Syosetsuka ni Narou Discussion Thread

[omegasereon]

Originally Posted by bludvein

No there's not. I think Hongfire has some general ATLAS dictionaries for visual novels that you can use, but nothing specialized. If you want to refine it you need to add definitions one by one.

Yup, I usually add substitutions for the names so it'll be easier to read.

[Deltoren]

Originally Posted by BW95

Yeah. That's what I actually meant. A power related to words. Predictable and truly monstrous.

With these heroines, particularly Rose, we might hit the uncanny valley. Empathy takes a sharp drop just before something reaches being human and rises again as it get closer. How are they power-wise?

I was referring to how some of these would-be jerks rampaged and destroyed the village. Were their motivations ever explained?

personally i think the mc from re monster is the most op character i have ever encountered

[bakato]

Originally Posted by Deltoren

personally i think the mc from re monster is the most op character i have ever encountered

Hey. Absorption abilities are the very definition of cheat.

[Deltoren]

Originally Posted by amatsunagi

http://syosetu.com/

"Syosetsuka ni narou" (小説家になろう) or translated as "Let's become a novelist" is a web-novel posting site. With some publishing light novel companies printed several titles, I think this site need to be recognized more. Who knows? you might find any interesting title here and then find that its adapted into other media (Hopefully). Some titles from this site that has been published: Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei, Log Horizon, Tate no Yuusha no Nariagari, Next Life, Mushoku Tensei -Isekai Ittara Honki Dasu, Re: Zero Kara Hajimaru Isekai Seikatsu, Nee-chan wa Chuunibyou!, etc etc

This thread is for discussing several other titles that doesn't have their specific thread. Feel free to discuss, suggest, introduce, or talk anything else about Syosetsuka here.

As a start, I'll introduce one title which is quite new and I really loved this one

Original Title: モンスターのご主人様
Romaji: Monster no Goshujin-sama
Alternative Title: Master of Monster
Author: Chocola Mint (ショコラ・ミント)
Status: Started on 2013/12/14 - ongoing
Link: Here



Another Tenshou, I wonder why this theme of "transported to another world" is so popular? I also wonder why some titles have similar setting? but I don't care about it anymore, as long as the story good, I'm in! To me, reading a story is like eating a cake (I love cake~ ) as long as it's delicious, the topping doesn't really matter be it tenshou, tensei, or Isekai

Why do I like this title? Fantasy is a man romance they say, and then the theme about human hearts, and then the Heroines are just cute~~

My search keywords usually are: fantasy, ongoing, arranging from title with the most evaluation or arranging from title with the most unique users.

EDIT:

Spoiler for translation for easier narou page navigation:

Here

is there an english translation of this anywhere or do i got to use GT?

[travelingbum]

enjoy using GT or whatever you use.

[Deltoren]

Originally Posted by travelingbum

enjoy using GT or whatever you use.

well lfuckkkkkkkkkkkkk

[duburu]

Originally Posted by travelingbum

enjoy using GT or whatever you use.

my atlas is the same translation as google translate???!?!?!?!?!

[omegasereon]

For 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処？:

Spoiler for spoiler:

Finally Fox returns and Ori chan returns. Obviously this is a trap by the demon king's aide. Lets see what happens next.

[amatsunagi]

Nyanyanya~ finally a calm moment where updates are slowing down. Now! what should I talk about today~?

Original Title: ネカマしようと思ったら、異世界転生して女になったんだが！
Romaji: Nekama Shiyou to Omottara, Isekai Tenseishite Onna ni Nattandaga!
Alternative Title: Just As I thought of going as Tranny, I Reincarnated to Another World as a Girl!
Author: Seto Yuuichi (瀬戸悠一)
Status: Started on 2014/05/17 - ongoing
Link: Here

The story tells about a university student, Arisugawa Akito, fed up with the world and become a shut-in, spending his days playing Online games. One day, when he is surfing the net, he found a game with the title "New Life in Another World". Akito likes playing MMORPG, especially with fantasy setting, plus for a while, he have this one thing he want to try: playing as a female PC. Akito then quickly create his character which turns out like this:

Name: Alice
Age: 15
Race: Half Elf
Gender: Female
Appearance: Straight silver hair (platinum blonde), Amber colored eyes, height around 160 cm and slender, reserved breast size.
Class: Apprentice Magician.
Stats: Strength (0), Stamina (1), Endurance (0), Agility (4), Wisdom (5).
Special Ability: [Potential], [Double Cast], [Incantation Shortening]

After that, a confirmation window appear with this question: "do you believe in the existence of another world?". Akito answered "yes" and his view blackened...

