Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion (second reincarnation)

[Keroko]

It's in English.

I made a minor edit to Syn's profile by ripping out the shy part. It just didn't fit with the rest of her.

That, and writing Syn as the leading one between her and Vivio is just so much more fun.

[Aaron008R]

@Esta: English. =/


@Keroko: And Keroko, that means Syn is now a mostly toughie-tough girl with the family/friends that wants her to be cute...? XD

Instead of tsundere, which is tough-to-soft with lots of denial, Syn is the straightforward type with lotsa spunk and shows her soft side thru violencetough love?:3

And yeah, nice avy/sig combo. Vivio's just lovely there.


@Kha: Same to you, cool Kha avy/sig pair.:3
Though I guess that breaks up our Ace trio prima facie status, eh?()



Well, I guess I might as well change my set as well. (Of course, just like with several other matters, I tend to take things differently from Keroko and Kha, in this situation still having Hayate in my sig/avy.XD)
(But then again, the only chance of me ever changing my sig/avy <not both> is when I could get an Almaria sig or avy...>.>)

[Estavali]

Ah well, I'll just add the Quenya font to the post when necessary and make everyone install it anyway =3.

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

@Keroko: And Keroko, that means Syn is now a mostly toughie-tough girl with the family/friends that wants her to be cute...? XD

Instead of tsundere, which is tough-to-soft with lots of denial, Syn is the straightforward type with lotsa spunk and shows her soft side thru violencetough love?:3

Pretty much, she can get embarrased in some situations, like the mentoined intent of family/friends to make her 'cute' but there's no denial, and certainly no embarrasment at close contact.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

And yeah, nice avy/sig combo. Vivio's just lovely there.

Thank you.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Though I guess that breaks up our Ace trio prima facie status, eh?()

Was bound to happen sometime.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Well, I guess I might as well change my set as well. (Of course, just like with several other matters, I tend to take things differently from Keroko and Kha, in this situation still having Hayate in my sig/avy.XD)

I merely switched to my currently number 1 favourite character. (seriously, the more I dive into Vivio and her background, the more I like her. I hope the other booklets I posted in General get translated soon :3)

And a very nice set, by the way.

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Syn always had the heterochromia, its just that she covered it up with the eyepatch before.

Yeah, I know.

Originally Posted by Keroko

And who is Wyen? It doesn't ring any bells...

Of course it doesn't, he's fanon but an original character in an original story of mine

Originally Posted by Keroko

I made a minor edit to Syn's profile by ripping out the shy part. It just didn't fit with the rest of her.

That, and writing Syn is the leading one between her and Vivio is just so much more fun.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Well-noted. Plenty to go over now since I forgot about what they would have for BJs and their typical gear.

Though what about bigger guns, and other equipment? Are rifle and SMGs devices possible? Kinda hard to put up a good fight scene if all the bodyguards have are handguns.

I'm not too sure. My basic close protection training didn't include SMGs, just a P226 handgun. But if you want cinematic volume of fire, try an Uzi. It's a handgun that's an SMG.

Originally Posted by Keroko

You're right, and now I have Syn to fill the 'no emo-past' niche anyway.

To be honest, I find Rebuilt Syn kinda on the cute side. Like... psycho moe-ish with more moe than psycho.

Originally Posted by Keroko

I know she will be back some time in the manga. She left saying 'Zaijian' after all.

It's just that I want that moment to be five chapters ago rather then some time. T_T

Yeah me too. So I did what I would normally do to a character that disappeared in one anime that I really wanted to live on.

On another note, my experience working with Keroko as well in the OC Thread, and my disdain for the anime takes of Negima, have combined to create a character insertion fic which includes:

a red-headed girl who has a deep interest in Chao named Keroko;
a pup-- I mean wolf cub, named Kouya that's more than meets the eye;

...as character choices...

Khrack, overloading.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Huh. That's interesting to know. Yet one more item of realism to ignore when creating characters.

Well... Yeah...

