Create Your Own Justsu or Naruto character

[Kyubi Jinchuuriki]

XCryWolf-
(Huge Applaud) Not to be a Critic with all these comments positive and negative. But with this information, I can really get a mental image about what your character looks like. Good Job!

[Patriot's Blade]

not a character/jutsu, but a weapon unit,

Kunai needle gun: (or pistol!? )

Spoiler for kunai needle gun info:

a standard kunai with a built-in pressure gun that shoots needles at a very high velocity with a firing range of 40 meters, whether in a close range/at long range combat, the barrel of the gun sits in between the two knife edges of the kunai which is both retracted side-by-side when in firing mode, the trigger which is a ring type is built into the hilt of the kunai, which also serves as the ammo cartridge storage unit.

the hilt can also be bent up to 90 degress verticaly, up & down so it resembles a gun handle for easy/more accurate firing & it also resembles more a standard hand-gun in this formation.

the ammo cartridge is cylinderical in shape with a ring (which is the same one seen on a santard kunai's hilt) & can store-up to 60 needles at a time but depending on which the size of the needle used in the missions, the cartridge is inserted at the end of the kunai's hilt then twist the ring of the cartrage to lock it in place.

there are different various types of needles used for the kunai, ranging from the poison-types to the armour piercing chakra powered types, ETC.

one them is the popular wooden-type needles, which is cheaper to produce in large numbers more than standard steel versions.

the kunai also comes in different versions/sizes to suit the condition of the missions encountered.

which is your favourite version/size of the needles used for this kunai?
& also the version/size of the the kunai itself?

[Mitsu]

Cool idea gundam! I like the poison needles the best...

Hemmo- Chuck Norris.... LOL He pawns all!

[XCryWolf]

Hemmo- Thanks for the adivise ill put more empty lines when i get the chance and next time...And Of course Chuck Norris is awesome! You dont find Chuck Norris, Chuck Norris finds you! XD

Kyubi Jinchuuriki- Thanks man I tried my best with his personal details. Thanks for the compilments

Gundam- Cool! i like the armor piercing idea the best

[Kyubi Jinchuuriki]

(Huge fan-fair orchestra kicks in, huge applaud and cheering fans screaming praises) Keikan: For such triumphant music and cheers, a great achievement must have been done. And that achievement is my characters are finally finished for your fan fiction. I put a lot of detail into this, even so, tell me if you need any changes made, like you said, mostly small changes. Here you go. __________________________________________________ __________________________

Name: Ryuu Tora (Dragon Tiger) Clan: Tanrei (Grace)
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Favorite Food: Ramen
Hair Color: Brown / Styled up in Curved Spikes (resembling Naruto's but larger and curved)
Eye Color: Deep Blue
Blood Type: AB+
Height: 5'2"
Weight: 110 Pounds
Birthplace: Hidden Waterfall Village
Rank: Genin
Clothing: Standard Ninja Footwear, Weapons Pouch, Hidden Leaf Village Headband, Hidden Waterfall Headband Strapped to right wrist (taken from father), Navy Blue Long Shorts (to middle of shins), Blue shirt with Waterfall Village symbol on back covered with black short sleeved (longer than Waterfall village shirt) zip up shirt opened with orange Hidden Leaf Village symbols on both shoulder.
Personality: He is a relaxed kid, always being over-confident in his slightly advanced skill with chakra strength. Mostly preferring to be out in the action.
Though he can get very serious in intense situation.
Biography: Ryuu was born in a difficult time for his village. There were constant raids from enemy ninja of an unknown country. His parents had trained him and his sister, who was two year older than him, to survive if a fatal raid had surfaced, which it had. When Ryuu had turned 6 years old, the enemy ninja had pulled off that raid. A giant fire jutsu had started to burn the village down.While trapped in their burning building, his father had used the "Water Prison Technique" to protect Ryuu and his sister, unfortunately only getting the size to protect Ryuu before the house gave out. Ryuu had fainted from the fumes before the house fell. Ryuu woke up the following morning, soaked from the Water Prison, seeing only burned wood and smoke. He had found only he father's burnt corpse and Hidden Waterfall Headband, as a keepsake, Ryuu took the Headband and fled the disaster. For two years he had traveled the land repeating his father's training, to gather food and water, and to train his chakra to advance it's skill. Eventually he had found the Hidden Leaf Village and was given citizenship to the Village by the current Hokage.


