So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.
Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:
Upon viewing the character chart
Nanoha: *sigh* nothing new really. Again with the ambiguousness -_-‘
Fate: … I’m not in Nanoha’s box…
Nanoha: Nya ha ha well it’s not like we’re cannonly family really and you get a nice best friend line to me and Hayate.
Fate: Best… friend… oh… that’s all *doom*
Yuuno:… I ‘m not in Nanoha’s box… *emo corner*
Nanoha: A-ah Yuuno-kun
Yuuno: *drawing sad circles on the ground* Ana no-lines gets to be in the box but poor ‘ol loyal Yuuno doesn’t get that.
Fate: *Joins Yuuno in the corner* I don’t get to be Fate-mama anymore…
Erio + Caro: Then what exactly are we?
Subaru: Since Fate was a Mama and now isn’t in the family does that make her… *thinks. Gasps* A deadbeat dad!
Tiana: *Thwack!* She’s a girl!
Subaru: *sniff* Ne Tia Tia there weren’t any lines connecting us *Teary eyes*
Tiana: O-of course there weren’t *blush* Why would there be anyway?
Subaru: But Tia~ *Tackle hug/Gropage*
Tiana: O////O G-Get off!
Vice: Hey Zaffy~ look what I got!
Zafira: What? And don’t call me Zaffy.
Vice: I got my own box *pride* See *points* Me and… um… eye patch girl
Zafira: *sweatdrop* You don’t even know her name? [btw: Does anyone actually know her name?]
Vice: Phssst it’s not important.
Zafira: O.o
Griffith: *searching*… *still searching* … *more searching*… I’m… I’m not on here.
Zafira: Eh? But… there are dead people on here. Dead people with… even less lines then you?
Vice: *back pat* there there some people just aren’t meant for main characterdom
Griffith: Getting a box does not make you a main character after all Yuuno got one.
Yuuno: D: What? I-I’m a main character
Hayate: Oh Yuuno your delusions are so adorable.
Vita: Everyone knows if you’re male and in Nanoha you’re just a minor character
Yuuno/Chrono/Zafira/Vice/Griffith: OBJECTION!
Signum: Foolishly foolish fools. Mahou Shojou Lyrical Nanoha is aimed at people who have no interest in watching a bunch of men. Look at the fan art if you need proof.
Vice: E-eh I have no counter for that.
Chrono: Fanfiction! We have Fanfiction!
Zafira/Yuuno/Griffith: … -_-;
Zafira: I only have that weird fic that’s never updated about me being a babysitter
Griffith: Most people don’t remember I was even in Nanoha
Yuuno: YUNOHA! *Jumps up with passion* THE WORLD NEEDS MORE YU—
Fate: NANOFATE *Tackles Yuuno*
Yuuno: *struggling on the ground with Fate* Don’t be greedy I need the screen time not you!
Fate: You can never have enough screen time
Nanoha: *eye twitch* That’s all I am? A method to get seen?
Fate/Yuuno: No duh.
Vice: Oh Yuuno you’re so short sighted. Hooking up with the main character isn’t the only way to get more screen time. There’s always the Vivio route.
Zafira: Not this again. Look if we’re going by cannon the only people who have any contact wit—
Yuuno: Besides I already won.
Everybody: Eh?
Yuuno: See here. It says parent/child and Vivio *proud*
Vita: -_- It says you work to maintain Nanoha and Vivio’s parent/child relationship
Yuuno: oh…
Fate: What the hell does that mean?
Vivio: *comes in wearing a giant feather boa, fur coat and giant sunglasses* Did somebody say the star’s name? Vivio doesn’t like it when… her lesser castmates talk about her.
Zafira: A-a-h V-vivio?
Nanoha: *sigh* She’s been like this ever since she heard the theory if we get a forth season it will center around her.
Vivio: *Flips back hair* It’s only natural that someone of Vivio’s talent and moeness would be the star. Face it. You girls are just… too old.
Nanoha/Fate/Hayate: OoO….
Nanoha: WHO’S AN OLD LADY WHO CAN’T SELL A SINGLE HENTAI DOUJIN!
Vivio: No one wants to watch an old 20 something run around in a mini skirt.
Nanoha: EH?!?
Signum: She has a point. Anime characters over the age of 25 or so have significantly smaller fanbases an—
Nanoha: That can’t be true.
Vivio: The younger they are the more popular Oh HO HO HO HO HO HO!
Nanoha: NOOOOOOOOO!
I was glad to see that the papa Yuuno I put in Bodyguard!Nanoha wasn't so farfetched
@Evil rick that is definitely one evil avatar
@TheSinwithin- I don't have an opinion because to be honest... I haven't read Undercover yet ^^; I've been waiting for you to finish so I could read it all in one sitting.
Edit: Whoot! Page claim! I claim this page in the name of staying on topic!
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
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Originally Posted by TheShinySword
So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.
Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:
Upon viewing the character chart
Nanoha: *sigh* nothing new really. Again with the ambiguousness -_-‘
Fate: … I’m not in Nanoha’s box…
Nanoha: Nya ha ha well it’s not like we’re cannonly family really and you get a nice best friend line to me and Hayate.
Fate: Best… friend… oh… that’s all *doom*
Yuuno:… I ‘m not in Nanoha’s box… *emo corner*
Nanoha: A-ah Yuuno-kun
Yuuno: *drawing sad circles on the ground* Ana no-lines gets to be in the box but poor ‘ol loyal Yuuno doesn’t get that.
Fate: *Joins Yuuno in the corner* I don’t get to be Fate-mama anymore…
Erio + Caro: Then what exactly are we?
Subaru: Since Fate was a Mama and now isn’t in the family does that make her… *thinks. Gasps* A deadbeat dad!
Tiana: *Thwack!* She’s a girl!
Subaru: *sniff* Ne Tia Tia there weren’t any lines connecting us *Teary eyes*
Tiana: O-of course there weren’t *blush* Why would there be anyway?
Subaru: But Tia~ *Tackle hug/Gropage*
Tiana: O////O G-Get off!
Vice: Hey Zaffy~ look what I got!
Zafira: What? And don’t call me Zaffy.
Vice: I got my own box *pride* See *points* Me and… um… eye patch girl
Zafira: *sweatdrop* You don’t even know her name? [btw: Does anyone actually know her name?]
Vice: Phssst it’s not important.
Zafira: O.o
Griffith: *searching*… *still searching* … *more searching*… I’m… I’m not on here.
Zafira: Eh? But… there are dead people on here. Dead people with… even less lines then you?
Vice: *back pat* there there some people just aren’t meant for main characterdom
Griffith: Getting a box does not make you a main character after all Yuuno got one.
Yuuno: D: What? I-I’m a main character
Hayate: Oh Yuuno your delusions are so adorable.
Vita: Everyone knows if you’re male and in Nanoha you’re just a minor character
Yuuno/Chrono/Zafira/Vice/Griffith: OBJECTION!
Signum: Foolishly foolish fools. Mahou Shojou Lyrical Nanoha is aimed at people who have no interest in watching a bunch of men. Look at the fan art if you need proof.
Vice: E-eh I have no counter for that.
Chrono: Fanfiction! We have Fanfiction!
Zafira/Yuuno/Griffith: … -_-;
Zafira: I only have that weird fic that’s never updated about me being a babysitter
Griffith: Most people don’t remember I was even in Nanoha
Yuuno: YUNOHA! *Jumps up with passion* THE WORLD NEEDS MORE YU—
Fate: NANOFATE *Tackles Yuuno*
Yuuno: *struggling on the ground with Fate* Don’t be greedy I need the screen time not you!
Fate: You can never have enough screen time
Nanoha: *eye twitch* That’s all I am? A method to get seen?
Fate/Yuuno: No duh.
Vice: Oh Yuuno you’re so short sighted. Hooking up with the main character isn’t the only way to get more screen time. There’s always the Vivio route.
Zafira: Not this again. Look if we’re going by cannon the only people who have any contact wit—
Yuuno: Besides I already won.
Everybody: Eh?
Yuuno: See here. It says parent/child and Vivio *proud*
Vita: -_- It says you work to maintain Nanoha and Vivio’s parent/child relationship
Yuuno: oh…
Fate: What the hell does that mean?
Vivio: *comes in wearing a giant feather boa, fur coat and giant sunglasses* Did somebody say the star’s name? Vivio doesn’t like it when… her lesser castmates talk about her.
Zafira: A-a-h V-vivio?
Nanoha: *sigh* She’s been like this ever since she heard the theory if we get a forth season it will center around her.
Vivio: *Flips back hair* It’s only natural that someone of Vivio’s talent and moeness would be the star. Face it. You girls are just… too old.
Nanoha/Fate/Hayate: OoO….
Nanoha: WHO’S AN OLD LADY WHO CAN’T SELL A SINGLE HENTAI DOUJIN!
Vivio: No one wants to watch an old 20 something run around in a mini skirt.
Nanoha: EH?!?
Signum: She has a point. Anime characters over the age of 25 or so have significantly smaller fanbases an—
Nanoha: That can’t be true.
Vivio: The younger they are the more popular Oh HO HO HO HO HO HO!
Nanoha: NOOOOOOOOO!
Edit: Whoot! Page claim! I claim this page in the name of staying on topic!
I'm on a trip and finally got access to the internet. Backlog...kind of.
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Originally Posted by Keroko
You ever had the urge to write something after just
seeing an image? No wait... most of us do. I did so this morning, after seeing this image in the image thread:
Spoiler:
Spoiler for A moment in the mind of Syn:
Math classes are boring. Very boring. On the bright side, having a firm grip on the subject does give me the liberty to my eyes and mind wonder, and enjoy the nice views outside.
