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ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-01, 22:51

Too beautiful, less mysterious. -_-

Though in this case, the protagonist might think that it was too beautiful to even exist, adding some mystic feel.

Yachiyo · 2012-01-01, 22:53

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Too beautiful, less mysterious. The first is better hands down. -_-

Though in this case, the protagonist might think that it was too beautiful to even exist, adding some mystic feel.

Don't say only protagonist

Since the whole Radiant Operatives will go there

Supporting characters are also there.

ChiyoHakozaki · 2012-01-01, 22:54

Sup

Finished making spring roll stuff, and RJ's texted me he's gotten off the train.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-01, 22:59

Well, unless some member of Radiant Operatives are the mole or villains... they're all protagonist. ._.

Spoiler for Here's some grimdark:

“At the time, we justified it with the reasoning that the guys harassed Rin, physically that is.”

“Yeah, I’ve remember that” gulped, Rin has mixed expression of anger and fear “You’re being reprimanded and suspended for two weeks, you and everybody refused to elaborate, and I myself are too afraid too ask. Meanwhile, the five guys harassed me is expulsed right?”

How they accomplished it? Setting her twin tail on fire… that’s really above and beyond pranks.

“And Ichika being Ichika, going so much as insulting his friend and families result in a roar, and hurting them physically same thing as sending yourself to the ICU. Of course, I’ve not much better at the time, going along with the flow and just like to spill my excessive energy in fistfight, I was there as Ichika’s poisonous sidekick”

“Paving our way to the top… we gathers the so-called underdogs under Ichika’s flag… virtually creating the strongest gang in the school based on number, tactics, and information network, ‘Silver Throne’, unnoticed by most student and teacher because our member also consist of important people from Student Council and Disciplinary Committee. You know what Ichika’s title is at that time?”

“Emperor of the Silver Throne”

“And then… that time has come, when we’re forced to see…A friend being horribly maimed… a friend who has his logical minds twisted by false courage spread by none else but me and Dan”

“Tomoki!”

“It’s okay; I’m not the weak Tomoki you knew”

“And then we think, how many kind hearted guy we converted into a monster and how I had turned into the very monster I despised. After that certain incident, I and Dan quit fighting and lucky that at the time, the discipline and rules has been refined and no brutal fight occurs after that, around the same time Rin left…”

“This right fist of mine by no means clean, and for ByakuShiki turned into a silvery white gauntlet, it’s quite Ironic” biting his lips, Ichika-nii muttered “Madoka, I’m sorry I’m not telling you”

“I… It’s okay, everyone has their own secret right?”

I haven’t told him, my secret…

ChiyoHakozaki · 2012-01-01, 23:09

I've got to go fry said steam rolls, then prepare for RJ coming, then I've got to put away laundry... Where'd all my free time go? I thought I reserved some?!

Well, I'll try to be back later. No guarantees though.

Also, Zero, the grimdark is very well written.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-01, 23:22

Not as good as General Hawk, Blitz, or Box. ._.

Besides, how was your first fanfiction project?

EthernalRain · 2012-01-01, 23:23

Yo. Waiting for the bus at Starbucks. Chiyo called and says be polite for spring roll time even though I'm full...

ChiyoHakozaki · 2012-01-01, 23:27

Just hang in there RJ.

And get me a latte!

Don't forget the cream!

Oh, Zero, my first fanfic experience is still under way. Unless you count that odd Lucky Star fic I never posted.

EthernalRain · 2012-01-01, 23:33

One latte, the Chihiro Melissa way.

I'll get it, and will be there soon! See you there!

ChiyoHakozaki · 2012-01-01, 23:35

Looking forward to it.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-01, 23:36

Eat your springroll because anything made by your loved ones will taste delicious. Charcoal made from soybean and corn included (long story).

Blitz, I have some problem with the 'harem stalking Madoka and Ichika' scenario, hope I can finish a part before tonight because I'm going to... erm, 'beach family trip' for 1-2 days.

ChiyoHakozaki · 2012-01-01, 23:38

Don't worry, he'll eat it.

We both call each other by our nicknames, since they're the names we've told EVERYONE to call us.

His actual name is Ric(k) Jordan, while mine is like he said, Chihiro Melissa.

I call him Kouhei sometimes to watch him squirm a bit, since it's a homage to one of his Negima RP characters. Whose wife is named Chiyo.

Now, back to the on topicness! You need help with the harem stalking Ichika? You could do segments on their opinions of what they're doing.

Each of them could think that they're doing something different. Charlotte (the most rational of all of them) could think they're just hanging out, while Rin (you know how she is) could think of the most extreme story.

HasuMasu · 2012-01-01, 23:41

Spoiler for names:

My collection grows.

ValiantX3 · 2012-01-01, 23:43

Mou, don't call it charcoal!

ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-01, 23:47

Being mostly burned carbohydrate, what else should I call it? Oh, and the rice. You make a giant cracker weighed half a freaking kilo. That's awesome.

@Box
Add Tria there...

@Chiyo
What would girls talking about BESIDES from boy-related stuff?