Name: Takahiro Shula (Noble Flame)
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Favorite Food: Egg Roll
Hair Color: Black/ Hair down on head with spikes facing down
Eye Color: Brown
Blood Type: A+
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 108 Pounds
Birthplace: Hidden Leaf Village
Rank: Genin
Clothing: Hidden Leaf Village Headband, White shirt with blue over jacket, Standard Ninja Footwear, Black Pants, Weapons pouch
Personality: Takahiro is a stern guy, but only in battles and missions, or when getting competitive with Ryuu. Everywhere else he is mostly friendly.
Biography: Takahiro was born in the Hidden Leaf Village and was pushed under hard training. His father, before his death, had harshly trained Takahiro during his academy years, forcing Takahiro's chakra strength to increase widely to comprehend fire style jutsu at the age of 8.

Name: Sonia Hoshi (Wisdom Star) Clan: Kosumosu (Cosmo)
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Favorite Food: Sushi
Eye Color: Light Purple
Hair Color: Blond/ Hair worn down to her shoulders
Blood Type: A-
Height: 5'1"
Weight: 95 Pounds
Birthplace: Hidden Leaf Village
Rank: Genin
Clothing: Hidden Leaf Village Headband used as hairband (like Sakura), Tan Pants (resembling Hinata's), Standard Ninja Footwear, Weapons Pouch, Black tank top under white long sleeve button-up.
Personality: Pertains around Sakura's personality, being nice a lot but not afraid to get serious in a battle.
Biography: Normally Sonia was born in the Hidden Leaf Village, but her parents were born in the Hidden Star Village, which means she was taught many Cosmo Style jutsu made by her clan, and her signature jutsu made by her father.

Name: Chie Hikari (Wisdom Light)
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Favorite Food: Chicken Stir Fry
Eye Color: Emerald Green
Hair Color: Brown/ worn with a spiked ponytail on the back of her head
Blood Type: A
Height: 5'10"
Weight" 124 Pounds
Birthplace: Hidden Leaf Village
Rank: Jounin
Clothing: Hidden Leaf Village Headband worn around neck, Green Cargo Shorts, White Bandages worn from top of chest to hip under blue shirt and Flak jacket, Weapons Pouch, Standard Ninja Footwear
Personality: Chie is calm and most of the time emotion-less. She can show her emotions but rarely does so except to Ryuu, Takahiro, Sonia, and any single guy she likes
Biography: When Chie had made chuunin, her mother trained her to be a medic-nin. As she went on a mission with her team, her closest friend, who she was going out with, was fatally injured. She had used her healing jutsu to the best of her ability but still failed to save his life. She started bawling over his dead body, paying no attention to the enemy ninja surrounding her. The surrounding squad dashed in on her but luckily she was rescued by her other teammate and sensei. Since then she had become emotionless and became a jounin leading to her becoming the sensei of Ryuu, Takahiro, and Sonia's squad.


JUTSU LIST

Ryuu Tora:
Kekki Genkai: Ekkususengan (ekkususen means X-ray)
Use: Ryuu uses this in fights to read most Nin and Tai jutsu to find a way to block or dodge it if it's successful

Animaru Henshin - Animal Transformation
Type: Kekki Genkai
Rank: S
Transforming into a human sized animal matching their soul using specific abilities to that animal.
(Back ground: This jutsu is a Kekki Genkai to the Tanrei clan. Ryuu transforms in a human sized hedgehog, being able to run at high speeds and use special techniques and jutsu (same as normal form)


Signature Jutsu: Kage Bushin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance.


Suiryuu dan no Jutsu - Water Dragon Projectile Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.

Battle Rock Barrage
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
The user with quick reflexes takes hold of the opponent's shoulder and neck disabling movement temporarily and deals many powerful hits mostly consisting with the knees, elbows, and fists.

Suimen Hokou no Waza - Water Walking Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: unknown
Effect: the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Suirouno Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Effect: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

In Training:
Rasengan
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Effect: concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact.


Wind Style: Mouretsu Kaze Kire (Raging Wind Strike)
Type: Range Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Effect: The user summons their Wind chakra to their hands and throws punches in the air to blast out wild wind strikes that can cut through almost all substances.
Hand Seals: Boar, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit

Takahiro Shula:
Signature Jutsu: Fire Style: Volcano Blast Jutsu
Type: Attacking Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Effect: Blasts out a beam of volcanic magma in a thin, powerful blast exhaled from mouth.
Hand Seals: Tiger, Horse, Boar, Tiger

Fire Style: Fire Ball Jutsu
Rank:C
Type: Attacking Ninjutsu
Effect: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Attack Ninjutsu
Effect: Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai

Fire Style: Rising Snake Barrier
Rank: Between B and A
Type: Barrier Ninjutsu
Effect: The user summons two snakes made completely of fire to surround the user or user's targeted area and burns anything within three feet of the location.
Hand Seals: Tiger, Horse, Dragon, Snake

Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Unknown
Effect: the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Sonia Hoshi:

Signature Jutsu: Cosmos Style: Shooting Star Storm
Rank: Unknown
Type: Range Ninjutsu
Effect: The user summons nova-like chakra stars to storm on an aimed area heavily

Cosmos Style: Inseki Bakufuu (Meteorite Blast)
Type: Attacking Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Effect: User forms a meteorite made of chakra in their hands and once fully formed, the user pushes out one hand away from body and blasts meteorite quickly at target.