Though right now, the best view is to my right.
Sitting next to you and watching you chew on your pen in boredom. A most casual sight if there ever was one, and yet I could hardly wish for a better one.
It’s been almost two years now since Vivio joined with us, and it seems she managed to fit in perfectly. She had a bit of a stumbleblock at the beginning –after all, being the daughter of one of the most famous mages in the TSAB tends to attract a lot of questions- but she dealt with it just fine.
Of course, being that she was new I felt sort of responsible to look out for her. Calling some order to the pushy ones asking questions was easy enough, but you still had to deal with the curiosity.
Then again, this class is very easy going, and easily accepts new or strange things, so I shouldn’t have been worried.
But I always felt a bond between us ever since we first talked. Was it because you never asked questions to my strange appearance? I am quite tall, after all, and the eyepatch often gets questions fired at me.
Or maybe it was because of our similar backgrounds? Both of us have family high up in the Bureau, after all.
Regardless of what it was, I would never want to forsake the friendship you and I forged that day.
When was it then, I wonder, that these feeling of friendship turned into something... more?
Or maybe it was always like this. Maybe it was ever since you walked into this classroom, proudly stating your name and giving everyone that adorable smile of yours.
Yes, that smile.
That smile which I love and cherish, the smile that makes you shine so much.
It really isn’t that hard to see why I have grown to love you.
Because I love you, Vivio.
My precious V.
I love SynxVivio. So cute.
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Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki
Well, got the first chapter of this new fic idea done. The title is tentative and any feedback would be great before I get to work on the next chapter
Spoiler for Angelic magic:
“Alright, I’ll see you tomorrow!”
“Mm, see you tomorrow.”
Nanoha Takamachi waved off to the brunette girl who was making her way out of the classroom at the end of the school day. Many students had already gone on their way to after school activities or back home as soon as they were dismissed. Two students were at the front of the room were on clean up duty and would probably be around for another half hour or so sweeping the floors and straightening out the desks. There were two others towards the back of the room engaged in a light conversation. One of them turned her head towards Nanoha.
“Nanoha, are you ready to go?”
“Ah, sorry Fate-chan. Let’s get going.”
The third girl giggled and brushed some stray strands of hair from her face, “Don’t rush yourself, Nanoha-chan. It’s not like we have anything too important to do.”
“Nyahaha. I know Hayate-chan, but I don’t want to keep you and Fate-chan waiting too long.”
Now with everyone accounted for, the trio made their way out of the school building and passed the gates. The sky was already starting to shift from blue to a reddish-orange as the sun began its descent. While it would have been easier to catch the bus back to their place, it wasn’t a far walk and the weather was nice and warm. It also gave them time to talk before they ended up collapsing on the couches inside their apartment and not wanting to do anything for some time.
A short hill climb later they found themselves at their intended destination. After the walk, they were too tired to take the stairs and thus opted for the elevator to take them to the fourth floor. The door slid open with a soft hiss following the sweeping of their security card on the wall panel. Inside they were greeted by the cooler, air conditioned air of their fair sized apartment with three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a kitchen, dining room, and living room. Shoes were quickly removed and bodies were soon sprawled out on the comfortable couches.
“Ahhh,” sighs Nanoha. “Good to be back in here.”
“I don’t know if I can take another one of that teacher’s lectures,” grumbled their blond companion who had her face buried in a pillow.
From the window, Hayate giggled at her two friends. It had been quite a day with lectures on top of those exams. It seemed that no matter where you went you couldn’t escape exams or school. The sun was now lower in the sky, bathing the entire city in its reddish-orange glow. Gazing out the window, Hayate couldn’t help but think of how peaceful it looked now. However, they all knew that it was only temporary. Her mind began to wander back to how they ended up here in the first place…
Several days ago aboard the Arthra…
“Nanoha-chan! Fate-chan!”
Both 14 year old girls turned around at the call of their names. Just down the corridor they could see Hayate running up to them still dressed in her school uniform.
“Ah, Hayate-chan! Did you get called to this emergency briefing, too?”
She nodded, “Yea, they brought me aboard as soon as I was able to. Though have you two heard anything about what this is about?”
Fate shakes her head, “We know just as much as you. It could be some high-class Lost Logia with the level of urgency.”
Although rare, this would not have been the first time the trio was called to duty so abruptly. Most of their missions outside of TSAB training involved the investigation and recovery of Lost Logia and Relics. Some complications arose here and there but overall the missions were fairly routine. These missions would usually involve two or three of them working together on other worlds. They figured that it was due to their prior experiences and success in dealing with hazardous Lost Logia, though their connections to the higher-ups might also be another factor.
Stepping into the briefing room, they found it to be a lot more crowded than they had expected. Several officers from the Intelligence Division were pouring over papers and numerous monitors of data. The main monitors had still images of what they presumed was the target world rotating through them. One of the Intelligence Division officers, a major according to his markings, looked up from his monitor at the newcomers.
“Ah, you’re here. We can get started then.”
It took a few moments for the room to settle down before he began, “As of 1450 hours local time we detected a massive dimensional dislocation on Non-Administered World 66. Nearby ships reported the reading to HQ and a scouting team was immediately dispatched to investigate.”
A press of a button brought up a new image on the main monitor, displaying a large city surrounded on one side by an ocean and hills on the others. It looked like a normal city had it not been for the massive black object covering a portion of it. Above the center a small sphere could be barely made out due to the white stripes circling it.
“The scout team came to conclude that this…thing is the cause of the dimensional dislocation. Sensors were unable to penetrate the black mass, but superficial readings indicated that it was several hundred meters in diameter and had a thickness of a few nanometers. Not having encountered a dislocation of this type before, the scout team maintained orbit to continue analysis. That was when they noticed the inhabitants sending out these.”
Two more images materialized on either side of the first image. This time they were taken much closer to the ground. All eyes were locked on the alien forms being displayed. Both were gigantic based on the buildings in the background and were shaped just giant, armored people. One was blue with a large red ‘eye’ set in its helm while the second was red with what appeared to be four green ‘eyes.’
The major continued, “Our readings of these constructs show that they appear to be biological in nature with heavy mechanical modifications. The equipment on the scout ship weren’t designed for such analysis so our information is very limited. However, the cameras were able to get clear shots of the markings on the arms.”
Several images popped up on top of the current images, displaying enlarged images of the constructs shoulders and lower arms. The words ‘EVA 0’ on the shoulder and ‘PROTOTYPE’ on the lower arm were clearly visible on the blue one while the red one had ‘EVA 2’ and ‘PRODUCTION’ written on it.
“These EVAs appear to have been made by the residents of this world. How, we do not know given what we know of their current technological level and the disaster 15 local years ago. What we have been able to tell is that these constructs were made with some specific purpose in mind. Usually we would not make a big fuss about it had it not been for the dimensional dislocation and what happened the following day.”
A second monitor overlapped the first to play a recording from the ship in orbit. The camera was zoomed in on the black and white sphere floating above the black mass. At first, there was nothing. Then the sphere started to quiver. Beneath it the mass began to crack, exposing a deep crimson. The camera remained focused on the sphere when something pushed its way out from inside of it, sending a spray of what appeared to be blood onto the mass below. Ripples and cracks spread from the protruding object around the entire sphere until a second object burst forth, now identifiable as hands amidst the shower of blood. Everyone in the room couldn’t tear their eyes from the monitor as the hands gripped the sides and tore the hole larger. From the steady widening tear an armored head with a single horn emerged and opened its mouth. There was no sound, but you would almost hear it crying out as it forcefully ripped its way free of the sphere. It landed on the cracked ground, covered from head to toe in crimson while the remains of the sphere landed behind it.
The trio watched the horrific display, never having seen anything so animalistic before. Hayate had to cover her mouth in shock, desperately wishing for it to end and the building nausea to leave her. When the video came to an end, they could only stare at the frozen image of that thing covered in blood with its mouth open and head tilted back as if screaming to the heavens above in triumph.
“Shortly after this, numerous helicopters and other vehicles with an organization’s marking converged on the third construct. Due to all the activity, it was difficult to acquire much information, but a white tube was ejected from its back, leading to the theory that these things are operated by one or more people riding inside.”
He took a breath before continuing, “During the…destruction of the black mass all signs of the dimensional dislocation vanished, supporting the idea that it was the cause. However, we also got other readings. When the construct was…freeing itself sensors detected unusual barrier readings coming from the sphere. Magical barrier readings. The destruction of the black mass also left the area saturated in residual magic.”
That revelation led to whispers being exchanged between the room’s occupants. The major had expected this and waited a moment before continuing.
“As a result, an official investigation has been started to determine the origin of magic being used on this world. A second ship was deployed to the world to take further readings and discovered a large amount of residual magic on the planet’s South Pole, the same location of the disaster 15 years ago. Combined with older residual magic in the city and the surrounding area as well as unusual readings coming from below the city itself it has been decided to deploy an undercover team to investigate the source of this magic. An outright intervention has been deemed to dangerous should whoever is involved with the source of the magic and potential Lost Logia have ill intent given the magic levels involved here. Therefore, lieutenants Takamachi, Harlaown, and Yagami shall be deployed to the city to investigate.”
Even though they were expecting it, the mission was still a surprise to the trio. Nanoha was the first to speak up, “But why us, sir?”