......waking out and found himself as a Female PC he had created earlier!

At first Akito, or Alice is confused but after sorting out his situation, he (she?) decided to live in this world, acting as "the cutest girl ever", or maybe even "become the strongest in this world". But there's problem here: Alice doesn't have any skill or any equipment, and currently encountered a monster! "rather... eeeeee what's this, no way, so cuuuute!!". The monster: Petit Panther level is just 1 but but Alice strength is 0, so there's no way Alice can beat it! Just when he he is about to get chomped, Alice is saved by a passer by adventurer. The man kindly guide Alice to the nearest town, Rinalle. This is where Alice new journey start...

First off, since Alice gender is female, with more female character appearing, the force of Yuri is very strong here, but the soul of Alice is actually a male, so it can be count as harem? Anyway, with the simple and already used plot device, this work resort to its character as its main strong point: Alice who is very girly (despite being a man inside) and mostly unreliable, but when the time comes, he can show his manly side; Adventurer Shion, who acts as a wildly cool reliable big sister for Alice; slave Iria, who sworn her loyalty to Alice and become her elegant cool bodyguard; Blacksmith Sayla, who adore and view Alice as a big brother(?); Witch Tilbell, who becomes Alice mentor and is the loli (babaa) of the group. You can expect the adventure of these flowers to be light-hearted. 'Though, it is not all comedy and not honobono as well, the story keep moving with steady pace, with some serious part like: Alice trying to appreciate more about the world and his life or Til who is chasing someone and fix her mistake, etc. By the way, Alice kind of remind me to Negi Springfield from Negima series.

Enjoyed this one and expected a good development. Those who need an easy read and like some cute (yuri) moment, then check this out!

[amatsunagi]

Original Title: そだ☆シス
Romaji: Soda☆Sis!
Alternative Title: Bring up Lovely Sister!
Author: Mie
Status: Started on 2012/11/20 - ongoing
Link: Here

This is the everyday life story of Jasper Auriol and people all around him.

Uuh... well, that one sentence is enough for a synopsis I guess~~. In short this is another cute comedy story for relaxation. Forget those cliches about Hero or Demon King (although protagonist is a tensei). I love reading about Jasper X Celestia, the perfect couple! Lu and Lili are both very cute as well and an instant hau omochikaeri~ my favorite moment is when Jasper is pregnant ROFL.

[bakato]

Originally Posted by amatsunagi

Nyanyanya~ finally a calm moment where updates are slowing down. Now! what should I talk about today~?

Original Title: ネカマしようと思ったら、異世界転生して女になったんだが！
Romaji: Nekama Shiyou to Omottara, Isekai Tenseishite Onna ni Nattandaga!
Alternative Title: Just As I thought of going as Tranny, I Reincarnated to Another World as a Girl!
Author: Seto Yuuichi (瀬戸悠一)
Status: Started on 2014/05/17 - ongoing
Link: Here

The story tells about a university student, Arisugawa Akito, fed up with the world and become a shut-in, spending his days playing Online games. One day, when he is surfing the net, he found a game with the title "New Life in Another World". Akito likes playing MMORPG, especially with fantasy setting, plus for a while, he have this one thing he want to try: playing as a female PC. Akito then quickly create his character which turns out like this:

Name: Alice
Age: 15
Race: Half Elf
Gender: Female
Appearance: Straight silver hair (platinum blonde), Amber colored eyes, height around 160 cm and slender, reserved breast size.
Class: Apprentice Magician.
Stats: Strength (0), Stamina (1), Endurance (0), Agility (4), Wisdom (5).
Special Ability: [Potential], [Double Cast], [Incantation Shortening]

After that, a confirmation window appear with this question: "do you believe in the existence of another world?". Akito answered "yes" and his view blackened...

......waking out and found himself as a Female PC he had created earlier!

At first Akito, or Alice is confused but after sorting out his situation, he (she?) decided to live in this world, acting as "the cutest girl ever", or maybe even "become the strongest in this world". But there's problem here: Alice doesn't have any skill or any equipment, and currently encountered a monster! "rather... eeeeee what's this, no way, so cuuuute!!". The monster: Petit Panther level is just 1 but but Alice strength is 0, so there's no way Alice can beat it! Just when he he is about to get chomped, Alice is saved by a passer by adventurer. The man kindly guide Alice to the nearest town, Rinalle. This is where Alice new journey start...