Suimen Hokou no Waza - Water Walking Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: unknown
Effect: the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Unknown
Effect: the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

In Training:
Cosmos Style: Hassha Hoshi Negai (Shooting Star Wish)
Type: Healing Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Effect: The shooter at long range, fires out a healing chakra ball over their teammates releases stardust over the targets healing outer wounds on the receiver(s) bodies.

Bssic Healing Jutsu

Chie Hikari:
Basic Healing Jutsu

Rasengan (Single Hand)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Effect: concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact.

Cosmos Style: Hassha Hoshi Negai (Shooting Star Wish)
Type: Healing Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Effect: The shooter at long range, fires out a healing chakra ball over their teammates releases stardust over the targets healing outer wounds on the receiver(s) bodies.

Suimen Hokou no Waza - Water Walking Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: unknown
Effect: the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Unknown
Effect: the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Doton no Jutsu - Earth Release Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Unknown
Effect: the act of using the Earth Element, allows the ninja to change their chakra into earth. This allows the ninja to go into the earth and hide from his opponents, manipulate the earth in attacks or create earth to use against their opponents.

Wind Style: Mouretsu Kaze Kire (Raging Wind Strike)
Type: Range Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Effect: The user summons their Wind chakra to their hands and throws punches in the air to blast out wild wind strikes that can cut through almost all substances.
Hand Seals: Boar, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit

Combo Jutsu

Ryuu Tora - Takahiro Shula - Nigenteki Kousun Ganseki no Geijutsu
(Dual Battle Rock Technique)
Rank: High C Type: Taijutsu
Effect: Requires two people, Ryuu and Takahiro rush up to one enemy while one of them takes the target's attention while the other waits in hiding till the right moment to jump out and deliver a heavy physical blow like in a regular Battle Rock Barrage. After the hiding one attacks, the other will do a similar heavy attack and they both attack one at a time.

Ryuu Tora - Takahiro Shula - Joushou Honou Genkotsu
(Rising Flame Fist)
Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Takahiro uses "Rising Snake Barrier" around Ryuu. Then Ryuu focuses chakra in his feet, legs, right arm, and right fist. If enemy in high in the air he uses the chakra in his legs to jump up to the enemy. If not, he uses the chakra in his legs and feet to keep the snake Barrier around him as he runs towards the target. When he gets in range, he uses the chakra in his arm and hand to get the snakes to circulate his hand, and when he is close enough, punches the target delivering a strong, fiery fist.

Advanced Abilities

Ryuu Tora - Increased running speeds and jumping capabilities, Increased Chakra strength (Pull off higher rank jutsu)

Takahiro Shula - Increased Chakra strength, highly skilled with all 5 senses

Sonia Hoshi - Increased chakra control, highly skilled with throwing ninja tools, Smartest in group


Relationships

Chie - Ryuu: Ryuu sometimes thinks of Chie as a motherly figure since his mother was dead from the giant Tanrei Clan Fire. For she is able to show him affection and emotions in a motherly way. Chie also thinks of Ryuu as a son-like figure since she is single and has no son of her own.

Ryuu - Takahiro: Both feel a competitive rivalry between the two of them. When in group training, both try to out-do the other. Mostly they act as friends in casual situations.

Sonia - Ryuu: Sonia, every since their years in the academy, has had a crush on Ryuu, secertly admiring him whenever she had the chance and when he wasn't looking. When they were assigned in a squad together, Sonia got nervous about Ryuu finding out her true feeling, so to hide her feelings, she treats him as Sakura treats Naruto, whenever Ryuu does something stupid, sometimes not faking her anger in those situation.

