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Evil Rick · 2009-04-01, 22:32

2 drafts, worked the previus one that I showed in the last page and a new one, following the idea of combination between though guy/ girl and food

I still think that the sigs need work but a bit of C&C would be more than helpfull

KiNA · 2009-04-01, 22:37

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Originally Posted by escimo

No WAI! Don't like Oreos...

DIE! Everyone must like Oreo!

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Originally Posted by escimo

Why the beep are there no renders of tough stuffed animals with distinguishable gender eating cheesecake.

There's actually a picture of Kon eating Rukia's buns .. but the buns still glued to Rukia

@ Rick .. BG look meh.. on both.

Urei · 2009-04-02, 01:14

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Originally Posted by Evil Rick

2 drafts, worked the previus one that I showed in the last page and a new one, following the idea of combination between though guy/ girl and food

I still think that the sigs need work but a bit of C&C would be more than helpfull

As much as I prefer the lower one, for the female content, the upper always manages to make me laugh

About the lower one, I think the flare is a bit too visible and it actually took me some time to find the can. Does it blend too much with the background?

vandakiara · 2009-04-02, 05:54

I second what Urei said... and btw I've made a 2nd version of my 'moo' sig

for comparison:

v1.

v2.

which one looks better? I can't choose D:

feedback would be much appreciated

Arceon · 2009-04-02, 06:13

I'm tempted to challenge myself to do the impossible:

Combine all three. (Damned Stuffed Animals and Tough Guy/Girl canceling each other out.)

Kana Futayo · 2009-04-02, 06:16

Interesting theme and congrats to the 3 winners of the previous month.
Combining? I just thought of food + tough guy/girl thing, but include the stuffed animals? I dunno.

Katocchi · 2009-04-02, 06:30

Anooo .. is this fit the theme ??

vandakiara · 2009-04-02, 06:38

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Originally Posted by Katocchi

Anooo .. is this fit the theme ??

I think so - the sig is really adorable btw

Riker · 2009-04-02, 06:43

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Originally Posted by Arceon

(Damned Stuffed Animals and Tough Guy/Girl canceling each other out.)

I refer you to Pleinair from Disgaea.

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Originally Posted by Katocchi

Anooo .. is this fit the theme ??

The president isn't a stuffed animal, he's a real cat.

vandakiara · 2009-04-02, 07:10

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Originally Posted by Riker

The president isn't a stuffed animal, he's a real cat.

oh... well, it fooled me

and OMG I just loved the 2nd render <3

edit: quick siggy I made using that 2nd render <3

ganbaru · 2009-04-02, 08:25

@Evil Rick the bottle on the second sig seem to come from no-where and got a little to much light on it.

@vandakiara, The milk sig, V1 it's the milk bottle at the right than need improvement. V2 the Miky at the right/back seem not to pit in the picture.
The Disgaea one, try to show more of the personnage and the stuffen animal in the sig.
@Katocchi Aria's president is still alive, no ? Don't turn him into a taxidermy item

My 4th version, changed the font of the quote and added a photo filtre to the backgroung.
C&C awould be welcome.

Cierra · 2009-04-02, 08:33

a kind of stupid first draft!

I have a nice animation idea but oh well, animated sigs are not my speciality even tho i like them a lot

Katocchi · 2009-04-02, 08:40

Say goodbye to Aria-Sacho .. how about this ??

Urei · 2009-04-02, 08:40

@ganbaru

4 things I have to point out.

1. First things first, the font. I'm sure you can do much better. It's pixeled, it's a little bit too big and the fact that it takes a half of the actual signature makes the image below lose it's appeal. You look at the text and try to read it before looking at the image. I'm pretty certain that the opposite is what most people doing signatures are trying to achieve. Try adding blending to the text and placing it differently

2. Second, the girl. She's way out of focus. The image in the background a little bit as well.

3. Third, the tip of the cannon got cut. I'd resize the image or lower it a bit. It leaves a bad taste when you see something like this

4. Fourth, the foreground and background images blend into one. I'm sure you wanted to present the foreground the most. The color scheme is similar though the colors differ a bit. Try making an outline for the foreground.

