Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Spoiler for cheat code (and spoiler) for Raising Heart:

If only you had picked C....

Oh, you suck, Keroko. =P
Either way I'm still looking foward to it.


Could it be?
PAGE CLAIM! =3

[Skyfall]

Originally Posted by Satashi

WTB Nanoha x Teen!Vivio?

I am not sure how that applies to my comment, but no - i don't

Something else. Everyone seems to be interacting a lot more, so how about something fun? A small tag-team writing. One person writes a small part of a story, can be anywhere from a few lines to a few paragraphs, and then points to someone to pick it up. Then that person continues a bit and points out someone else. Would anyone be interested in this, just for fun? I can start something up if a few people are interested.

Not unless you want for it to likely turn in to a drama

[Kha]

YOSH! My vote heralded a storm of B votes!

Thread: Jii~~~~~~

Creator-san: I need to work on my FF thread dynamic entries...

Originally Posted by Satashi

WTB Nanoha x Teen!Vivio?

Keroko remember that picture you shopped into NxK? Got the un-edited version?

[SpaceBrotha]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Reminds me of that Vita/Yuuno picture, so sweet.

Where do you think i got the idea for that fic in the first place?

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Haha, speaking if "in bed" I just got a request for "a more detailed version of Fate's actions before Precia caught her"

I don't think is is bad idea.

Originally Posted by krisslanza

I dunno Nanoha x Leize Twins is sounding more appealing... Then it's a threesome!
That is totally my goal in Keroko's dating sim

Well it might be interesting. O what about Nanoha x Vita /and or/ Signum ?

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Krinen

Oh, you suck, Keroko. =P
Either way I'm still looking foward to it.

Alas, the choice I was looking forward to write the most was the choice that ended up not being picked at all.

Originally Posted by KoSSa

Well it might be interesting. O what about Nanoha x Vita /and or/ Signum ?

With over 40 characters, do you really think I wouldn't include them?

Originally Posted by Kha

Keroko remember that picture you shopped into NxK? Got the un-edited version?

You mean:

Spoiler for this one?:

Yup, still got it. Though I myself also like:

Spoiler for this one:

Final Count:

A: IIIII
B: IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
C:

Whoa... that's a lot of votes. And what is it with you people and parks?

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Keroko

You mean:

Spoiler for this one?:

Yup, still got it. Though I myself also like:

Spoiler for this one:

Want Nanoha/Vivio doujin please
And Keroko, update soon,w e're dying here

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Alas, the choice I was looking forward to write the most was the choice that ended up not being picked at all.

With over 40 characters, do you really think I wouldn't include them?

No, I didn't, of course.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Whoa... that's a lot of votes. And what is it with you people and parks?

Do you really want answer?

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Alas, the choice I was looking forward to write the most was the choice that ended up not being picked at all.



With over 40 characters, do you really think I wouldn't include them?



You mean:

Spoiler for this one?:

Yup, still got it. Though I myself also like:

Spoiler for this one:

Final Count:

A: IIIII
B: IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
C:

Whoa... that's a lot of votes. And what is it with you people and parks?

resolve weakend

*think of NxL, think of NxL....*

Originally Posted by Satashi

Want Nanoha/Vivio doujin please
And Keroko, update soon,w e're dying here

jupp and the same for you Satashi?
how far is XII?

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Want Nanoha/Vivio doujin please
And Keroko, update soon,w e're dying here

Only a few pictures, unfortunately. Teenage Vivio art is rare, looks like most people prefer moe-blob happy family art.

Originally Posted by KoSSa

Do you really want answer?

Wouldn't be asking if I didn't, now would I?

Originally Posted by Gillian

resolution of NxL is weakend

*think of NxL, think of NxL....*

To unlock characters, you first have to find them. Think about where the characters you like would be, and whom they are related to, then go out and search. Everyone knows the best step to unlock the Wolkies, now think, what would be the best step to unlock Lindy?

[Satashi]

okay, I gave in :P

Lemon: Saved by the Bell
Fate's magazine scene (solo)

It's graphic, tho I avoided as many "words" as I could just because I think using some of them takes away from the story (even if it IS written for the sole purpose of fan service).