[XCryWolf]

Good job Kyubi! I would have to say Ryuu is my fav char. and and my fav jutsu is Animaru Henshin. Lol and are all of them learning rasengan XD and how doe ryuu know how to walk on water but cant climb a tree, just saying besides that great chars and cool jutsus

[Kyubi Jinchuuriki]

XCryWolf- Just so you get the reasoning behind Ryuu only able to water on water is this, the chakra control, as explained in Naruto, there is a difference between the chakra control in Water Walking and Tree climbing, Tree Climbing needs an exact amount of Chakra to keep on the tree, Water Walking needs balance in both feet for the chakra. I had Ryuu and Takahiro each have one to show their control in chakra for that property of control. I chose to give Ryuu Water Walking since he is from the Hidden Waterfall Village (get it?lol) just wanted to explain that to put a post on today.
P.S. Thnx for the compliments, I was kinda wondering what people would think about my characters when I was posting them.
P.S.S. I didn't type all these as I went. I wrote it all on Paper, Typed it using a word processer, and then copy/pasted it (idk y I explained it but i did)

[XCryWolf]

Originally Posted by Kyubi Jinchuuriki

XCryWolf- Just so you get the reasoning behind Ryuu only able to water on water is this, the chakra control, as explained in Naruto, there is a difference between the chakra control in Water Walking and Tree climbing, Tree Climbing needs an exact amount of Chakra to keep on the tree, Water Walking needs balance in both feet for the chakra. I had Ryuu and Takahiro each have one to show their control in chakra for that property of control. I chose to give Ryuu Water Walking since he is from the Hidden Waterfall Village (get it?lol) just wanted to explain that to put a post on today.
P.S. Thnx for the compliments, I was kinda wondering what people would think about my characters when I was posting them.
P.S.S. I didn't type all these as I went. I wrote it all on Paper, Typed it using a word processer, and then copy/pasted it (idk y I explained it but i did)

I get it now and about ur p.s.s thats how i did my ninja character too.

[Dan the Man]

WHOO!! I've been gone for ages, and now I've come up with some new characters!!! Hope you all like them!!! EXCLAMATION POINTS AND ONES!!1!!!1!11!!!


Name: Konmaru
Age: 20 (Estimated)
Village: Unknown
Rank: None

Picture:

Spoiler:

The fugitive known as Konmaru was raised in a village far to the west, on the farthest western border of the Wind country. As a child, Konmaru had been a kind, gentle boy. Carefree and peaceful, which his father hated. His father was the most prominent warrior in the village, and his son's "weakness" shamed him more than anything else. In constant efforts to "toughen up" his son, he would beat and injure Konmaru with little rhyme or reason. Konomaru always recovered well enough, but his father's constant torment scarred him so deeply that he eventually became a recluse. Shutting himself off from society, and slowly beginning to despise it.
Upon his 18th birthday, his father "generously" granted him the power to create a Golem, a guardian spirit. Konmaru's golem was indeed powerful, which made his father proud, but the old man would not survive the night. Once he had slain his father, Konmaru had found that his golem was unique in that once he had taken his first life, he must continue to kill, or find himself victim to his golem's wrath. Now, two years later, after having slaughtered every last person in his village, and three other villages, and about 400 other victims, Konmaru wanders the land with his golem in tow, leaving a trail of corpses in their wake.

Golem: Konmaru's village is a remote village that has hated ninja and their traditions for centuries. After a grueling and bloody war against the Sand Village nearly five centuries ago, all of the villagers chose to abandon ninjutsu and fight using clay avatars. These clay beings remain indestructible as long as their user remains alive, and when damaged, can draw from the earth itself to restore lost limbs and mass. As no two people are alike, each golem has a different appearance, and many have their own personalities, directly drawing from their creators.

Spoiler:

Konmaru's unnamed golem is a mammoth creature, astoundingly powerful and durable. While Konmaru's looks rather plain, it's evil grip on him reflects the great amount of evil and hatred that spawned it.
The Golem feeds itself on the blood of those that it kills. As Konmaru's golem kills an enemy, he must drain the body of any blood, and pour it into a gigantic canister that fits into the golem's back. How long the blood lasts depends on the people killed. An average person would satisfy the golem for a day at most, but a powerful being like a ninja would feed the creature for a week. So to curb his golem's hunger, Konmaru constantly hunts down powerful beings, and lets it tear them apart. Should the golem go three days without blood, it would kill feast on Konmaru's own blood, draining him until he has nothing left, and then rip him to pieces.


Alright, it took about fifteen years or so, but that's one of my new characters! Whaddya think?

[Mitsu]

I like it DTM! Brilliantly created. I like the pictures, both are very well drawn! (I might add to this post, since it's 12:33 am here)

[Patriot's Blade]

Originally Posted by Dan the Man

WHOO!! I've been gone for ages, and now I've come up with some new characters!!! Hope you all like them!!! EXCLAMATION POINTS AND ONES!!1!!!1!11!!!