“From what intelligence we could gather the city is pretty much run by whatever organization also controls the contracts. The majority of the adults work for them in one way or another which makes sending our own people difficult due to their tight security screenings. However, their local school is more lax in security and would be easier for someone to get enrolled and pose as a student to blend in. From what records we managed to gather, there was been a constant stream of incoming and outgoing students so enrolling you in the school would not be a problem. Also, we picked up on a rumor that some people involved with those constructs attend the local school as well.”
Fate crossed her arms over her chest and leaned back, “Which would also let us check up on that rumor.”
“Precisely. Preparations are almost complete for your lodging and other items you will need to blend in. The mission file will contain information on the world as well as all of our intel on what we have managed to find on the constructs and the organization and your cover story. We will contact you once we near the world. Dismissed.”
Everyone except the Intelligence Division shuffled out of the room and into the hallway. The trio decided to head off to the mess hall to read over the mission files.
“Well,” sighs Hayate, “this is going to be interesting.”
The other two nod in agreement, reflecting on what’s to come.
Nice little cross over you have going on. I find it interesting.
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Originally Posted by Satashi
In all the time I have been with the military I had never once wished something would happen just so I could do something. Be it a scramble, alert, sudden training, working out, shopping for the week's food, cooking... something always had my interest. So much so that I often stayed up late to make sure I got everything done. Now, however, I found myself doing something I haven't done in I don't know how long. I was laying on the couch with ear buds in to listen to Tia's music via her mp3 type device. Arf was in her child form laying on top of me sleeping but I could tell by her tail lazily wagging and hitting my leg that she enjoyed the petting I was giving her. One hand hung off the couch and reached into a bag of chips that I had been munching on for a while now, even though I wasn't really all that hungry. Hayate was with Yuuno somewhere along with Signum and Shamal working on their secret weapon against Tri-Edge while my forwards were training with Fate outside in a barrier. Arf stretched out lightly and shifted to lay her head on my chest more, breathing steadily again almost immediately. Though all this, only one thought kept passing through my head: 'I am so bored!'
I really need to re-read these because I forget what happened! O.O! But you have my full support. As for the that ShizuruxNatsuki fic, (I don't like calling it ShizNat. It sounds weird) I really really liked it.
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Originally Posted by Evil Rick
Chapter 29
Vatican Knights
Spoiler for Mad people:
Our situation: Half of the squadron murdered by the mad villagers, our mision: find and kill Takamachi Nanoha, those were the words that Raphael told to us that morning, but my friends and I have another task; find and Kill Beatriz de la Huerta and Salazar de la Huerta, just as Alastor Wilzon has requested to us in exchange to asist us to kill The White Devil and her minions, the question was... how?
How did we gonna convince the other Knights, to go to the townhall were this two persons were without telling them our intentions? I didn't knew how but we had to do it
That morning the plan was to search the entire town looking for a clue, Villa del Toro was big, more than I expected, we started since 5:00 am, by lucky in my team were my friends, but I was no longer leader, this time Sky was leading along with more regulators,we search every house, every corner of the town, it seemed to be abandonated, now, nothing of this is important to mention exept by one thing, a armery that we found, inside of this was something inmense, covered with an enormus cloack,weremoved it and find a giant axe, a colosal one, like 20 meters of length
"What the..?! For what shall they do something like this?" I asked
"Not for what? For Who?" Jasper replyed, then it cames to my mind the Slave that attacked us in the lake. Can be more slaves of it's size? Or even biggers?
We continue our search, oh, yes, Helga and Alphonse looked so cute as boyfriends, always together, exchanging smiles with each other, remembering last night, I was really happy for them, although very worried about that giant axe
Finally we reach some farms at the east side of the main Plaza, we entered in them and inspectionated them, nothing
"This isn't normal... is like if the entire town had disapeared" Sky sayed
"Weare going back with the others?" Alphonse asked
"Yes... Trop,let's return to ther main plaza!" Here is when the things got ugly, when the regulator open the main door, inmediatly a bullet fromthe outside blow up his head, then thousands of bullets and rocks started to rain over that farm's house
"It's a trap! Get cover! Get cover!" Sky comanded, we all inmediatly launched ourselves against the floor, I grab Karil and puted her just aside me and covered her with my body, then we hear all the screams of the mad villagers, they hads set a trap to us, and we had falled in it
"¡Ally están! ¡Matenlos, que no escapen!" They scream, they entered in the house, whealding pales and sticks, a battle started right there
"¡Los usaremos para alimentar a Los Ganados!" One of them screamed, after I killed him,I asked to Jasper
"What did he said?" Jasper put a bullet in the chest of another one after replyed to me
"'We will use them to feed Los Ganados' or something like that!" Alphonse cut out the head of another and asked
"And what are 'Los Ganados'?" Helga toke doen another and replyed
"I don't know my love, but I don't want to find out"
Karil was shooting very well, I'm not sure but I think she didn't miss in any shoot, then a woman apeared in fron of her, she charged against my friend, Karil shoot one,two, tree times, but the woman didn't stoped, but at the fourt shoot... the head of the woman explote and from it came out a horrible Slave making a horrible chill, still using the womans body, the Slave charge once more against Karil, I jumped in front of it and shooted against the Head of the just borned demon, it died inmediatly
"Sky! The situation isn't good!" I screamed, before he could answer, a man half transfgormed into a slave entered in the romm, half of his body had been turned into a giant jaw and an enormus yellow eye was covering his entire face, aparently this onewas leadig the rest of the villagers, with a single move of his arm he launched Sky to the oposite side of the room, I shooted against him, the bullet didn't stopped him, he then charged against me, I was reloading when I feelt his body hitting mine, when I was on the floor, he grabed my leg and pulled me with violence to the back of the yard
"Agh..! Release me you bastard freak!" I screamed
"Karil!" Helga noticed me and she was following me, behind here, Alphonse was following me too, the half demon toke me to the kitchen and from there he break the wall and we reach the yard, I noticed that he was runing in direction to a cliff
"Hey! No, no! Stop! Stop!" I comanded him, he didn't obey and keep runing, Helga and Alphonse were still chasing me, the slave reach the cliff and launched me to it, but I quickly grabed his arm and pulled him with me, when we were falling I pull out my gun and shooted against his yellow eye, I used his corpse to amortiguate the fall, when we reach the floor I was quite descornetaded, by lucky, the clif wasn't very high I had fall something like 5 meters, I remained in the floor for a seconds totally dizzy... then I felt the Hand of Helga touching my face
"Vivio! Vivio! Are you allright?" I saw her and Alphonse both at my side
"Ow... my head. Were... were are we?"
"In something like a pit, I wonder... WHAAA!!!" Helga suddenly screamed, Alphonse holded her, I turn my face and saw why Helga had screamed, a human skull not far from my head, I quicly got up and when I looked better, I saw we were in a giant field covered with skelletons
Before anyone of us could say something the ground started to trumble, the we heare steps, giant steps that were coming from a enormus cave in front of us
Spoiler for Mad Villagers:
A field of skeletons...interesting. Glad to see Alphonse and Helga together and being all cute.
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Originally Posted by Keroko
Spoiler for and then some:
“Boring boring boring boring booooooring” was the line of thought going through Vivio’s mind as she casually flipped the mechanical penclip up again with her lips. Why did math teacher have to insist on making their explanations so long anyway?
Most of the class around her was in the same state of boredom, some even half-asleep. With a sigh Vivio flipped the pencil up again.
Unfortunately this time the eraser on top of the pencil fell off, and since the tip of the pencil was currently up in the air, the top, which was where all the lead sticks are loaded, was facing downwards. And gravity being gravity, all the lead sticks of her pencil fell down into her mouth. Her eyes widened as her tongue registered the graphite taste and she immediately shoved her chair backwards and spat out the pen and everything else.
“Ew ew ew” she yelled in frustration as the taste refused to leave. It took a moment before she was calm enough to realize just where she was, and turned her head to see the entire class staring at her.
“Uhm…” she nervously said as her eyes scanned the confused, or amused faces of her classmates. To her left, her blue-haired friend Syn obviously had seen what had happened, as she was struggling to keep her lips neutral and her visible right eye was trembling in an attempt not to burst into laughter.
“Takamachi-san, are my lessons that revolting?” The teacher said with a raised eyebrow.
“I… no… I’m…” Vivio stammered, too embarrassed to get out a proper sentence.
“Then perhaps you could gather your thoughts in the hall. You seem to need a bit of time too yourself.”
“Isn’t that a bit harsh? All that happened was her pen breaking on her while holding it in her mouth.” Syn spoke up from her place.
“Then perhaps she should have been using it to copy notes instead of keeping it in her mouth. As she should have” The teacher returned.
“You sound like an evil overlord now.” Syn grumbled.
“I’ll take that as a compliment Virage-san, now I believe we have a volunteer to keep you company, Takamachi-san.”
Syn glared at their teacher. “That’s abuse of power.” She growled.
“I’m an evil overlord, remember?” the teacher returned smugly as Vivio began pulling Syn by her sleeve.
“This isn’t over yet, dark lord! Your evil reign over this classroom will end, I will return, and with greater numbers! We will overthrow you! The age of freedom will come! Your days are numbered!” The proclamations began to fade as Vivio pulled her friend out of the door, leaving behind a laughing class.
The teacher sighed. That Virage girl was almost as much trouble as she was worth. Sure she managed to keep order in the class and keep the class entertained at times, like this one, but did she have to do it in such a tiring way? Oh well, as long as the Takamachi girl kept her out of problems it would be fine. With the class more amused like this it would be easier to finish lessons.
