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Naoto · 2010-05-11, 04:58

Evil Rick: thank you, i edited them. Can you see them now?

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is Hitagi's school uniform ok?

ganbaru · 2010-05-11, 06:13

Ichigo-Sora I think than the lightning could use some work.
CMHerrera the yellow ting could be more transparent.
Rikimtasu It fit more the theme but if you want to cut the head you should use a border.
Marcus H. something is bothering me about the background, either the scale or the kind of artwork
Naoto it's better now.

Marcus H. · 2010-05-11, 07:47

I applied the Watercolor effect for the background. Hmm, I'll post v2 without the Watercolor effect later.

Namiey · 2010-05-11, 09:02

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Originally Posted by Naoto

Evil Rick: thank you, i edited them. Can you see them now?

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is Hitagi's school uniform ok?

good one, i like it

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Originally Posted by katiemirmo

First Try

the picture is quite blurry, i guess you should sharpen it..

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Originally Posted by Mekdra

hi hi here my firt try

tsugoeee if it is difficult this competition I have many signatures of seifukus

i like your style, nice one

but save it as jpg, instead of gif..

White Manju Bun · 2010-05-11, 11:50

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Originally Posted by Solace

I could accept males with blazers maybe,

So Tomoya from Clannad or Kyon and Koizumi from Haruhi would be fine as long as their in uniform?

Such as

Evil Rick · 2010-05-11, 13:04

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Originally Posted by Rikimtasu

Giving up my previous entry and make this:

I need to think a good font to fit in this sig.Any idea?

It's a nice idea buy it kinds of looking pretty simple, nothing "shiking" or to atractive, perhaps a background and some more efects would help this improve a lot.

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Originally Posted by katiemirmo

And hell yes, this theme is really hard. ><
anyway, this is probably a seifuku now..since it's from To Heart ..

Overall it's good, exept for those dark areas at the sides, I don't really find them usefull.

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Originally Posted by Marcus H.

My take on the theme. :3 Oh Kino~

Background is a picture of Ginza, which has totally gold vibes on the source pic (pun intended).

I like the idea of the sig, simple yet really atractive, those white spots at the corners (upper right side as example) kiil a bit the atractivness of the border style.

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Originally Posted by Naoto

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is Hitagi's school uniform ok?

Hmmm... didn't knew there were school uniforms in pink, looks more like a casual outfit but well, overall it's a really nice style of sig, very colorfull indeed.

**Solace** · 2010-05-11, 16:12

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Originally Posted by White Manju Bun

So Tomoya from Clannad or Kyon and Koizumi from Haruhi would be fine as long as their in uniform?

Well, seifuku is basically "school uniform" but it's most commonly associated with sailor uniforms. The male variation is gakuran.

So as long as the uniform is recognizable as something a student will wear, I have no issue with opening the theme up to male attire in the interest of giving contestants more options to work with.

White Manju Bun · 2010-05-11, 17:36

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Originally Posted by Solace

Well, seifuku is basically "school uniform" but it's most commonly associated with sailor uniforms. The male variation is gakuran.

Ah so kinda like what Watanuki wears in Holic, I gotcha.

Cyz · 2010-05-11, 18:56

My take on the new theme. It took me a while to come up with a proper text. If you're watching Angel Beats, I'm sure you get what my point is no?

ganbaru · 2010-05-11, 21:01

@Cyz the background look a bit too unclear compared to the render.

Haladflire65 · 2010-05-11, 21:07

I tried something totally new... Males in uniform are allowed, right?

Spoiler for Version w/o text on left:

This was my old entry.

C&C? Should I keep working at the new one and go with that? I've never tried that sort of thing before.

ganbaru · 2010-05-11, 21:20

@ Haladflire65, I wouls suggest you to stick to your old one as I wouldn't be surprised if your new one to be considered more as casual clothing school uniform.

Haladflire65 · 2010-05-11, 21:28

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Originally Posted by ganbaru

@ Haladflire65, I wouls suggest you to stick to your old one as I wouldn't be surprised if your new one to be considered more as casual clothing school uniform.

Well, it definitely is a uniform - of the Raira Gakuen in Durarara!. If I can prove that would I be able to use the entry? What do you mean by 'casual clothing school uniform'?

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In technical terms, old sig or new one?

Cyz · 2010-05-11, 21:33

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Originally Posted by ganbaru

@Cyz the background look a bit too unclear compared to the render.

Well, I kinda did it on purpose though. Anyway...

^ Version 2 of Yurippe

Haladflire65 · 2010-05-11, 22:01

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Originally Posted by Cyz

Well, I kinda did it on purpose though. Anyway...

^ Version 2 of Yurippe

The render seems a little blurry/low-quality to me, perhaps try sharpening it? Looks nice overall though.

I tried adding splatters to my new one, hoping I can submit it... If not I'll have to stick with Celty...

katiemirmo · 2010-05-12, 00:22

Final Entry

Rikimtasu · 2010-05-12, 02:38

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Originally Posted by Haladflire65

Well, it definitely is a uniform - of the Raira Gakuen in Durarara!. If I can prove that would I be able to use the entry? What do you mean by 'casual clothing school uniform'?