Spoiler for Dan the Man's, Konmaru's biography:

Name: Konmaru
Age: 20 (Estimated)
Village: Unknown
Rank: None

Picture:

Spoiler:

The fugitive known as Konmaru was raised in a village far to the west, on the farthest western border of the Wind country. As a child, Konmaru had been a kind, gentle boy. Carefree and peaceful, which his father hated. His father was the most prominent warrior in the village, and his son's "weakness" shamed him more than anything else. In constant efforts to "toughen up" his son, he would beat and injure Konmaru with little rhyme or reason. Konomaru always recovered well enough, but his father's constant torment scarred him so deeply that he eventually became a recluse. Shutting himself off from society, and slowly beginning to despise it.
Upon his 18th birthday, his father "generously" granted him the power to create a Golem, a guardian spirit. Konmaru's golem was indeed powerful, which made his father proud, but the old man would not survive the night. Once he had slain his father, Konmaru had found that his golem was unique in that once he had taken his first life, he must continue to kill, or find himself victim to his golem's wrath. Now, two years later, after having slaughtered every last person in his village, and three other villages, and about 400 other victims, Konmaru wanders the land with his golem in tow, leaving a trail of corpses in their wake.

Golem: Konmaru's village is a remote village that has hated ninja and their traditions for centuries. After a grueling and bloody war against the Sand Village nearly five centuries ago, all of the villagers chose to abandon ninjutsu and fight using clay avatars. These clay beings remain indestructible as long as their user remains alive, and when damaged, can draw from the earth itself to restore lost limbs and mass. As no two people are alike, each golem has a different appearance, and many have their own personalities, directly drawing from their creators.

Spoiler:

Konmaru's unnamed golem is a mammoth creature, astoundingly powerful and durable. While Konmaru's looks rather plain, it's evil grip on him reflects the great amount of evil and hatred that spawned it.
The Golem feeds itself on the blood of those that it kills. As Konmaru's golem kills an enemy, he must drain the body of any blood, and pour it into a gigantic canister that fits into the golem's back. How long the blood lasts depends on the people killed. An average person would satisfy the golem for a day at most, but a powerful being like a ninja would feed the creature for a week. So to curb his golem's hunger, Konmaru constantly hunts down powerful beings, and lets it tear them apart. Should the golem go three days without blood, it would kill feast on Konmaru's own blood, draining him until he has nothing left, and then rip him to pieces.

Alright, it took about fifteen years or so, but that's one of my new characters! Whaddya think?

does that mean that, the Sand village had to use the Puppet units to defeat the Golem units?
oh wait, this is turning into a Mecha combat series , dang-it!!.
& i shall nickname him the "Vampire Taijutsu-ist" & "Shinobi slayer",

[Dan the Man]

Originally Posted by GUNDAM H.E.X.

does that mean that, the Sand village had to use the Puppet units to defeat the Golem units?
oh wait, this in turning into a Mecha combat series , dang-it!!.
& i shall nickname him the "Vampire Taijutsu-ist" & "Shinobi slayer",

Um... Yes, the puppets fought the golems, but the golems won because I say so. Makes perfect sense!
And of course, the mecha combat thing... one look at my sig is enough to tell you where most of my inspiration comes from.
I like the nicknames! Two more suggestions could be the Phantom Bloodletter, or the Seattle Blood Bank Inc.

... Sorry, it's late and I think I'm getting a little slaphappy...

[yondaime95]

that is a really great creation DTM, both the shinobi and the golem. and like mitsu said, they're both very well drawn(like usual)

[Keikan]

I just realised that I haven't posted a character since Page 131 and with all the bloody awesome (literally in the case of the Man's character ) characters that are being posted lately I thought I might join in on the action .

This character is in honour of Dan the Man's long awaited return (sorry if other people who came back after a long time who deserved a honourary character didn't get one). It is a character to rival Bud Awesome (see Page 100 I think).

General:
Name: Faita-jin Su-pa-gure-to (Surname, First Name) [Super-great Fighter-man
Gender: Male
Age: Infinite
Height: Varies
Weight: Varies
Village: Konohagakure

Clan: -
Surviving Clan/Family Members: -
Clan Abilities: -

Kekkei Genkai: -
Kekkei Genkai ability: -

Appearance:
Hair:
Eyes:
Clothes and other:

Personality:


Ninja Info:
Strengths: Everything, has enough chakra to blind all Hyuuga within 500km.
Weaknesses: None
Affinity: Everyone
Summoning Pact: He doesn't need one
Weapons: What doesn't he have
Ninja Rank: Uber-kage
Team: Doesn't need one
Missions Completed Successfully:
D-Rank: --
C-Rank: --
B-Rank: --
A-Rank: --
S-Rank: --

Commonly Used Jutsus:
Name: Kyuukyoku no jutsu (Ultimate technique)
Effect: Su-pa-gure-to creates a giant Rasengan around his whole body. He then creates 2 Fuuton: Rasenshuriken and releases them into the orbit of the Rasengan. He does the same with 2 Katon: Rasengoukakyuu, 2 Suiton: Rasensuiryuudan, 2 Doton: Rasenmaruishi, 2 Raition: Rasenraikiri, 2 Kagerasengan, 2 Hyouton: Rasenkoori and 2 Mokuton: Rasenhayashi. He also releases many shuriken, kunai, senbon, smoke pellets and explosive tags into the orbit.All of this is controlled by chakra strings so it orbits around him. Su-pa-gure-to then makes the orbit bigger while the satellites cut down anything in their way. This causes death to all including Hidan, Kakazu, Madara and Pein, even the Bijuu.