Meanwhile in the hall, Vivio was giving her friend an embarrassed look. “Did you have to do that?” she asked.
“Hey, I’m not the only one who was bored.” Syn answered as she stuck out her tongue.
“Yes, but now you’re stuck here with me holding these buckets.” Vivio said, gesturing to the buckets they were holding.
Syn shrugged. “It was boring in there as well anyway, now we have something to do anyway.”
“Yes, but holding buckets isn’t any more ‘fun’ either.” Vivio returned.
“True, but getting there sure was.” Syn grinned.
Vivio sighed. “How do you manage to get into these situations?”
“Having an irresistible urge to backtalk teachers? Being a smartass? Trying to relieve the boredom?” Syn provided.
“…This doesn’t bother you at all, does it?”
“Eh, its just holding buckets. Knowing our teacher no official complaint is going to be made of it. And it’s only fifteen more minutes until the end of class anyway. What could possibly happen?”
Vivio was about to reply, until two voices reached her ears.
“… So nice of you to come visit your daughter, Takamachi-san.”
“Nyahaha, I’ve been busy with work lately, so I haven’t had time to come and see her at school and I wanted to know how she’s doing.”
Vivio’s eyes tripled in size. Syn blinked.
“Huh. Note to self: Murphy’s Law works just fine.”
Vivio looked around panicky for any cover before her mother could spot her. In the end, she dove behind Syn, right before her mother rounded the corner.
“Are? Syn? Did you do something to get send to the hall again?” The escort, who turned out to be Lady Schach, said in a reproving voice. Syn merely grinned in response. “How do you manage to be here so often?”
“Boredom, mostly. Konnichiwa Takamachi-san.” She said with a small bow towards Nanoha.
“Konnichiwa, Syn. How are things?”
“Just fine, thank you. We were just having a very… ‘educational’ math class, and most of us were resting our eyes contemplating all the information so generously given to us before hell broke loose.”
Vivio sighed in relief behind her friend. Lucky that Syn was a good half head taller then her. Now if only her mother wouldn’t spot her…
“And how did Vivio get there with you?” Her mother’s voice reached her ears.
Dammit Murphy!
“Ehehehe…” Vivio chuckled nervously.
“Well?” Nanoha said.
“I was… sort of bored in class… and I was chewing on my pencil and it kind off… opened in my mouth.”
…
A moment of silence.
“That’s all?” Nanoha said.
“Oh that’s not half of it.” Syn said with a grin. “As soon as she realized what was happening she did a massive spit take just in the middle of Sousou-sensei’s lecture of how important it was to remember to take the result into the further calculation. It sounded like she was disagreeing with him rather violently.”
“Syn!” Vivio protested with a beaming red head.
Nanoha sighed. “Sister Schach, I think I will take you on on that offer of tea. Maybe after we finish I can watch my daughter in class properly.”
Vivio hung her head as Nanoha and sister Schach walked on.
“…I’m dead.” She mumbled. “I’m going to get grounded for sure.”
Syn turned back to Vivio. “Grounded? With that big smile on her face as she was walking on?”
“Huh?” Vivio blinked.
“Yup. She probably did something like that herself, or knew someone who did. I wouldn’t worry about it too much. Oh hey, only two minutes remaining, lets get rid of these buckets and have lunch.”
Vivio sighed in relief as Syn took her bucket and walked to the drain. “Thanks Syn.”
“Anytime V.”
Vivio smiled. She hadn’t just thanked Syn for taking care of her bucket. Vivio knew why Syn had taunted the teacher. She knew Vivio hated being alone, so she tagged along to keep her company.
She smiled. Syn always knew what to say to make her feel better when she was feeling down.
And that’s why she loved her.
Lol that was really funny with Nanoha being at school. VivioxSyn!!
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Originally Posted by Thesinwithin
Back on topic. I was thinking about potentially extending Undercover into two more parts, instead of one. So I was wondering, what do you guys think I should do.
a] make epic-long-chapter-of-death and actually end everything for this final update - this will take longer than the usual friday night update.
b] add an epilogue that helps to finish off the storyline with cuteness and fluff after some epic angst?
c] Do neither and write something else (Like Cop!Nanoha or more of Vivio's boyfriend)
How about both B and C?
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Yes. I think I finally made one really... Evil
Yeah they kind of freak me out but are cool at the same time.
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Originally Posted by TheShinySword
So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.
Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:
Upon viewing the character chart
Nanoha: *sigh* nothing new really. Again with the ambiguousness -_-‘
Fate: … I’m not in Nanoha’s box…
Nanoha: Nya ha ha well it’s not like we’re cannonly family really and you get a nice best friend line to me and Hayate.
Fate: Best… friend… oh… that’s all *doom*
Yuuno:… I ‘m not in Nanoha’s box… *emo corner*
Nanoha: A-ah Yuuno-kun
Yuuno: *drawing sad circles on the ground* Ana no-lines gets to be in the box but poor ‘ol loyal Yuuno doesn’t get that.
Fate: *Joins Yuuno in the corner* I don’t get to be Fate-mama anymore…
Erio + Caro: Then what exactly are we?
Subaru: Since Fate was a Mama and now isn’t in the family does that make her… *thinks. Gasps* A deadbeat dad!
Tiana: *Thwack!* She’s a girl!
Subaru: *sniff* Ne Tia Tia there weren’t any lines connecting us *Teary eyes*
Tiana: O-of course there weren’t *blush* Why would there be anyway?
Subaru: But Tia~ *Tackle hug/Gropage*
Tiana: O////O G-Get off!
Vice: Hey Zaffy~ look what I got!
Zafira: What? And don’t call me Zaffy.
Vice: I got my own box *pride* See *points* Me and… um… eye patch girl
Zafira: *sweatdrop* You don’t even know her name? [btw: Does anyone actually know her name?]
Vice: Phssst it’s not important.
Zafira: O.o
Griffith: *searching*… *still searching* … *more searching*… I’m… I’m not on here.
Zafira: Eh? But… there are dead people on here. Dead people with… even less lines then you?
Vice: *back pat* there there some people just aren’t meant for main characterdom
Griffith: Getting a box does not make you a main character after all Yuuno got one.
Yuuno: D: What? I-I’m a main character
Hayate: Oh Yuuno your delusions are so adorable.
Vita: Everyone knows if you’re male and in Nanoha you’re just a minor character
Yuuno/Chrono/Zafira/Vice/Griffith: OBJECTION!
Signum: Foolishly foolish fools. Mahou Shojou Lyrical Nanoha is aimed at people who have no interest in watching a bunch of men. Look at the fan art if you need proof.
Vice: E-eh I have no counter for that.
Chrono: Fanfiction! We have Fanfiction!
Zafira/Yuuno/Griffith: … -_-;
Zafira: I only have that weird fic that’s never updated about me being a babysitter
Griffith: Most people don’t remember I was even in Nanoha
Yuuno: YUNOHA! *Jumps up with passion* THE WORLD NEEDS MORE YU—
Fate: NANOFATE *Tackles Yuuno*
Yuuno: *struggling on the ground with Fate* Don’t be greedy I need the screen time not you!
Fate: You can never have enough screen time
Nanoha: *eye twitch* That’s all I am? A method to get seen?
Fate/Yuuno: No duh.
Vice: Oh Yuuno you’re so short sighted. Hooking up with the main character isn’t the only way to get more screen time. There’s always the Vivio route.
Zafira: Not this again. Look if we’re going by cannon the only people who have any contact wit—
Yuuno: Besides I already won.
Everybody: Eh?
Yuuno: See here. It says parent/child and Vivio *proud*
Vita: -_- It says you work to maintain Nanoha and Vivio’s parent/child relationship
Yuuno: oh…
Fate: What the hell does that mean?
Vivio: *comes in wearing a giant feather boa, fur coat and giant sunglasses* Did somebody say the star’s name? Vivio doesn’t like it when… her lesser castmates talk about her.
Zafira: A-a-h V-vivio?
Nanoha: *sigh* She’s been like this ever since she heard the theory if we get a forth season it will center around her.
Vivio: *Flips back hair* It’s only natural that someone of Vivio’s talent and moeness would be the star. Face it. You girls are just… too old.
Nanoha/Fate/Hayate: OoO….
Nanoha: WHO’S AN OLD LADY WHO CAN’T SELL A SINGLE HENTAI DOUJIN!
Vivio: No one wants to watch an old 20 something run around in a mini skirt.
Nanoha: EH?!?
Signum: She has a point. Anime characters over the age of 25 or so have significantly smaller fanbases an—
Nanoha: That can’t be true.
Vivio: The younger they are the more popular Oh HO HO HO HO HO HO!
Nanoha: NOOOOOOOOO!
I was glad to see that the papa Yuuno I put in Bodyguard!Nanoha wasn't so farfetched
That was so funny. Yuuno and Fate in the emo corner and then fighting over screen time was...interesting. OMG! OBJECTION! That was funny, but true. What is the name of that girl with the eye patch??
“Boring boring boring boring booooooring” was the line of thought going through Vivio’s mind as she casually flipped the mechanical penclip up again with her lips. Why did math teacher have to insist on making their explanations so long anyway?
Most of the class around her was in the same state of boredom, some even half-asleep. With a sigh Vivio flipped the pencil up again.
Unfortunately this time the eraser on top of the pencil fell off, and since the tip of the pencil was currently up in the air, the top, which was where all the lead sticks are loaded, was facing downwards. And gravity being gravity, all the lead sticks of her pencil fell down into her mouth. Her eyes widened as her tongue registered the graphite taste and she immediately shoved her chair backwards and spat out the pen and everything else.
