Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Keroko]

I think Satashi is wondering the OF part stands for, like me.

Nanohaverse is short for Nanoha universe.

[Vie]

Quitting my lurking. xD

Originally Posted by Satashi

Requesting help on Dream Wing here........

Spoiler for Mai-Otome Question:

For those of you who know about Mai-Otome, do you think it's acceptable to time-jump a few characters? Mainly looking at the Pearl Otome Nao (ZOMG Juliet! *flails with heart eyes*) and Chie(sex).

To make them Pearl Otome in Dream Wing. I kinda want Nanoha and Fate to make friends with Pearls.

YES, please! More Otome Nao and Otome Chie! I honestly don't mind the time jumping, since anything with more Chie/Nao/ShizNat is awesome. (That's why I love thesinwithin's Otome fiction, cause there's lotsa Nao and Chie)

Originally Posted by Keroko

Nanohaverse is short for Nanoha universe.

Hmm, I refer to it as the Nanoverse lol.

[Keroko]

Returning home is not the right way to describe it, but as you stand on the bridge of the Star Destroyer, a wave of nostalgia does hit you. The same view of a planet viewed from outer space, the same bridge with its lowered areas, where people are still buzzing around wildly handling the large ship. As you look up from the crew area, you are greeted by a familiar face.

"Yo!" Keroko greets you. "Welcome back, it has been a while hasn't it? How about we do a little re-capturing of the events before we continue on?

When we left of, Nanoha had just transferred to a new school, and had made a few friends around class. However, the next day she was struck with realization that her family had now moved away to a different country while she had remained, and was struck with homesickness. Fate was willing to help, but Nanoha being Nanoha, she wormed her way around, not wanting to worry her friend too much. Later on she remembered she had recieved an invite from Hayate to come over and eat when she wanted to, the choices represented were as followed:

A.) I’ll go buy ingredients and cook myself a nice meal.
B.) … Hayate practically invited me over tonight; I can’t really decline, can I?
C.) A meal at Hayate’s place sounds nice.
D.) I’m going to take a nice stroll through town, and order some takeout at the end of the day.

The winning option was B. Now, I will be cheating a bit and warn you that you have fallen into the author's trap." Keroko turns to glare at one of the officers standing on the higher grounds, but the officer quickly leaves the bridge to avoid her wrath.

"He does that sometimes, creating situations which can be viewed as both good and bad. Like I warned you last time: The choices you make determine Nanoha's emotions and motivations. However, Nanoha's emotions aren't like a TV you can switch through, once she is feeling happy its harder to let her feel down and vice versa. Right now though, you have send her to Hayate out of a sense of duty, hardly a mood for a comfortable dinner. You will have to work hard and see through the author's traps. Don't be afraid to leap into the unknown or take risky actions, you never know where you may end up."

Keroko clasps her hands and cracks her knuckles as she begins to walk into the direction where the officer disapeared to. "That will be all for now. Excuse me while I go hunt down Keroko-kun and pin him down to finish the next installment of Raising Heart.

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Satashi

OF-Nanohaverse?

I'm basically kicking my Original Fiction characters headlong into a portal into the Nanoha universe.

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Returning home is not the right way to describe it, but as you stand on the bridge of the Star Destroyer, a wave of nostalgia does hit you. The same view of a planet viewed from outer space, the same bridge with its lowered areas, where people are still buzzing around wildly handling the large ship. As you look up from the crew area, you are greeted by a familiar face.

"Yo!" Keroko greets you. "Welcome back, it has been a while hasn't it? How about we do a little re-capturing of the events before we continue on?

When we left of, Nanoha had just transferred to a new school, and had made a few friends around class. However, the next day she was struck with realization that her family had now moved away to a different country while she had remained, and was struck with homesickness. Fate was willing to help, but Nanoha being Nanoha, she wormed her way around, not wanting to worry her friend too much. Later on she remembered she had recieved an invite from Hayate to come over and eat when she wanted to, the choices represented were as followed:

A.) I’ll go buy ingredients and cook myself a nice meal.
B.) … Hayate practically invited me over tonight; I can’t really decline, can I?
C.) A meal at Hayate’s place sounds nice.
D.) I’m going to take a nice stroll through town, and order some takeout at the end of the day.

The winning option was B. Now, I will be cheating a bit and warn you that you have fallen into the author's trap." Keroko turns to glare at one of the officers standing on the higher grounds, but the officer quickly leaves the bridge to avoid her wrath.

"He does that sometimes, creating situations which can be viewed as both good and bad. Like I warned you last time: The choices you make determine Nanoha's emotions and motivations. However, Nanoha's emotions aren't like a TV you can switch through, once she is feeling happy its harder to let her feel down and vice versa. Right now though, you have send her to Hayate out of a sense of duty, hardly a mood for a comfortable dinner. You will have to work hard and see through the author's traps. Don't be afraid to leap into the unknown or take risky actions, you never know where you may end up."