Name: Kyuukyoku rendan (Ultimate barrage)
Effect: Su-pa-gure-to open all 8 chakra gates, swallows all three Akamichi soldier pills as well as some Inuzuka ones. Then, running at speeds that make the Flash and Superman look like snails (roughly 1000x the speed of light), he kicks his opponents high in the air before jumping after them. He proceeds to kick and punch his enemies before holding them upside-down. Then he starts rotating kartwheel style. When they get close to the ground he throws them head first downwards while still spinning. The opponents then gets buried down at the core of the earth. Deads. (All of this was done at aforementioned speed.

I have this feeling that the rendan went a bit overboard ... oh well .


I'll finish the character later .
...

Just thought of something I should say about the characters that people have (and possibly are going to) volunteer for my fanfic; they really aren't going to get a whole heap of coverage, they are basically filler characters that you never really learn about, just like all the others in the real Naruto Chunin Exams, that is unless they are absolutely awesome characters in which case they may get multiple cameos say in fillers, also the more detail there is the more likely it is that I can actually give them a substantial fight in the Chunin Exams as I know about them. That said I would like to greatly thank kakazusheart68, Mitsu and Kyubi Jinchuuriki for the characters that they have volunteered to the fanfic, they shall go down fighting, I mean they'll all fight and kick ass and get promoted ... yes .

@ GUNDAM H.E.X.: Interesting idea, the kunai gun, I just thought of something, is it chakra operated to make it Naruto-esc?

@ Kyubi Jinchuuriki: Thanks mate they will fight hard or die trying ... nah I wouldn't do that to characters that you have obviously worked so hard on, it'll be mine on the chopping block . Also I'm sorry but as I am trying to keep Naruto out of my story I would prefer the Rasengan left out as well. I'll allow the Kekkei Genkai but it won't get a big mention (in the Chunin Exams at least). Hope that's okay, apart from that I can't see any problems with the characters.

@ Dan the Man: Glad to see that some other veterans are still round. Your character's very well (like always) and your drawings (again as always) are awesome and is it just me or are you getting better at drawing??

@ hemmo: This reminds me of another Chuck Norris thing that was posted on this thread. That one was killed to the fullest extent of the law (I have no idea what I just said ) but anyway it was stupid and burned by everyone but one person. This 'creation' is the exact opposite (except burnt by no-one) very good for a few laughs.

[Dan the Man]

Originally Posted by Keikan

I just realised that I haven't posted a character since Page 131 and with all the bloody awesome (literally in the case of the Man's character ) characters that are being posted lately I thought I might join in on the action .

This character is in honour of Dan the Man's long awaited return (sorry if other people who came back after a long time who deserved a honourary character didn't get one). It is a character to rival Bud Awesome (see Page 100 I think).

Spoiler:

General:
Name: Faita-jin Su-pa-gure-to (Surname, First Name) [Super-great Fighter-man
Gender: Male
Age: Infinite
Height: Varies
Weight: Varies
Village: Konohagakure

Clan: -
Surviving Clan/Family Members: -
Clan Abilities: -

Kekkei Genkai: -
Kekkei Genkai ability: -

Appearance:
Hair:
Eyes:
Clothes and other:

Personality:


Ninja Info:
Strengths: Everything, has enough chakra to blind all Hyuuga within 500km.
Weaknesses: None
Affinity: Everyone
Summoning Pact: Toad, Snake and Slug
Weapons: What doesn't he have
Ninja Rank: Uber-kage
Team: Doesn't need one
Missions Completed Successfully:
D-Rank: --
C-Rank: --
B-Rank: --
A-Rank: --
S-Rank: --

Commonly Used Jutsus:
Name: Kyuukyoku no jutsu (Ultimate technique)
Effect: Su-pa-gure-to creates a giant Rasengan around his whole body. He then creates 2 Fuuton: Rasenshuriken and releases them into the orbit of the Rasengan. He does the same with 2 Katon: Rasengoukakyuu, 2 Suiton: Rasensuiryuudan, 2 Doton: Rasenmaruishi, 2 Raition: Rasenraikiri, 2 Kagerasengan, 2 Hyouton: Rasenkoori and 2 Mokuton: Rasenhayashi. He also releases many shuriken, kunai, senbon, smoke pellets and explosive tags into the orbit.All of this is controlled by chakra strings so it orbits around him. Su-pa-gure-to then makes the orbit bigger while the satellites cut down anything in their way. This causes death to all including Hidan, Kakazu, Madara and Pein, even the Bijuu.

