Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Yup, I did. I'm sending them off to the Infinite Library to meet Yuuno. Currently listening to "Kimi ni Aitakunatta Nara" (If I Get a Longing to Meet You) while writing, which is rather ironic, and I'm heavilly trying to surpress blatant romantic scenes from apearing. Though since this Nanoha is different from the one that left.... :3

Even if it is a different Nanoha then the one who left it's still a nine-year-old Nanoha... *gets images of 19 year-old Yuuno and Nine-year-old Nanoha stuck in head* Urg PedoYuuno (Actually we could end up with PedoFate if we're not careful *shiver*). Though having Yuuno in the fic is awesome I'm looking forward to your part.

Edit: Holy #$%^ two page claims in one day. Page Claim in the name of Yuuno getting to do stuff

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

ah, I see. I think that most of us are completely on board with the epic angst that a story like this could bring about.

I'm totally down with Yuuno being awesome, however.

Kimi ni Aitakunatta Nara is more of a romantic song then an angsty one, really. It helps writing the scene.

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Even if it is a different Nanoha then the one who left it's still a nine-year-old Nanoha... *gets images of 19 year-old Yuuno and Nine-year-old Nanoha stuck in head* Urg PedoYuuno (Actually we could end up with PedoFate if we're not careful *shiver*). Though having Yuuno in the fic is awesome I'm looking forward to your part.

Edit: Holy #$%^ two page claims in one day. Page Claim in the name of Yuuno getting to do stuff

I know. Huuuuge storyrisks here, hence why I am trying my best to avoid them.

[Thesinwithin]

sorry. lololol Pedo!Fate. Well the image prompt that this thing spawned from was almost Pedo!Fate to begin with. D: I think that we should avoid that at all costs.

[TheShinySword]

On a final Pedo! note I remembered I have this pic in my Nanoha files and well...

Spoiler for Hello little Girl:

[Thesinwithin]

okay, that is too scary. Maybe Nanoha should have a reaction like that to seeing grown up Yuuno and tell him to get a hair cut or something.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

sorry. El oh el oh el Pedo!Fate. Well the image prompt that this thing spawned from was almost Pedo!Fate to begin with. D: I think that we should avoid that at all costs.

says you.

I had a long post written up, but then realized "Hey, this is crack" and deleted it all.

so I'll say this:

For romance and stuff: "respect each other" If Keroko introduces Yuuno and he's cool and stuff, don't go off the deep end and try to shove him off the face of the planet. In return, we will respect everyone's NanoFate moments as well. This is fun. we are friends. If this turns into a ship war, our fun will end. So everyone be open minded and polite and respectful to everyone's posts.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

On a final Pedo! note I remembered I have this pic in my Nanoha files and well...

Spoiler for Hello little Girl:

Vivio's thoughts: The greatest threat for my mama's realationship.

[Keroko]

Spoiler for Next Fate part::

After breakfast, Fate decided on the next best course of action. The way things appeared now they didn’t exactly have much information to go on concerning what happened here. Fate knew that this Nanoha was from another dimension, but it also seemed that the dimension in question wasn’t easily accessed.

“Maybe we could go ask the people at the Infinite Library?” Nanoha asked as she swung her legs from the chair. The Infinite Library had been a great help when they were fighting the Yami no Sho.

“Yes, that’s a good idea.” Fate said, her mind not fully focused on who she was talking to. “Yuuno could help us tremendously.”

Nanoha’s head shot up. “Yuuno-kun?”

Fate had to restrain herself from biting her tongue, the idea to let Nanoha see as less of this time as possible was slowly being torn to pieces. At the rate this was going this Nanoha would know everything her Nanoha did!

“Yes, Yuuno manages the Infinite Library. He’s done a great job in organizing and archiving the countless of files and books there.”

“Waaa, Yuuno-kun is managing that huge library?” Nanoha said, her eyes twinkling in amazement. The last time she had seen that library it was so huge, she couldn’t imagine ever finding a book she was looking for there.

Seeing the admiration in her eyes, Fate was remembered that no matter how much she and Nanoha loved each other, Yuuno still had a special place in the girl’s heart. Right now her curiosity must have been working overdrive trying to imagine what Yuuno would look like right now. “Do you want to see him? We can go and ask him right away, he should be at the main HQ, in the Library.”

Nanoha nodded enthusiastically. “Uhn!”