Keroko clasps her hands and cracks her knuckles as she begins to walk into the direction where the officer disapeared to. "That will be all for now. Excuse me while I go hunt down Keroko-kun and pin him down to finish the next installment of Raising Heart.

So Keroko is not only a trap in the traditional sense... We now have other traps to watch out for!? I don't have points in "Detect Traps" dangit!

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Krinen

I'm basically kicking my Original Fiction characters headlong into a portal into the Nanoha universe.

Oh, so it's an OC story?

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Oh, so it's an OC story?

Anyone you don't recognize is from Magistrix, my OC story, yes.

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Why would we hurt you? XD I dub this coolness Phantom of the Lyrical (Feel free to chage ><)

>_>

<_<

*takes name and RUNS*

Originally Posted by yoshilord

@evangelion
I can actually see that fic working and i say go for it. with fate's sad past in the anime that will work perfectly
of course i can't imagine fate being scarred or "ugly"

Yea, that's why I found Fate to fit the Phantom's part so well . Though as to what's under the mask or why she wears it in the first place...is a mystery

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

YOU HAVE MADE ME HAPPY LIKE YOU DON'T BELIEVE. Words cannot describe how much I love Phantom of the Opera. And now there's Nanoha too?!

Oh... oh my goodness.

So Fate's the Phantom? I wonder how her radiation burns face looks...

mmmmnnn Fate in a fedora.

I think that I might die of squee.

x.x

Just keep imagining it on loop

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

*imagines Fate singing "Music of the Night"*
*swoons*
this is strangely..fun..

Ah, if only we could hear her singing it

Originally Posted by markesellus

That was EPIC! Fate as the phantom! That's awesome! Were you watching this or listening to the song recently? I want some more of this.

I just happen to look it up on Youtube for no reason and the idea suddenly struck me . If anyone else wants to add more, feel free. It was a crack moment for me

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Jimmy C

HiME and Otome are examples of the Sunrise series "trainwreck" in action after all. Along with GSeed Destiny.

So true.

Originally Posted by Kagerou

ARRRRRRRGHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
SATASHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

OoO Darn it Rick rolled again!!!!

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

*BRUTALLY MURDERS SATASHI IN UNSPEAKABLE WAYS*

I HATE YOU!!!!!! ><

/cackle

You guys R hopeless!!!

Originally Posted by Keroko

Returning home is not the right way to describe it, but as you stand on the bridge of the Star Destroyer, a wave of nostalgia does hit you. The same view of a planet viewed from outer space, the same bridge with its lowered areas, where people are still buzzing around wildly handling the large ship. As you look up from the crew area, you are greeted by a familiar face.

"Yo!" Keroko greets you. "Welcome back, it has been a while hasn't it? How about we do a little re-capturing of the events before we continue on?

When we left of, Nanoha had just transferred to a new school, and had made a few friends around class. However, the next day she was struck with realization that her family had now moved away to a different country while she had remained, and was struck with homesickness. Fate was willing to help, but Nanoha being Nanoha, she wormed her way around, not wanting to worry her friend too much. Later on she remembered she had recieved an invite from Hayate to come over and eat when she wanted to, the choices represented were as followed:

A.) I’ll go buy ingredients and cook myself a nice meal.
B.) … Hayate practically invited me over tonight; I can’t really decline, can I?
C.) A meal at Hayate’s place sounds nice.
D.) I’m going to take a nice stroll through town, and order some takeout at the end of the day.

The winning option was B. Now, I will be cheating a bit and warn you that you have fallen into the author's trap." Keroko turns to glare at one of the officers standing on the higher grounds, but the officer quickly leaves the bridge to avoid her wrath.

"He does that sometimes, creating situations which can be viewed as both good and bad. Like I warned you last time: The choices you make determine Nanoha's emotions and motivations. However, Nanoha's emotions aren't like a TV you can switch through, once she is feeling happy its harder to let her feel down and vice versa. Right now though, you have send her to Hayate out of a sense of duty, hardly a mood for a comfortable dinner. You will have to work hard and see through the author's traps. Don't be afraid to leap into the unknown or take risky actions, you never know where you may end up."

Keroko clasps her hands and cracks her knuckles as she begins to walk into the direction where the officer disapeared to. "That will be all for now. Excuse me while I go hunt down Keroko-kun and pin him down to finish the next installment of Raising Heart.

That felt like a debriefing from a semi-botched sortie in my Y-wing...

*tucks helmet under arm, and snaps to attention*

Good luck with finding Keroko-kun, Sir.

*RUNS*

Originally Posted by Krinen

I'm basically kicking my Original Fiction characters headlong into a portal into the Nanoha universe.

Join the club. :3

Originally Posted by krisslanza

So Keroko is not only a trap in the traditional sense... We now have other traps to watch out for!? I don't have points in "Detect Traps" dangit!

L2Roll&P Rogue. :3

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Hmm...maybe I should use this song from Phantom for another short...

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Hmm...maybe I should use this song from Phantom for another short...

。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。おまえはばかですよ！！！！！！！！！！

ほんとにばかやろ！！！！！

If you can't read Japanese hiragana, your problem :3

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。おまえはばかですよ！！！！！！！！！！

ほんとにばかやろ！！！！！

If you can't read Japanese hiragana, your problem :3

Oh, I took 2 classes of Japanese in high school so I know the basics. Amazingly I can still read that and understand it. Glad you liked my music choice

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Hmm...maybe I should use this song from Phantom for another short...

TTATT those things always trick me

Spoiler for ...:

Phantom!Fate: Sing for me my angel of music
Nanoha: ...
Phantom!Fate: ...*cough cough* I said... Sing for meeeeeeeeeeee
Nanoha: ... Kay kay
NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP
NEVER GONNA LET YOU DOWN
Phantom!Fate: D: Rickrolled! Now of all times Nanoha!
Nanoha: Ain't I a stinker

That's it that's totally the last time I do that

Seriously though you should use this one

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

That would be totally insane and we'd explode.

And I'd definitely not do imagine something like that and write it down...

Spoiler for Definitly nothing related to Nyan:

*snip*

Spoiler for In case you have no idea what the Nyan dance is:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wieStI7kN-I&feature=user

And for fun the taco song
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_O2nPSddhJg&feature=user

And Btw: How do you embed videos on the board?

If only... If only...

Originally Posted by Satashi

TSS, you made me laugh a lot ^_^ a Sataurial short! I'm flattered!

Oh, BTW,

Dream Wing:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4245271/1/

Enjoy~

So, it begins now. Solid chapter and is bound to get a lot better. Nothing special in this chapter tho

Originally Posted by Satashi

edit: I have Angel's halo for the weekend 0: D

What did you do?

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

I...I just had the sudden urge to do this...

Spoiler for Phantom of the Lyrical:

*snip*

Don't hurt me!!

*RUNZ*

Once in a life time story/inspiration. Glad it span out something like this

<--- Loves the Phantom

Originally Posted by Satashi

Requesting help on Dream Wing here........

Spoiler for Mai-Otome Question:

For those of you who know about Mai-Otome, do you think it's acceptable to time-jump a few characters? Mainly looking at the Pearl Otome Nao (ZOMG Juliet! *flails with heart eyes*) and Chie(sex).

To make them Pearl Otome in Dream Wing. I kinda want Nanoha and Fate to make friends with Pearls.

Speaking of time-jumping. Would it hurt to get teen-Vivio there?

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Annnnnnnnddddddd it's chapter 3 of Bodyguard!Nanoha. I'm sorry that this chapters entire purpose is is to lead to the next chapter really ><.

Spoiler for Bodyguard!Nanoha Ch 3:

*snip*

Spoiler for Note:

*snap*

Parts 1+2

Edit: Page claim for AU's

Edit: Fixxed some formatting issues -_- so if you read it and got confused please check it over again.

Vivio is so cwute

Originally Posted by Kai the Reaper

I'm done with the third and fourth chapters. XD This was originally intended to be only one chapter, but I decided to cut it into two to keep it similar to the first two and to make it easier to read. Enjoy I guess.

Spoiler for [Medieval!Nanoha] Chapter 3:

*snip*

Spoiler for [Medieval!Nanoha] Chapter 4:

*snap*

Spoiler for Notes::

*snap*

I'm still a bit disappointed of Arf losing her kemonomimi characteristics but some things can't be helped

Chrono evil? About time this happened
TSAB semi-openly evil? Half way from the closet
And Lindy as the mastermind? Fabulous I could say

Although I do expect some things to be different than they seem now but this turn sure makes things interesting

Originally Posted by Satashi

Actually it's an old one 0:3

Spoiler for special:

I didn't even realize I had been Rick Roll'd until I read other people's comments

That big text was too small for me

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

OoO Darn it Rick rolled again!!!!

I like the new/not really new sig. Yuuno needs some lovin'


Edit: Page claim for

Spoiler for Surprise:

Fate: *flipping through mail* Oh. A new video letter from Nanoha. *Happy happy*
Fate: *Puts in Dvd player* I wonder what’s been going on. *Video flickers on*
Video: Nanoha: Hey Fate how a-a-r-r-e—e *video starts to flicker*
Fate: N-nanoha! What’s going on!
Video: *You know who pops on* Never gonna give you up! Never gonna let you down!
Fate: D: I’ve been RICK ROLLLLLLEEEEEEEDDDDDDDD! for the fifth time this month...
Nanoha: *far far away* He he he

Edit2: Made the surprise better

That's the thing I hate about Rick Rolling. They're so undodgeable

Originally Posted by Satashi

Since we're doing youtube, here's the muppets singing the Nanoha opening.