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In technical terms, old sig or new one?

Old one fit more on the theme,while the new one looked better.
May be you will need to pick another render?

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Originally Posted by Solace

So as long as the uniform is recognizable as something a student will wear, I have no issue with opening the theme up to male attire in the interest of giving contestants more options to work with.

Here a v2 of the sig.
Final Entry:

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Marcus H. · 2010-05-12, 03:33

Version 2:

Removed watercolor effect and nudged the image so that less of the white border gets covered up by the lights on the background. Seems that its color is too rusty though.

Patchy · 2010-05-12, 03:41

Here's my 1st try for my entry

I really need some c&c to improve it

Naoto · 2010-05-12, 04:15

I'll risk because of Hitagi's uniform, I don't have much time next weeks
this is my Final Entry

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2010-05-11, 06:13	Link #42
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	Ichigo-Sora I think than the lightning could use some work. CMHerrera the yellow ting could be more transparent. Rikimtasu It fit more the theme but if you want to cut the head you should use a border. Marcus H. something is bothering me about the background, either the scale or the kind of artwork Naoto it's better now. __________________

2010-05-11, 07:47	Link #43
Marcus H. Princess or Plunderer? Join Date: May 2009 Location: the Philippines	I applied the Watercolor effect for the background. Hmm, I'll post v2 without the Watercolor effect later. __________________ Continuing: White Sand Aquatope (6/24) and Vanitas S2 (0/12), The Vampire Dies in No Time S2 and Bofuri S2 (3/12). 2021: Restaurant to Another World S2 (3/12), takt Op. Destiny (1/12) and Taisho Maiden Fairy Tale (1/12). 2022: Yuusha Yamemasu (1/12), Kaguya-sama S3, Mob Psycho 100 III (Oct06), Bleach: 1000 Year Blood War (2/13) and Chainsaw Man (6/12). Spring 2023: Yamada-kun to Lv999 no Koi wo Suru, Kuma Kuma Kuma Bear Punch! (4/12), Skip to Loafer, Tonikaku Kawaii S2 (1/12), Otonari ni Ginga (5/12) and Kimi wa Houkago Insomnia (3/13). Contact me on Wikia and MyAnimeList. Anime List Status ~ Watching: 33. Completed: 468. Plan to watch: 39.

2010-05-11, 21:01	Link #50
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	@Cyz the background look a bit too unclear compared to the render. __________________

2010-05-11, 21:07	Link #51
Haladflire65 Senior Member Artist Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Normandy SR-2 Age: 29	I tried something totally new... Males in uniform are allowed, right? Spoiler for Version w/o text on left: This was my old entry. C&C? Should I keep working at the new one and go with that? I've never tried that sort of thing before. __________________ Last edited by Haladflire65; 2010-05-11 at 22:02.

2010-05-11, 21:20	Link #52
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	@ Haladflire65, I wouls suggest you to stick to your old one as I wouldn't be surprised if your new one to be considered more as casual clothing school uniform. __________________

2010-05-11, 04:58	Link #41
Naoto Here we go!? Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Vietnam Age: 28	Evil Rick: thank you, i edited them. Can you see them now? Spoiler for spoiler & quote: is Hitagi's school uniform ok?

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katiemirmo Chrome.o23 Graphic Designer Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Animanga Empire Age: 27	Final Entry __________________ FACEBOOK\|KAT'S GALLERY\|FANFICTIONS\|TUMBLR

2010-05-12, 03:33	Link #58
Marcus H. Princess or Plunderer? Join Date: May 2009 Location: the Philippines	Version 2: Removed watercolor effect and nudged the image so that less of the white border gets covered up by the lights on the background. Seems that its color is too rusty though. __________________ Continuing: White Sand Aquatope (6/24) and Vanitas S2 (0/12), The Vampire Dies in No Time S2 and Bofuri S2 (3/12). 2021: Restaurant to Another World S2 (3/12), takt Op. Destiny (1/12) and Taisho Maiden Fairy Tale (1/12). 2022: Yuusha Yamemasu (1/12), Kaguya-sama S3, Mob Psycho 100 III (Oct06), Bleach: 1000 Year Blood War (2/13) and Chainsaw Man (6/12). Spring 2023: Yamada-kun to Lv999 no Koi wo Suru, Kuma Kuma Kuma Bear Punch! (4/12), Skip to Loafer, Tonikaku Kawaii S2 (1/12), Otonari ni Ginga (5/12) and Kimi wa Houkago Insomnia (3/13). Contact me on Wikia and MyAnimeList. Anime List Status ~ Watching: 33. Completed: 468. Plan to watch: 39.

2010-05-12, 04:15	Link #60
Naoto Here we go!? Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Vietnam Age: 28	I'll risk because of Hitagi's uniform, I don't have much time next weeks this is my Final Entry Spoiler for spoilers & quotes: