oh god temptest are you tring to kill me with those dvd covers ... i think i almost died of blood loss from seeing moka in her elegence ... omg ... its so memorising how beautiful she is moka FTW!!!!!! and here is another pic i found
oh god temptest are you tring to kill me with those dvd covers ... i think i almost died of blood loss from seeing moka in her elegence ... omg ... its so memorising how beautiful she is moka FTW!!!!!! and here is another pic i found
WTH?!! I was gonna post this...aw you guys are getting faster eh? lol
Btw Iam a Mizore fan. But I don't war, because I love harems. Doesn't mean I love one girl, I wouldn't love the rest. lol
I wonder why the real Moka isn't included in those EPIC pictures.
Outer Moka is still more popular among the fans than Inner due to the obvious moe-advantage i guess. Same way with me i think i wouldn't even bother with Moka if there was only her inner side but on the other hand i'd be ok with outer only - i sense war... civil war ... which reminds me that we were going to do a 'inner or outer' - poll when the first episode (raw) of capu2 is available so we can have a civilized closure to this dispute but until then let there be blood
Same body different personalities as she said in the end of season1 manga. Seduce her(inner Moka) to have her. You'll need to do more than the Caramell Dancen, Hare-hare and LS cheerleader song to seduce her proud vampire blood heritage.
oh god temptest are you tring to kill me with those dvd covers ... i think i almost died of blood loss from seeing moka in her elegence ... omg ... its so memorising how beautiful she is moka FTW!!!!!! and here is another pic i found
darn you'll pay if my pc breaks :s, just trying to isolate mizore in that pic will make a very large pic . now if only moka wasnt in the way .
lol, sometimes the Mizore fans make it sound as if Moka's forcing Tsukune to like her in the first place.
Well, if you count 'forcing' as being as hawt as Moka, then yeah, he's being led like lamb to the slaughter.
Well typical end in the sense of all shows from that genre end like that. I mean, even when you have all the love struggle you know, that in the end he'll end up with her. That makes those shows very predictable. It'd be really refreshing, if it'd turn out different. Like with Mizore or another girl.
If you leave that all aside Rosario Vampire is still a good read, but on the love side you know exactly what happens and that can make things boring sooner or later.
Man I never knew Mizore had a black dress...wonder if she goes to school without that long sleeves uniform of hers and just the black dress just hot I tell you.
Well folks, I have a present for you all, days before Ch.12 comes out
Presenting... drumroll please... Ch.2 of "A Water Bride and a Vampire"
Spoiler for Ch.2 length:
All characters except for Lorelei belong to Akihisa Ikeda
Story concept and written (for the most part) by Magin
(Heavy) Editing by Tempest35
Ch.2
Kurumu immediately stood up, anger written on her face. “Just what do you think you’re doing with Tsukune?”
Tsukune himself was rather confused. “Um, Mizusei-san, I think you have the wrong person.”
Lorelei looked at him with eyes filled by confusion and hurt. “Herr… Rhine-sama,” she paused as she corrected herself, sneaking a glance at her pendant before looking at him once again. “Don’t you remember me? It’s me, your Lorelei-chan.”
By this point, Moka was jumping in on the conversation. “Um, Lorelei-san, this is Aono Tsukune, and like the rest of us, he just met you today.”
Lorelei didn’t hear her instead she just drew closer to a dumbfounded Tsukune. “Maybe this will help you remember.”
Lorelei’s entrance into the class has driven all the guys outside of Tsukune gaga, and their jealously and shock increased when Lorelei went to tsukune. However, that also now multiplied as Lorelei closed her eyes and caused her lips to meet his in a kiss.
The following reactions took place: Tsukune was completely dumbfounded, while Kurumu lost any form of self-restraint. Moka’s jaw dropped in shock, and the same deal happened with Mizore, though she nearly lost her lollipop in the process as well. And Yukari was also in an unbelieving state at what just happened.