Spoiler for NanoFate:

Spoiler for Saved by the Bell and muppets:

Fate clicked the link, smiling as the muppets came up. "Awww, how sweet, Nanoha sent me a cute clip!" Her mouse went over to the play button and she leaned back in her chair happily.

As the music came on, the blonde's eyebrow twitched lightly. "She...She... Rick roll'd me.... NANOHA rick rolled me!"

Precia peeked into her daughter's room, grinning at the sight. " Awww, did Fate get pwned?"

"Go away mom!" Fate chunked a beanie baby at the door, making Precia hide behind it.

Although this was just too obvious

Fate needs to be pwnd more often if the reaction is such a cute one

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

*BRUTALLY MURDERS SATASHI IN UNSPEAKABLE WAYS*

I HATE YOU!!!!!! ><

Bad memories?

Originally Posted by Satashi

Dream wing future glimpse!

Spoiler for :D:

Arika: Puri puri puri puri bang!

Pipiru piru piru pipiru pi

Originally Posted by Keroko

Returning home is not the right way to describe it, but as you stand on the bridge of the Star Destroyer, a wave of nostalgia does hit you. The same view of a planet viewed from outer space, the same bridge with its lowered areas, where people are still buzzing around wildly handling the large ship. As you look up from the crew area, you are greeted by a familiar face.

"Yo!" Keroko greets you. "Welcome back, it has been a while hasn't it? How about we do a little re-capturing of the events before we continue on?

When we left of, Nanoha had just transferred to a new school, and had made a few friends around class. However, the next day she was struck with realization that her family had now moved away to a different country while she had remained, and was struck with homesickness. Fate was willing to help, but Nanoha being Nanoha, she wormed her way around, not wanting to worry her friend too much. Later on she remembered she had recieved an invite from Hayate to come over and eat when she wanted to, the choices represented were as followed:

A.) I’ll go buy ingredients and cook myself a nice meal.
B.) … Hayate practically invited me over tonight; I can’t really decline, can I?
C.) A meal at Hayate’s place sounds nice.
D.) I’m going to take a nice stroll through town, and order some takeout at the end of the day.

The winning option was B. Now, I will be cheating a bit and warn you that you have fallen into the author's trap." Keroko turns to glare at one of the officers standing on the higher grounds, but the officer quickly leaves the bridge to avoid her wrath.

"He does that sometimes, creating situations which can be viewed as both good and bad. Like I warned you last time: The choices you make determine Nanoha's emotions and motivations. However, Nanoha's emotions aren't like a TV you can switch through, once she is feeling happy its harder to let her feel down and vice versa. Right now though, you have send her to Hayate out of a sense of duty, hardly a mood for a comfortable dinner. You will have to work hard and see through the author's traps. Don't be afraid to leap into the unknown or take risky actions, you never know where you may end up."

Keroko clasps her hands and cracks her knuckles as she begins to walk into the direction where the officer disapeared to. "That will be all for now. Excuse me while I go hunt down Keroko-kun and pin him down to finish the next installment of Raising Heart.

I knew that was the trap! People! We do not stand alone in this fight. We do not play for ourselves but against Keroko. We must stand together to dodge traps and aim for the harem/incest/shota/loli/bestiary/yuri ending or preferably all at once

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。おまえはばかですよ!!!!!!!!!!

ほんとにばかやろ!!!!!

If you can't read Japanese hiragana, your problem :3

Somebody has reeeeally bad memories of being Rolled

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

TTATT those things always trick me

Spoiler for ...:

Phantom!Fate: Sing for me my angel of music
Nanoha: ...
Phantom!Fate: ...*cough cough* I said... Sing for meeeeeeeeeeee
Nanoha: ... Kay kay
NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP
NEVER GONNA LET YOU DOWN
Phantom!Fate: D: Rickrolled! Now of all times Nanoha!
Nanoha: Ain't I a stinker

That's it that's totally the last time I do that

Seriously though you should use this one

They've....they've made a Rick Roll version for Mario? O.o

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

Somebody has reeeeally bad memories of being Rolled

You could say that, yes :3

*Nibbles on Sam's head*

[Evangelion Xgouki]

By popular demand...and cause I just this song is awesome (though not as awesome as 'Phantom of the Opera' )

Spoiler for Phantom of the Lyrical, pt 2:

Spoiler for Accompanying Song:

Nanoha stood by the boat as the phantom walked up the small stone steps. The candles lit the underground cave well, adding a soft glow as the shadows danced along the walls. Sheet music lay strewn over the floor and around the various, ornate curtains that hung from the ceiling. From their looks, they were taken from the theater as well as the other pieces of furniture in this underground cavern. Her gave fell onto the phantom as she removed her cloak and let it fall to the floor before beginning.