And so, after calling Ayna and asking her to take care of Vivio, Fate guided the young Nanoha through the corridors of the Mid Childa HQ. Because they lacked any proper clothing, Nanoha was currently dressed in one of Vivio’s bigger outfits. The clothing was a bit small, but it still fit.

The young girl in question was nervously, yet also curiously looking around. Fate realized that this was Nanoha’s first visit to Mid-Childa, up until now all Nanoha had seen was her home, the Arthra and the Main HQ. For Nanoha, this was an entirely new place.

Fate decided that they would take the quickest route to the Main HQ, the teleporters. Fortunately, the fact that she often took care of children like Erio or Caro resulted in no questions being asked on escorting a young girl through the base.

When they reached the Library itself, Yuuno was easily spotted. Hovering in the center, surrounded by books, Yuuno was already looking for a solution to this problem. A slightly disgruntled Arf floating several meters away answered her silent question on whether the boy had gotten any sleep at all.

“Yuuno.” She called out to him.

The boy stopped typing as he heard the new arrival, and turned to Fate, and a figure he hadn’t seen in years…

“…Yuuno-kun?”

… but was without a doubt Nanoha. “Ah, Nanoha, Fate, welcome. I hadn’t expected to see you so soon.”

Nanoha floated towards the now grown version of the boy she had met a year ago. “Your hair is longer.” She said, not really knowing what else to say.

“Yes, you said it would look good on me, that’s when you gave me this ribbon.” He answered with a smile, gesturing to the green ribbon that held his hair back in his tail.

Now that he mentioned it, Nanoha did remember having a ribbon like that. She never really used it because she had only one, but she found it a shame to throw it away.

“Yuuno.” Fate interrupted. “How did the research go?”

Yuuno nodded. “Well, we spend a lot of the evening digging through the books-”

“You mean you spend all night digging through the books.” The disgruntled voice of Arf floated into the conversation.

Nanoha blinked. “Arf-san! What happened, you’re smaller!” This was really weird. Everyone around her had gotten taller, why had Arf gotten smaller?

Arf smiled at Nanoha “It’s like my pupy-form, only for my human form. It helps keep the mana-drain towards Fate lower. Anyway.” She turned back to Yuuno. “This guy never stopped researching even once, he kept digging through book after book after book to find a solution.”

“And did you find one?” Fate asked.

“Not yet.” Yuuno answered. “But we did find an answer to the question of where this Nanoha came from.” Yuuno shifted his position and pushed his glasses a bit further back. “To keep a long story short: This Nanoha is from a Mirror Dimension.”

“A Mirror Dimension?” Fate asked. That term was unknown to her.

“Yes, a Mirror Dimension is a dimension that is closely linked to the current one. Almost everything is the same, though there are times when roles are reversed. Like how a king can be a servant in his Mirror Dimension, and vise versa. In this case, the Mirror Dimension linked to ours is a few years behind.”

Fate nodded. “So why can’t we just access that dimension and bring her home?”

Yuuno nodded. “That’s what everyone is wondering, and that’s one of the questions we solved. It appears that Mirror Dimensions lie behind a different form of ‘barrier’ then normal worlds do. A Mirror World can only be accessed through a dimensional disruption.”

“But that would mean that a Lost Logia is involved in this!” Fate blurted out.

Yuuno nodded. “It seems so, though which Lost Logia and how we don’t know.”

Fate sighed. This had raised as much questions as it had answered. “Thanks for your help, Yuuno.”

“Yuuno-kun.” Nanoha said. “You should get some rest, you look tired.”

“I’m fine, really. Say, why don’t you join us for a drink and lunch?” Yuuno said, waving away the concern and changing the subject.

“We’d love to!” Nanoha answered with a smile. No matter how much changed, Yuuno-kun was still Yuuno-kun.

[Dr_Tom]

The collaborative story has hit 25 pages...this thing is really becoming somewhat lengthy.

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

On a final Pedo! note I remembered I have this pic in my Nanoha files and well...

Spoiler for Hello little Girl:

Though, ironically, the amount of PedoFate in fanart is much, much larger.

But dang, that pick is scary. Good thing Yuuno and Vivio get along just fine in StrikerS.

Originally Posted by Gillian

Vivio's thoughts: The greatest threat for my mama's realationship.

Truth in those words.

Though I don't think Vivio would mind Yuuno-papa.

[Thesinwithin]

It's wonderfully epic. I'll do the next Fate part if no one objects.

[Keroko]

Your claim, go for it.

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Though, ironically, the amount of PedoFate in fanart is much, much larger.