Yukari had to use everything she had to hold Kurumu back from pouncing on Lorelei. However, even Kurumu was calmed down when Tsukune, sweatdropping, said to her, “It’s alright Kurumu-chan. This is all just a big misunderstanding that won’t happen again. Right, Mizusei-san?”
Kurumu finally took her seat, huffing as she did so, and glaring daggers at the back of Lorelei. Lorelei of course took no notice of this.
The previous events should’ve warned Tsukune that things were about to go from bad to worse. After that incident has been resolved, with Nekome-sensei smiling nervously, she began the lesson. Once during the lesson, Tsukune accidently knocked a paper to the floor. As Moka began to lean down and reach it to give it back, but Lorelei managed to get to it first, and with a gentle smile, handed it to Tsukune.
Another example was that when Nekome-sensei decided to call on a student to answer a question, she looked over the main group first. She appeared ready to call on Mizore.
Lorelei, however stood up gracefully, and with all the guys (other than Tsukune, of course) drooling in admiration of her, she answered the question correctly, and then immediately shot Tsukune a dazzling smile.
“Yes, that is correct, Mizusei-san,” Nekome-sensei spoke, slightly stunned that a student would voluntarily answer a question without being called upon, “but if you would, please wait for me to call your name in the future before answering?”
Lorelei’s pleased face suddenly became downcast. “…I’m…I’m sorry.” She quickly took her seat, quite embarrassed at herself.
“Ah c’mon sensei, ease up on Lorelei-chan will you? She did answer the question right,” a male student called out.
“Yeah, that’s right,” another one agreed. “ Lorelei-chan’s a new student anyway, so she doesn’t know how things are over here yet.”
“That’s right, let it slide Nekome-sensei!”
“It would help if you guys would answer the questions on your own volition once in a while yourself,” Nekome-sensei thought to herself, surprised as the other male students rallied to ‘Lorelei-chan’s defense.
As the other half of the class (namely the female half) got jealous looks on their faces, the most that Tsukune could do was sweatdrop and smile nervously. Moka, however, had a look of worry on her face.
From there on, all opportunities Lorelei got to be involved with Tsukune, she ended up taking, whether they came to her or she had to take it slightly by force. For example, with Tsukune being the class representative and she being the new girl, she was asked to partner up with Tsukune quite a few times, much to the aggravation of the other male of the class. While Lorelei had a very gentle and happy smile on due to these turn of events, the other girls, Kurumu especially, had a very different opinion of ‘Lorelei-chan’.
However, there was one thing that gave the girls a bit of relief to look forward to, which was that Lorelei wasn’t a member of the Newspaper Club. Thus, when they had their meeting, it was the break they’d been waiting for.
“Finally, I get my Tsukune-kun back!” Kurumu exclaimed as she latched onto him, once their meeting had begun. This was near immediately followed with a basin dropping onto her head; Yukari’s diversion allowed Tsukune to break free.
“Tsukune, I’m so glad you’re safe,” Moka said.
“Why wouldn’t I be?” However, looking around, he saw that the expressions on the girl’s faces was one of relief, as if he’d just gotten out of terrible danger. Confused, he asked, “What was wrong?”
“You’re ours, Tsukune, not Lorelei’s,” Mizore popped up directly behind Tsukune where he sat.
In a rare moment, Moka actually ignored Mizore’s sudden appearance to address him. “Tsukune, don’t you think you’ve been spending too much time with Lorelei-san?” The worry was evident in Moka’s voice.
“Huh?” He thought about Lorelei-san, as she had told him to address her. Maybe the new girl was sort of over-friendly with him but she didn’t seem dangerous. He shook his head with a small smile. “She’s just the new student, and I guess I’m showing her around. It’s my job as class representative, remember? There’s nothing to be worried about, really.”
Suddenly, there was a knock on the clubroom door. Kokoa answered it.
“Um, is this the Newspaper Club, where Rhine-sama is?”
Upon hearing who it was, Kurumu was shooting an angry look at the door, and the others also had looks that were far from pleased.