I have brought you to the seat of sweet music's throne ...
to this kingdom where all must pay homage to music ...
music...

She slowly made her way up a raised section, pausing briefly in front of the small organ set against the back wall.

You have come here, for one purpose, and one alone ...
I first heard you sing,
I have needed you with me, to serve me, to sing, for my music ...
my music ...

Her eyes gazed into the phantom's. She watched as she took slow steps down towards the water's edge without breaking the gaze.

Night-time sharpens, heightens each sensation ...
Darkness stirs and wakes imagination ...
Silently the senses abandon their defenses ...

A gloved hand was extended out to her. Nanoha reached out and gently took it. With a slight smile, the phantom backed up the stairs while continuing to gaze upon the brunette.

Slowly, gently night unfurls its splendor ...
Grasp it, sense it - tremulous and tender ...

Nanoha found her gaze to wander around this mysterious place. In all the years she knew her, this was the first time she had been taken to this place. Usually she would be taught in her room or while walking though the labyrinth just beyond. She resisted the urge to gasp as a gloved hand gently pressed against her cheek and brought her gaze back to those burgundy eyes.

Turn your face away from the garish light of day,
turn your thoughts away from cold, unfeeling light -
and listen to the music of the night ...

They paused for a moment at the base of the organ's platform. No words needed to be exchanged as Nanoha let her hand slip free as the phantom made her way up the platform.

Close your eyes and surrender to your darkest dreams!
Purge your thoughts of the life you knew before!
Close your eyes, let your spirit start to soar!

Nanoha closed her eyes, taking in the words and the sound of the powerful voice. It was the the voice that she had heard so many years ago. The same voice that she chased after to be like with such power and beauty.

And you'll live as you've never lived before ...

From the top of the platform, the phantom offered her hand again. Nanoha reached up and took the hand, allowing herself to be lead up as she gazed at the masked face.

Softly, deftly, music shall caress you ...
Hear it, feel it, secretly possess you ...
Open up your mind, let your fantasies unwind,
in this darkness which you know you cannot fight -
the darkness of the music of the night.

She watched as the phantom stepped around a row of candles in front of the organ, her voice echoing throughout the cavern.

Let your mind start a journey through a strange, new world!
Leave all thoughts of the life you knew before!
Let your soul
Take you where you long to be!
Only then can you belong to me ...

The phantom stepped up before her and lightly caressed her cheek. Nanoha closed her eyes as she felt herself being turned around. Hands crept along her sides and slowly made their way around to rest on her stomach. All the while her heart pounded in her chest, her breathing quickening. A hand drifted down to her left hand. She didn't resist as it was lifted up and placed on the unmasked cheek of the phantom behind her. It was smooth and warm as she caressed it lightly.

Floating, falling, sweet intoxication!
Touch me, trust me, savor each sensation!

She opened her eyes and took the phantom's hand as she was led down the other end of the platform. The phantom walked besides her, her other hand resting around the brunette's. As they walked she could feel the toll of the long evening's performance added onto all the recent excitement catch up to her.

Let the dream begin,
let your darker side give in to the power of
the music that I write - the power of the music of the night ...

Nanoha could feel her eyes growing heavy as she turned to look at the phantom. She merely smiled back, as if knowing. As much as she struggled, she could no longer hold back and passed out in the phantom's arms. With a small smile, she carefully picked up the unconscious girl.

You alone can make my song take flight -

She carried her over to the large bed and gently laid her down in it. Sitting on the edge, the phantom reached out and ran a hand over Nanoha's cheek and down across her chin.

help me make the music of the night ...

The phantom stepped back and lowered the transparent black veil around the bed. She stood there for a moment, gazing at the sleeping girl before taking her leave.

Spoiler for Author's Notes:

I made a few alterations here and there. If there is protest against the changes, I can change it to reflect the original material.

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

By popular demand...and cause I just this song is awesome (though not as awesome as 'Phantom of the Opera' )

Spoiler for Phantom of the Lyrical, pt 2:

Spoiler for Accompanying Song:

Nanoha stood by the boat as the phantom walked up the small stone steps. The candles lit the underground cave well, adding a soft glow as the shadows danced along the walls. Sheet music lay strewn over the floor and around the various, ornate curtains that hung from the ceiling. From their looks, they were taken from the theater as well as the other pieces of furniture in this underground cavern. Her gave fell onto the phantom as she removed her cloak and let it fall to the floor before beginning.