“Ew ew ew” she yelled in frustration as the taste refused to leave. It took a moment before she was calm enough to realize just where she was, and turned her head to see the entire class staring at her.
“Uhm…” she nervously said as her eyes scanned the confused, or amused faces of her classmates. To her left, her blue-haired friend Syn obviously had seen what had happened, as she was struggling to keep her lips neutral and her visible right eye was trembling in an attempt not to burst into laughter.
“Takamachi-san, are my lessons that revolting?” The teacher said with a raised eyebrow.
“I… no… I’m…” Vivio stammered, too embarrassed to get out a proper sentence.
“Then perhaps you could gather your thoughts in the hall. You seem to need a bit of time too yourself.”
“Isn’t that a bit harsh? All that happened was her pen breaking on her while holding it in her mouth.” Syn spoke up from her place.
“Then perhaps she should have been using it to copy notes instead of keeping it in her mouth. As she should have” The teacher returned.
“You sound like an evil overlord now.” Syn grumbled.
“I’ll take that as a compliment Virage-san, now I believe we have a volunteer to keep you company, Takamachi-san.”
Syn glared at their teacher. “That’s abuse of power.” She growled.
“I’m an evil overlord, remember?” the teacher returned smugly as Vivio began pulling Syn by her sleeve.
“This isn’t over yet, dark lord! Your evil reign over this classroom will end, I will return, and with greater numbers! We will overthrow you! The age of freedom will come! Your days are numbered!” The proclamations began to fade as Vivio pulled her friend out of the door, leaving behind a laughing class.
The teacher sighed. That Virage girl was almost as much trouble as she was worth. Sure she managed to keep order in the class and keep the class entertained at times, like this one, but did she have to do it in such a tiring way? Oh well, as long as the Takamachi girl kept her out of problems it would be fine. With the class more amused like this it would be easier to finish lessons.
Meanwhile in the hall, Vivio was giving her friend an embarrassed look. “Did you have to do that?” she asked.
“Hey, I’m not the only one who was bored.” Syn answered as she stuck out her tongue.
“Yes, but now you’re stuck here with me holding these buckets.” Vivio said, gesturing to the buckets they were holding.
Syn shrugged. “It was boring in there as well anyway, now we have something to do anyway.”
“Yes, but holding buckets isn’t any more ‘fun’ either.” Vivio returned.
“True, but getting there sure was.” Syn grinned.
Vivio sighed. “How do you manage to get into these situations?”
“Having an irresistible urge to backtalk teachers? Being a smartass? Trying to relieve the boredom?” Syn provided.
“…This doesn’t bother you at all, does it?”
“Eh, its just holding buckets. Knowing our teacher no official complaint is going to be made of it. And it’s only fifteen more minutes until the end of class anyway. What could possibly happen?”
Vivio was about to reply, until two voices reached her ears.
“… So nice of you to come visit your daughter, Takamachi-san.”
“Nyahaha, I’ve been busy with work lately, so I haven’t had time to come and see her at school and I wanted to know how she’s doing.”
Vivio’s eyes tripled in size. Syn blinked.
“Huh. Note to self: Murphy’s Law works just fine.”
Vivio looked around panicky for any cover before her mother could spot her. In the end, she dove behind Syn, right before her mother rounded the corner.
“Are? Syn? Did you do something to get send to the hall again?” The escort, who turned out to be Lady Schach, said in a reproving voice. Syn merely grinned in response. “How do you manage to be here so often?”
“Boredom, mostly. Konnichiwa Takamachi-san.” She said with a small bow towards Nanoha.
“Konnichiwa, Syn. How are things?”
“Just fine, thank you. We were just having a very… ‘educational’ math class, and most of us were resting our eyes contemplating all the information so generously given to us before hell broke loose.”
Vivio sighed in relief behind her friend. Lucky that Syn was a good half head taller then her. Now if only her mother wouldn’t spot her…
“And how did Vivio get there with you?” Her mother’s voice reached her ears.
Dammit Murphy!
“Ehehehe…” Vivio chuckled nervously.
“Well?” Nanoha said.
“I was… sort of bored in class… and I was chewing on my pencil and it kind off… opened in my mouth.”
…
A moment of silence.
“That’s all?” Nanoha said.
“Oh that’s not half of it.” Syn said with a grin. “As soon as she realized what was happening she did a massive spit take just in the middle of Sousou-sensei’s lecture of how important it was to remember to take the result into the further calculation. It sounded like she was disagreeing with him rather violently.”
“Syn!” Vivio protested with a beaming red head.
Nanoha sighed. “Sister Schach, I think I will take you on on that offer of tea. Maybe after we finish I can watch my daughter in class properly.”
Vivio hung her head as Nanoha and sister Schach walked on.
“…I’m dead.” She mumbled. “I’m going to get grounded for sure.”
Syn turned back to Vivio. “Grounded? With that big smile on her face as she was walking on?”
“Huh?” Vivio blinked.
“Yup. She probably did something like that herself, or knew someone who did. I wouldn’t worry about it too much. Oh hey, only two minutes remaining, lets get rid of these buckets and have lunch.”
Vivio sighed in relief as Syn took her bucket and walked to the drain. “Thanks Syn.”
“Anytime V.”
Vivio smiled. She hadn’t just thanked Syn for taking care of her bucket. Vivio knew why Syn had taunted the teacher. She knew Vivio hated being alone, so she tagged along to keep her company.
She smiled. Syn always knew what to say to make her feel better when she was feeling down.
And that’s why she loved her.
Words cannot properly describe this amount of WIN.
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Originally Posted by Comartemis
...Alright, so the Angels are probably Al-Hazardian in origin, assuming they aren't outright Lost Logia.
...Eva, let me say just one thing before I decide to continue reading this, despite every fiber in my body screaming at me to drop it and never go back to it:
If you kill off any of the Aces for good, you WILL be hearing about it from me. I don't care if there's "no angst because there's no time to be angsty", character deaths in fanfics are utterly utterly repulsive to me; that goes triple for Nanoha fanfiction, and triple again for Nanoha, Fate, and Hayate.
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Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki
>_>
<_<
*hides the Nanoha, Fate, and Hayate flavored Tang bottles*
*hides in the Sea of Dirac*
>_>
<_<
*hides the AU Multiverse at War*
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Originally Posted by Comartemis
Spoiler for Brace for Eva-breaker!:
EEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Originally Posted by TheShinySword
So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.
Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:
Upon viewing the character chart
Nanoha: *sigh* nothing new really. Again with the ambiguousness -_-‘
Fate: … I’m not in Nanoha’s box…
Nanoha: Nya ha ha well it’s not like we’re cannonly family really and you get a nice best friend line to me and Hayate.
Fate: Best… friend… oh… that’s all *doom*
Yuuno:… I ‘m not in Nanoha’s box… *emo corner*
Nanoha: A-ah Yuuno-kun
Yuuno: *drawing sad circles on the ground* Ana no-lines gets to be in the box but poor ‘ol loyal Yuuno doesn’t get that.
Fate: *Joins Yuuno in the corner* I don’t get to be Fate-mama anymore…
Erio + Caro: Then what exactly are we?
Subaru: Since Fate was a Mama and now isn’t in the family does that make her… *thinks. Gasps* A deadbeat dad!
Tiana: *Thwack!* She’s a girl!
Subaru: *sniff* Ne Tia Tia there weren’t any lines connecting us *Teary eyes*
Tiana: O-of course there weren’t *blush* Why would there be anyway?
Subaru: But Tia~ *Tackle hug/Gropage*
Tiana: O////O G-Get off!
Vice: Hey Zaffy~ look what I got!
Zafira: What? And don’t call me Zaffy.
Vice: I got my own box *pride* See *points* Me and… um… eye patch girl
Zafira: *sweatdrop* You don’t even know her name? [btw: Does anyone actually know her name?]
Vice: Phssst it’s not important.
Zafira: O.o
Griffith: *searching*… *still searching* … *more searching*… I’m… I’m not on here.
Zafira: Eh? But… there are dead people on here. Dead people with… even less lines then you?
Vice: *back pat* there there some people just aren’t meant for main characterdom
Griffith: Getting a box does not make you a main character after all Yuuno got one.
Yuuno: D: What? I-I’m a main character
Hayate: Oh Yuuno your delusions are so adorable.
Vita: Everyone knows if you’re male and in Nanoha you’re just a minor character
Yuuno/Chrono/Zafira/Vice/Griffith: OBJECTION!
Signum: Foolishly foolish fools. Mahou Shojou Lyrical Nanoha is aimed at people who have no interest in watching a bunch of men. Look at the fan art if you need proof.
Vice: E-eh I have no counter for that.
Chrono: Fanfiction! We have Fanfiction!
Zafira/Yuuno/Griffith: … -_-;
Zafira: I only have that weird fic that’s never updated about me being a babysitter
Griffith: Most people don’t remember I was even in Nanoha
Yuuno: YUNOHA! *Jumps up with passion* THE WORLD NEEDS MORE YU—
Fate: NANOFATE *Tackles Yuuno*
Yuuno: *struggling on the ground with Fate* Don’t be greedy I need the screen time not you!
Fate: You can never have enough screen time
Nanoha: *eye twitch* That’s all I am? A method to get seen?
Fate/Yuuno: No duh.
Vice: Oh Yuuno you’re so short sighted. Hooking up with the main character isn’t the only way to get more screen time. There’s always the Vivio route.
Zafira: Not this again. Look if we’re going by cannon the only people who have any contact wit—
Yuuno: Besides I already won.