First off, since Alice gender is female, with more female character appearing, the force of Yuri is very strong here, but the soul of Alice is actually a male, so it can be count as harem? Anyway, with the simple and already used plot device, this work resort to its character as its main strong point: Alice who is very girly (despite being a man inside) and mostly unreliable, but when the time comes, he can show his manly side; Adventurer Shion, who acts as a wildly cool reliable big sister for Alice; slave Iria, who sworn her loyalty to Alice and become her elegant cool bodyguard; Blacksmith Sayla, who adore and view Alice as a big brother(?); Witch Tilbell, who becomes Alice mentor and is the loli (babaa) of the group. You can expect the adventure of these flowers to be light-hearted. 'Though, it is not all comedy and not honobono as well, the story keep moving with steady pace, with some serious part like: Alice trying to appreciate more about the world and his life or Til who is chasing someone and fix her mistake, etc. By the way, Alice kind of remind me to Negi Springfield from Negima series.

Enjoyed this one and expected a good development. Those who need an easy read and like some cute (yuri) moment, then check this out!

Fascinating.

[youreka]

i'll rec 1 title, nothing new basically just mix another isekai story, but the story quiet good and heart warming harem fantasy.

Title : デスマーチからはじまる異世界狂想曲
Romaji : Desumāchi kara hajimaru i sekai kyōsōkyoku sakusha
Link

Ichiro Suzuki is subcontractor outsourcing programer in company that create browser PC game. after finishing his work and send it via email he decide to sleep in the desk, suddenly when he wake up he in wilderness that resemble grand canyon.

he think its dream, why its dream? he remember sleep in desk and see in the corner of vision there an "icon" and "menu" that resemble his game that he currently work for. because there nothing to do he decide to explore the "menu screen" and he find his stat and name, there he find a disposable large scale magic "meteor rain" that can be used three times. well he decide to use meteor rain because nothing to do and faint to be blown by explosion dust, when he woke up its massive lv up and item.

the MC is lv 1 that have ability like game character "easy mode game like character" where he can get skill when he do something, he can get hostile skill if he get hit but cant get hostile unique skill. in middle of story there explanation that its a fantasy world where a reincarnation and summon to another world is common, few of them have cheat and unique like ability. there are hero , demon and satan, and MC will meet a hero that been summoned by god or meet another reincarnation person or summoned person that been summon by people in that world.

there magic gun/rifle/machine gun/cannon/rail gun but its categories like antique that work for smallfry and not very effective to monster lv 50+ that have thick skin or barrier.
even tough there are many history that summon and reincarnation is common, its world that modern technology rarely been seen, that where the mystery lies.

[amatsunagi]

Originally Posted by youreka

i'll rec 1 title, nothing new basically just mix another tensei story, but the story quiet good and heart warming harem fantasy.

Title : デスマーチからはじまる異世界狂想曲
Romaji : Desumāchi kara hajimaru i sekai kyōsōkyoku sakusha
Link

Ichiro Suzuki is subcontractor outsourcing programer in company that create browser PC game. after finishing his work and send it via email he decide to sleep in the desk, suddenly when he wake up he in wilderness that resemble grand canyon.

he think its dream, why its dream? he remember sleep in desk and see in the corner of vision there an "icon" and "menu" that resemble his game that he currently work for. because there nothing to do he decide to explore the "menu screen" and he find his stat and name, there he find a disposable large scale magic "meteor rain" that can be used three times. well he decide to use meteor rain because nothing to do and faint to be blown by explosion dust, when he woke up its massive lv up and item.

the MC is lv 1 that have ability like game character "easy mode game like character" where he can get skill when he do something, he can get hostile skill if he get hit but cant get hostile unique skill. in middle of story there explanation that its a fantasy world where a reincarnation and summon to another world is common, few of them have cheat and unique like ability. there are hero , demon and satan, and MC will meet a hero that been summoned by god or meet another reincarnation person or summoned person that been summon by people in that world.

there magic gun/rifle/machine gun/cannon/rail gun but its categories like antique that work for smallfry and not very effective to monster lv 50+ that have thick skin or barrier.
even tough there are many history that summon and reincarnation is common, its world that modern technology rarely been seen, that where the mystery lies.

Looking at the illustration, My complain is just that Pochi and Tama isn't loli enough cause in my mind they are at least on elementary level :T
As for Satou, he's cool and a gentlemen~

[NovelReader]

Originally Posted by youreka

i'll rec 1 title, nothing new basically just mix another tensei story, but the story quiet good and heart warming harem fantasy.

