2015-05-17, 10:23 | Link #38682 |
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I'm still thinking a scenario where it is possible to make both Reinforce Eins and Zwei exist.
Let say,the heroes succeed at halting the automatic defense program from dominating Eins but cannot completely remove it.To absolutely remove it, they need to create another separate program to dive into Eins complex program data and destroy the ADP from inside... Of course, we need to stop Eins from voluntarily sacrifice herself first. |
2015-05-18, 00:31 | Link #38683 |
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My Nanoha Fanfiction
I made a Nanoha fanfiction with my friend a little while ago that's still in progress, but it has a few chapters available for reading.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha PANZER https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1023062...-Nanoha-PANZER |
2015-05-18, 05:15 | Link #38684 | |||||
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3. Unlike with canon characters, readers have no visual reference when reading about Original Characters, so you have to put that. There was a long description of her barrier-jacket, but not the person herself. Is she tall or short? What's the color of her hair and skin? You don't need to give a detailed description (saying she's 165.83 cm tall, weighing 45,13 kg, with three sizes of xx/yy/zz is overkill), just some general features so that the reader's imagination knows where to start. 4. Quote:
Also, maybe I'm reading this wrong, but her career progression stinks of nepotism. 5. There's a bit too much ellipsis ("..."). You don't have to pepper every pause in speech with them. Well that's all that came to me for now.
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the "Z" is for "Zeta"
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As for my fic...every time I catch up with the events in ViVid manga, I end up having to rewrite plot points due to new information being provided. All because my goal is to make it as accurate as I can, but still have some flexibility
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2015-05-18, 20:52 | Link #38686 |
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Creating a scenario for Reinforce eins and Zwei, simple side effect of destroying the Defense program is that Zwei is created. Spin it however you want but that is a possibility.
Like after the program is purified Zwei appears from the book, or if you want to go extreme she emerges from Hayate's, or Reinforce Eins Linker Core. Keep in mind that other things may be sealed inside the Tome of the night sky, for example unlimited darkness, Yuri and the materials were sealed inside, who is to say something else isn't. Also in Gears of Destiny Reinforce is still going to die, the sound stage confirms this.
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2015-05-19, 15:22 | Link #38687 | |
the "Z" is for "Zeta"
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Yeah, Eins dying is pretty much set in stone. That's why there's fanfics
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2015-11-30, 21:39 | Link #38694 |
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Merciful Buddha, Power Games has updated!
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2016-01-19, 19:47 | Link #38695 |
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I realize that people have been posting less frequently on this thread. however I wanted to remind people that I have a page that has links to fanfictions on my site just click the link below.
I had remembered that their were not too many fanfictions were lutecia was not a an assassin cia or whatever you want to call it. I was wondering if re working of force were lutecia encounters him and they have an adventure together instead of what happens. Using of course pre vivid personality.
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2016-01-20, 21:59 | Link #38697 |
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It made no sense since in sound stage she was the same not overly energetic. I could see 4 years changing her personality, but a single year from sound stage x to vivid no.
Also I was thinking about possible THoma fanfiction and thought what if he met the materials, no Lily just an adventure, maybe where he is still infected with the eclipse but an adventure with the materials. Also Wouldn't Einhart x thoma fanfiction be a good idea?
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