Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Does Madoka usually wear that to bed? Anyway, I guess she'll wake up either when she feels Ichika breathing on her chest or when she realizes she feels tongue.

That Purple Sweater is Ichika's present for her before she transferred to the prestigious school, so yes she treasured it and almost always wore it when sleeping it unless it's being washed or dried (she don't like instant drying via machine because it's bad for the fabric).

EDIT: oh and in the summer, too hot XD

(By the way, It's Chifuyu-size, and not Arcueid-style sweater either. The reason why it's oversized and very loose )

Originally Posted by Eratas123

How do you deal with males then? They probably don't expect stains on their pants, doubly so for someone like Irish who's denser than Ichika. Maybe I should have someone give him the talk here?

Getting Irish the talk would be pointless (we already did and his response is headbangingly dense), that aside, someone could just tell "Irish reached a point in the way toward adulthood, it's natural" or something like that (probably Maya, but she will spice things up with her own perverted thoughts...).

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - Daydreams reached over 6000 hits! It's not much, but it's more than I've ever had 450+ readers on a new chapter in just a few days is shocking as well.

WOAH Awesome, most of my stories only get 2000-3000 hits, TOP, only ST is higher.

[demino_hellsin]

This is confusing... The sequence of posts is mind bending... @_@

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - What kind of wedding does Madoka want, anyway? Western style complete with wedding gown or Japanese style with Kimono? Also, what will she do when she wakes up and Ichika asks her why she kept moaning/muttering his name

The problem with the wet dream is the fact that Irish is gynophobic. This severely hinders his thought capacity on females and would probably cause him to have a more volatile reaction. Do I write him waking up shaking and panting?

@ demino_hellsin - What do you mean?

[demino_hellsin]

Nothing nothing at all... *foams at the mouth*

EDIT: it's been fun, see you guys tomorrow. *waves goodbye to page 600*

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - What kind of wedding does Madoka want, anyway? Western style complete with wedding gown or Japanese style with Kimono? Also, what will she do when she wakes up and Ichika asks her why she kept moaning/muttering his name

Considering Madoka, western (in contrast to Ichika, who is a traditionalist). Also, Madoka is not a morning person, so she'll mutter the truth and Ichika will dismiss it as her head being screwed up (thus a self-denial again, damn Ichika )

Originally Posted by Eratas123

The problem with the wet dream is the fact that Irish is gynophobic. This severely hinders his thought capacity on females and would probably cause him to have a more volatile reaction. Do I write him waking up shaking and panting?

Yup, probably like that. His rejection and denial is strong that it'll screw him over, he will be reminded of the dream every-time he saw a female and freak out (as Gynophobia kicked in) and made everyone worried.

@Demino

Sometimes we have three-four way conversation (especially if Meister here)

[Eratas123]

@ demino_hellsin - We tend to discuss here alot since this Fandom's so damn volatile about everything that they don't like. Better safe than sorry.

By the way, did you get a plot for Tatenashi yet?

EDIT: @ Senpai - So she's a westerner in weddings? Oh well. Also, all of thse are oneshots so I can choose to end it like this:

Ichika: *Leans in and whispers in Madoka's ear.* I love you too.

And there won't be a problem.

As for Irish, I guess it'll be more like this:

Irish: .....what was that?

Maya: Ri-kun, what's wrong?

Irish: It's nothing!

Maya: But-

Irish: Just a nightmare....nothing more.

Maya: It's normal to-

Irish: No, it's not! I'm not going to let my hormones control me!

[ZeroXSEED]

^ Wut? I thought Irish hasn't understand that part yet? I guess I was wrong then. But that would be good.

EDIT: Anyone knew the thread number of Gundam? Nanoha is 60 and I.S. is 108, but I forgot that one...

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - He doesn't, but he garnered enough from Johua to know the way that his body's reacting (sweats, panting, "upright soldier") is due to hormones. What he doesn't understand is why this happens and why he dreamt of that. His body reacts normally, his mentality is still stunted so he doesn't understand why his body reacted that way apart from hormones. Does that make any sense?

Also, why is your Madoka so innocent?

[MeisterBabylon]

I don't have anything to contribute at the moment.



Listening to [Hologram] from Phi Brain, and it gave me a brief flash of inspiration. Waffy piece about Ange's Daydream:

机の上で生まれた世界
一番先に君に見せたかった
空っぽの部屋そっと抜け出して
走り始めてた
The world that was born on my table
I wanted you to be the first to see it.
I left my empty room
And started to run.

Little Ange builds something, and it works. She rushes through the giant compound taking it to the one person she wanted him to see.

