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Tzurial · 2003-11-23, 22:26

A character in one of my stories. She has no background though... Oh white void how you haunt me so!

Tell me what you think

gravitation · 2003-11-23, 22:27

lol its not really my thing if ya know what i mean but its still good artwork noneoftheless! well done ^_^

Gaara11 · 2003-11-23, 22:41

Nice drawing but she's one girl I don't want to see naked.

Asura · 2003-11-24, 00:35

well, since u asked..., maybe can work a bit on the feminine side? the face that is... just a little bit.

xfordained · 2003-11-24, 03:30

face is scary rest is good ....erh face is so disturbing

CaliforniaRoll · 2003-11-24, 05:14

Anyone else see the movie Flashdance?
Cause it sure seems like he tried to put that girl into anime form. As far as comments go, i agree with everyone else.

dragonstar13 · 2003-11-24, 08:30

The CGing is pretty nice, but fix the body a bit.
Face:Make the nose smaller. It also needs to go a little more upwards. Make the chin a bit more pointy. It's too long and round and makes her look more like a guy.
Body:Left arm looks a bit longer then right arm. Try to make her breasts a bit bigger as well. Just so it's more noticable. She looks way too flat.

I'm not sure if you were trying to make her look like a guy, but her face mostly is what gives her this image. I thought she was a guy until someone pointed out otherwise.

Tomomi · 2003-11-24, 09:05

Quite nice! Hmm, but izzit possible if you fix her face a little? It looks a little weird though.

Tea Pad · 2003-11-25, 02:22

Ehm, I can't say I agree with people wanting you to change the face. It's nice to see someone doing something different instead of just copying from their favourite anime or manga. Keep developing your own style and you'll be so much the better for it.

Tzurial · 2003-11-25, 02:39

Thanks for my manly chin style support teapad ;_;
and everyone! Ill work harder to make my faces not so sordid! Look forward to my heroics!

Joshk · 2003-11-25, 09:40

lol man that girl is uglyyyyyyyyyyyyy kinda makes my potrait of my girlfriend look good ahhahaha. Anyways nice job on the cg and the body isnt too bad. The face is too long and inside curvy and the eye pops out of the head on the left ewwwwww and the nose.... anyways Im shure you'll get a more femine style soon enough.

Tea Pad · 2003-11-25, 12:07

Yes, hurry up and conform to the accepted convention! There's not a moment to lose!

*hums the theme from the Mod Squad*

dragonstar13 · 2003-11-25, 18:01

Hmm, so did you do this on purpose?
I'm guessing you draw a lot more guys yes? This isn't a bad thing either though.

OFFSPRiNGCo16 · 2003-11-25, 19:23

Nice drawing although she doesnt look to apealing...

calavera spain · 2003-11-26, 09:35

change the face..... if its possible, its too good body for this girl

2003-11-23, 22:26	Link #1
Tzurial in silent opposition Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: oh...I've been there	I share with you A character in one of my stories. She has no background though... Oh white void how you haunt me so! Tell me what you think

2003-11-23, 22:27	Link #2
gravitation Don't use animesuki now.. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: London, UK Age: 34	lol its not really my thing if ya know what i mean but its still good artwork noneoftheless! well done ^_^

2003-11-23, 22:41	Link #3
Gaara11 ~ Got Love? ~ Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: New Jersey Age: 45	Nice drawing but she's one girl I don't want to see naked.

2003-11-24, 00:35	Link #4
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	well, since u asked..., maybe can work a bit on the feminine side? the face that is... just a little bit.

2003-11-24, 03:30	Link #5
xfordained you should die Join Date: Nov 2003	face is scary rest is good ....erh face is so disturbing

2003-11-24, 05:14	Link #6
CaliforniaRoll Avocado,Cucumb,Crap,Mayo Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: SoCal Age: 44	Anyone else see the movie Flashdance? Cause it sure seems like he tried to put that girl into anime form. As far as comments go, i agree with everyone else.

2003-11-24, 08:30	Link #7
dragonstar13 Busy Join Date: Jun 2003 Age: 41	The CGing is pretty nice, but fix the body a bit. Face:Make the nose smaller. It also needs to go a little more upwards. Make the chin a bit more pointy. It's too long and round and makes her look more like a guy. Body:Left arm looks a bit longer then right arm. Try to make her breasts a bit bigger as well. Just so it's more noticable. She looks way too flat. I'm not sure if you were trying to make her look like a guy, but her face mostly is what gives her this image. I thought she was a guy until someone pointed out otherwise.

2003-11-24, 09:05	Link #8
Tomomi chrno fangal Join Date: Nov 2003 Age: 36	Quite nice! Hmm, but izzit possible if you fix her face a little? It looks a little weird though.

2003-11-25, 02:22	Link #9
Tea Pad Earth Died Screaming Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Thrushcross Grange	Ehm, I can't say I agree with people wanting you to change the face. It's nice to see someone doing something different instead of just copying from their favourite anime or manga. Keep developing your own style and you'll be so much the better for it.

2003-11-25, 02:39	Link #10
Tzurial in silent opposition Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: oh...I've been there	Thanks for my manly chin style support teapad ;_; and everyone! Ill work harder to make my faces not so sordid! Look forward to my heroics!

2003-11-25, 09:40	Link #11
Joshk Member Join Date: Nov 2003	lol man that girl is uglyyyyyyyyyyyyy kinda makes my potrait of my girlfriend look good ahhahaha. Anyways nice job on the cg and the body isnt too bad. The face is too long and inside curvy and the eye pops out of the head on the left ewwwwww and the nose.... anyways Im shure you'll get a more femine style soon enough.

2003-11-25, 12:07	Link #12
Tea Pad Earth Died Screaming Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Thrushcross Grange	Yes, hurry up and conform to the accepted convention! There's not a moment to lose! hums the theme from the Mod Squad

2003-11-25, 18:01	Link #13
dragonstar13 Busy Join Date: Jun 2003 Age: 41	Hmm, so did you do this on purpose? I'm guessing you draw a lot more guys yes? This isn't a bad thing either though.

2003-11-25, 19:23	Link #14
OFFSPRiNGCo16 Godlike Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Long Island New York Age: 37	Nice drawing although she doesnt look to apealing...

2003-11-26, 09:35	Link #15
calavera spain empty mind Join Date: May 2003 Location: spain (barcelona) Age: 38	change the face..... if its possible, its too good body for this girl