Title : デスマーチからはじまる異世界狂想曲
Romaji : Desumāchi kara hajimaru i sekai kyōsōkyoku sakusha
Link

Ichiro Suzuki is subcontractor outsourcing programer in company that create browser PC game. after finishing his work and send it via email he decide to sleep in the desk, suddenly when he wake up he in wilderness that resemble grand canyon.

he think its dream, why its dream? he remember sleep in desk and see in the corner of vision there an "icon" and "menu" that resemble his game that he currently work for. because there nothing to do he decide to explore the "menu screen" and he find his stat and name, there he find a disposable large scale magic "meteor rain" that can be used three times. well he decide to use meteor rain because nothing to do and faint to be blown by explosion dust, when he woke up its massive lv up and item.

the MC is lv 1 that have ability like game character "easy mode game like character" where he can get skill when he do something, he can get hostile skill if he get hit but cant get hostile unique skill. in middle of story there explanation that its a fantasy world where a reincarnation and summon to another world is common, few of them have cheat and unique like ability. there are hero , demon and satan, and MC will meet a hero that been summoned by god or meet another reincarnation person or summoned person that been summon by people in that world.

there magic gun/rifle/machine gun/cannon/rail gun but its categories like antique that work for smallfry and not very effective to monster lv 50+ that have thick skin or barrier.
even tough there are many history that summon and reincarnation is common, its world that modern technology rarely been seen, that where the mystery lies.

Looks interesting, will give it a read later.

[travelingbum]

thought we already had a post somewhere on this forum if not in this thread but another, for death march.

[youreka]

Originally Posted by travelingbum

thought we already had a post somewhere on this forum if not in this thread but another, for death march.

yup nothing new, there many tensei criteria in here so i though i'll rec in here too

[bludvein]

Spoiler for 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処？:

Ah, so the scythe appears(and in not too impractical a fashion). I wondered if it would. That's a rather horrifying attack, since it doesn't matter where it hits. Miasma operation is better for killing things, but she pissed him off. Fox is completely going the grim reaper route.

Wonder what the next upgrade will be?

[NovelReader]

Originally Posted by bludvein

Spoiler for 異世界来ちゃったけど帰り道何処？:

Ah, so the scythe appears(and in not too impractical a fashion). I wondered if it would. That's a rather horrifying attack, since it doesn't matter where it hits. Miasma operation is better for killing things, but she pissed him off. Fox is completely going the grim reaper route.

Wonder what the next upgrade will be?

Spoiler for :

Yep and author just brought back the hope of a Shiori ending.

[duburu]

Originally Posted by youreka

i'll rec 1 title, nothing new basically just mix another tensei story, but the story quiet good and heart warming harem fantasy.

Title : デスマーチからはじまる異世界狂想曲
Romaji : Desumāchi kara hajimaru i sekai kyōsōkyoku sakusha
Link

Ichiro Suzuki is subcontractor outsourcing programer in company that create browser PC game. after finishing his work and send it via email he decide to sleep in the desk, suddenly when he wake up he in wilderness that resemble grand canyon.

he think its dream, why its dream? he remember sleep in desk and see in the corner of vision there an "icon" and "menu" that resemble his game that he currently work for. because there nothing to do he decide to explore the "menu screen" and he find his stat and name, there he find a disposable large scale magic "meteor rain" that can be used three times. well he decide to use meteor rain because nothing to do and faint to be blown by explosion dust, when he woke up its massive lv up and item.

the MC is lv 1 that have ability like game character "easy mode game like character" where he can get skill when he do something, he can get hostile skill if he get hit but cant get hostile unique skill. in middle of story there explanation that its a fantasy world where a reincarnation and summon to another world is common, few of them have cheat and unique like ability. there are hero , demon and satan, and MC will meet a hero that been summoned by god or meet another reincarnation person or summoned person that been summon by people in that world.

there magic gun/rifle/machine gun/cannon/rail gun but its categories like antique that work for smallfry and not very effective to monster lv 50+ that have thick skin or barrier.
even tough there are many history that summon and reincarnation is common, its world that modern technology rarely been seen, that where the mystery lies.

tell me more abouy this cheat ability

[opMC-luver]

I was just told of an interesting read that I'm gonna start.
It's called Slave harem in the labyrinth of the otherworld/Isekai meikyuu de dorei harem wo
It's about a man who is bullied, everybody ignore him and when he thinks about kill himself he found a website where he can choose skills and go to another world but he thinks that is a game and when he finish choosing the skills he is sent to another world.

https://drive.google.com/folderview?...nM&usp=sharing

the raws: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n4259s/

would anyone be willing to translate?