But dang, that pick is scary. Good thing Yuuno and Vivio get along just fine in StrikerS.

It's creepier when you know the context it was posted in. The person who put it together was pointing out how Yuuno and Vivio look similar and suggesting in a bit of a round about way that Yuuno-papa might not be so far fetched.

[Keroko]

Well, the two do share the same voice actress after all, so they're very much alike in that part too.

Hmm, maybe I could write a little short on Vivio and Yuuno's relationship. I imagine him being the father/mentor type, like how he was a friend/mentor to Nanoha but in a more fatherly sense.

Thoughts?

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Well, the two do share the same voice actress after all, so they're very much alike in that part too.

Hmm, maybe I could write a little short on Vivio and Yuuno's relationship. I imagine him being the father/mentor type, like how he was a friend/mentor to Nanoha but in a more fatherly sense.

Thoughts?

Vivio needs a papa. There are some things only a papa can do ^^

To quote a famous comedian:
"You have to have a dad! I don't care how good you are, ain't nothing more powerful than 'I'll tell your dad!'. Sure you can do it without a man, but that don't mean it's to be done! You could drive a car with your feet if you wanted to! That don't make it a good fsking idea!"

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Vivio needs a papa. There are some things only a papa can do ^^

To quote a famous comedian:
"You have to have a dad! I don't care how good you are, ain't nothing more powerful than 'I'll tell your dad!'. Sure you can do it without a man, but that don't mean it's to be done! You could drive a car with your feet if you wanted to! That don't make it a good fsking idea!"

Sorry that made me think of this
MBLZ: Who wants to be Vivio's papa

Yuuno: I'd make a great papa
Vice: I don't know you're pretty effeminate
Zafira: It's true I don't know if you're really the epitome of masculinity
Yuuno: What I'm plenty manly
Chrono: Ferret-changlings can't be manly! Vivio needs a real man like her Uncle Chrono to be her papa.
Vice: Don't be selfish you already have kids.
Griffith: Besides Zafira spends the most time with her
Vice: Silly Griffith Zafira's a dog he can't be a dad
Zafira: -_-
Griffith: Then who do you suggest?
Vice: Me of course! I'm a great role model
Everyone else: No.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Sorry that made me think of this
MBLZ: Who wants to be Vivio's papa

Yuuno: I'd make a great papa
Vice: I don't know you're pretty effeminate
Zafira: It's true I don't know if you're really the epitome of masculinity
Yuuno: What I'm plenty manly
Chrono: Ferret-changlings can't be manly! Vivio needs a real man like her Uncle Chrono to be her papa.
Vice: Don't be selfish you already have kids.
Griffith: Besides Zafira spends the most time with her
Vice: Silly Griffith Zafira's a dog he can't be a dad
Zafira: -_-
Griffith: Then who do you suggest?
Vice: Me of course! I'm a great role model
Everyone else: No.

really funny

poor Vice^^

[Thesinwithin]

Hey guys, an idea - Let's have the switch last for a week, just to give this story something of a time limit so that it doesn't drag on. Time passes similarly in both dimensions, as they are parallel, so Nanoha's adventures in Universe A last as long as Fate's own experiences with lil Nanoha in Universe 1.

Spoiler for More of Fate's side...:

The mess hall that Yuuno took them to was one of the many smaller ones that dotted Central Headquarters. Nanoha’s face, Fate reasoned, was still well-enough known that she would be hard pressed to keep Nanoha’s identity hidden should someone pick up on the similarities between this girl and their Ace of Aces. Still, Fate was grateful to Yuuno for playing this situation so coolly. She was inwardly dreading every moment of interaction that she was going to have with this girl – fearful of somehow messing the future for the nine-year-old version of herself that was wondering where her best friend was in the dimension that mirrored their own. Yuuno took it in stride, and his only concerned looks mirrored Arf’s own, when they were cast worriedly in her direction. Fate was not sure that she could play it cool for much longer, for her resolve was failing and the situation kept on getting more and more complicated.

Yuuno took them through the lines and waved away Fate’s offer to pay for the food. “I haven’t treated you two to lunch in a long time, Fate.” He moved his tray towards the checkout line, and his face grew more serious, Are you alright? You look as though you’re about to fall apart.

Fate smiled back at him, deciding not to comment that it was rude to open a mental communications link without telling someone before doing so. She knew that he had her best interests at heart, and that he did genuinely care about what happened to Nanoha, as they’d been best friends ever since they were very young. It hurts, Yuuno. I can’t help but worry that somehow things are bad for my Nanoha – that she’s somehow got herself into a world of trouble. Her linker core was dangerously low when she fired off Starlight, and finding herself in a strange place somewhere in her past would only serve to exacerbate her already low core.