“This is the Newspaper club, but I don’t know any Rhine-sama.” Kokoa answered, looking up at the taller girl. “Are you, by any chance, Mizusei-san?” She received a nod in return but as Lorelei raised her head she saw Tsukune.
“Rhine-sama,” she gave a happy cry, already stepping past Kokoa and heading his direction; however, Kurumu and Mizore immediately got in the way between the two.
“Back off, bitch,” Kurumu growled, and Mizore had an ice claw raised.
“What…what did I do?”
“It’s what we won’t allow you to do,” Mizore spoke from around the lollipop in her mouth. “Don’t you think that you’ve been around Tsukune far too much already?”
Tsukune tried to be the voice of reason. “I-it’s okay, Kurumu-chan, Mizore-chan. Let’s find out why she came here in the first place.”
“Fine,” Kurumu sighed after a moment as Mizore lowered her hands. “Okay then, spit it out. What is it you want with us?”
Lorelei seemed to ignore the two girls ‘guarding’ Tsukune as she smiled at him. “I was wondering…if I could join this group as well.” The reaction was…expected.
Mizore glared at her. “You are just stalking Tsukune, aren’t you?”
“Takes one to know one,” Yukari quipped, giggling until Mizore froze her to the seat in retaliation.
“Is there a problem with that,” Lorelei spoke with a pout, a bit put off by their reactions. “I just happened to be a columnist at my old school. I am quite familiar with the work involving newspapers and such.” She reached into her bag and pulled out a stack of papers clipped together. “See? These are some of my past articles that I have written.”
Kurumu instantly grabbed them and began to read quickly but found that she couldn’t. “What is this language, anyway,” she waved the papers around. “It could be nice if I could read it.”
“It’s German,” Lorelai replied, pulling one of the papers free and placing it on top. “Here is a translation into Japanese if you prefer to read that one.” Kurumu sniffed and began to read again. Her eyes widened as she continued to read. “This….This is…”
Yukari, who had broken free thanks to Kokoa, stood up on her toes to look at the papers for herself. She only needed to read a few lines before she exclaimed, “Sugoi desu~!” She quickly took the papers from Kurumu and spread them out on the table so Kokoa and Ruby could see as well. “Her sentence structure, her chosen vocabulary for the articles, not to mention how varied in topic they are, they are all extremely well done. It could easily be on par with Moka-san’s!”
The next thing that happened came as a surprise to everyone, as Moka appeared to gather courage as she stood up, took the papers from Yukari and handed them back to Lorelei. “I’m sorry, Lorelei-san, but we’re currently not accepting any new members for a while, because,” Moka lifted her eyes and looked into Lorelei’s face with a serious expression, “ because we have some issues that need to be resolved before we can accept any more members.”
Kokoa raised a thoughtful eyebrow, and Ruby said, “But we don’t-“
The glares she got immediately shut her up. However, Lorelei had seemed to suspect this outcome and had a response ready. “Is this true, Rhine-sama?”
“Mizusei-san-“
“Lorelei-chan.”
“Huh?” Tsukune blinked as he was interrupted.
“Please, Rhine-sama, call me Lorelei-chan.” Her grey-blue eyes had a slightly pleading look, and Tsukune tried again.
“Mizu-…um, Lorelei-chan, about joining the club…” The looks he was getting from the girls, from Moka’s own pleading look, to Kurumu’s accept-and-you-die look, he had little choice.
“Uh… well, we’re kind of full right now, but maybe if you try again later…”
Lorelei closed her eyes as she hung her head, but when she lifted it, she was smiling. “I understand.” She took her papers from Moka and put them in her bag and after bowing to them, walked out of the room, sliding the door closed behind her.
Tsukune released a breath before he looked at the other girls with a rather severe expression. “What was that all about? Why are you acting like this, especially to a new student?”
Kurumu was the first to reply. “Can’t you tell Tsukune?”
