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Old 2012-04-28, 01:40   Link #36241
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@Lycodrake

Okaayy... *sweat drops*



@Mr Coin

I guess all the authors have writer's block now so they're deviating a bit until inspiration strikes

For the next part of your post, Nanya does seem to think a lot about fanfiction, considering his single story has reached 600k words, not counting StrikerS 46-Epilogue and SSX. Maybe his muse-bunnies will
they are not muse-bunnies....

They are muse-tribbles
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Old 2012-04-28, 02:41   Link #36242
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Whatever you want to call them, if the prophecy of Mr Coin reigns true...

There won't be time to name them
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Old 2012-04-28, 06:52   Link #36243
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I've taken this week off, mostly, because I was playing a new game.

Damn addicting games!

Plus my internet's been spotty this week.
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Old 2012-05-01, 04:59   Link #36244
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Seeing as nobody has posted anything here for the past two days I would like to start a series if I may.

Spoiler for Left alone, abandoned by love (prologue):


Fanfiction.net said it would take 4-8 hours for it to become available to the public but the only changes would be the line breaks and the summary. Hope it agrees with you.
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Old 2012-05-01, 09:36   Link #36245
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Playing some Z2.2, Nanya?
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Old 2012-05-01, 16:16   Link #36246
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Playing some Z2.2, Nanya?
Kamidori Alchemy Meister actually.
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Old 2012-05-01, 19:42   Link #36247
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Kamidori Alchemy Meister is addictive!

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Old 2012-05-01, 22:09   Link #36248
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Just another day in the Nakajima household. Still...

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Still, despite how crazy things were at the Nakajima house, Teana really didn't want it any other way. As much as she didn't want to admit it, being around the normal craziness that was Subaru's family had become a comfort for her.
Either explain something (very very brief, 3 words tops to not to interrupt the read flow) about the Riot Force craziness not being normal in the next paragraph or simply remove "normal".

Well, I think Val remembering will help Filia in the long run.

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"Not much longer..." A soft voice whispered in the darkness before chuckling darkly.
Oh! It has been some time.

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"Not to mention that we were asked to help with city security while the heavy hitters of the Riot Force were out on a mission." Wendi grinned as Dieci sighed heavily.
Sounds weird. Any particular reason to mention that last part? (some of RF being out has been established earlier this chapter, by a more natural way) Are they part of the Riot Force? Or is the RF charged with the city security (so it makes sense in a "substitute/stand-in" sense)?

I expect Erio and Caro goinig to the Midori-ya somewhat soon. They were raised in (insert appropriate size adjective) part by Lina after all.
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Old 2012-05-02, 05:48   Link #36249
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Kamidori Alchemy Meister is addictive!

StrikerS

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Aschen: Can I write something on her whiteboard called torso and crush her? *Looks at Caro.*

Caro: Mooouuu!!!! *flees*

Me: How in the world you got here?*Looked shocked at Aschen* First Xiaomu, now the Lamia's older sister Aschen.... And Filraen *Glared at Filraen*, don't you dare say she *Points at Aschen* walk through the front door... ANY kind of doors....

Mariemeia: Is Caro THAT short and flat or she's a very LATE bloomer?

Val: Poor combination of genetics, IMO.

Odin: Too bad Nove can't use THAT excuse in her relationship with Subaru.

Reia: Memory awakening... That's either a good thing or a bad thing... Depending on one's point of view.

Me: And Teana, you just made the understatement of the whole fanfic...

Odin: Too bad the reunion of the numbers won't go as they planned. Oh well, Enjoy the resident evil setting.
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Old 2012-05-02, 07:30   Link #36250
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Kamidori Alchemy Meister is addictive!

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I really love the family dynamics that have formed, reading the last lot al together really let's it sink in. I also see that certain hidden memoreis are resurfacing, the past is coming once again to entangle the present and change the future, now with 20% more dragons. I will have to admit however that in SSX am I most limited in my knowledge, aside from a general idea of the plot and the characters and outcomes Ii don't know any specifics about this part so it's all coming as new knowledge to me at the moment. Well, at least subaru will get her ice cream, eventually... right?
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Old 2012-05-04, 04:32   Link #36251
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Here's another chapter for my tale

Spoiler for Left alone, abandoned my love:
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Old 2012-05-04, 12:34   Link #36252
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I just saw that you had posted your story here, then I saw it on FF.net. So I added it to our C2.
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Old 2012-05-04, 19:23   Link #36253
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It's still surprising, considering I'm not of the same calibre compared to many authors from here
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Old 2012-05-04, 21:43   Link #36254
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It's still surprising, considering I'm not of the same calibre compared to many authors from here
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what most authors do is post it here for at least a day so that other people can point out errors before they post it to fanfiction.net . This is especially important for newer authors who haven't figured out their own weaknesses as writers.

While we do have some good authors, those authors usually develop a network of members from here or other forums that do the editing and help with the idea creation. Ask around about getting someone for beta (a second reader who checks for grammer and other mistakes).

Outside of that, just have fun with your ideas. Part of the fun of reading new authors works is the fact that they are new takes on ideas that might otherwise be tired and staid.
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Old 2012-05-04, 22:16   Link #36255
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Ah, noted. I'm trying for weekly updates on friday, so I'll post the drafts here on tuesday or wednesday for anyone willing to beta read it

However, I'm not sure if I can commit myself if I ask for assistance on a regular basis, my school just got hectic. The beta reader may give wonderful ideas but if there are too many I won't be able to edit them in time

Thanks for the advice and encouragement!
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Old 2012-05-05, 10:44   Link #36256
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Old 2012-05-05, 14:10   Link #36257
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Wait, Runessa accessed a Major's computer without permission and she only got a scolding? Correct me if I'm wrong, but shouldn't that transgression count as disobeying a superior?
... And how bad is Lutecia and Megane's cooking?
Oh, and could you tell me why Due is staying with those two? I kinda forgot.
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Old 2012-05-05, 15:14   Link #36258
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Read again: Teana contemplates that if Runessa's info doesn't pan out, she's throwing her to the wolves, so to speak. If it does, she'll consider getting the punishment reduced.

Megane and Lutecia's cooking is fine. But when Due's the one doing the cooking, it tends to make a disaster of the kitchen. Usually with something exploding. Due's also staying with them both out of guilt for what her family did to Lutecia and is thus serving as Lutecia's caretaker (and the caretaker of whatever future children Lutecia may have, due to cyborgs' extended lifetimes.)
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Old 2012-05-05, 15:20   Link #36259
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On the cyborg stuff, i guess their lives can be extended as long as they receive maintenance, at least it was implied in StrikerS that Uno make check ups for her sisters routinely.

There's also the issue about their aging organic parts but i guess the same technology used to adapt their bodies to bionic implats can also be used to long their lives or even clone organs, skin and mother cells that could be used as "spare parts" for too damaged or aging cyborgs.

Of course nothing of that really matters if you have godly regeneration powers isn't? xDU
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Old 2012-05-05, 15:29   Link #36260
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Now I want to make Sirius meet Due. "Not another one"

And yes, a simple meeting between Lina, Erio and Caro was all I was expecting ^_^.
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