EDIT: Eras will be pissed that he miss a lot of weird stuff again.

HasuMasu · 2012-01-01, 23:51

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Being mostly burned carbohydrate, what else should I call it? Oh, and the rice. You make a giant cracker weighed half a freaking kilo. That's awesome.

@Box
Add Tria there...

@Chiyo
What would girls talking about BESIDES from boy-related stuff?

Done.

As for what girls talk about...it's...way too varied.

ChiyoHakozaki · 2012-01-01, 23:53

@ Zero: General life, and stuff that boys talk about but just genderflipped, to be honest.

I don't really girl-out much.

demino_hellsin · 2012-01-01, 23:53

Do we have a time(date) on when Cecilia's parents died and how old Cecilia was when they passed away?

ChiyoHakozaki · 2012-01-01, 23:59

@ demino: From my memory, I believe she was between 7 - 12 when her parents died, since she had the maturity required to fight for her parents money, and make some pretty big decisions.

StratoSpear · 2012-01-02, 00:06

Not part of Chapter 5, but maybe for one of the future chapters ^^

Spoiler for Scene:

Scene music (just as the drone fires the first shot)

2012-01-01, 22:51	Link #16021
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Too beautiful, less mysterious. -_- Though in this case, the protagonist might think that it was too beautiful to even exist, adding some mystic feel. __________________

2012-01-01, 22:59	Link #16024
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Well, unless some member of Radiant Operatives are the mole or villains... they're all protagonist. ._. Spoiler for Here's some grimdark: “At the time, we justified it with the reasoning that the guys harassed Rin, physically that is.” “Yeah, I’ve remember that” gulped, Rin has mixed expression of anger and fear “You’re being reprimanded and suspended for two weeks, you and everybody refused to elaborate, and I myself are too afraid too ask. Meanwhile, the five guys harassed me is expulsed right?” How they accomplished it? Setting her twin tail on fire… that’s really above and beyond pranks. “And Ichika being Ichika, going so much as insulting his friend and families result in a roar, and hurting them physically same thing as sending yourself to the ICU. Of course, I’ve not much better at the time, going along with the flow and just like to spill my excessive energy in fistfight, I was there as Ichika’s poisonous sidekick” “Paving our way to the top… we gathers the so-called underdogs under Ichika’s flag… virtually creating the strongest gang in the school based on number, tactics, and information network, ‘Silver Throne’, unnoticed by most student and teacher because our member also consist of important people from Student Council and Disciplinary Committee. You know what Ichika’s title is at that time?” “Emperor of the Silver Throne” “And then… that time has come, when we’re forced to see…A friend being horribly maimed… a friend who has his logical minds twisted by false courage spread by none else but me and Dan” “Tomoki!” “It’s okay; I’m not the weak Tomoki you knew” “And then we think, how many kind hearted guy we converted into a monster and how I had turned into the very monster I despised. After that certain incident, I and Dan quit fighting and lucky that at the time, the discipline and rules has been refined and no brutal fight occurs after that, around the same time Rin left…” “This right fist of mine by no means clean, and for ByakuShiki turned into a silvery white gauntlet, it’s quite Ironic” biting his lips, Ichika-nii muttered “Madoka, I’m sorry I’m not telling you” “I… It’s okay, everyone has their own secret right?” I haven’t told him, my secret… __________________

2012-01-01, 23:22	Link #16026
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Not as good as General Hawk, Blitz, or Box. ._. Besides, how was your first fanfiction project? __________________

2012-01-01, 23:36	Link #16031
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Eat your springroll because anything made by your loved ones will taste delicious. Charcoal made from soybean and corn included (long story). Blitz, I have some problem with the 'harem stalking Madoka and Ichika' scenario, hope I can finish a part before tonight because I'm going to... erm, 'beach family trip' for 1-2 days. __________________

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HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	Spoiler for names: Mike Gomez Rick Vicky Chihiro Kwang Flores My collection grows. __________________

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ChiyoHakozaki Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Wouldn't you like to know?	Sup Finished making spring roll stuff, and RJ's texted me he's gotten off the train.

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ChiyoHakozaki Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Wouldn't you like to know?	I've got to go fry said steam rolls, then prepare for RJ coming, then I've got to put away laundry... Where'd all my free time go? I thought I reserved some?! Well, I'll try to be back later. No guarantees though. Also, Zero, the grimdark is very well written.

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EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	Yo. Waiting for the bus at Starbucks. Chiyo called and says be polite for spring roll time even though I'm full...

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ChiyoHakozaki Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Wouldn't you like to know?	Just hang in there RJ. And get me a latte! Don't forget the cream! Oh, Zero, my first fanfic experience is still under way. Unless you count that odd Lucky Star fic I never posted.

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EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	One latte, the Chihiro Melissa way. I'll get it, and will be there soon! See you there!

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ChiyoHakozaki Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Wouldn't you like to know?	Looking forward to it.