“Tell what? How mean you acted to her just now? She’s from another country, Kurumu.”
“Yeah but,” the succubus tried to answer but Tsukune’s disapproving stare was proving almost too much for her. “I don’t like her! She’s trying to get to you and it makes us sick!”
“Didn’t you do the same thing with me when we first met Kurumu-chan,” Tsukune replied in a low, quiet tone, shocking Kurumu. Even though he spoke softly, it felt as if she had been slapped with his words. “I…I…this is different!”
“How is it different!?” Tsukune nearly shouted, causing the girls to jump where they stood.
“Tsukune, she’s right. I agree with her,” Mizore spoke up in a quiet voice, anxious not to raise Tsukune’s ire again.
“Not you too Mizore-chan,” his disappointed evident in his voice.
“Tsukune please!” Moka gripped his shirt, holding it with trembling hands. “I know how much this must upset you… you were in a similar situation when you first came here, right? It was worse for you since you were a human among us youkai. That’s why, please listen to us,” Moka leaned her head against Tsukune’s shoulders. “There’s something about that girl that is dangerous.”
Tsukune was silent for several moments before he took in a deep breath and gently held her shoulders. “I could say the same for all of you, couldn’t I?” Moka’s eyes widened, as did, Kurumu’s and Mizore’s, all of them stunned by his words. Before they could speak, Tsukune continued, “but I still befriended you all, didn’t I? If monsters and humans are to become friends, I can’t reject someone here who wants to be my friend just because they are ‘dangerous’, right?”
“Tsukune…” Moka tried to speak but Tsukune gave her a reassuring smile.
“I’ll be fine Moka-san. I probably just remind her of someone from her old country. Since she’s in a new country, she’s probably just nervous and wants to be around someone who feels familiar to her, that’s all.” He gave each other the girls a smile as well. “Please treat her nicer tomorrow.”
While the girls gave in, mumbling that they would try to treat Lorelei better the next day, deep within Akashiya Moka, her other self had been roused ever since she felt that strange foreign girl’s aura as she entered the room early that very morning. “Tsukune, there are dangers of which you are still unaware of in this world of demons. Not all dangers come from violent hearts...”
As she walked away, Lorelei steadily ignored the greetings of the boys she passed, her eyes strangely unfocused as she swiftly made her way out of the school building and towards her dorm room, her long blonde hair swaying, seeming to merge with the mist that had suddenly surrounded her in an almost ethereal manner. “…That’s right, he’s not my ‘Rhine’… He would never have forgotten me…Rhine-sama would never have forgotten me…yet that boy has his face, and he is so kind as well…” As she spoke to herself, she couldn’t stop the tears that worked their way to her eyes. “I’ve come so far…and I’ve waited so long…” She gently cupped the pendant around her neck as it began to glow with a strange blue light and as she gazed at it, her eyes grew determined. “Yes, I have waited long enough. I will have my Rhine-sama.”
Now, keep in mind this is only the tip of the iceberg... if you guys think this was pretty good/awesome, future chapters are going to be even better. So, enjoy!
Well folks, I have a present for you all, days before Ch.12 comes out
Presenting... drumroll please... Ch.2 of "A Water Bride and a Vampire"
Spoiler for Ch.2 length:
All characters except for Lorelei belong to Akihisa Ikeda
Story concept and written (for the most part) by Magin
(Heavy) Editing by Tempest35
Ch.2
Kurumu immediately stood up, anger written on her face. “Just what do you think you’re doing with Tsukune?”
Tsukune himself was rather confused. “Um, Mizusei-san, I think you have the wrong person.”
Lorelei looked at him with eyes filled by confusion and hurt. “Herr… Rhine-sama,” she paused as she corrected herself, sneaking a glance at her pendant before looking at him once again. “Don’t you remember me? It’s me, your Lorelei-chan.”
By this point, Moka was jumping in on the conversation. “Um, Lorelei-san, this is Aono Tsukune, and like the rest of us, he just met you today.”