~ sorry for the ranting. I'm sure you'll be able to upgrade your signature into a great one

Evil Rick · 2009-04-02, 08:59

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Originally Posted by vandakiara

I second what Urei said... and btw I've made a 2nd version of my 'moo' sig

for comparison:

v1.

v2.

which one looks better? I can't choose D:

feedback would be much appreciated

The Miku render at the bg on V2 lokks really inecesary and it's a bit distracting, I stick with V1

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Originally Posted by Katocchi

Anooo .. is this fit the theme ??

Looks cute and it's a nice style of sig, btw, I can notice a white border on the upper left corner

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Originally Posted by vandakiara

oh... well, it fooled me

and OMG I just loved the 2nd render <3

edit: quick siggy I made using that 2nd render <3

Don't know if though girl is the same as extreme blood but the combination using the stuffed animal is really good, maybe the sig looks a bit too pale

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Originally Posted by Cierra

a kind of stupid first draft!

I have a nice animation idea but oh well, animated sigs are not my speciality even tho i like them a lot

Well, I think it's cute

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Originally Posted by Katocchi

Say goodbye to Aria-Sacho .. how about this ??

You're killing me! That's adorable

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Originally Posted by ganbaru

My 4th version, changed the font of the quote and added a photo filtre to the backgroung.
C&C awould be welcome.

The bg is still not that good

LKK · 2009-04-02, 09:27

@ vandakiara, I strongly prefer your first version. The girl in the second version steals from TEH CUTE that makes your sig so adorable.

Katocchi · 2009-04-02, 09:34

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Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Looks cute and it's a nice style of sig, btw, I can notice a white border on the upper left corner

Yeah that failed ..

EDIT : add Text .. :3

White Manju Bun · 2009-04-02, 10:25

A theme with BAD ASS GUYS AND NO KAMINA-SAMA YET?!?!

ahem...ok vers one

C&C?

ganbaru · 2009-04-02, 10:41

@Cierra exept boosting the cuteness , I don't see what you coyld do more.
@Katocchi The text feel strange.
@White Manju Bun you got plenty of room for a text

I am not sure about keepping my sig in the same way it was Wich bone is best? C&C appreciated.

Edit I forgot those 2:

Aurelie · 2009-04-02, 11:44

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Originally Posted by vandakiara

I second what Urei said... and btw I've made a 2nd version of my 'moo' sig

for comparison:

v1.

v2.

which one looks better? I can't choose D:

feedback would be much appreciated

The first one is best, the small Miku looks really out of place, and makes it look a bit crowded. The milk thing in the corner is cute, but maybe it would be better without it. I'm not too keen on the text either, maybe you could try putting it on the far right, and using a white outline instead of a drop shadow.

For me, the rest of it is pretty much perfect. ^^

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Originally Posted by vandakiara

oh... well, it fooled me

and OMG I just loved the 2nd render <3

edit: quick siggy I made using that 2nd render <3

I really like this one so far, the colours look good together, and I like the combination of the splatters and the swirls.

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Originally Posted by Cierra

a kind of stupid first draft!

I have a nice animation idea but oh well, animated sigs are not my speciality even tho i like them a lot

Symmetry FTW. <3
Something about the text is putting me off, but what it is I can't pinpoint. Not very helpful I know. D:

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Originally Posted by Katocchi

Say goodbye to Aria-Sacho .. how about this ??

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Originally Posted by Katocchi

Yeah that failed ..

EDIT : add Text .. :3

I'll no doubt get shot for this, but I prefer it without the text. If you keep the text, you might want to work on the wording, 'anyone don't want to play with me' sounds a bit odd, maybe remove the don't and keep it as 'anyone want to play with me' and add a question mark.

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Originally Posted by ganbaru

I am not sure about keepping my sig in the same way it was Wich bone is best? C&C appreciated.