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ChiyoHakozaki Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Wouldn't you like to know?	Don't worry, he'll eat it. We both call each other by our nicknames, since they're the names we've told EVERYONE to call us. His actual name is Ric(k) Jordan, while mine is like he said, Chihiro Melissa. I call him Kouhei sometimes to watch him squirm a bit, since it's a homage to one of his Negima RP characters. Whose wife is named Chiyo. Now, back to the on topicness! You need help with the harem stalking Ichika? You could do segments on their opinions of what they're doing. Each of them could think that they're doing something different. Charlotte (the most rational of all of them) could think they're just hanging out, while Rin (you know how she is) could think of the most extreme story.

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ValiantX3 Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2011	Mou, don't call it charcoal!

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Being mostly burned carbohydrate, what else should I call it? Oh, and the rice. You make a giant cracker weighed half a freaking kilo. That's awesome. @Box Add Tria there... @Chiyo What would girls talking about BESIDES from boy-related stuff? EDIT: Eras will be pissed that he miss a lot of weird stuff again. __________________

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ChiyoHakozaki Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Wouldn't you like to know?	@ Zero: General life, and stuff that boys talk about but just genderflipped, to be honest. I don't really girl-out much.

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Do we have a time(date) on when Cecilia's parents died and how old Cecilia was when they passed away?

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ChiyoHakozaki Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Wouldn't you like to know?	@ demino: From my memory, I believe she was between 7 - 12 when her parents died, since she had the maturity required to fight for her parents money, and make some pretty big decisions.

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StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Not part of Chapter 5, but maybe for one of the future chapters ^^ Spoiler for Scene: ========== In the skies above the coastline ========== A lone Praxidike drone enters Japanese airspace while scanning the surroundings, seemingly looking for its objective. Its scanner sweeps across its frontal view and detects a trio of targets approaching it head-on. The drone looks up and notices three F-15J Eagle fighter jets flying in formation, prompting it to aim its forearm cannon at the jets as they then break formation. The jets go into afterburner as they belt past the drone then rolls towards various directions while the drone begins to open fire at them. One of the jets attempts evasive maneuvers as the drone sets its sights on it, furiously firing its forearm energy cannon and clipping off one of the jet’s wings, causing it to spin out of control. The drone relentlessly shoots at the falling plane and lands a few shots into the fuselage, with the resulting explosion destroying the jet. It moves on to target one of the two remaining jets but flinches upon being hit by a missile, followed by vulcan fire which slowly weakens its barrier shield. The drone boosts away and targets the two jets, purging a panel on its other arm which reveals several micro missiles. Upon achieving a lock on the jets, the drone launches the missiles while they move to evade while deploying flares. While one of the jets successfully escapes the barrage, the other takes heavy damage from a few missiles that weren’t distracted by the flares. Fire erupts from the back of the jet as it swerves around, with the pilot trying to get the drone within the aiming reticule. Aiming at the oncoming burning jet, the drone fires its forearm cannon, grazing parts of its fuselage and striking its air intake vents while it retaliates with vulcan fire. As the jet begins to go critical from sustaining hits, the pilot ejects moments before it eventually blows up. The pilot of the remaining jet takes aim and fires the vulcan at the drone while switching to close-range missile, marked by a [AAM-5] indicator, then proceeds to fire one as it achieves a lock. The vulcan fire distracts the drone as the missile zeros in and hits, disarraying it. The jet darts past the drone as it then recovers and targets the plane, moving to aim its cannon. Noticing the drone’s movements, the pilot quickly puts up the airbrakes while pitching up just as the drone opens fire. The jet narrowly avoids the shot and ascends, prompting the drone to chase it while deploying its energy blade. As the drone closes in for a strike, the pilot shuts off the jet’s engines and redeploys the airbrakes, putting the jet into a stall and then plunges into a freefall as the drone overshoots and misses its blade swing. The pilot struggles to stabilize the jet while rebooting its engines, eventually getting enough speed to glide its way to a stable lift and re-engage the drone. Preparing for another run, the drone dashes towards the jet from above while the pilot inverts it, pitches up and deploys more flares. The flares momentarily scrambles the drone’s targeting system as it attempts to keep track of the overwhelming heat signatures, giving the pilot ample time to lock onto it. He fires a couple more missiles and follows up with relentless vulcan fire. The missiles strike the drone, greatly attenuating its shield barrier while the following vulcan fire neutralizes it completely. With its shield defense wiped out, the drone resorts to aggressive maneuvers and dogs the jet while firing its energy cannon, scoring hits on the jets fuselage as it breaks right to shake off the tailing drone. The drone tries to keep within melee range with the jet while the pilot pulls up the airbrake and does a spiral roll, causing the drone to pass by and into the jet’s aiming reticule. Without delay, the pilot squeezes the trigger on the control stick, firing a stream of vulcan fire on the drone that’s directly ahead, scoring hits on it. The drone redeploys its energy blade as it sustains consistent damage on its armor from the barrage, then lunges the blade towards the oncoming jet’s cockpit. The pilots pulls the ejection lever and bails out while his damaged Eagle crashes into the drone, causing an intense explosion which completely destroys both of them. Scene music (just as the drone fires the first shot) __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."