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Old 2009-10-15, 19:22   Link #17081
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Spoiler for Animal Instincts: Preface:
D: You're going to continue this, right?! *-*


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@Satashi: I prefer that you do small segments every day/other days. But its your call. ^_^ I think it's easier since you're doing multiple stories and you'll at least have the outline when you come back and fix up AlternativeS.
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Old 2009-10-15, 19:35   Link #17082
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D: You're going to continue this, right?! *-*
Actually, it's already finished. It was completed almost a year ago with a total of 26 chapters. But for some strange reason, I never posted it. *shrugs* It was my favorite fanfic of NanoFate and I was afraid...well...you know...
But now that I found it and read it over, there are A LOT of mistakes. The Preface was the only 'chapter' that I revised. I need to read it over again, fix the mistakes and make sure that I wrote how Alaska SHOULD be. After that, I will post the chapters one by one in Animesuki. But I'm glad you took an interest in my story, Liitha.

Here's a scene from the story:

Spoiler for Section of "Animal Instincts":


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Old 2009-10-15, 20:08   Link #17083
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Do you guys prefer my posting in parts or just waiting till I have a chapter done? Like do you prefer like I do AlternativeS (Small segments every day/other day) or like I do Amber Dreams (post a completed chapter when its done).
(~///////~) *thinking hard*

i-ts fun if satashi-sempai do it in segments, I-I mean new ideas can be added and such...
but in the other hand...some people will find it annoying with the cliffhang and all...

if Satashi-sempai decided to post one whole chapter...we have to wait longer ne...but its one whole chapter...some people might be satisfy with that....

(T//////T) I...I don't know...*thinking hard again*

mou~ Satashi-sempai you decide! I'm sure whatever you do we all still read you're story!

*whispered in a low tone* Just done be late to update it....

*normal tone* I will support you 100% Satashi-sempai! Gambatte! (^//////^)
*holding a 'Satashi Do Your Best' flag and wave it around"
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Old 2009-10-15, 20:25   Link #17084
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*petting Rika*

seems like the shorts are winning. I prefer that too it seems. I write best when I'm not at home for some reason. At work or school is when my best writing gets done. I'm not sure why...

*looks at math books by desk and sighs* Why can't I have sudden writing desires to prevent me from doing this? T_T
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Old 2009-10-15, 20:34   Link #17085
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Oh oh oh! I know how you feel.

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GAH FREAKIN' SCHOOL WORK ;-; I wanna write really badly, but I'm too busy during the week and too tired on the weekends.
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Old 2009-10-15, 20:35   Link #17086
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*petting Rika*

seems like the shorts are winning. I prefer that too it seems. I write best when I'm not at home for some reason. At work or school is when my best writing gets done. I'm not sure why...

*looks at math books by desk and sighs* Why can't I have sudden writing desires to prevent me from doing this? T_T
I know how you feel (and almost everyone on this forum).

*opens Archaeology textbook then closes it*

Well, back to watching Youtube...
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Old 2009-10-15, 20:37   Link #17087
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*eyes lab report contemplatively*

... Meh. *goes back to finishing Lutecia-centric short*
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Old 2009-10-15, 20:46   Link #17088
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*Looks at History textbook*

Alright now...

*Goes back to reading textbook*
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Old 2009-10-15, 20:48   Link #17089
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Eh... I think i'm the only one here that have nothing much to do. I skipped my evening classes and tomorrow I don't have to go to school. Though I have 3 tests the next week -_- Aaaaaand, I need to study for my college entrance exams.

Bah xD


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Actually, it's already finished. It was completed almost a year ago with a total of 26 chapters. But for some strange reason, I never posted it. *shrugs* It was my favorite fanfic of NanoFate and I was afraid...well...you know...
But now that I found it and read it over, there are A LOT of mistakes. The Preface was the only 'chapter' that I revised. I need to read it over again, fix the mistakes and make sure that I wrote how Alaska SHOULD be. After that, I will post the chapters one by one in Animesuki. But I'm glad you took an interest in my story, Liitha.
I'll look forward to it, then ^^
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Old 2009-10-15, 20:51   Link #17090
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It looks like I'm the only one who doesn't need to do homework or study for something, but on the other hand, I have no story to work on... all ideas, no development. Bah.
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Old 2009-10-15, 21:06   Link #17091
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On the other hand, I want to study, but my want to convert these ideas into words so I don't forget them just overcame that.

*Looks at textbook again*

*Ignores textbook*
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Old 2009-10-15, 21:07   Link #17092
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Nyaa~

everyone has their exams and test, me too (T/////T)

B-but I'm sure everything is fine. I know everyone of you can do it!
So study study study! (^/////^) I'll be cheering for everyone all the way

Nyaa~
...*blink* *blink*
...I guess back to the books with me...mou~ *pout*
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Old 2009-10-15, 21:08   Link #17093
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And... a Shadow short! Lutecia-centric, inspired by a conversation I had with Deathcurse, and pretty much wrote itself when I got back from dinner today. Slight AU from my series, since in this short Lutecia... well, you'll see when you read it.

Spoiler for Borderline:


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Old 2009-10-15, 21:19   Link #17094
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And... a Shadow short! Lutecia-centric, inspired by a conversation I had with Deathcurse, and pretty much wrote itself when I got back from dinner today. Slight AU from my series, since in this short Lutecia... well, you'll see when you read it.

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Yay for secretagent|Lutecia!

/goes back to lurking
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Old 2009-10-15, 21:36   Link #17095
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Spoiler for thoughts:
That was one of my concerns, but based on where I'm going with the plot, it demands some response from characters, and the mood I'm going for, requires a bit of setup. It's going to end up being a fairly large in the Nanohaverse.

On the positive side, I don't plan to introduce any new characters (well, maybe two) that will have any real plot importance. Any new characters will generally be secondary. Also, quite a few of the ones I name will be secondary, and won't come up as much or be important(like Shari). Lastly, I plan to prune the cast by a bit, by the end.

I almost agree that Strikers had a few too many, and it can be overwhelming at first. But upon the following viewings, I found it interesting to grasp the roles of the secondary, and their attitudes (thought I think Strikers would have been better and more meaningful, if Shari were replaced by Suzuka :P).

But I'll wait to hear more viewpoints. I can possibly see about pruning the plot a bit if enough people feel it's too much.
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Old 2009-10-15, 21:48   Link #17096
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RB, You have the weirdest inspiration music....

... great

Spoiler for Poor Lulu:



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And I'm supposed to be reading about Malcolm X right now!
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Old 2009-10-15, 21:55   Link #17097
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And... a Shadow short! Lutecia-centric, inspired by a conversation I had with Deathcurse, and pretty much wrote itself when I got back from dinner today. Slight AU from my series, since in this short Lutecia... well, you'll see when you read it.

Spoiler for Borderline:


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Spoiler for spoiler:
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Old 2009-10-15, 21:59   Link #17098
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RB, You have the weirdest inspiration music....

... great

Spoiler for Poor Lulu:



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And I'm supposed to be reading about Malcolm X right now!
I am not ashamed. Especially if I inspired something this brilliant and hilarious. I like your form of Lutecia torture.

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The twelve pains of christmas? are you serious? XD
Very serious. I have it on my iTunes and my iPod
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Old 2009-10-15, 22:05   Link #17099
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I am not ashamed. Especially if I inspired something this brilliant and hilarious. I like your form of Lutecia torture.
As long as you keep supplying the delicious shadow stuff I'll keep supplying the cracky supplements. :3
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As long as you keep supplying the delicious shadow stuff I'll keep supplying the cracky supplements. :3
I can support that arrangement. :3
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