Everybody: Eh?
Yuuno: See here. It says parent/child and Vivio *proud*
Vita: -_- It says you work to maintain Nanoha and Vivio’s parent/child relationship
Yuuno: oh…
Fate: What the hell does that mean?
Vivio: *comes in wearing a giant feather boa, fur coat and giant sunglasses* Did somebody say the star’s name? Vivio doesn’t like it when… her lesser castmates talk about her.
Zafira: A-a-h V-vivio?
Nanoha: *sigh* She’s been like this ever since she heard the theory if we get a forth season it will center around her.
Vivio: *Flips back hair* It’s only natural that someone of Vivio’s talent and moeness would be the star. Face it. You girls are just… too old.
Nanoha/Fate/Hayate: OoO….
Nanoha: WHO’S AN OLD LADY WHO CAN’T SELL A SINGLE HENTAI DOUJIN!
Vivio: No one wants to watch an old 20 something run around in a mini skirt.
Nanoha: EH?!?
Signum: She has a point. Anime characters over the age of 25 or so have significantly smaller fanbases an—
Nanoha: That can’t be true.
Vivio: The younger they are the more popular Oh HO HO HO HO HO HO!
Nanoha: NOOOOOOOOO!
I was glad to see that the papa Yuuno I put in Bodyguard!Nanoha wasn't so farfetched
@Evil rick that is definitely one evil avatar
@TheSinwithin- I don't have an opinion because to be honest... I haven't read Undercover yet ^^; I've been waiting for you to finish so I could read it all in one sitting.
Edit: Whoot! Page claim! I claim this page in the name of staying on topic!
Yup not Khrack, cos it blatantly breaks the 4th Wall. Khrack attempts to force left-field theories into canon and make it compute.
But definitely hilarious. Especially the end.
Which reminds me, if there's gonna be a 4th season I'm gonna increase my half-hatched fic counts by another 20....... -_-
mmm... this last chapter seems forced somehow. I mean, the whole "trying go lesbian" thing was an unrealistic plot device to begin with, and it worked because, as ghazghkull said, the story was meant to be light-hearted. So going "realistic" and dramatic at the end kinda comes from nowhere; it feels forced.
Overall, it wasn't half bad, but you can do better.
*sniff*
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!! BUT dont worry Fate I'll still always love you, no matter what!!!!
*sniff sniff*
I feel so sad after reading that......
But it had to end. one way or another. BUT WHY!!!????
It was a great short fic, while it lasted. Great Job Satashi.
I second the motion for the end of the Evangelion talk on the Nanoha fanfiction boards. I have never seen the series, nor do I have any interest in it, and it's not fun for me to come to a board where I expect wonderful mahou shoujo only to find discussion on something I have no interest in. I read the crossover and I liked it, but the wank was a little much for me.
So.
Yeah.
-gets off soapbox-
Back on topic. I was thinking about potentially extending Undercover into two more parts, instead of one. So I was wondering, what do you guys think I should do.
a] make epic-long-chapter-of-death and actually end everything for this final update - this will take longer than the usual friday night update.
b] add an epilogue that helps to finish off the storyline with cuteness and fluff after some epic angst?
c] Do neither and write something else (Like Cop!Nanoha or more of Vivio's boyfriend)
I'm thinking of voting a] and then some c] afterwards! XD
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Originally Posted by TheShinySword
So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.
Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:
-cut-
I was glad to see that the papa Yuuno I put in Bodyguard!Nanoha wasn't so farfetched
@Evil rick that is definitely one evil avatar
@TheSinwithin- I don't have an opinion because to be honest... I haven't read Undercover yet ^^; I've been waiting for you to finish so I could read it all in one sitting.
Edit: Whoot! Page claim! I claim this page in the name of staying on topic!
When I fist saw the picture you inspired yourself from I though 'How can you write a story out of pictures with little arrows around it?!?!'.
You managed the hilarious! That was epic.
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If there's a 4th season, I hope it's about Nanoha......
I liked it, but the ending felt a tad... contrived...awkward...forced? Those aren't quite the words I'm looking for but they're close. It's not the they didn't get together part (after all sometimes these things just don't work out) I just think something about the ending was... off, maybe it was because it didn't fit the tone of the rest of the story. But the two years later thing, that was good.
T_T I somehow felt that coming... And I hoped for happy, no-angst ending.
Anyway, it is well-written, but I don't like it as much as your other stories, sorry.
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I second the motion for the end of the Evangelion talk on the Nanoha fanfiction boards. I have never seen the series, nor do I have any interest in it, and it's not fun for me to come to a board where I expect wonderful mahou shoujo only to find discussion on something I have no interest in. I read the crossover and I liked it, but the wank was a little much for me.
So.
Yeah.
-gets off soapbox-
Back on topic. I was thinking about potentially extending Undercover into two more parts, instead of one. So I was wondering, what do you guys think I should do.
a] make epic-long-chapter-of-death and actually end everything for this final update - this will take longer than the usual friday night update.
b] add an epilogue that helps to finish off the storyline with cuteness and fluff after some epic angst?
c] Do neither and write something else (Like Cop!Nanoha or more of Vivio's boyfriend)
I think that B is a nice choice. Though more cop Nanoha would be appreciated.
Location: SoCal!! It's pretty awesome...once you get used to the ridiculous cost of living...
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Originally Posted by KoSSa
T_T I somehow felt that coming... And I hoped for happy, no-angst ending.
Anyway, it is well-written, but I don't like it as much as your other stories, sorry.
I have to agree with this. Not my favorite piece you've written Satashi but worth reading. I did see this ending coming for awhile now and I'm pretty sure I mentioned it earlier too. Anyways, thanks for completing it.
So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.
Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:
Upon viewing the character chart
Nanoha: *sigh* nothing new really. Again with the ambiguousness -_-‘
Fate: … I’m not in Nanoha’s box…
Nanoha: Nya ha ha well it’s not like we’re cannonly family really and you get a nice best friend line to me and Hayate.
Fate: Best… friend… oh… that’s all *doom*
Yuuno:… I ‘m not in Nanoha’s box… *emo corner*
Nanoha: A-ah Yuuno-kun
Yuuno: *drawing sad circles on the ground* Ana no-lines gets to be in the box but poor ‘ol loyal Yuuno doesn’t get that.
Fate: *Joins Yuuno in the corner* I don’t get to be Fate-mama anymore…
Erio + Caro: Then what exactly are we?
Subaru: Since Fate was a Mama and now isn’t in the family does that make her… *thinks. Gasps* A deadbeat dad!
Tiana: *Thwack!* She’s a girl!
Subaru: *sniff* Ne Tia Tia there weren’t any lines connecting us *Teary eyes*
Tiana: O-of course there weren’t *blush* Why would there be anyway?
Subaru: But Tia~ *Tackle hug/Gropage*
Tiana: O////O G-Get off!
Vice: Hey Zaffy~ look what I got!
Zafira: What? And don’t call me Zaffy.
Vice: I got my own box *pride* See *points* Me and… um… eye patch girl
Zafira: *sweatdrop* You don’t even know her name? [btw: Does anyone actually know her name?]
Vice: Phssst it’s not important.
Zafira: O.o
Griffith: *searching*… *still searching* … *more searching*… I’m… I’m not on here.
Zafira: Eh? But… there are dead people on here. Dead people with… even less lines then you?
Vice: *back pat* there there some people just aren’t meant for main characterdom
Griffith: Getting a box does not make you a main character after all Yuuno got one.
Yuuno: D: What? I-I’m a main character
Hayate: Oh Yuuno your delusions are so adorable.
Vita: Everyone knows if you’re male and in Nanoha you’re just a minor character
Yuuno/Chrono/Zafira/Vice/Griffith: OBJECTION!
Signum: Foolishly foolish fools. Mahou Shojou Lyrical Nanoha is aimed at people who have no interest in watching a bunch of men. Look at the fan art if you need proof.
Vice: E-eh I have no counter for that.
Chrono: Fanfiction! We have Fanfiction!
Zafira/Yuuno/Griffith: … -_-;
Zafira: I only have that weird fic that’s never updated about me being a babysitter
Griffith: Most people don’t remember I was even in Nanoha
Yuuno: YUNOHA! *Jumps up with passion* THE WORLD NEEDS MORE YU—
Fate: NANOFATE *Tackles Yuuno*
Yuuno: *struggling on the ground with Fate* Don’t be greedy I need the screen time not you!
Fate: You can never have enough screen time
Nanoha: *eye twitch* That’s all I am? A method to get seen?
Fate/Yuuno: No duh.
Vice: Oh Yuuno you’re so short sighted. Hooking up with the main character isn’t the only way to get more screen time. There’s always the Vivio route.
Zafira: Not this again. Look if we’re going by cannon the only people who have any contact wit—
Yuuno: Besides I already won.
Everybody: Eh?
Yuuno: See here. It says parent/child and Vivio *proud*
Vita: -_- It says you work to maintain Nanoha and Vivio’s parent/child relationship
Yuuno: oh…
Fate: What the hell does that mean?
Vivio: *comes in wearing a giant feather boa, fur coat and giant sunglasses* Did somebody say the star’s name? Vivio doesn’t like it when… her lesser castmates talk about her.
Zafira: A-a-h V-vivio?
Nanoha: *sigh* She’s been like this ever since she heard the theory if we get a forth season it will center around her.
Vivio: *Flips back hair* It’s only natural that someone of Vivio’s talent and moeness would be the star. Face it. You girls are just… too old.
Nanoha/Fate/Hayate: OoO….