As for me, I always had heterochromatics as having 2 unmixed souls (2 non-red colors) or half a soul (color + red). Vivio therefore only has half a soul. Where's the other half? When I last checked, Sak-chan is heterochromatic as well, but colors reversed.

Originally Posted by Keroko

That, and we know that those weapons don't function like normal weaponry. After all, how can we forget the sword that failed to cleave?

Though in all honesty this particular slash is till shrouded in lack of knowledge. <_<

>_>

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

@Keroko: And Keroko, that means Syn is now a mostly toughie-tough girl with the family/friends that wants her to be cute...? XD

Instead of tsundere, which is tough-to-soft with lots of denial, Syn is the straightforward type with lotsa spunk and shows her soft side thru violencetough love?:3

And yeah, nice avy/sig combo. Vivio's just lovely there.

I find it disturbing that I'm starting to like Syn more because of this description... >_> / <_<

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

@Kha: Same to you, cool Kha avy/sig pair.:3
Though I guess that breaks up our Ace trio prima facie status, eh?()

Thx! Couldn't have done it without Fate, Mercurianangel, Kyral and Kai the Reaper.

Keroko changed, and subsequently I went for this.

No, actually...

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Well, I guess I might as well change my set as well. (Of course, just like with several other matters, I tend to take things differently from Keroko and Kha, in this situation still having Hayate in my sig/avy.XD)
(But then again, the only chance of me ever changing my sig/avy <not both> is when I could get an Almaria sig or avy...>.>)

...all we need is Keroko to recolor Vivio into Keroko (Yes I know we'll then have ecchi Keroko pics, a first for an OC ), I stick with mine, and you get your Almaria, and Almaria + Aurion siggy, and we have the Trio once again, with OCs!

And nice set to ya too!

[krisslanza]

Ecchi OCs? I already have one of Rune so it won't be a first

[Kha]

I meant full color ecchi pics of an OC.

And since she has such a big fan base, she deserves to have at least some, even doujins of them! ...

...

*RUUUUUUUUUUNZ*

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Kha

I meant full color ecchi pics of an OC.

And since she has such a big fan base, she deserves to have at least some, even doujins of them! ...

...

*RUUUUUUUUUUNZ*

Oh Should've been more specific...

Keroko doujins!? WHAT MADNESS ARE YOU SUGGESTING!

[Kha]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Oh Should've been more specific...

Keroko doujins!? WHAT MADNESS ARE YOU SUGGESTING!

Epic photoshocking that induces OVER 9000 liters of blood loss.

*RUNZ FASTER*

[Kyral]

Originally Posted by Liingo

I think you might need a bigger title

There were a few typos that i spotted, but other than that the chpater flowed well. The paragraph with the Knights was good. It was in character for them.

Will be looking forward to the next chapter! And like with PF, I'm happy to read over things if you want me to

kk bigger titel... *makes note*

Well I already wrote in your profile. Would be glad if you could check the next one ^-^

Originally Posted by AdmiralTigerclaw

Okay, the happy go lucky trials of our crazed test pilots... full chapter...
Comes out to 76 kb of text for this chapter, longer than I had anticipated.... but hey.

MGLN Test Dummies Chapter Five

EDIT: -WARNING-
Huge amount of Text Ahead

Spoiler for Chapter Five - A:

*snip*

Hm... I think I see what Liingo means with "bigger titel"


Ah yes... fun with engineers...

That was... long! xD

DO A BARRELROLL!!

Originally Posted by Kha

Lingo said what I would've said, so I'll just say it's also simply yet nicely done. Not everyone needs to be cheesy to succeed.

Thank you!

But please define cheesy! xD

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Elric's bad rep catches up with him here while the hunt is starting soon. I like this chapter, explains quite a few things both between the characters and certain in-verse stuff like mana consumption being the most obvious.

All thanks to the people who postet here about a mage's diet!
I try put in such stuff if I can.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Looks like someone isn't very liked... I hope he gets some nice support soon.