Edit I forgot those 2:

Shame you couldn't use the paper eating girl, I really liked those. D:
Out of the above, I prefer the first, something doesn't look right with the rest. Maybe you could try adding a texture or two to the background to make it look a bit more interesting, Belladonna has a few I think might fit.

Also, what program are you using? I think I know why your text always turns out pixely, and how to fix it, but I'll need to know what you're using to be sure.

I don't have anything yet, I really want to enter this month, but at the moment I have zero motivation. D:

2009-04-01, 22:32	Link #41
Evil Rick Black Dragon Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...	2 drafts, worked the previus one that I showed in the last page and a new one, following the idea of combination between though guy/ girl and food I still think that the sigs need work but a bit of C&C would be more than helpfull __________________

2009-04-02, 06:13	Link #45
Arceon Rediscovered Graphic Designer Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Requiem Age: 30	I'm tempted to challenge myself to do the impossible: Combine all three. (Damned Stuffed Animals and Tough Guy/Girl canceling each other out.) __________________ --Gallery of the Arceon--

2009-04-02, 06:16	Link #46
Kana Futayo is not amused Graphic Designer Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Naval Base	Interesting theme and congrats to the 3 winners of the previous month. Combining? I just thought of food + tough guy/girl thing, but include the stuffed animals? I dunno. __________________

2009-04-02, 08:25	Link #51
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	@Evil Rick the bottle on the second sig seem to come from no-where and got a little to much light on it. @vandakiara, The milk sig, V1 it's the milk bottle at the right than need improvement. V2 the Miky at the right/back seem not to pit in the picture. The Disgaea one, try to show more of the personnage and the stuffen animal in the sig. @Katocchi Aria's president is still alive, no ? Don't turn him into a taxidermy item My 4th version, changed the font of the quote and added a photo filtre to the backgroung. C&C awould be welcome. __________________

2009-04-02, 08:33	Link #52
Cierra Pieces Of Me Artist Join Date: May 2008 Location: Tokyo,JP Age: 39	a kind of stupid first draft! I have a nice animation idea but oh well, animated sigs are not my speciality even tho i like them a lot __________________ Thanks to KiNa for this lovely signature =3

2009-04-02, 08:40	Link #54
Urei Star Designer Graphic Designer Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Europe Age: 38	@ganbaru 4 things I have to point out. 1. First things first, the font. I'm sure you can do much better. It's pixeled, it's a little bit too big and the fact that it takes a half of the actual signature makes the image below lose it's appeal. You look at the text and try to read it before looking at the image. I'm pretty certain that the opposite is what most people doing signatures are trying to achieve. Try adding blending to the text and placing it differently 2. Second, the girl. She's way out of focus. The image in the background a little bit as well. 3. Third, the tip of the cannon got cut. I'd resize the image or lower it a bit. It leaves a bad taste when you see something like this 4. Fourth, the foreground and background images blend into one. I'm sure you wanted to present the foreground the most. The color scheme is similar though the colors differ a bit. Try making an outline for the foreground. ~ sorry for the ranting. I'm sure you'll be able to upgrade your signature into a great one __________________ AD 2314 Mobile Suit Gundam 00 ~A wakening of the Trailblazer~

2009-04-02, 09:27	Link #56
LKK Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Virginia, USA Age: 62	@ vandakiara, I strongly prefer your first version. The girl in the second version steals from TEH CUTE that makes your sig so adorable. __________________ Avatar: Hazuki of Natsuyuki Rendezvous / Signature: flowers from Natsuyuki Rendezvous

2009-04-02, 10:41	Link #59
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	@Cierra exept boosting the cuteness , I don't see what you coyld do more. @Katocchi The text feel strange. @White Manju Bun you got plenty of room for a text I am not sure about keepping my sig in the same way it was Wich bone is best? C&C appreciated. Edit I forgot those 2: __________________ Last edited by ganbaru; 2009-04-02 at 11:05.