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DarkJak2050 · 2013-03-21, 20:28

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

It could be stress actually

Try to relax, or hell, stop writing for a while, taking a note or two if you feel something is important and you might forget it. When you recover, you'll write a dozen paragraph of the fic before you knew.

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

@Zero: Sent ch 13 corrected to u.

My solution is to just find entertainment which boosts your motivation (mine is watching dark anime/visual novels, just watched madoka movie 2 in my country and just increased my motivation for a bit)

@Jak: I know that feeling, especially when writing fics (my Fate/Madoka fic). Especially when my motivation is like fuel for writing fics, but it is like a roller coaster, it goes up and down without a constant flow.

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Originally Posted by Strigon 13

@Jak: how about listen to some music to relax? A song or even a game can be useful at the time to create an scenario.

If you guys say so...

Then again, that's if the source of what's preventing me from wrtiting doesn't interfere.

But since it's me, and my luck sucks, it'll happen anyway.

Basically, it feels like I'm not even allowed to relax with the problems I have...

Eratas123 · 2013-03-21, 21:05

Well, I did write some drafts for Future Imperfect, but it oddly comes off as incestous....nevermind the fact that they're not TECHNICALLY related in the current timeline.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-03-21, 21:19

R LEE EMMEY: Listen up you maggot! You call that piece of shit an update? Really? Pussy.

Joke aside, yes, nine months. It survived the apocalypse

EDIT: Holy shit, the traffic is insane!

blitz1/2 · 2013-03-21, 23:23

Rejoice Sacred Twins fans, for your update has come!
(Damn, I should have included it as a ending statement in ch 13) >_<

ZeroXSEED · 2013-03-21, 23:28

WIN FOR THE WIN GOD! (Done!)

Strigon 13 · 2013-03-21, 23:37

Holy....!!!

That chapter was good. I want to see what you have for the gospel arc (if you reach there of course).

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On another note, currently I got across this idea:

Spoiler:

ZeroXSEED · 2013-03-21, 23:42

Basically a lot of V4 can be omitted and it'll be just fine.

Seriously, the only important scenes are the gathering at Orimura residency and the summer festival, as well as Chifuyu and Yamada in the bar, and you can just skip straight to the essence

EDIT: Cinderella chapter in V5 is a set up for confrontation with Autumn, shorten it enough and it'll work, especially if the story turned out to be serious afterwards.

DarkJak2050 · 2013-03-22, 03:45

Atleast, you guys are fairing better...

demino_hellsin · 2013-03-22, 06:28

Don't worry Jak, you'll get there. At the very least you have on arc done.

StratoSpear · 2013-03-22, 06:44

It's like rough seas, you have difficulty getting a grip but it eventually goes away and you'll be able to write again.

Also, another scene for you butchering pleasure:

Spoiler for Hyperion:

Side note, the Minerva Zero's Zero Launcher that I posted a few pages back references to this.

agetreme · 2013-03-22, 06:47

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Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

Atleast, you guys are fairing better...

I got red eye for the past two days so it is impossible for me to doing any better than Jak.

As of now, looking at my monitor alone felt like me being punched in the (infected) eye repeatedly.

It hurts, burns and stings all at the same time.

Thankfully, I am feeling better now, it only feels like burning if I stare at the monitor over 5 minutes or so.

demino_hellsin · 2013-03-22, 07:00

Not much to say on the scene. It really flows naturally. thought what the reader imagines and what you imagine might be different.

In terms of the zero launcher, it's way more balanced than the source material

HasuMasu · 2013-03-22, 07:14

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Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

New one in the archive.

The Orimura Detective Agency

That title reminds me of an old bunny, Eratas may or may not still remember that.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-03-22, 07:24

You mean valentine rampage and murder?

demino_hellsin · 2013-03-22, 08:34

Anyone ever dodged a raging cosplayer before?

StratoSpear · 2013-03-22, 08:59

Haven't been so lucky to be chased by one before so... not really.

HasuMasu · 2013-03-22, 09:00

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

You mean valentine rampage and murder?

No, a very long time ago there was a sandwich grimdark plot bunny.

demino_hellsin · 2013-03-22, 09:01

Never been chased by one either. Just nearly stood between her and her target.

Thought it might be an interesting experience to use for a fic.

agetreme · 2013-03-22, 11:43

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Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Anyone ever dodged a raging cosplayer before?

Costume aren't exactly good for running....

To be honest I only seen a Cosplayer once in my entire life.
One of these days, I really need to get out and visit the anime convention.

demino_hellsin · 2013-03-22, 11:56

What's graduation season for Japan?

2013-03-21, 21:05	Link #40942
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Well, I did write some drafts for Future Imperfect, but it oddly comes off as incestous....nevermind the fact that they're not TECHNICALLY related in the current timeline. __________________

2013-03-21, 21:19	Link #40943
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	R LEE EMMEY: Listen up you maggot! You call that piece of shit an update? Really? Pussy. Joke aside, yes, nine months. It survived the apocalypse EDIT: Holy shit, the traffic is insane! __________________ Last edited by ZeroXSEED; 2013-03-21 at 23:23.

2013-03-21, 23:23	Link #40944
blitz1/2 Tenshi's Defense Squadron Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system	Rejoice Sacred Twins fans, for your update has come! (Damn, I should have included it as a ending statement in ch 13) >_< __________________ hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.

