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Joshk · 2004-10-26, 22:52

Try to finish it in two days..

CrackHack · 2004-10-27, 04:50

I like your work, the head and the muscles are made well. Just keep drawing

. There are just couple of things I dont like:

First, the pants

, they have very little amount of textures, i should put a pattern on them, or maybe just try to make them a little bit more "Living".

And the second, i dont understand why he is holding his sword between his legs? and +, it looks akward

Oh yeah, try to work on the stomatch (typing?), when i took the first gaze at this, i thought his guts were falling off.

And dont get mad at criticism, if someone is saying something bad at your drawings, try to improve those things. (And the reason why i said this, is it is not always very fun to get 1 line of good things and 6 lines of things i didnt like

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Joshk · 2004-10-27, 06:32

Thanks for the comments. I'll post more of my sketches though cant really do much more since I have to master the male figure first before I can add more clothing and accessories. Once I do though I'll redo all my old characters for my comic hehe

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2004-10-26, 22:52	Link #1
Joshk Member Join Date: Nov 2003	sketch of my character "MiXist" Try to finish it in two days..

2004-10-27, 04:50	Link #2
CrackHack Yet Another No-Lifer Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Finland, Raahe	I like your work, the head and the muscles are made well. Just keep drawing . There are just couple of things I dont like: First, the pants , they have very little amount of textures, i should put a pattern on them, or maybe just try to make them a little bit more "Living". And the second, i dont understand why he is holding his sword between his legs? and +, it looks akward Oh yeah, try to work on the stomatch (typing?), when i took the first gaze at this, i thought his guts were falling off. And dont get mad at criticism, if someone is saying something bad at your drawings, try to improve those things. (And the reason why i said this, is it is not always very fun to get 1 line of good things and 6 lines of things i didnt like ) Last edited by CrackHack; 2004-10-27 at 04:56. Reason: adding stuff

2004-10-27, 06:32	Link #3
Joshk Member Join Date: Nov 2003	Thanks for the comments. I'll post more of my sketches though cant really do much more since I have to master the male figure first before I can add more clothing and accessories. Once I do though I'll redo all my old characters for my comic hehe .