Lorelei didn’t hear her instead she just drew closer to a dumbfounded Tsukune. “Maybe this will help you remember.”
Lorelei’s entrance into the class has driven all the guys outside of Tsukune gaga, and their jealously and shock increased when Lorelei went to tsukune. However, that also now multiplied as Lorelei closed her eyes and caused her lips to meet his in a kiss.
The following reactions took place: Tsukune was completely dumbfounded, while Kurumu lost any form of self-restraint. Moka’s jaw dropped in shock, and the same deal happened with Mizore, though she nearly lost her lollipop in the process as well. And Yukari was also in an unbelieving state at what just happened.
Yukari had to use everything she had to hold Kurumu back from pouncing on Lorelei. However, even Kurumu was calmed down when Tsukune, sweatdropping, said to her, “It’s alright Kurumu-chan. This is all just a big misunderstanding that won’t happen again. Right, Mizusei-san?”
Kurumu finally took her seat, huffing as she did so, and glaring daggers at the back of Lorelei. Lorelei of course took no notice of this.
The previous events should’ve warned Tsukune that things were about to go from bad to worse. After that incident has been resolved, with Nekome-sensei smiling nervously, she began the lesson. Once during the lesson, Tsukune accidently knocked a paper to the floor. As Moka began to lean down and reach it to give it back, but Lorelei managed to get to it first, and with a gentle smile, handed it to Tsukune.
Another example was that when Nekome-sensei decided to call on a student to answer a question, she looked over the main group first. She appeared ready to call on Mizore.
Lorelei, however stood up gracefully, and with all the guys (other than Tsukune, of course) drooling in admiration of her, she answered the question correctly, and then immediately shot Tsukune a dazzling smile.
“Yes, that is correct, Mizusei-san,” Nekome-sensei spoke, slightly stunned that a student would voluntarily answer a question without being called upon, “but if you would, please wait for me to call your name in the future before answering?”
Lorelei’s pleased face suddenly became downcast. “…I’m…I’m sorry.” She quickly took her seat, quite embarrassed at herself.
“Ah c’mon sensei, ease up on Lorelei-chan will you? She did answer the question right,” a male student called out.
“Yeah, that’s right,” another one agreed. “ Lorelei-chan’s a new student anyway, so she doesn’t know how things are over here yet.”
“That’s right, let it slide Nekome-sensei!”
“It would help if you guys would answer the questions on your own volition once in a while yourself,” Nekome-sensei thought to herself, surprised as the other male students rallied to ‘Lorelei-chan’s defense.
As the other half of the class (namely the female half) got jealous looks on their faces, the most that Tsukune could do was sweatdrop and smile nervously. Moka, however, had a look of worry on her face.
From there on, all opportunities Lorelei got to be involved with Tsukune, she ended up taking, whether they came to her or she had to take it slightly by force. For example, with Tsukune being the class representative and she being the new girl, she was asked to partner up with Tsukune quite a few times, much to the aggravation of the other male of the class. While Lorelei had a very gentle and happy smile on due to these turn of events, the other girls, Kurumu especially, had a very different opinion of ‘Lorelei-chan’.
However, there was one thing that gave the girls a bit of relief to look forward to, which was that Lorelei wasn’t a member of the Newspaper Club. Thus, when they had their meeting, it was the break they’d been waiting for.
“Finally, I get my Tsukune-kun back!” Kurumu exclaimed as she latched onto him, once their meeting had begun. This was near immediately followed with a basin dropping onto her head; Yukari’s diversion allowed Tsukune to break free.
“Tsukune, I’m so glad you’re safe,” Moka said.
“Why wouldn’t I be?” However, looking around, he saw that the expressions on the girl’s faces was one of relief, as if he’d just gotten out of terrible danger. Confused, he asked, “What was wrong?”
“You’re ours, Tsukune, not Lorelei’s,” Mizore popped up directly behind Tsukune where he sat.