I have brought you to the seat of sweet music's throne ...
to this kingdom where all must pay homage to music ...
music...

She slowly made her way up a raised section, pausing briefly in front of the small organ set against the back wall.

You have come here, for one purpose, and one alone ...
I first heard you sing,
I have needed you with me, to serve me, to sing, for my music ...
my music ...

Her eyes gazed into the phantom's. She watched as she took slow steps down towards the water's edge without breaking the gaze.

Night-time sharpens, heightens each sensation ...
Darkness stirs and wakes imagination ...
Silently the senses abandon their defenses ...

A gloved hand was extended out to her. Nanoha reached out and gently took it. With a slight smile, the phantom backed up the stairs while continuing to gaze upon the brunette.

Slowly, gently night unfurls its splendor ...
Grasp it, sense it - tremulous and tender ...

Nanoha found her gaze to wander around this mysterious place. In all the years she knew her, this was the first time she had been taken to this place. Usually she would be taught in her room or while walking though the labyrinth just beyond. She resisted the urge to gasp as a gloved hand gently pressed against her cheek and brought her gaze back to those burgundy eyes.

Turn your face away from the garish light of day,
turn your thoughts away from cold, unfeeling light -
and listen to the music of the night ...

They paused for a moment at the base of the organ's platform. No words needed to be exchanged as Nanoha let her hand slip free as the phantom made her way up the platform.

Close your eyes and surrender to your darkest dreams!
Purge your thoughts of the life you knew before!
Close your eyes, let your spirit start to soar!

Nanoha closed her eyes, taking in the words and the sound of the powerful voice. It was the the voice that she had heard so many years ago. The same voice that she chased after to be like with such power and beauty.

And you'll live as you've never lived before ...

From the top of the platform, the phantom offered her hand again. Nanoha reached up and took the hand, allowing herself to be lead up as she gazed at the masked face.

Softly, deftly, music shall caress you ...
Hear it, feel it, secretly possess you ...
Open up your mind, let your fantasies unwind,
in this darkness which you know you cannot fight -
the darkness of the music of the night.

She watched as the phantom stepped around a row of candles in front of the organ, her voice echoing throughout the cavern.

Let your mind start a journey through a strange, new world!
Leave all thoughts of the life you knew before!
Let your soul
Take you where you long to be!
Only then can you belong to me ...

The phantom stepped up before her and lightly caressed her cheek. Nanoha closed her eyes as she felt herself being turned around. Hands crept along her sides and slowly made their way around to rest on her stomach. All the while her heart pounded in her chest, her breathing quickening. A hand drifted down to her left hand. She didn't resist as it was lifted up and placed on the unmasked cheek of the phantom behind her. It was smooth and warm as she caressed it lightly.

Floating, falling, sweet intoxication!
Touch me, trust me, savor each sensation!

She opened her eyes and took the phantom's hand as she was led down the other end of the platform. The phantom walked besides her, her other hand resting around the brunette's. As they walked she could feel the toll of the long evening's performance added onto all the recent excitement catch up to her.

Let the dream begin,
let your darker side give in to the power of
the music that I write - the power of the music of the night ...

Nanoha could feel her eyes growing heavy as she turned to look at the phantom. She merely smiled back, as if knowing. As much as she struggled, she could no longer hold back and passed out in the phantom's arms. With a small smile, she carefully picked up the unconscious girl.

You alone can make my song take flight -

She carried her over to the large bed and gently laid her down in it. Sitting on the edge, the phantom reached out and ran a hand over Nanoha's cheek and down across her chin.

help me make the music of the night ...

The phantom stepped back and lowered the transparent black veil around the bed. She stood there for a moment, gazing at the sleeping girl before taking her leave.

Spoiler for Author's Notes:

I made a few alterations here and there. If there is protest against the changes, I can change it to reflect the original material.

You know. Nanoha's problem isn't nearly as bad as Christine's, because Nanoha'd CLEARLY go with Fate. :P

Also, I demand a department of backstory!

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

By popular demand...and cause I just this song is awesome (though not as awesome as 'Phantom of the Opera' )

Spoiler for Phantom of the Lyrical, pt 2:

Spoiler for Accompanying Song:

Nanoha stood by the boat as the phantom walked up the small stone steps. The candles lit the underground cave well, adding a soft glow as the shadows danced along the walls. Sheet music lay strewn over the floor and around the various, ornate curtains that hung from the ceiling. From their looks, they were taken from the theater as well as the other pieces of furniture in this underground cavern. Her gave fell onto the phantom as she removed her cloak and let it fall to the floor before beginning.

I have brought you to the seat of sweet music's throne ...
to this kingdom where all must pay homage to music ...
music...

She slowly made her way up a raised section, pausing briefly in front of the small organ set against the back wall.

