koji some form of leg-booster mobility device... otherwise it's more natural you change the name of his actual arts.

And if we want to be picky, the Ion Canon dodge for Ex-Trieze is one that isn't canon with how Jail treats his stuff. He never removes Numbers and throws the ordering label to the one who wakes up first , since he doesn't care who wakes up first, what's important to him is the creation date as he sees. So, in actuality, even if Ex-Trieze never wakes up, she'll permanently be XIII while Ginga gets XIV and so on. He's not one for distinct in numberings.

Because by your approach, Cinque is Quattro, and Quattro is Ex-Quattro lol.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by USB500

1: *flails arms* but they're made for each other!

*moments of silence*

What?

Oho?
Soulmates, huh? Hikki sure has a lot if 'em. Just how many sould does he have?!

Halp! Author needs ideas for this scenario. Suggestions to make it even more awesome?

P/S: don't read posts before it.

[Chaos]ION CANNON READY.[/Chaos]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Well, we actually never saw her defending against something as well as engaging in close combat And there're different kinds of tests for mage ranks so SS doesn't have to mean this level of proficiency in most of the fields.

A possible valid point. But I'm thinking more on the lines of imperative basic capabilities befitting of a rank. I don't believe the TSAB would be so lenient as to let someone who can't defend against relatively mediocre attacks be ranked SS regardless of how powerful they are. It's a practicality policy. Same goes for at least minimal capabilities to survive, if not avoid in near-basic close combat.

This translation and some lines in the spoilers made me worry a bit ...

Plus, there's the part about the song "Pray" to be played at a 'strong' moment.

Quite unlikely to see it imho ...

Ah well. A guy can hope...

Originally Posted by Satty

Man..it's hard juggling an OC story, a cross over, another profile, summer assignment, and a brother who wants to play around. I'll just give previews for now...After watching Rush Hour 3, I want to work on these now...

Spoiler for SearcherS/part 5 preview:

“Well…if it isn’t Satoshi.” Aurion said after looking out from anyone who was going to talk to him. “Hey there, Aurion.” Satoshi replied. “So, Armay’s here too…” he noticed, and started to do his trick. Taking his left arm off, he managed to terrify Satsuki, Margaret, and Armay, while Vincent looked in surprise and Satoshi chuckling. “Aurion-sama!” Armay replied, scared and mad. “Do you HAVE to do that when I’m around?”

“It’s funny to see your face when I do this; never gets old.” he said happily, chuckling to himself. “How did he-?” Vincent said out loud, surprised. “W-who the hell is this guy?” Aurion, seeing that his prank worked, revealed his own prosthetic arm and Device. “Well, that was fun, right Cipher?”

“[Yeah. It scared all of them, and you had a kick out of it. Very cold, there.]” Cipher replied. “I still wonder how you do that…” Satoshi said, wanting to know. “I just don’t know…” Aurion replied.

“Wait…you mean that he’s the guy that’s supposed to repair my arm?” Vincent said again, shocked. “Yeah, he is. Why? You have any problems with him?” Satoshi replied. “It’s either working with him or letting your Device stay in disrepair.” Vincent just shuddered a bit. “He’s the best chance I got. I’m gonna regret this….” he thought.

LOL! Certainly fitting.
Why not? A researcher with a prosthetic arm to rebuild and improve another prosthetic arm. I believe some really substantial upgrades are in order! Do you want me to help?

And it's good to know that Cipher is also responsive to him.

Wait a sec.... Did Armay just address Aurion with '-sama'?!