In a rare moment, Moka actually ignored Mizore’s sudden appearance to address him. “Tsukune, don’t you think you’ve been spending too much time with Lorelei-san?” The worry was evident in Moka’s voice.
“Huh?” He thought about Lorelei-san, as she had told him to address her. Maybe the new girl was sort of over-friendly with him but she didn’t seem dangerous. He shook his head with a small smile. “She’s just the new student, and I guess I’m showing her around. It’s my job as class representative, remember? There’s nothing to be worried about, really.”
Suddenly, there was a knock on the clubroom door. Kokoa answered it.
“Um, is this the Newspaper Club, where Rhine-sama is?”
Upon hearing who it was, Kurumu was shooting an angry look at the door, and the others also had looks that were far from pleased.
“This is the Newspaper club, but I don’t know any Rhine-sama.” Kokoa answered, looking up at the taller girl. “Are you, by any chance, Mizusei-san?” She received a nod in return but as Lorelei raised her head she saw Tsukune.
“Rhine-sama,” she gave a happy cry, already stepping past Kokoa and heading his direction; however, Kurumu and Mizore immediately got in the way between the two.
“Back off, bitch,” Kurumu growled, and Mizore had an ice claw raised.
“What…what did I do?”
“It’s what we won’t allow you to do,” Mizore spoke from around the lollipop in her mouth. “Don’t you think that you’ve been around Tsukune far too much already?”
Tsukune tried to be the voice of reason. “I-it’s okay, Kurumu-chan, Mizore-chan. Let’s find out why she came here in the first place.”
“Fine,” Kurumu sighed after a moment as Mizore lowered her hands. “Okay then, spit it out. What is it you want with us?”
Lorelei seemed to ignore the two girls ‘guarding’ Tsukune as she smiled at him. “I was wondering…if I could join this group as well.” The reaction was…expected.
Mizore glared at her. “You are just stalking Tsukune, aren’t you?”
“Takes one to know one,” Yukari quipped, giggling until Mizore froze her to the seat in retaliation.
“Is there a problem with that,” Lorelei spoke with a pout, a bit put off by their reactions. “I just happened to be a columnist at my old school. I am quite familiar with the work involving newspapers and such.” She reached into her bag and pulled out a stack of papers clipped together. “See? These are some of my past articles that I have written.”
Kurumu instantly grabbed them and began to read quickly but found that she couldn’t. “What is this language, anyway,” she waved the papers around. “It could be nice if I could read it.”
“It’s German,” Lorelai replied, pulling one of the papers free and placing it on top. “Here is a translation into Japanese if you prefer to read that one.” Kurumu sniffed and began to read again. Her eyes widened as she continued to read. “This….This is…”
Yukari, who had broken free thanks to Kokoa, stood up on her toes to look at the papers for herself. She only needed to read a few lines before she exclaimed, “Sugoi desu~!” She quickly took the papers from Kurumu and spread them out on the table so Kokoa and Ruby could see as well. “Her sentence structure, her chosen vocabulary for the articles, not to mention how varied in topic they are, they are all extremely well done. It could easily be on par with Moka-san’s!”
The next thing that happened came as a surprise to everyone, as Moka appeared to gather courage as she stood up, took the papers from Yukari and handed them back to Lorelei. “I’m sorry, Lorelei-san, but we’re currently not accepting any new members for a while, because,” Moka lifted her eyes and looked into Lorelei’s face with a serious expression, “ because we have some issues that need to be resolved before we can accept any more members.”
Kokoa raised a thoughtful eyebrow, and Ruby said, “But we don’t-“
The glares she got immediately shut her up. However, Lorelei had seemed to suspect this outcome and had a response ready. “Is this true, Rhine-sama?”
“Mizusei-san-“
“Lorelei-chan.”
“Huh?” Tsukune blinked as he was interrupted.
“Please, Rhine-sama, call me Lorelei-chan.” Her grey-blue eyes had a slightly pleading look, and Tsukune tried again.
