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ganbaru · 2010-10-10, 11:30

@Urei way better
@ milan kyuubi the yellows leafs are still a issue

I removed the glow over the book and the quote:

I am still looking around for a good quote about autumn, but I might have to use french.

Hooves · 2010-10-10, 11:39

Urei: I like yours

milan kyuubi: Like ganbaru said, leaves are still an issue... Maybe an orange color will get them to look different? But then it might ruin the image...

milan kyuubi · 2010-10-10, 12:18

Changed more stuff

V4

c&c? Please

Hooves · 2010-10-10, 12:20

milan kyuubi: Much better there

Suomi · 2010-10-10, 12:55

Quote:

Originally Posted by Urei

V.2

Changed the color setup a bit, just to match the autumn feel. Mellowed a bit the color range and lessened the brightness of the violet. Also, the grains are not visible much better which turned out to be an additional bonus of this change. Thanks for all the opinions

Any C&C?

Spoiler for Previous Version:

@ganbaru - 5th version is the best though I can see that the glow might prove to be a tad too much for some poeple.
@milan kyuubi - V2 is better though I still have problems with sharpness and the font

@Cyz - I think it looks good but as ganbarou said, the 's' is not visible well enough.

I like it. Very nice text and feel.

Quote:

Originally Posted by milan kyuubi

Changed more stuff

V4

c&c? Please

I like the leaves--much better. However, I feel like the sig is stretched too wide and her angle is just a little too extreme.

@Ganbaru-senpai: I actually liked the glow...

Quotes:

'The spirits of the air live in the smells
Of fruit; and Joy, with pinions light, roves round
The gardens, or sits singing in the trees.'
~To Autumn, William Blake

other autumn poems:
http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/thema...umn_poems.html

GuiBleh · 2010-10-10, 12:56

First entry, still have a lot to work, but i have no time right now, C&C please

Cyz · 2010-10-10, 13:19

Quote:

Originally Posted by ganbaru

I removed the glow over the book and the quote:

I am still looking around for a good quote about autumn, but I might have to use french.

That's better IMO. It could work without the text but meh, it's your call right?

Quote:

Originally Posted by GuiBleh

First entry, still have a lot to work, but i have no time right now, C&C please

The girl needs to blend more.

Suomi · 2010-10-10, 13:55

Quote:

Originally Posted by GuiBleh

First entry, still have a lot to work, but i have no time right now, C&C please

Cute start, but agreed...she needs to blend more.

ver. 2: (I couldn't get a good gradient map, this is the closest I got...suggestions etc appreciated...)

Hooves · 2010-10-10, 14:40

Sworn: Its got an Autumn feel now

I cant see any problems with it. Edit: Just noticed... Its over the 50k limit

Suomi · 2010-10-10, 15:47

meh? any better?

C&C pls and tx

JRendell · 2010-10-10, 17:36

Here's draft #1. Some C&C would be nice.

I'm re-using a render which I used in April's SOTM, as it has a great Autumn feel. Hope this is ok.

CMSensei · 2010-10-10, 19:13

Decide to go with this, which border is better?

Ver. 1

Ver. 2

C&C plz

Suomi · 2010-10-10, 19:16

JR: It's nice, but could use a bit more blending.
CM: I think the border on v1 looks better.

Hooves · 2010-10-10, 19:17

JRendell: Its ok from my view

CMHerrera: I think Version 2's border looks better.

Haladflire65 · 2010-10-10, 19:27

@CM: I agree, I like border 1 better but I feel like Izaya holding a knife in the beautiful autumn trees is kind of random

CMSensei · 2010-10-10, 19:30

Quote:

Originally Posted by Haladflire65

@CM: I agree, I like border 1 better but I feel like Izaya holding a knife in the beautiful autumn trees is kind of random

Have you ever thought that he might be staring at a certain~♥ someone?

I think I'm gonna stick with it anyway.

ganbaru · 2010-10-10, 22:13

milan kyuubi the leafs in v4 look the best
GuiBleh need some blending
Sworn to Belive if gradiant map didn't work maybe photo filter, it did work for me
JRendell it could give more of a autumn feel with the right background, you shouldn't rely only on her leaf fan
CMHerrera I do prefer the background of v2

@Sworn to Belive thank for the link but I am thinkink more about not putting a quote, it would have to fit both the theme and the sig, which reduce much the possibility.

GuiBleh · 2010-10-11, 00:05

Spoiler for Previous:

C&C please

Yeah I still have to blend her more

tomorow i'll fix it

Namiey · 2010-10-11, 06:46

my entry: C&c?

milan kyuubi · 2010-10-11, 07:41

I add a quote

V5

c&c? Please

2010-10-10, 11:30	Link #41
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	@Urei way better @ milan kyuubi the yellows leafs are still a issue I removed the glow over the book and the quote: I am still looking around for a good quote about autumn, but I might have to use french. __________________

2010-10-10, 12:18	Link #43
milan kyuubi Call me MK! :) Graphic Designer Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: The top of the world. Age: 34	Changed more stuff V4 c&c? Please __________________ My Twitter account! *Thanks to* Godlike1889 *for the sig*!

2010-10-10, 15:47	Link #50
Suomi Kaiba Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: David Tennant's bedroom in the TARDIS	meh? any better? C&C pls and tx __________________ Last edited by Suomi; 2010-10-10 at 19:15.

2010-10-10, 19:16	Link #53
Suomi Kaiba Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: David Tennant's bedroom in the TARDIS	JR: It's nice, but could use a bit more blending. CM: I think the border on v1 looks better. __________________

2010-10-10, 19:27	Link #55
Haladflire65 Senior Member Artist Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Normandy SR-2 Age: 29	@CM: I agree, I like border 1 better but I feel like Izaya holding a knife in the beautiful autumn trees is kind of random __________________

2010-10-10, 12:56	Link #46
GuiBleh Member Join Date: Dec 2009	First entry, still have a lot to work, but i have no time right now, C&C please

2010-10-10, 17:36	Link #51
JRendell Manga Addict Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: England, UK Age: 32	Here's draft #1. Some C&C would be nice. I'm re-using a render which I used in April's SOTM, as it has a great Autumn feel. Hope this is ok.

2010-10-10, 22:13	Link #57
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	milan kyuubi the leafs in v4 look the best GuiBleh need some blending Sworn to Belive if gradiant map didn't work maybe photo filter, it did work for me JRendell it could give more of a autumn feel with the right background, you shouldn't rely only on her leaf fan CMHerrera I do prefer the background of v2 @Sworn to Belive thank for the link but I am thinkink more about not putting a quote, it would have to fit both the theme and the sig, which reduce much the possibility. __________________

2010-10-11, 00:05	Link #58
GuiBleh Member Join Date: Dec 2009	Spoiler for Previous: C&C please Yeah I still have to blend her more tomorow i'll fix it Last edited by GuiBleh; 2010-10-11 at 00:23.

2010-10-11, 06:46	Link #59
Namiey is busy... Artist Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Under the same sky that we watched Age: 28	my entry: C&c?

2010-10-11, 07:41	Link #60
milan kyuubi Call me MK! :) Graphic Designer Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: The top of the world. Age: 34	I add a quote V5 c&c? Please __________________ My Twitter account! *Thanks to* Godlike1889 *for the sig*!