Well... he understands very well why some people hate him. But more to this in future flashbacks.

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Keroko doujins!? WHAT MADNESS ARE YOU SUGGESTING!

Oooh! Me like!

*gets shot*

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Kha

Epic photoshocking that induces OVER 9000 liters of blood loss.

*RUNZ FASTER*

But you know if we start it Keroko will suddenly invoke that one rule and you'll begin seeing futa!Keroko doujins and tentacles...

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Of course it doesn't, he's fanon but an original character in an original story of mine

Ahhh, yes that explains why I hadn't heard of him.

Originally Posted by Kha

I'm not too sure. My basic close protection training didn't include SMGs, just a P226 handgun. But if you want cinematic volume of fire, try an Uzi. It's a handgun that's an SMG.

My take on it is simple: We've already had magic handguns and magic snipers, I don't see why magic variants of other weapons aren't possible.

Originally Posted by Kha

To be honest, I find Rebuilt Syn kinda on the cute side. Like... psycho moe-ish with more moe than psycho.

And that's.... bad?

Originally Posted by Kha

Yeah me too. So I did what I would normally do to a character that disappeared in one anime that I really wanted to live on.

On another note, my experience working with Keroko as well in the OC Thread, and my disdain for the anime takes of Negima, have combined to create a character insertion fic which includes Keroko and Kouya as character choices...

Khrack, overloading.

The new OAV looks to be promising though. They certainly are sticking close to the original artstyle, so that's a bonus.

Originally Posted by Kha

Well... Yeah...

As for me, I always had heterochromatics as having 2 unmixed souls (2 non-red colors) or half a soul (color + red). Vivio therefore only has half a soul. Where's the other half? When I last checked, Sak-chan is heterochromatic as well, but colors reversed.

I always thought of them as having mixed souls (one with red eyes, one with green) that share the same body.

Originally Posted by Kha

I find it disturbing that I'm starting to like Syn more because of this description... >_> / <_<

Why disturbing? I like it.

Originally Posted by Kha

...all we need is Keroko to recolor Vivio into Keroko (Yes I know we'll then have ecchi Keroko pics, a first for an OC ), I stick with mine, and you get your Almaria, and Almaria + Aurion siggy, and we have the Trio once again, with OCs!

I'm keeping these two for a while though, gotta show people that Vivio is more then just a NanoFate moe-blob after all.

Originally Posted by Kha

I meant full color ecchi pics of an OC.

And since she has such a big fan base, she deserves to have at least some, even doujins of them! ...

...

*RUUUUUUUUUUNZ*

If you insist.

Spoiler for She's good at yakyuken, but she fails at poker:

Originally Posted by Kha

Epic photoshocking that induces OVER 9000 liters of blood loss.

*RUNZ FASTER*

I'm going to need source material first though.

Originally Posted by krisslanza

But you know if we start it Keroko will suddenly invoke that one rule and you'll begin seeing futa!Keroko doujins and tentacles...

'that rule?'

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Spoiler for She's good at yakyuken, but she fails at poker:

And was the yakyuken comment because I said Vivio is bad at it when I saw it?
...
*Brain begins to click*
Rune, Vivio, and Keroko yakyuken or strip poker match? CRACK SENSES SAY - *Shot*

'that rule?'

That one rule. The uh... Rule... 47? Or... Something. I forget it

[Kyral]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Spoiler for She's good at yakyuken, but she fails at poker:

Ah yes... it's about time a shop showed up! *saves*

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

And was the yakyuken comment because I said Vivio is bad at it when I saw it?
...
*Brain begins to click*
Rune, Vivio, and Keroko yakyuken or strip poker match? CRACK SENSES SAY - *Shot*

Keroko's reflexes are her main defence, the chances of beating her in yakyuken are very low.

But she's also very impulsive, and not exactly a shining star at hiding her emotions, so beating her at poker is like taking a walk in the part.

Originally Posted by krisslanza

That one rule. The uh... Rule... 47? Or... Something. I forget it

You mean Rule 34?

