2011-10-08, 19:00 | Link #2401 | |
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Candidates: Nohonhon, Kanalin, and Kishisato. But yeah, my current instinct point at Nohonhon, which will be very hilarious as result due to their contrast nature. On the other hand, Nohonhon is a Chekhov's Gunman in later volume...
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2011-10-08, 19:19 | Link #2404 |
Some say I'm the Reverse
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Kanalin's perfect, seeing that she has quite a few speaking lines in the anime and you can actually get a handle on her character from what's been shown so far. Kishisato is cute but doesn't really have a fleshed-out character...
...and let's face it. Maoka would probably be stressed out dealing with Nonohon...Kanalin would be a lot better as a foil to Madoka at this point
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2011-10-08, 19:21 | Link #2405 | |
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2011-10-08, 20:02 | Link #2406 | |
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Karon: Hehehe Irish: What's so funny? Karon: Oh...nothing!hehehehe. I'm just posting something. Irish:Somethings up. *Irish walks into class* Class: YURIKO-CHAN! Irish: What the-! Erika: Karon-chan uploaded a picture of you dressed in our uniform, it's very popular. Irish: KARON! EDIT: @Zero- After the fight with Rin how experienced is Ichika at piloting already? Can you or anybody give an accurate assessment. |
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2011-10-08, 20:20 | Link #2407 | |
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Canon!Madoka: "Ichika is ME" Anyway, after fight with Rin, Ichika still as dumb as ever, until Charles gave him some pointer of course....
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2011-10-08, 20:28 | Link #2408 | |
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Maybe I can have Canon!Madoka show up in Twin!Madoka's daydream. The fight that ensues will be full of lolz. |
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2011-10-08, 20:34 | Link #2409 | ||
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(As you know, a Harem hero must be at the very least as good as his harem, or else fans will ridicule him or even replace him with Stu character outright) Since it's a stealth-killing move, it'll be worse if Canon!Ichika can react... maybe you can consider the terrain as well (while I.S. can look 360 degrees, it's still awkward for the pilot to comprehend looking 'behind'). Quote:
I, for one, command you to write that!
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2011-10-08, 20:40 | Link #2410 | |
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Sound okay with you? BTW- Canon!Madoka will make an appearance master. *entranced by Geass* |
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2011-10-08, 21:07 | Link #2411 |
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"This match was over before it started!" Cecilia declared, hefting the sniper cannon to her shoulder. "I sorry, my dear Colonist, the Cup is mine!"
Karon grinned as she flipped the buster rifle from under her arm and locked it into firing position. "I'll show you that a superior unit has its limits when it comes up against a superior pilot!" "This will be a match to remember... FIGHT!" ------ I think I'll find some place to use this some day... As well as steal the rest of Aznable's lines. And so Karon adds more win photos to the class page.
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2011-10-08, 21:42 | Link #2416 | |
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1.) You have to know how a girl thinks and feels if you're going to write from a girl's perspective 2.) You really have to look into GOOD romance books or stories to see how they're structured and flow.
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2011-10-08, 21:52 | Link #2418 | |
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@Eratas Spend your time and read/ watch Kimi ni Todoke... I guarantee the quality of characters and plot. (on a side note, you might want to call a dentist and prepare for insulin injection)
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2011-10-08, 22:01 | Link #2420 | |
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Well, I was lucky that I was relatively indiscriminate for any form of Fiction (except for long running, repetitive shounen manga). Very often I alternate between GRIMDARK Seinen, FABULOUS Shonen comedy, and DIABETIC Shoujo. That'll help expanding your views.
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