I'll finish the character later .
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@ Dan the Man: Glad to see that some other veterans are still round. Your character's very well (like always) and your drawings (again as always) are awesome and is it just me or are you getting better at drawing??

Oh, man... "Supagureto" would give Bud Awesome a run for his money... if Bud were to lower himself low enough to use money. His currency is punches and awkward stares... Perhaps they would be good bar buddies, spending their time debating who can lift the most heavy stuff and flexing!!! I can't wait to see how incredible he is once he's finished.

And as for my drawing, I don't think I'm really getting any better, but I am improving on drawing from different perspectives and poses. Thanks for the compliment!


I've got another character I've had drawn for weeks, but I've never gotten around to working on his background. So once I get all that worked out, I'll be sure to post him!

[Kyubi Jinchuuriki]

Originally Posted by Keikan

@ Kyubi Jinchuuriki: Thanks mate they will fight hard or die trying ... nah I wouldn't do that to characters that you have obviously worked so hard on, it'll be mine on the chopping block . Also I'm sorry but as I am trying to keep Naruto out of my story I would prefer the Rasengan left out as well. I'll allow the Kekkei Genkai but it won't get a big mention (in the Chunin Exams at least). Hope that's okay, apart from that I can't see any problems with the characters.

No prob, I just glad u accepted them. If you'd wanna put anything else in place of the Rasengan be my guest (just a suggestion,just if you do, make it a cool jutsu). Just one question (Not complaining or anything) is there anything wrong with the Kekki Genkai, like is it similar to another jutsu? Or you just saying it'd be a little too OP for a Genin?(Just asking)

[Kyubi Jinchuuriki]

Originally Posted by Dan the Man

WHOO!! I've been gone for ages, and now I've come up with some new characters!!! Hope you all like them!!! EXCLAMATION POINTS AND ONES!!1!!!1!11!!!


Name: Konmaru
Age: 20 (Estimated)
Village: Unknown
Rank: None

The fugitive known as Konmaru was raised in a village far to the west, on the farthest western border of the Wind country. As a child, Konmaru had been a kind, gentle boy. Carefree and peaceful, which his father hated. His father was the most prominent warrior in the village, and his son's "weakness" shamed him more than anything else. In constant efforts to "toughen up" his son, he would beat and injure Konmaru with little rhyme or reason. Konomaru always recovered well enough, but his father's constant torment scarred him so deeply that he eventually became a recluse. Shutting himself off from society, and slowly beginning to despise it.
Upon his 18th birthday, his father "generously" granted him the power to create a Golem, a guardian spirit. Konmaru's golem was indeed powerful, which made his father proud, but the old man would not survive the night. Once he had slain his father, Konmaru had found that his golem was unique in that once he had taken his first life, he must continue to kill, or find himself victim to his golem's wrath. Now, two years later, after having slaughtered every last person in his village, and three other villages, and about 400 other victims, Konmaru wanders the land with his golem in tow, leaving a trail of corpses in their wake.

Golem: Konmaru's village is a remote village that has hated ninja and their traditions for centuries. After a grueling and bloody war against the Sand Village nearly five centuries ago, all of the villagers chose to abandon ninjutsu and fight using clay avatars. These clay beings remain indestructible as long as their user remains alive, and when damaged, can draw from the earth itself to restore lost limbs and mass. As no two people are alike, each golem has a different appearance, and many have their own personalities, directly drawing from their creators.

Konmaru's unnamed golem is a mammoth creature, astoundingly powerful and durable. While Konmaru's looks rather plain, it's evil grip on him reflects the great amount of evil and hatred that spawned it.
The Golem feeds itself on the blood of those that it kills. As Konmaru's golem kills an enemy, he must drain the body of any blood, and pour it into a gigantic canister that fits into the golem's back. How long the blood lasts depends on the people killed. An average person would satisfy the golem for a day at most, but a powerful being like a ninja would feed the creature for a week. So to curb his golem's hunger, Konmaru constantly hunts down powerful beings, and lets it tear them apart. Should the golem go three days without blood, it would kill feast on Konmaru's own blood, draining him until he has nothing left, and then rip him to pieces.


Alright, it took about fifteen years or so, but that's one of my new characters! Whaddya think?

I have to say this character is awesome with a great backstory (an OMG load of details) and a AWESOME pair of pictures to boot. GREAT JOB MAN!!!!