"If it exists, there's porn of it. No exceptions."

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Keroko's reflexes are her main defence, the chances of beating her in yakyuken are very low.

But she's also very impulsive, and not exactly a shining star at hiding her emotions, so beating her at poker is like taking a walk in the part.

Ah I see
Hmmm... Sounds like fun crack But I'll probably never get to it...

Yakyuken ftw!
*Runs*

You mean Rule 34?

"If it exists, there's porn of it. No exceptions."

Yeah that one

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Kyral

Thank you!

But please define cheesy! xD

Long. Very very long. And with extended narration. PF does it nicely though.

Originally Posted by Keroko

My take on it is simple: We've already had magic handguns and magic snipers, I don't see why magic variants of other weapons aren't possible.

It's not about whether is it possible, its about whether is it practical. I think the device needs to be small to be hidden from view, and yet fast enough to be pulled out and used in an instant. This is why rifles and bigger weapons aren't carried while escorting dignitaries in a safe location. Something about avoiding 'show of force'... Can't remember.

Doing an escort in a warzone, or very hostile territory, now that's different. Carry all the guns and armor you like.

Originally Posted by Keroko

And that's.... bad?

See below?

Originally Posted by Keroko

The new OAV looks to be promising though. They certainly are sticking close to the original artstyle, so that's a bonus.

Hmm... I've been jerked around twice. Gonna take a while before I throw a rose in. >_>

Originally Posted by Keroko

I always thought of them as having mixed souls (one with red eyes, one with green) that share the same body.

For me, medicine text tell us red is a lack of pigment rather than red coloring, and the analogy would then be "vacant". But its just my opinion; I've no text on the supernatural.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Why disturbing? I like it.

Disturbing because I have a soft spot for brutal girls...?

Originally Posted by Keroko

If you insist.

Spoiler for She's good at yakyuken, but she fails at poker:

Incoming EPIC WIN! RUN FO--

BOOM.

Originally Posted by Keroko

I'm going to need source material first though.

Don't look at me; ask Chaos.

Originally Posted by Keroko

'that rule?'

Its exists.

Originally Posted by krisslanza

And was the yakyuken comment because I said Vivio is bad at it when I saw it?
...
*Brain begins to click*
Rune, Vivio, and Keroko yakyuken or strip poker match? CRACK SENSES SAY - *Shot*

*reloads Rail Rifle*

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Kha

It's not about whether is it possible, its about whether is it practical. I think the device needs to be small to be hidden from view, and yet fast enough to be pulled out and used in an instant. This is why rifles and bigger weapons aren't carried while escorting dignitaries in a safe location. Something about avoiding 'show of force'... Can't remember.

Kha, these are weapons that can be transformed into pendants, bracelets, cards and wristwatches. How much more hidden from view do you want?

Originally Posted by Kha

Hmm... I've been jerked around twice. Gonna take a while before I throw a rose in. >_>

I was lucky enough people told me to avoid the anime like the plague, and go for the manga instead.

Originally Posted by Kha

For me, medicine text tell us red is a lack of pigment rather than red coloring, and the analogy would then be "vacant". But its just my opinion; I've no text on the supernatural.

Haircolor doesn't follow biology in anime, I don't see why eye color should.

Originally Posted by Kha

Disturbing because I have a soft spot for brutal girls...?

*shrug* I still don't see the problem.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Kha, these are weapons that can be transformed into pendants, bracelets, cards and wristwatches. How much more hidden from view do you want?

Sorry I was thinking that every sealed device needed a henshin sequence, and forgot that they could do it instantly.

...and an innocent pendant on a little girl suddenly turning into a massive bladesaw of dakka? Priceless.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Haircolor doesn't follow biology in anime, I don't see why eye color should.

I accept having pigments for everything in anime, but there's no evolutionary purpose for a red compo--



BETA-CAROTENE!!!

Originally Posted by Keroko

*shrug* I still don't see the problem.

...never mind then.