2013-02-11, 23:46 | Link #40361 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Assuming I went for the crossover again
Sonic Diver Infinity It's external appearance mostly remain unchanged, however, it's internal system had undergo massive overhaul thanks to the technology shared by I.S. academy. Field projector and Passive Inertia Canceler had been applied to increase it's defense capability, while at the same time improving it's mobility to a whole new level. Reduced dependence and advanced nanomachine preservation system allow for tripled operation time as well as nanosuit recycling, reducing flight-hour cost to a quarter of the original model. T-301D2 Vic Viper Mk.II Is built by applying Vic Viper spare parts to outsized Sonic Diver/Infinite Stratos hybrid frame, allowing similar transformation to it's smaller brethren (Humanoid A-Mode and birdlike G-Mode). Possessing stronger defensive measure and higher mobility than that of original viper, it nevertheless came with a drawback, such as relative high maintenance cost, increased weight, and weaker firepower.
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2013-02-11, 23:56 | Link #40362 | |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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I might need to come up with something better later... Then again, the reason why you don't look down is because when it comes to the IS, you seek to do something different than merely making a war machine like the others, something that's not what the IS is intended for in the context of the status quo.
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2013-02-12, 00:01 | Link #40363 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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@stratos:
"I'm no hero. I didn't care about anything when I fought. I just wanted to see tomorrow and forget yesterday. I couldn't even see today. When the next day comes, the process repeats and I'm faced with this meaningless cycle."-- |
2013-02-12, 02:01 | Link #40366 | |
Electrosphere
Join Date: Mar 2011
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A little "teaser" about my work.
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2013-02-12, 03:46 | Link #40368 |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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@Strigon
It does smell like a wee bit like angst at a distance. Can't say much but I'd think there's definitely some tragic elements there. Kissing Ichika at first sight aside, she does seem genuinely caring towards her own IS' AI that she regards it as a human companion. Finally done marathon-ing SAO. My my, it's quite intense towards the end... What's the worst damage that can be inflicted if a sixteen year-old punches someone in the face with armor-padded knuckles? By "armor-padded" I mean titanium-alloy armor-padded.
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2013-02-12, 04:02 | Link #40370 |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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I'll have to read again for that. Only thing I could gather is that she's so responsible that she's willing to put herself in harm's way, with only an IS-scaled weapon, to protect the Silver Gospel from Madoka(Who was in an IS during then).
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2013-02-12, 04:07 | Link #40371 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2011
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Well, alright then.
I have some things in mind with her. The main problem I have with her is her exact age. It's stated that she's in her 20s, and if it turns out that she's 21-22 years of age, then I think I can go on with that. 23 might be really pushing it... If she's older, then I'll just have to drop the ideas I have for her. |
2013-02-12, 04:15 | Link #40373 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2011
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I would, but now that my fiction's going to tie into the actual canon storyline, the last thing I want to do is stray off of it. Basically, I want to be as close to the canon as possible.
So, have you seen the "Enigma-Gears" info a few pages back? |
2013-02-12, 07:20 | Link #40376 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Nope, nothing here. It sounds like something out of Kingdom Heart though. Can't get the feeling of direction you are heading or planning to do.
I probably need a chapter rather than Teaser.
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2013-02-12, 10:20 | Link #40377 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Point of reference to anyone writing a drinking scene without having ever drunk... Sake burns in your stomach and not in your throat. Not sure if it's sweet sake or normal sake but it goes down like juice until it reaches the back of your throat. There it ignites until it feels like a rock dropped down into your gut...
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2013-02-12, 11:58 | Link #40379 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Western alcohol goes into your mouth either burning hot or burning cold. Either way it's refreshing sort of aquired taste and sensation. The bitterness accents subtle sweetness and flavors while it goes down smoothly through the throat onwards. The burning generally stops at the lungs but can drop at the stomach it you drink suddenly or attempt a bottom's up. The satisfying sigh after such heavy drinking is both the gasp for air and the need to alleviate the fumes of alcohol overcoming one's senses.
If I had to compare, wibnes and brandy feel like getting punched in the head, or gut depending whether you drink calmly or hurriedly. Sake is just full on body blows. |
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