Nanoha: WHO’S AN OLD LADY WHO CAN’T SELL A SINGLE HENTAI DOUJIN!
Vivio: No one wants to watch an old 20 something run around in a mini skirt.
Nanoha: EH?!?
Signum: She has a point. Anime characters over the age of 25 or so have significantly smaller fanbases an—
Nanoha: That can’t be true.
Vivio: The younger they are the more popular Oh HO HO HO HO HO HO!
Nanoha: NOOOOOOOOO!
I was glad to see that the papa Yuuno I put in Bodyguard!Nanoha wasn't so farfetched
Epic win!
Yes, 7Arcs pulled a nice little reset with that one, whiping away all the suggestive scenes and leveling the playing field once again.
... And somehow I just can't get the image of Vivio pretending to be movie star out of my mind. All she needs now a huge hat to finish the image.
And yes, I am one of those supporting Vivio-centric S4. But then, my opinion is hugely biased at that point. :3 *hugs movie-star Vivio*
I was never really one to shop for girls but Nanoha's comment this morning was still bothering me. I knew she was just teasing but there was still something in the way she said it, some faint hint of sadness, that I couldn't help but pick up on. This thought ran over in my mind again and again as I looked at what was before me. Nothing caught my eye right away and I almost gave up on the store before finding something that looked promising. The glass jewelry cases in the middle of the store grabbed my attention, or rather a bracelet inside of it did. A medium sized linked silver bracelet was sparkling in the light almost as if calling out to me. On it was one matching silver charm in the shape of a heart.
'A charm bracelet,' I realized, looking at the several types of charms that could be added to it. 'Simple, pretty, shiny, and it just screams Nanoha.' I stood up straight and met the clerk's eye to call them over to me and ten minutes later I was back out in the cold, now fifty dollars lighter. Although the blow to my wallet stung, I was rather pleased with my purchase. Nanoha was always there for me, it was about time I showed my appreciation.
“I'm home!” I called out as always when I opened the door to the house I now shared with two girls.
Nanoha, as always, came to me with a smile. “Welcome home. You hungry?”
“Starving.” My reply seemed to make her happy. “Something smells good.”
“Pizza,” The girl informed me while rocking on her heels while waiting on me to finish taking off my shoes. “How was Hayate-chan?”
“A lot better.” Walking in, I held up the bag so she could see it. “I have something for you.”
“Oh?” Her face lit with curiosity. “What is it?”
“It's a box.” I took out the long slender jewelry case and held back a chuckle at Nanoha's reaction to cover her mouth in surprise. “Sure are happy about a box.”
“What's in it?” She reached for it and pouted when I moved it away. Trying again, she stood on her tip toes and reached for the case when I held it up. “Stop teasing me!”
“But it's fun.” I let her try once again before bringing it down and handing it to her. “Here, I hope you like.”
“I will,” She assured me before happily clicking open the case and fawning over the simple gift. “Awwwww, it's so kyute!”
“...Did you just say 'kyute'?”
“What on Earth made you buy me a gift?” She sounded happier than I've heard her in the past month or so. “Aw, I love it. A little heart and everything.” The bracelet was put on and looked at again now that it was on her wrist. “Thank you!” I got a tight hug, which I returned.
“I just thought I'd get it for you. No reason really.”
“You're the best.” To my surprise Nanoha got on her tiptoes and pecked my cheek. “Thanks a lot.”
“Welcome.” I touched the spot I was kissed and felt my lips turn up lightly to a smile. “You haven't kissed me in ages.”
“Well, if you would do things to warrant it, I'd kiss you more often.” She had a faint tint of blush on her cheeks, keeping her eyes on the sparking bracelet still. She stared at it for a moment longer before suddenly gasping out. “The pizza!” Quickly she ran to the kitchen and pulled the oven door open, quickly taking out the food. “Oh thank goodness, it's just a little brown on top.” Sliding it onto a cutting board, she went to dust her peel with corn starch before slipping the next one onto it. “Yuuno-kun, this one is yours. It'll take about six minutes so get comfortable and I'll bring it to you when it's done okay?”
“Hmmm....” I hopped on the kitchen counter instead and watched her. “It's quiet tonight, where's Fate at?”
“She ate dinner and conked out. Said she had a hard day.” The girl closed the oven door and walked over to me. Turning around, she faced the same way I was and leaned back against me, pulling my arms to wrap around her front. “It's a little chilly in here.”
“Put on clothes.” I teased. The girl was in her pajamas, which consisted of nothing more than a large shirt that went to her knees.
“But this is comfortable.” She protested while playing with my hands, eyes still darting to the gift she was wearing. “And you're warm.”
“Keep moving my hands like that and I'll end up feeling you up.”
“I don't mind,” She replied airily. “Go for it.”
“...I really will if you say that.”
“Then do it.”
“...I'm not in the mood.”
“Sure,” She giggled to herself and I couldn't help but chuckle. “Ne, question?”
“Yes?”
Nanoha looked over her shoulder at me. “Am I feminine?”
“What do you mean?” I blinked. “Such a sudden question.”
“Hm. Well,” She thought about it. “I kind of get love letters every now and then, but they are normally from people I don't even know. I have a fanclub you know?”
“I know.” I hated those guys. A group of about fifteen that basically worshiped the ground Nanoha walked on.
“But besides those, I don't really get any attention. Am I not feminine enough? Am I attractive?” I pondered it, allowing her to turn around in my arms and look at me. “Even you don't ever look at me when you have the chance.”
“I look at you all the time.”
“Not when I'm naked.”
I blinked. “You want me to look at you naked?”
“No!” She shook her head. “I mean when the situation comes up, when I walk across the hall in only a towel or something. Your eyes never once dropped to look. Am I not feminine?”
Acting on impulse, I reached forward and popped the top snap-buttons on Nanoha's shirt open, revealing her breast fully. “Hmmm.... I give you about an eight.”
Her face slowly turned scarlet but stood there a full five seconds before letting out a 'kya!' and turning around to button them. “Pervert!”
“Yup. I get that way around very feminine women.”
Nanoha slowed down her buttoning and looked back over at me, smiling. “I'll forgive you this time.”
“Thank you,” I teased back.
“But next time,” She winked. “I might just slap you.”
“You want a next time?”
“Maybe, nyaha!” With that she went over to the oven and checked my food. I didn't understand girls sometimes, but right now I could tell Nanoha was happy. She really wanted attention and a little encouragement that she was pretty. I had given her both tonight and her smile was really cute right now. It was this simple moment that made me glad we shared a house together.
~**~
Sunday again; a day off with nothing to do. From the burning smell of death coming from my door I could tell Fate was trying to make breakfast. After a glance out my window I saw Nanoha outside playing in the snow. I knew already that Hayate was going to be shopping today so she could get out of the house. As for me...
A.) Nanoha was so happy last night, I really should treat her to something today to make sure she knows that I appreciate her.
B.) I did say I would take Fate out sometime... but since I bought a gift, it will be a cheap date, would she even like that?
C.) I can probably meet up with Hayate for lunch, if I don't die from Fate's breakfast. A good meal sounds good.
(that was last one. Let's get a new vote count. BOLD AND RED please. If you want the rest of Lyrical Days, I will post it later probably. For now, everyone feel free to vote.
I second the motion for the end of the Evangelion talk on the Nanoha fanfiction boards. I have never seen the series, nor do I have any interest in it, and it's not fun for me to come to a board where I expect wonderful mahou shoujo only to find discussion on something I have no interest in. I read the crossover and I liked it, but the wank was a little much for me.
So.
Yeah.
-gets off soapbox-
Back on topic. I was thinking about potentially extending Undercover into two more parts, instead of one. So I was wondering, what do you guys think I should do.
a] make epic-long-chapter-of-death and actually end everything for this final update - this will take longer than the usual friday night update.
b] add an epilogue that helps to finish off the storyline with cuteness and fluff after some epic angst?
c] Do neither and write something else (Like Cop!Nanoha or more of Vivio's boyfriend)
*holding a big shild with a big B on it*
the world needs more fluff
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Originally Posted by TheShinySword
So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.
Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:
Upon viewing the character chart
Nanoha: *sigh* nothing new really. Again with the ambiguousness -_-‘
Fate: … I’m not in Nanoha’s box…
Nanoha: Nya ha ha well it’s not like we’re cannonly family really and you get a nice best friend line to me and Hayate.
Fate: Best… friend… oh… that’s all *doom*
Yuuno:… I ‘m not in Nanoha’s box… *emo corner*
Nanoha: A-ah Yuuno-kun
Yuuno: *drawing sad circles on the ground* Ana no-lines gets to be in the box but poor ‘ol loyal Yuuno doesn’t get that.
Fate: *Joins Yuuno in the corner* I don’t get to be Fate-mama anymore…
Erio + Caro: Then what exactly are we?
Subaru: Since Fate was a Mama and now isn’t in the family does that make her… *thinks. Gasps* A deadbeat dad!
Tiana: *Thwack!* She’s a girl!
Subaru: *sniff* Ne Tia Tia there weren’t any lines connecting us *Teary eyes*
Tiana: O-of course there weren’t *blush* Why would there be anyway?
Subaru: But Tia~ *Tackle hug/Gropage*
Tiana: O////O G-Get off!
Vice: Hey Zaffy~ look what I got!
Zafira: What? And don’t call me Zaffy.
Vice: I got my own box *pride* See *points* Me and… um… eye patch girl
Zafira: *sweatdrop* You don’t even know her name? [btw: Does anyone actually know her name?]