You have come here, for one purpose, and one alone ...
I first heard you sing,
I have needed you with me, to serve me, to sing, for my music ...
my music ...

Her eyes gazed into the phantom's. She watched as she took slow steps down towards the water's edge without breaking the gaze.

Night-time sharpens, heightens each sensation ...
Darkness stirs and wakes imagination ...
Silently the senses abandon their defenses ...

A gloved hand was extended out to her. Nanoha reached out and gently took it. With a slight smile, the phantom backed up the stairs while continuing to gaze upon the brunette.

Slowly, gently night unfurls its splendor ...
Grasp it, sense it - tremulous and tender ...

Nanoha found her gaze to wander around this mysterious place. In all the years she knew her, this was the first time she had been taken to this place. Usually she would be taught in her room or while walking though the labyrinth just beyond. She resisted the urge to gasp as a gloved hand gently pressed against her cheek and brought her gaze back to those burgundy eyes.

Turn your face away from the garish light of day,
turn your thoughts away from cold, unfeeling light -
and listen to the music of the night ...

They paused for a moment at the base of the organ's platform. No words needed to be exchanged as Nanoha let her hand slip free as the phantom made her way up the platform.

Close your eyes and surrender to your darkest dreams!
Purge your thoughts of the life you knew before!
Close your eyes, let your spirit start to soar!

Nanoha closed her eyes, taking in the words and the sound of the powerful voice. It was the the voice that she had heard so many years ago. The same voice that she chased after to be like with such power and beauty.

And you'll live as you've never lived before ...

From the top of the platform, the phantom offered her hand again. Nanoha reached up and took the hand, allowing herself to be lead up as she gazed at the masked face.

Softly, deftly, music shall caress you ...
Hear it, feel it, secretly possess you ...
Open up your mind, let your fantasies unwind,
in this darkness which you know you cannot fight -
the darkness of the music of the night.

She watched as the phantom stepped around a row of candles in front of the organ, her voice echoing throughout the cavern.

Let your mind start a journey through a strange, new world!
Leave all thoughts of the life you knew before!
Let your soul
Take you where you long to be!
Only then can you belong to me ...

The phantom stepped up before her and lightly caressed her cheek. Nanoha closed her eyes as she felt herself being turned around. Hands crept along her sides and slowly made their way around to rest on her stomach. All the while her heart pounded in her chest, her breathing quickening. A hand drifted down to her left hand. She didn't resist as it was lifted up and placed on the unmasked cheek of the phantom behind her. It was smooth and warm as she caressed it lightly.

Floating, falling, sweet intoxication!
Touch me, trust me, savor each sensation!

She opened her eyes and took the phantom's hand as she was led down the other end of the platform. The phantom walked besides her, her other hand resting around the brunette's. As they walked she could feel the toll of the long evening's performance added onto all the recent excitement catch up to her.

Let the dream begin,
let your darker side give in to the power of
the music that I write - the power of the music of the night ...

Nanoha could feel her eyes growing heavy as she turned to look at the phantom. She merely smiled back, as if knowing. As much as she struggled, she could no longer hold back and passed out in the phantom's arms. With a small smile, she carefully picked up the unconscious girl.

You alone can make my song take flight -

She carried her over to the large bed and gently laid her down in it. Sitting on the edge, the phantom reached out and ran a hand over Nanoha's cheek and down across her chin.

help me make the music of the night ...

The phantom stepped back and lowered the transparent black veil around the bed. She stood there for a moment, gazing at the sleeping girl before taking her leave.

Spoiler for Author's Notes:

I made a few alterations here and there. If there is protest against the changes, I can change it to reflect the original material.

Nice to see a second part *hopes you'll get inspired again XD*
I like having Fate phantom she doesn't scare me ><.
... hey if Fate=Phantom does Yuuno=Raoul?
And I don't have any problems 'cept...

Spoiler for off topic complaint that has nothing to do with the fic or the minor changes made in it at all:

I hate that version of the song XD. Michael Crawford singing the original London version (which has slightly different lyrics) is the only version I like... and for some reason I feel like a theater geek for knowing that.

But like I said has nothing to do with Eva's fic >< And I changed the lyrics in my head anyway XD.

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

By popular demand...and cause I just this song is awesome (though not as awesome as 'Phantom of the Opera' )

Spoiler for Phantom of the Lyrical, pt 2:

Spoiler for Accompanying Song:

Nanoha stood by the boat as the phantom walked up the small stone steps. The candles lit the underground cave well, adding a soft glow as the shadows danced along the walls. Sheet music lay strewn over the floor and around the various, ornate curtains that hung from the ceiling. From their looks, they were taken from the theater as well as the other pieces of furniture in this underground cavern. Her gave fell onto the phantom as she removed her cloak and let it fall to the floor before beginning.