“Mizu-…um, Lorelei-chan, about joining the club…” The looks he was getting from the girls, from Moka’s own pleading look, to Kurumu’s accept-and-you-die look, he had little choice.
“Uh… well, we’re kind of full right now, but maybe if you try again later…”
Lorelei closed her eyes as she hung her head, but when she lifted it, she was smiling. “I understand.” She took her papers from Moka and put them in her bag and after bowing to them, walked out of the room, sliding the door closed behind her.
Tsukune released a breath before he looked at the other girls with a rather severe expression. “What was that all about? Why are you acting like this, especially to a new student?”
Kurumu was the first to reply. “Can’t you tell Tsukune?”
“Tell what? How mean you acted to her just now? She’s from another country, Kurumu.”
“Yeah but,” the succubus tried to answer but Tsukune’s disapproving stare was proving almost too much for her. “I don’t like her! She’s trying to get to you and it makes us sick!”
“Didn’t you do the same thing with me when we first met Kurumu-chan,” Tsukune replied in a low, quiet tone, shocking Kurumu. Even though he spoke softly, it felt as if she had been slapped with his words. “I…I…this is different!”
“How is it different!?” Tsukune nearly shouted, causing the girls to jump where they stood.
“Tsukune, she’s right. I agree with her,” Mizore spoke up in a quiet voice, anxious not to raise Tsukune’s ire again.
“Not you too Mizore-chan,” his disappointed evident in his voice.
“Tsukune please!” Moka gripped his shirt, holding it with trembling hands. “I know how much this must upset you… you were in a similar situation when you first came here, right? It was worse for you since you were a human among us youkai. That’s why, please listen to us,” Moka leaned her head against Tsukune’s shoulders. “There’s something about that girl that is dangerous.”
Tsukune was silent for several moments before he took in a deep breath and gently held her shoulders. “I could say the same for all of you, couldn’t I?” Moka’s eyes widened, as did, Kurumu’s and Mizore’s, all of them stunned by his words. Before they could speak, Tsukune continued, “but I still befriended you all, didn’t I? If monsters and humans are to become friends, I can’t reject someone here who wants to be my friend just because they are ‘dangerous’, right?”
“Tsukune…” Moka tried to speak but Tsukune gave her a reassuring smile.
“I’ll be fine Moka-san. I probably just remind her of someone from her old country. Since she’s in a new country, she’s probably just nervous and wants to be around someone who feels familiar to her, that’s all.” He gave each other the girls a smile as well. “Please treat her nicer tomorrow.”
While the girls gave in, mumbling that they would try to treat Lorelei better the next day, deep within Akashiya Moka, her other self had been roused ever since she felt that strange foreign girl’s aura as she entered the room early that very morning. “Tsukune, there are dangers of which you are still unaware of in this world of demons. Not all dangers come from violent hearts...”
As she walked away, Lorelei steadily ignored the greetings of the boys she passed, her eyes strangely unfocused as she swiftly made her way out of the school building and towards her dorm room, her long blonde hair swaying, seeming to merge with the mist that had suddenly surrounded her in an almost ethereal manner. “…That’s right, he’s not my ‘Rhine’… He would never have forgotten me…Rhine-sama would never have forgotten me…yet that boy has his face, and he is so kind as well…” As she spoke to herself, she couldn’t stop the tears that worked their way to her eyes. “I’ve come so far…and I’ve waited so long…” She gently cupped the pendant around her neck as it began to glow with a strange blue light and as she gazed at it, her eyes grew determined. “Yes, I have waited long enough. I will have my Rhine-sama.”
Now, keep in mind this is only the tip of the iceberg... if you guys think this was pretty good/awesome, future chapters are going to be even better. So, enjoy!
Usually i'm not into fanfics at all but this one actually keeps me wanting more *thumbs up* . Especcially the new character is very intriguing and with inner Moka's comment and the last paragraph i can see where this is getting to.
2008-09-28, 18:06
. now if only moka wasnt in the way 
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