(L) Rosario+Vampire Manga

[Magin]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

@Magin: Then does making a new rival OC (not a romance one) for Moka in a new story frustrate you then?

Hpw should I put it when it comes to OC's... I guess the best way is to say I don't mind them, as long at they're well-written. I probably should've made this clearer, kyero, but your character just isn't what I define as well-written. I'll give you this: you're slowly improving upon him, but you can't just go around inserting him into random situations and trying to work from there. You have to put him into a single situation (preferably one that's not canon for a reason I'll explain in a minute), and stick with that situation to develop him

And the situations themselves can't just be anything... there has to be a valid reason (note- for all you guys going, then what the heck is with Water Bride, well... there's a real purpose behind it outside of another member to the harem, but you won't get to this purpose until ch. 5), and it can't be one we know is going to be resolved within the next two or three chapters. It's far more preferable if you create an OC for non-canon situation, because that way it gives you plenty of room to do character development, and keep people from going "But that's not how this was/is going to be resolved!"

Another problem with OC's- you have to make sure the story doesn't entirely revolve around them. They can have plenty of screentime in the fic, as long as you remember to give just as much screentime to the canon characters, because that's what people are reading for- your take on the canon characters (there are exceptions to this, but I'm not going to go into details on those right now)

And now to elevate Kyero- one of the ideas involving your OC and Mizore was actually a pretty good idea. (I'll let you know via PM if you don't want the others to know right now). So what I would suggest is taking this idea, developing it further, and then going and asking people like Tempest or even myself to help you out on it (we may be Inner Moka fans, but we like to write anyways). Remember, as I've stated before, OC's can be good, but you need to develop them and make sure they're not DeMs, Mary/Gary Stu's, etc.

phew... that's enough of a rant from me

[Kyero Fox]

I said I was workin on a new Fan Fic from Scratch, it takes place after either the Mizore Arc or after Season1 what do you think? anyways, Kyero along with 2 others become students in the school. Kyero,a girl and another male. The other male goes after Moka and Kurumu while the little girl tries to steal Tsukune while Kyero is there just to keep a Eye on the News paper club and seems to know Gin a bit.

I won't go into big details but this time I'm making it where it revolves around them while Kyero's a little moon that revolves around them like how the Moon revolves around the earth at the same time the earth revolves around the sun.

if it's after the Mizore arc Kyero turns out to be a Spy from the Organization to keep watch on Tsukune and the others.

[kenjiharima]

quick question for all the guys here reading and watching R+V. In the last few days did you guys had a dream of ANYthing R+V related? Just curious...

[Kyero Fox]

Originally Posted by kenjiharima

quick question for all the guys here reading and watching R+V. In the last few days did you guys had a dream of ANYthing R+V related? Just curious...

a few days back I did, but no one gave a Rats ass and ignored the post completely

[kenjiharima]

Originally Posted by Kyero Fox

a few days back I did, but no one gave a Rats ass and ignored the post completely

Yeah I remember. Maybe ignoring your post lead me to dream about R+V...

I would also like to hear from the rest of the guys if they did...

[Kyero Fox]

like I said it was very simular to episode 10

[RadiantBeam]

You're all wrong.

Karua took an interest in his abilities and comes back to train him.

*shot*

[Tempest35]

Oh my, Kalua is stealing her younger sister's man?? NUH UH~! Oh No she didn't!! (Jerry! Jerry!)

...I'm brain-fried...

[Magin]

Um... if Karua, for whatever reason this side of the moon decided to steal Tsukune, I don't think there's much Moka could do about it that would also allow her to stay alive

[kenjiharima]

Kalua only does one thing to fulfill the mission that is asked of her.

[Kyero Fox]

I want Gin to do somethin bad ass for once, im getting tired of him being such a small small small character.

[GMunny]

Originally Posted by kenjiharima

quick question for all the guys here reading and watching R+V. In the last few days did you guys had a dream of ANYthing R+V related? Just curious...

i dream about r + v everynight....

Originally Posted by Kyero Fox

I want Gin to do somethin bad ass for once, im getting tired of him being such a small small small character.

yeah that'd be cool, like if gin were to come out of no where and defeat that fiance dude, and kaula....

[Tempest35]

*snickers* That would so work...if both Miyabi and Kalua were both deathly allergic to dog fur.

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Tempest35

*snickers* That would so work...if both Miyabi and Kalua were both deathly allergic to dog fur.

Or they had major issues with drool.

[yongshun]

I Picked up volume 4 and they screwed up labling for Moka and Kurumu under Kurumu they had vampire and under Moka it was Succubus. lol Oh you will love what they call Mizore's species.

[Kyero Fox]

Originally Posted by yongshun

I Picked up volume 4 and they screwed up labling for Moka and Kurumu under Kurumu they had vampire and under Moka it was Succubus. lol Oh you will love what they call Mizore's species.

huh? and what do they call them, Ice Females? lol

[dosetsu]

Finally stopped being lazy and scanned the last of volume 2.

I love this picture.

Spoiler for Loli:

I'm personally of the opinion, he should draw Moka with glasses permanently from now on.

Spoiler for Moka:

For the Mizore clut.

Spoiler for Mizore:

[kenjiharima]

Originally Posted by yongshun

I Picked up volume 4 and they screwed up labling for Moka and Kurumu under Kurumu they had vampire and under Moka it was Succubus. lol Oh you will love what they call Mizore's species.

Better check out my local stores then. Damn...they got it all wrong! Hope theres no censor.

[kaizerknight01]

Hey any of you guys seen R+V II 4 comas ???? I've trying to find them ....

[dosetsu]

Talking about the omakes at the end of the volumes? You can get them from AnimeSigma dot net, it's just the first volume so far though, translator is busy.