2009-10-03, 04:13 | Link #12047 |
On thin ice
Join Date: Mar 2009
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ganbaru: I'll just CnC cause I'm crap with ratings xD; The focal is very unclear, might also be due to the fact that it's too red. I'd select the focal point and filter it to sharpen. Then I'd duplicate the render layer and set it to Soft Light. And lastly, I'd start a new layer and fill it with grey/black before filtering it as a lighting effect on the focal and setting it to soft light.
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2009-10-03, 04:30 | Link #12048 |
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Join Date: Dec 2005
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katiemirmo > 9/10
Evil Rick > Jagged edges, unnecessary animation Godlike1889 > Is it really necessary to animate the flashing words? BTW, the no-blood version is nicer capture > 8/10 leoblack9 > Nice fade, but the animation is too fast, and the filesize is too big. Kelisidina > 9/10, don't like the choice of font though. |
2009-10-03, 04:40 | Link #12049 |
On thin ice
Join Date: Mar 2009
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Kyuuen: 8, the focal is quite fine, and I like how the girl is sort of not part of it; the way a few bits of her go beyond the border make her look like a ghost who just flew in and hugged him, and that makes for some gorgeous flow. I would remove the text, since the way it overlays the foreground is quite annoying, and ruins the flow. Another thing I would work on is the rendering, it's too choppy and stiff. But quite a lovely sig overall.
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2009-10-03, 08:40 | Link #12051 |
Your fagottry, I hate it!
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Hamster Slapping Land
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Kyuuen - [9/10]
Makes me think of a scene to be treasured and reminisced. A happy couple + old/sepia-like colors + the text (wow I only noticed it now), a nice combination. Kelisidina - [8.5/10] Simplistic, and colorful. Staring at the picture, yes, I do think the sound of music could reach through space and beyond. That's the power of music for me. The Chaos- [8/10] Nice, a picture story with a vibrant red color attuned to it. The girl doesn't look to happy, wait, it's romantic right? There's a rose!! But the girl isn't happy and looks lonely.. meh.
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2009-10-03, 20:47 | Link #12054 |
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Join Date: Oct 2009
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I'm kinda new here, I will rate based on what just I saw so don't hate me too much
Kyuuen - 2/5 the upper part (transparent part) is choppy, some part are pixelated, IMHO it's better to make it a jpeg rather than a gif KatieMirmo - 3/5 purple is overkill but if used correctly it can be nicer than any color, sharpen the character a bit for nicer effect. ganbaru - 2.5/5 simple but the quality of the char. is low, is that a manga scan or an original sketch? leoblack - 2/5 nice pic but text/font is a failure, the white parts doesnt suit the sig I think
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2009-10-03, 20:57 | Link #12055 |
dn ʎɐʍ sıɥʇ
Graphic Designer
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Northern Ireland
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ganbaru Your sigs are getting better with every one you make so keep it up. few minor points i'd personally change the first being your name which could have been better placed and the eglish text is maybe a bit too faded. 7/10
ayu-smepai Its a nice image and crop but its maybe a little low quality and the overlay style boardery bit with the verticl line half way through is a little stange. All in all 6/10 Edit: i seem to have missed a page =I KanaMinami I like it. Nice image itself and a fitting backround. Only negative points i can see are with the shadowing over the top as imo they dont really add anything to the look. Still a good effort all round. 7/10
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2009-10-03, 21:05 | Link #12056 |
On thin ice
Join Date: Mar 2009
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Drake: 8/10 It seems a bit overcrowded, and chaotic, so I'm not seeing a fixed flow @.@ Not sure where the focal is either, right now I think it's the sword? But, re colors work nicely and effort is very evident. I think you're ready to add depth to it
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2009-10-04, 11:45 | Link #12060 |
Your fagottry, I hate it!
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Hamster Slapping Land
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katiemirmo - [9/10]
Dynamic effects, I personally like that couple as well so + points . Using green (or emerald?) as a background and effects perfectly matches CC's hair. It's as if Lelouche is being surrounded by C.C's aura. All in all, a very appealing work.
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