Vice: Phssst it’s not important.
Zafira: O.o
Griffith: *searching*… *still searching* … *more searching*… I’m… I’m not on here.
Zafira: Eh? But… there are dead people on here. Dead people with… even less lines then you?
Vice: *back pat* there there some people just aren’t meant for main characterdom
Griffith: Getting a box does not make you a main character after all Yuuno got one.
Yuuno: D: What? I-I’m a main character
Hayate: Oh Yuuno your delusions are so adorable.
Vita: Everyone knows if you’re male and in Nanoha you’re just a minor character
Yuuno/Chrono/Zafira/Vice/Griffith: OBJECTION!
Signum: Foolishly foolish fools. Mahou Shojou Lyrical Nanoha is aimed at people who have no interest in watching a bunch of men. Look at the fan art if you need proof.
Vice: E-eh I have no counter for that.
Chrono: Fanfiction! We have Fanfiction!
Zafira/Yuuno/Griffith: … -_-;
Zafira: I only have that weird fic that’s never updated about me being a babysitter
Griffith: Most people don’t remember I was even in Nanoha
Yuuno: YUNOHA! *Jumps up with passion* THE WORLD NEEDS MORE YU—
Fate: NANOFATE *Tackles Yuuno*
Yuuno: *struggling on the ground with Fate* Don’t be greedy I need the screen time not you!
Fate: You can never have enough screen time
Nanoha: *eye twitch* That’s all I am? A method to get seen?
Fate/Yuuno: No duh.
Vice: Oh Yuuno you’re so short sighted. Hooking up with the main character isn’t the only way to get more screen time. There’s always the Vivio route.
Zafira: Not this again. Look if we’re going by cannon the only people who have any contact wit—
Yuuno: Besides I already won.
Everybody: Eh?
Yuuno: See here. It says parent/child and Vivio *proud*
Vita: -_- It says you work to maintain Nanoha and Vivio’s parent/child relationship
Yuuno: oh…
Fate: What the hell does that mean?
Vivio: *comes in wearing a giant feather boa, fur coat and giant sunglasses* Did somebody say the star’s name? Vivio doesn’t like it when… her lesser castmates talk about her.
Zafira: A-a-h V-vivio?
Nanoha: *sigh* She’s been like this ever since she heard the theory if we get a forth season it will center around her.
Vivio: *Flips back hair* It’s only natural that someone of Vivio’s talent and moeness would be the star. Face it. You girls are just… too old.
Nanoha/Fate/Hayate: OoO….
Nanoha: WHO’S AN OLD LADY WHO CAN’T SELL A SINGLE HENTAI DOUJIN!
Vivio: No one wants to watch an old 20 something run around in a mini skirt.
Nanoha: EH?!?
Signum: She has a point. Anime characters over the age of 25 or so have significantly smaller fanbases an—
Nanoha: That can’t be true.
Vivio: The younger they are the more popular Oh HO HO HO HO HO HO!
Nanoha: NOOOOOOOOO!
I was glad to see that the papa Yuuno I put in Bodyguard!Nanoha wasn't so farfetched
@Evil rick that is definitely one evil avatar
@TheSinwithin- I don't have an opinion because to be honest... I haven't read Undercover yet ^^; I've been waiting for you to finish so I could read it all in one sitting.
Edit: Whoot! Page claim! I claim this page in the name of staying on topic!
really hilarious
I couldn't stop laughing the entire story
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Originally Posted by Satashi
If there's a 4th season, I hope it's about Nanoha......
Back on topic. I was thinking about potentially extending Undercover into two more parts, instead of one. So I was wondering, what do you guys think I should do.
a] make epic-long-chapter-of-death and actually end everything for this final update - this will take longer than the usual friday night update.
b] add an epilogue that helps to finish off the storyline with cuteness and fluff after some epic angst?
c] Do neither and write something else (Like Cop!Nanoha or more of Vivio's boyfriend)
B
Quote:
Originally Posted by TheShinySword
So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.
Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:
snip
I was glad to see that the papa Yuuno I put in Bodyguard!Nanoha wasn't so farfetched
That made my morning. Almost got late because of all the reading before, but that was worth it
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Originally Posted by Satashi
If there's a 4th season, I hope it's about Nanoha......
I'm in the same boat as others: mixed feelings... That's twice in a row, a first. I need to read it again thought... But let's (me) not dwell upon this, because more happy-fluffy Disney World is to come, and that's a good thing I can't talk about Redemption, I'm waiting for it to be finished before reading. I know I will regret it if I start now.
And again, you're welcome for the file.
As for a 4th season... God, if there were one... depending on what it would be about, I guess I wouldn't (blind) buy it. Ah, who am I kidding? Throw Fate in it and I'm pre-ordering it as soon as listed
So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.
Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:
Upon viewing the character chart
Nanoha: *sigh* nothing new really. Again with the ambiguousness -_-‘
Fate: … I’m not in Nanoha’s box…
Nanoha: Nya ha ha well it’s not like we’re cannonly family really and you get a nice best friend line to me and Hayate.
Fate: Best… friend… oh… that’s all *doom*
Yuuno:… I ‘m not in Nanoha’s box… *emo corner*
Nanoha: A-ah Yuuno-kun
Yuuno: *drawing sad circles on the ground* Ana no-lines gets to be in the box but poor ‘ol loyal Yuuno doesn’t get that.
Fate: *Joins Yuuno in the corner* I don’t get to be Fate-mama anymore…
Erio + Caro: Then what exactly are we?
Subaru: Since Fate was a Mama and now isn’t in the family does that make her… *thinks. Gasps* A deadbeat dad!
Tiana: *Thwack!* She’s a girl!
Subaru: *sniff* Ne Tia Tia there weren’t any lines connecting us *Teary eyes*
Tiana: O-of course there weren’t *blush* Why would there be anyway?
Subaru: But Tia~ *Tackle hug/Gropage*
Tiana: O////O G-Get off!
Vice: Hey Zaffy~ look what I got!
Zafira: What? And don’t call me Zaffy.
Vice: I got my own box *pride* See *points* Me and… um… eye patch girl
Zafira: *sweatdrop* You don’t even know her name? [btw: Does anyone actually know her name?]
Vice: Phssst it’s not important.
Zafira: O.o
Griffith: *searching*… *still searching* … *more searching*… I’m… I’m not on here.
Zafira: Eh? But… there are dead people on here. Dead people with… even less lines then you?
Vice: *back pat* there there some people just aren’t meant for main characterdom
Griffith: Getting a box does not make you a main character after all Yuuno got one.
Yuuno: D: What? I-I’m a main character
Hayate: Oh Yuuno your delusions are so adorable.
Vita: Everyone knows if you’re male and in Nanoha you’re just a minor character
Yuuno/Chrono/Zafira/Vice/Griffith: OBJECTION!
Signum: Foolishly foolish fools. Mahou Shojou Lyrical Nanoha is aimed at people who have no interest in watching a bunch of men. Look at the fan art if you need proof.
Vice: E-eh I have no counter for that.
Chrono: Fanfiction! We have Fanfiction!
Zafira/Yuuno/Griffith: … -_-;
Zafira: I only have that weird fic that’s never updated about me being a babysitter
Griffith: Most people don’t remember I was even in Nanoha
Yuuno: YUNOHA! *Jumps up with passion* THE WORLD NEEDS MORE YU—
Fate: NANOFATE *Tackles Yuuno*
Yuuno: *struggling on the ground with Fate* Don’t be greedy I need the screen time not you!
Fate: You can never have enough screen time
Nanoha: *eye twitch* That’s all I am? A method to get seen?
Fate/Yuuno: No duh.
Vice: Oh Yuuno you’re so short sighted. Hooking up with the main character isn’t the only way to get more screen time. There’s always the Vivio route.
Zafira: Not this again. Look if we’re going by cannon the only people who have any contact wit—
Yuuno: Besides I already won.
Everybody: Eh?
Yuuno: See here. It says parent/child and Vivio *proud*
Vita: -_- It says you work to maintain Nanoha and Vivio’s parent/child relationship
Yuuno: oh…
Fate: What the hell does that mean?
Vivio: *comes in wearing a giant feather boa, fur coat and giant sunglasses* Did somebody say the star’s name? Vivio doesn’t like it when… her lesser castmates talk about her.
Zafira: A-a-h V-vivio?
Nanoha: *sigh* She’s been like this ever since she heard the theory if we get a forth season it will center around her.
Vivio: *Flips back hair* It’s only natural that someone of Vivio’s talent and moeness would be the star. Face it. You girls are just… too old.
Nanoha/Fate/Hayate: OoO….
Nanoha: WHO’S AN OLD LADY WHO CAN’T SELL A SINGLE HENTAI DOUJIN!
Vivio: No one wants to watch an old 20 something run around in a mini skirt.
Nanoha: EH?!?
Signum: She has a point. Anime characters over the age of 25 or so have significantly smaller fanbases an—
Nanoha: That can’t be true.
Vivio: The younger they are the more popular Oh HO HO HO HO HO HO!
Nanoha: NOOOOOOOOO!
I was glad to see that the papa Yuuno I put in Bodyguard!Nanoha wasn't so farfetched
Mmmm...such good quality crack . Perhaps you should try out the crack and khrack we have in the OC thread...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Satashi
If there's a 4th season, I hope it's about Nanoha......
2008-05-01, 21:28
Author
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That was so funny. Yuuno and Fate in the emo corner and then fighting over screen time was...interesting. OMG! OBJECTION! That was funny, but true. What is the name of that girl with the eye patch??