Yuuno nodded, offering Nanoha a pair of chopsticks from the jar in the middle of the table with a smile. They’d made their way over to a secluded booth away from the hustle and bustle of the main eating area. “We’ll do all we can to make this right,” he nodded resolutely.

Nanoha looked confused for a moment, but shrugged as both Fate and Yuuno plastered their best, if rather fake-looking, smiles onto their faces and began to speak kind words of reassurance to the girl.

They ate quietly, Fate and Yuuno talking through the mental link they'd established, trying to determine the best course of action. Fate resolved to bring Nanoha back to the library the following day and to leave her there with Yuuno for some of the day as Fate did have enforcer duties that really couldn't be dealt with when there was a nine-year-old child with her.

Fate was glad that Yuuno was so willing to help.

-

“Come on,” Fate said to Nanoha, pulling on her coat. They’d returned to Mid a few hours ago, and Fate had been slogging through as much of the paperwork build up that had filled her in-box in the past day and a half. Now she’d done enough of it to feel as though she wasn’t going to be forever caught in the backlog when this whole ordeal was over. “We’re going to go get you some clothes that fit you. Vivio’s are too small.”

Nanoha set down the book that she’d been flipping through – it was one of the Church-run school’s books on magical theory and one of the few books that Fate thought to be actually safe for Nanoha to read. She guessed that impressing a little magical theory onto the largely self-taught Nanoha might actually be a good idea for her, for she might return to her own dimension and actually not come dangerously close to exhausting her linker core on such a regular basis.

The Fate in that dimension would thank her, if no one else.

Fate tucked Bardiche into her pocket and grabbed her keys from underneath a small mountain of paperwork that she’d decided to leave until she could concentrate once again. Having a nine-year old version of her lover in the room was doing nothing for her nerves, for every time she glanced up, she was reminded that she could not very well go home and find a set of comforting arms and a sweet smile waiting for her. She didn’t know how much longer she could take this.

Nanoha, dressed in Vivio’s clothes, looked like another one of Fate’s lost children – the strays that she picked up from time to time. No one commented on her presence as she made her way through Section Six’s headquarters. Fate was grateful for whatever discretion Hayate had urged her people, for she didn’t think that the enemy that they’d fought yesterday would hesitate to act once they realized that the Ace of Aces was missing in action.

“Are we teleporting?” Nanoha asked as they walked out into the parking lot. “Or flying?” she added eagerly.

“Head in the clouds,” Fate teased, clicking the automatic unlock on her car. The locks of the black car beeped accordingly and Fate moved at a more brisk pace towards her car – her baby – her one escape from the tedious nature of the day to day life of being an enforcer.

“I wish.” Nanoha retorted. She fell in a step behind Fate and stopped as Fate neared the car. “Mou, Fate-chan, is that yours?”

Fate grinned, “Bought and paid for.”

Nanoha blinked, “Wow.”

Fate smiled; perhaps Nanoha was old enough to appreciate what it meant to truly go fast then – even if she would rather be flying. “We’re just going into town, but we could go the long way and I could show you what she can do.”

Nanoha laughed nervously, “You – You don’t have to, Fate-chan. I trust you.” She climbed into the passenger’s seat and Fate made sure that she buckled into the seat before she put the car into gear and started it.

This would prove interesting.

and lolz, I made a Futurama funny.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

Hey guys, an idea - Let's have the switch last for a week, just to give this story something of a time limit so that it doesn't drag on. Time passes similarly in both dimensions, as they are parallel, so Nanoha's adventures in Universe A last as long as Fate's own experiences with lil Nanoha in Universe 1.

Spoiler for More Fic:

The mess hall that Yuuno took them to was one of the many smaller ones that dotted Central Headquarters. Nanoha’s face, Fate reasoned, was still well-enough known that she would be hard pressed to keep Nanoha’s identity hidden should someone pick up on the similarities between this girl and their Ace of Aces. Still, Fate was grateful to Yuuno for playing this situation so coolly. She was inwardly dreading every moment of interaction that she was going to have with this girl – fearful of somehow messing the future for the nine-year-old version of herself that was wondering where her best friend was in the dimension that mirrored their own. Yuuno took it in stride, and his only concerned looks mirrored Arf’s own, when they were cast worriedly in her direction. Fate was not sure that she could play it cool for much longer, for her resolve was failing and the situation kept on getting more and more complicated.