2013-03-21, 23:28	Link #40945
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	WIN FOR THE WIN GOD! (Done!) __________________

2013-03-21, 23:37	Link #40946
Strigon 13 Electrosphere Join Date: Mar 2011	Holy....!!! That chapter was good. I want to see what you have for the gospel arc (if you reach there of course). ------------------------------------------------------------------- On another note, currently I got across this idea: Spoiler: for my fic i'm going to use 2 perspectives of the same chapter (side A and side B). Side A will be the canon route with mayor plot events changed and some foreshadowing while side B will explain some of the foreshadowing and add the OCs side development. Which event on the original canon can be omitted according to you guys? Keep in mind, this story goes at the start of volume 5.

2013-03-21, 23:42	Link #40947
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Basically a lot of V4 can be omitted and it'll be just fine. Seriously, the only important scenes are the gathering at Orimura residency and the summer festival, as well as Chifuyu and Yamada in the bar, and you can just skip straight to the essence EDIT: Cinderella chapter in V5 is a set up for confrontation with Autumn, shorten it enough and it'll work, especially if the story turned out to be serious afterwards. __________________

2013-03-22, 03:45	Link #40948
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Atleast, you guys are fairing better...

2013-03-22, 06:28	Link #40949
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Don't worry Jak, you'll get there. At the very least you have on arc done.

2013-03-22, 06:44	Link #40950
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	It's like rough seas, you have difficulty getting a grip but it eventually goes away and you'll be able to write again. Also, another scene for you butchering pleasure: Spoiler for Hyperion: “Thank God for air-conditioners…” Clause watches out his base’s observation deck where the hologram screen displays the temperature outdoors while the Sun bathe the island with intense heat and daylight. Staring at the hologram screen from a rotary seat in front of the deck’s control console, he brings out various data from the archives including first-person-perspective pictures of the Minerva. ‘A single manned unit fending off five of our masterpieces in a single fight…’ He enlarges the pictures in sequence which shows the Minerva with the Type-One flight unit mounted on the back, some magnifying the in-built weapons like the beam guns on the forelimbs, the beam sabers stored on the waist and the massive, broad buster sword. ‘Even though it mounts specialized close-combat equipment as a standard…’ Pictures of the Minerva taking damage from railgun and super-compact air projectiles is swapped to the foreground, showing bits of the geodesic particle barrier that shields the unit against the shots as well as pictures of physical fracture damage on the unit’s armor. ‘Tough… but not invincible. Then there’s still the Academy’s IS defense system…’ “Tch.” He clicks his tongue as he swipes the pictures off the hologram screen and back into the archives, pulling out a couple of items. One is labeled [JABBER 02: ASTRA] while the other has a single, big Greek sigma icon as its cover. He selects the former which displays another humanoid drone unit unlike the previous Jabber drones the organization has fielded. This new Jabber unit, the Astra, appears much slimmer than its predecessor. The Astra also appears to lack in-built weaponry on its arms like the predecessor. However, it is armed with a pair of cannons mounted on its back and a long sleek solid blade attached to a rotating mount that’s attached parallel to its right forelimb. The opposite tip of the mounted blade sports a couple of oval-shaped gun muzzles. “Block R, what’s the sit-rep on the revised Replicas?” “-We’ve just completed the combat test for Unit Two-B, sir. The cannons’ alternate function for plasma ammunition churns out more way more firepower compared to the Jabber’s plasma guns and the scimitar halberd appears to hit much harder compared to the previous double-bladed lance type.-” “And the Astra?” “-As planned, we’ve built three of them. They’re currently being loaded onto an Ark along with the rest of Apprehension Plan.-” As the personnel speaks through the comms, Clause browses through other data in the archives on the hologram screen. One of the item, labeled [APPREHENSION PLAN] on the top right of the hologram screen, shows what appears to be a strike force consisting of several Jabbers and Strike Jabbers. Alongside the drones are three of the Astra units and a massive transport aircraft labeled [ARK]. The Ark appears as a huge, tailless, variable forward wing sweep aircraft with a bulk on its underside where the main cargo hold resides. Relatively flat top, the aircraft also lacks a visible cockpit which instead has four semi-transparent panels around its nose cone, each concealing an optical camera. The Ark’s overall design is relatively sleek with barely any major hinges across its exterior and at the back of it are quadruple deep, rectangular engine exhausts. ‘Apprehension Plan… A painstaking compromise but if all goes well…’ The screen immediately swipes off the displayed data back into the archive and swaps out a global view where a dotted line traces from Japan towards North America across the Pacific Ocean then back to Japan, at Hachijo Island where the Hyperion Styx’s base is located. Three indicators [01], [02] and [03] are then projected at specific points along the dotted path. ‘We’ll have the world’s greatest piece of technology in our hands!’ Clause grins at the screen and closes the overview display, staring out towards the distant town. ‘Enjoy your summer while you still can, Academy.’ Side note, the Minerva Zero's Zero Launcher that I posted a few pages back references to this. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2013-03-22, 07:00	Link #40952
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Not much to say on the scene. It really flows naturally. thought what the reader imagines and what you imagine might be different. In terms of the zero launcher, it's way more balanced than the source material

2013-03-22, 07:24	Link #40954
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	You mean valentine rampage and murder? __________________

2013-03-22, 08:34	Link #40955
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Anyone ever dodged a raging cosplayer before?

2013-03-22, 08:59	Link #40956
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Haven't been so lucky to be chased by one before so... not really. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2013-03-22, 09:01	Link #40958
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Never been chased by one either. Just nearly stood between her and her target. Thought it might be an interesting experience to use for a fic.

2013-03-22, 11:56	Link #40960
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	What's graduation season for Japan?