And the song ends in the garden, where Howard Stark is making adjustments to Rachet's Testament armor, and Ange rushes to meet them...




...end it here, and watch the tears flow.

[Eratas123]

@ Meistah - Huh? I don't see anything sad about it. It seems downright happy compared to what you usually write

@ Senpai - I'm going to sleep, I'll read your answer tom

[MeisterBabylon]

Because the sweeter the dream, the more painful when you wake up.

[ZeroXSEED]

@Eras
1. Yes, it does makes sense. That's the reaction of young teen who never watch porn and suddenly get a wet dream. Irish' reaction might be exaggerated form of that, but it has real basis that can be scientifically explained.

2. ST!Madoka is innocent because she's a late blooomer (she got her first menstruation in chapter 10 if you don't notice)

@Meister

Because we returned to harsh, unforgiving, and sad reality.

[kaizerknight01]

Hmm I got sparks of idea for a fanfic.

The plot Ichika's IS Byakushiki OS was tampered with was and forced to it's default mode, just as his IS was being destroyed and slowly losing consciousness. He saw a vision of the White knight IS talking to him and tell him "As it stands, you cannot defeat this foe.

He calmly smiles " Even if that foe is unbeatable, even in this state that I am in ..... I will not yield ..... For the sake people that put the faith in me ....... I will fight this unbeatable foe head on ......

The White Knight IS " So be it ...... Invoke the protocol that has the power to resist one's fate ....... The one who known as "Power"and "Possibility"

On Ichika 's HUD a six letter word it displayed " M-A-D-N-U-G"

Byakushiki in it's default mode, reddish lines begin to glow opening glowing red plates all over it .


still initial stages ....

[ZeroXSEED]

WUT? Actor Allusion much?

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - He doesn't, but he garnered enough from Johua to know the way that his body's reacting (sweats, panting, "upright soldier") is due to hormones. What he doesn't understand is why this happens and why he dreamt of that. His body reacts normally, his mentality is still stunted so he doesn't understand why his body reacted that way apart from hormones. Does that make any sense?

Also, why is your Madoka so innocent?

i guess another reason is that Madoka is not lusting over her brother and truly longs to be with Ichika. So it's a combination between family love and taking a transition into the forbidden taboo (wincest) love. Again, potential drama here. And on another note, 6 days left....

[MeisterBabylon]

And so, Fujiwara Kei's creator returns... with Links.

To be fair, I did depict Byakushiki like Unicorn every so often... Ichika's got some ISper in him too.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - His reaction was over the top, but it was due to one reason: Denial. He dreamt of his LI so he's very shocked at the implications that he's getting attracted to her. Remember, his hatred of I.S pilots is one of his most definig traits, dreaming of the enemy amd you in a "situation" was enough to shock him so much that he lashes out.

Also, are Madoka and Ichika being late bloomers related to the way she was made?

@ Meistah - Is Starke an ISper? She wasn't included in the main 5, so I wasn't sure.

[MeisterBabylon]

I'm currently leaving her as a Natural. Her tech skills and IS will make up for the difference. Like Iron Man in a world of supermen.



Aaaand... This is spooky. Because I realized that Ange is also the Idol of IS, I discovered that Karon really doesn't have a unique "moe" archetype to appeal to, nor does she have a unique brand to sell other than "Vandam". But Vandam is only popular in the Foundation, and that's Gin's specialty. So I began devising a character development arc for Karon that did not require her brother to die. LOL

But now, that has officially become Amami Haruka's arc in the iM@S anime. The parallels are uncanny. Everyone has become popular, and busier. And because of their success, Hero TV has had less and less scenes to film, and now the decision was to cancel it. And Karon finds herself returning to an empty clubroom more and more...

I only didn't have Producer fall down a hole because my idols engage in more violent settings.

Nevertheless, the unintended Haruka Clone continues to grow.


EDIT:

"Even if I change and I still can't do anything well, I'll support someone who can!"

"Because I Am Vandam, the Idol of Idols! That has never changed!!"

Nandeyane.

[Eratas123]

@ Meistah - ......and we're going down to darkness again Seriously, yours is ons of the only story that isn't grim dark so I was hoping to read it for some light hearted idol segments with serious moments thrown in. Seeing things change for the more depressing is sad but understandable, I guess. I just hope that everything goes happy again

[MeisterBabylon]

It does get better. It also has the same ridiculousness/ROW ROW FIGHT DA POWAA in the way I write. Like even though Karon is the last person standing, her speech alone is enough to wake the others out of Absolute Barrier Lock with 10% shields remaining.