Yuuno took them through the lines and waved away Fate’s offer to pay for the food. “I haven’t treated you two to lunch in a long time, Fate.” He moved his tray towards the checkout line, and his face grew more serious, Are you alright? You look as though you’re about to fall apart.

Fate smiled back at him, deciding not to comment that it was rude to open a mental communications link without telling someone before doing so. She knew that he had her best interests at heart, and that he did genuinely care about what happened to Nanoha, as they’d been best friends ever since they were very young. It hurts, Yuuno. I can’t help but worry that somehow things are bad for my Nanoha – that she’s somehow got herself into a world of trouble. Her linker core was dangerously low when she fired off Starlight, and finding herself in a strange place somewhere in her past would only serve to exacerbate her already low core.

Yuuno nodded, offering Nanoha a pair of chopsticks from the jar in the middle of the table with a smile. They’d made their way over to a secluded booth away from the hustle and bustle of the main eating area. “We’ll do all we can to make this right,” he nodded resolutely.

Nanoha looked confused for a moment, but shrugged as both Fate and Yuuno plastered their best, if rather fake-looking, smiles onto their faces and began to speak kind words of reassurance to the girl.

They ate quietly, Fate and Yuuno talking through the mental link they'd established, trying to determine the best course of action. Fate resolved to bring Nanoha back to the library the following day and to leave her there with Yuuno for some of the day as Fate did have enforcer duties that really couldn't be dealt with when there was a nine-year-old child with her.

Fate was glad that Yuuno was so willing to help.

-

“Come on,” Fate said to Nanoha, pulling on her coat. They’d returned to Mid a few hours ago, and Fate had been slogging through as much of the paperwork build up that had filled her in-box in the past day and a half. Now she’d done enough of it to feel as though she wasn’t going to be forever caught in the backlog when this whole ordeal was over. “We’re going to go get you some clothes that fit you. Vivio’s are too small.”

Nanoha set down the book that she’d been flipping through – it was one of the Church-run school’s books on magical theory and one of the few books that Fate thought to be actually safe for Nanoha to read. She guessed that impressing a little magical theory onto the largely self-taught Nanoha might actually be a good idea for her, for she might return to her own dimension and actually not come dangerously close to exhausting her linker core on such a regular basis.

The Fate in that dimension would thank her, if no one else.

Fate tucked Bardiche into her pocket and grabbed her keys from underneath a small mountain of paperwork that she’d decided to leave until she could concentrate once again. Having a nine-year old version of her lover in the room was doing nothing for her nerves, for every time she glanced up, she was reminded that she could not very well go home and find a set of comforting arms and a sweet smile waiting for her. She didn’t know how much longer she could take this.

Nanoha, dressed in Vivio’s clothes, looked like another one of Fate’s lost children – the strays that she picked up from time to time. No one commented on her presence as she made her way through Section Six’s headquarters. Fate was grateful for whatever discretion Hayate had urged her people, for she didn’t think that the enemy that they’d fought yesterday would hesitate to act once they realized that the Ace of Aces was missing in action.

“Are we teleporting?” Nanoha asked as they walked out into the parking lot. “Or flying?” she added eagerly.

“Head in the clouds,” Fate teased, clicking the automatic unlock on her car. The locks of the black car beeped accordingly and Fate moved at a more brisk pace towards her car – her baby – her one escape from the tedious nature of the day to day life of being an enforcer.

“I wish.” Nanoha retorted. She fell in a step behind Fate and stopped as Fate neared the car. “Mou, Fate-chan, is that yours?”

Fate grinned, “Bought and paid for.”

Nanoha blinked, “Wow.”

Fate smiled; perhaps Nanoha was old enough to appreciate what it meant to truly go fast then – even if she would rather be flying. “We’re just going into town, but we could go the long way and I could show you what she can do.”

Nanoha laughed nervously, “You – You don’t have to, Fate-chan. I trust you.” She climbed into the passenger’s seat and Fate made sure that she buckled into the seat before she put the car into gear and started it.

This would prove interesting.

and lolz, I made a Futurama funny.

O.K. I just go out for a minute to eat and now I'm lost
Is this continue of Nanoha's path or Fate's Path?
And after Satashi, Someone else had continue Nanoha's Path?

[Keroko]

Good point, it would be a good idea to tag whether you are carying on Fate or Nanoha's path.

This one is Fate's, by the way.