I have brought you to the seat of sweet music's throne ...
to this kingdom where all must pay homage to music ...
music...

She slowly made her way up a raised section, pausing briefly in front of the small organ set against the back wall.

You have come here, for one purpose, and one alone ...
I first heard you sing,
I have needed you with me, to serve me, to sing, for my music ...
my music ...

Her eyes gazed into the phantom's. She watched as she took slow steps down towards the water's edge without breaking the gaze.

Night-time sharpens, heightens each sensation ...
Darkness stirs and wakes imagination ...
Silently the senses abandon their defenses ...

A gloved hand was extended out to her. Nanoha reached out and gently took it. With a slight smile, the phantom backed up the stairs while continuing to gaze upon the brunette.

Slowly, gently night unfurls its splendor ...
Grasp it, sense it - tremulous and tender ...

Nanoha found her gaze to wander around this mysterious place. In all the years she knew her, this was the first time she had been taken to this place. Usually she would be taught in her room or while walking though the labyrinth just beyond. She resisted the urge to gasp as a gloved hand gently pressed against her cheek and brought her gaze back to those burgundy eyes.

Turn your face away from the garish light of day,
turn your thoughts away from cold, unfeeling light -
and listen to the music of the night ...

They paused for a moment at the base of the organ's platform. No words needed to be exchanged as Nanoha let her hand slip free as the phantom made her way up the platform.

Close your eyes and surrender to your darkest dreams!
Purge your thoughts of the life you knew before!
Close your eyes, let your spirit start to soar!

Nanoha closed her eyes, taking in the words and the sound of the powerful voice. It was the the voice that she had heard so many years ago. The same voice that she chased after to be like with such power and beauty.

And you'll live as you've never lived before ...

From the top of the platform, the phantom offered her hand again. Nanoha reached up and took the hand, allowing herself to be lead up as she gazed at the masked face.

Softly, deftly, music shall caress you ...
Hear it, feel it, secretly possess you ...
Open up your mind, let your fantasies unwind,
in this darkness which you know you cannot fight -
the darkness of the music of the night.

She watched as the phantom stepped around a row of candles in front of the organ, her voice echoing throughout the cavern.

Let your mind start a journey through a strange, new world!
Leave all thoughts of the life you knew before!
Let your soul
Take you where you long to be!
Only then can you belong to me ...

The phantom stepped up before her and lightly caressed her cheek. Nanoha closed her eyes as she felt herself being turned around. Hands crept along her sides and slowly made their way around to rest on her stomach. All the while her heart pounded in her chest, her breathing quickening. A hand drifted down to her left hand. She didn't resist as it was lifted up and placed on the unmasked cheek of the phantom behind her. It was smooth and warm as she caressed it lightly.

Floating, falling, sweet intoxication!
Touch me, trust me, savor each sensation!

She opened her eyes and took the phantom's hand as she was led down the other end of the platform. The phantom walked besides her, her other hand resting around the brunette's. As they walked she could feel the toll of the long evening's performance added onto all the recent excitement catch up to her.

Let the dream begin,
let your darker side give in to the power of
the music that I write - the power of the music of the night ...

Nanoha could feel her eyes growing heavy as she turned to look at the phantom. She merely smiled back, as if knowing. As much as she struggled, she could no longer hold back and passed out in the phantom's arms. With a small smile, she carefully picked up the unconscious girl.

You alone can make my song take flight -

She carried her over to the large bed and gently laid her down in it. Sitting on the edge, the phantom reached out and ran a hand over Nanoha's cheek and down across her chin.

help me make the music of the night ...

The phantom stepped back and lowered the transparent black veil around the bed. She stood there for a moment, gazing at the sleeping girl before taking her leave.

Spoiler for Author's Notes:

I made a few alterations here and there. If there is protest against the changes, I can change it to reflect the original material.

waaaah!! oh my god I love you!! that was...sexy. NanoFate goodness..

*swoons* Fate-channn~~... *faints*

thanks for this! what a great way to start the day. *eats breakfast heartily*

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

... hey if Fate=Phantom does Yuuno=Raoul?

Who knows...

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

And I don't have any problems 'cept...

Spoiler for off topic complaint that has nothing to do with the fic or the minor changes made in it at all:

I hate that version of the song XD. Michael Crawford singing the original London version (which has slightly different lyrics) is the only version I like.

But like I said has nothing to do with Eva's fic >< And I changed the lyrics in my head anyway XD.

Spoiler for response:

Yea...I only used this version because I was able to find the music with the scene. Easier for people to match it, especially those who have never seen the movie/performance before. Plus it keeps consistency with the first part, which was taken from the 2004 movie.

EDIT: Page claim in the name of...Phantom Fate!!!