[Keikan]

Originally Posted by Kyubi Jinchuuriki

No prob, I just glad u accepted them. If you'd wanna put anything else in place of the Rasengan be my guest (just a suggestion,just if you do, make it a cool jutsu). Just one question (Not complaining or anything) is there anything wrong with the Kekki Genkai, like is it similar to another jutsu? Or you just saying it'd be a little too OP for a Genin?(Just asking)

I think I'll see about giving them a cool jutsu when they return in the story but probs not for the Chunin Exams.

I honestly can't remember the original reason that I decided no Kekkai Genkai. It was either because it is a Naruto thing and while I'm writing a 'Naruto' story it is only really a Naruto concept (or a Naruto concept future) story with very few elements of the actual Naruto series. Though I think I was planning on making one or two references to Naruto. I think I just thought of a way to bring this team back in to the story in a filler (great another chapter in my list of over fifty - 2 written so far).

I just remembered your characters are Konoha-nin ... as you're the first one to volunteer a Konoha-nin that I know a lot about I think one of your characters gets a little extra.

OFFER: Anyone that can create a Kumo team for me with good detail (the amount of detail that DtM, Mitsu, Kyubi Jinchuuriki, myself and others give) earns one of the Kumo team members a little extra as well.

[Spectacular_Insanity]

Originally Posted by Dan the Man

WHOO!! I've been gone for ages, and now I've come up with some new characters!!! Hope you all like them!!! EXCLAMATION POINTS AND ONES!!1!!!1!11!!!


Name: Konmaru
Age: 20 (Estimated)
Village: Unknown
Rank: None

Picture:

Spoiler:

The fugitive known as Konmaru was raised in a village far to the west, on the farthest western border of the Wind country. As a child, Konmaru had been a kind, gentle boy. Carefree and peaceful, which his father hated. His father was the most prominent warrior in the village, and his son's "weakness" shamed him more than anything else. In constant efforts to "toughen up" his son, he would beat and injure Konmaru with little rhyme or reason. Konomaru always recovered well enough, but his father's constant torment scarred him so deeply that he eventually became a recluse. Shutting himself off from society, and slowly beginning to despise it.
Upon his 18th birthday, his father "generously" granted him the power to create a Golem, a guardian spirit. Konmaru's golem was indeed powerful, which made his father proud, but the old man would not survive the night. Once he had slain his father, Konmaru had found that his golem was unique in that once he had taken his first life, he must continue to kill, or find himself victim to his golem's wrath. Now, two years later, after having slaughtered every last person in his village, and three other villages, and about 400 other victims, Konmaru wanders the land with his golem in tow, leaving a trail of corpses in their wake.

Golem: Konmaru's village is a remote village that has hated ninja and their traditions for centuries. After a grueling and bloody war against the Sand Village nearly five centuries ago, all of the villagers chose to abandon ninjutsu and fight using clay avatars. These clay beings remain indestructible as long as their user remains alive, and when damaged, can draw from the earth itself to restore lost limbs and mass. As no two people are alike, each golem has a different appearance, and many have their own personalities, directly drawing from their creators.

Spoiler:

Konmaru's unnamed golem is a mammoth creature, astoundingly powerful and durable. While Konmaru's looks rather plain, it's evil grip on him reflects the great amount of evil and hatred that spawned it.
The Golem feeds itself on the blood of those that it kills. As Konmaru's golem kills an enemy, he must drain the body of any blood, and pour it into a gigantic canister that fits into the golem's back. How long the blood lasts depends on the people killed. An average person would satisfy the golem for a day at most, but a powerful being like a ninja would feed the creature for a week. So to curb his golem's hunger, Konmaru constantly hunts down powerful beings, and lets it tear them apart. Should the golem go three days without blood, it would kill feast on Konmaru's own blood, draining him until he has nothing left, and then rip him to pieces.


Alright, it took about fifteen years or so, but that's one of my new characters! Whaddya think?

As usual, you have outdone yourself. Great backstory, intriguing character (he HAS to kill or his golem kills him? Awesome...), cool "technique", and above all, awesome drawings. Your drawings are my favorite as they turn your great ideas into a more palpable reality.... so to speak.

[atucker]

Summoning Jutsu: Four Horsemen
Its a juts where i summon four horsemen and each has a different chakra nature and a different weapon the four of their chakra natures are water, fire, earth, and lightning the reason i didnt make a fifth wind one was so ppl with wind chakra would be at an advantage with this attack and almost every attack is a team attack ex: the fire horseman uses a fire style jutsu that surrounds his body and he charges then i use wind style: tailwind which by itself is practically harmless but when combined with the fire horseman he gains an enormous amount of speed from the wind behind him and his flame practically explodes toward my opponent