Overall, it's an okay lemon. Short: 1,117 words. I tried to see if I could keep Fate as .......Fate-like..... as I could during it, which was really hard to do >.<

This is a real lemon, not cute and emotional like the one I posted here. So yeah, it's Fate solo, that's all you really need to know If you want it, PM me. Don't be shy to ask. I mean, hell, I wrote it and offered >.< Reading it back, I kind of like it ( which is good, considering the LAST lemon I offered via PMs I hated lol )

(yes, PMs only. this can not and will not be posted on this thread, nor on FF.N)

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Keroko

To unlock characters, you first have to find them. Think about where the characters you like would be, and whom they are related to, then go out and search. Everyone knows the best step to unlock the Wolkies, now think, what would be the best step to unlock Lindy?

I meant the thought about Teen VivioxNanoha weakened my resolve


and now I have to gather member for LindyxNanoha
otherwise I didn't get the wished pairing

[Ryand-Smith]

SpaceBrotha, Satashi,

I would have not seen that in ten millions of years. Yuuno X Vita is an interesting AU paring.

Junkedcat

I can see the scene in my head, and I feel that it s a great humor scene. Vivo is so innocent, its scary.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Ryand-Smith

SpaceBrotha, Satashi,

I would have not seen that in ten millions of years. Yuuno X Vita is an interesting AU paring.

Junkedcat

I can see the scene in my head, and I feel that it s a great humor scene. Vivo is so innocent, its scary.

Yuuno x Vita was weird for me too lol. I never thought I'd like them.

and wow, 7 request for lemon in like 10 mintues XD!! *happy*

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by Ryand-Smith

SpaceBrotha, Satashi,

I would have not seen that in ten millions of years. Yuuno X Vita is an interesting AU paring.

Junkedcat

I can see the scene in my head, and I feel that it s a great humor scene. Vivo is so innocent, its scary.

I cooking another little piece with Vivio's innocence, but i need to wait till ghazghkull finishes his Nano/Haya/Fate short. Just something about that second part clicked a scenario in my head.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Satashi

and wow, 7 request for lemon in like 10 mintues XD!! *happy*

I knew it
we are a lot of pervs ;D
lol

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

I cooking another little piece with Vivio's innocence, but i need to wait till ghazghkull finishes his Nano/Haya/Fate short. Just something about that second part clicked a scenario in my head.

LOL And what scenario, pray tell, are you thinking about?

Originally Posted by Gillian

I knew it
we are a lot of pervs ;D
lol

That we are LOL XD

[Keroko]

Spoiler for Raising Heart:

I decided to explore the park; I could always go shopping later with Hayate and Fate, its more fun with more people anyway. The park was lovely, a large grass field with a small pond to the north, the entire area was surrounded by a wall of trees making it seem as if you were in a forest if it wasn’t for a few of the larger buildings that were visible above the treetops. Speaking of trees, the southwest was where the most trees stood. A nice little bit of woodwork.

Walking along the path I noticed a familiar face. It was the blonde haired boy from my class. He was sitting on a bench not even a few steps away, reading a book. He obviously must love reading, I wonder what he reads?

“Uhm… Hi.” I decided to greet him.

The boy’s eyes shifted for a moment before they looked up from the book he was reading and to me. “Oh, hello. You are the new girl in the class, Nanoha-san, right?”

Wow, he already remembers my name? This is the first time we’re talking!

“Ah, I’ll introduce myself.” The boy placed a marker on the page he was reading and stood up, making a light bow as he introduced himself. “My name is Yuuno Scrya, pleased to meet you.”

“Ah, no, the pleasure is mine.” I responded with a bow of my own, though I expected mine to be a lot more nervous. I didn’t really think he would be this polite; he looked more like a shy bookworm.

Although he did smile at me when our eyes met in the classroom.

“What was that book you were reading?” I asked him, trying to keep the conversation going.

“This?” Yuuno asked as he held up the book. “This is a book about ancient Egypt. The first Pharao’s, to be exact.” He sat back down on the bench and I followed his example.

“So, are you interested in archaeology then?” I guessed. He smiled.

“Yes, among other things. Archaeology is a profession I might pick up, but on the other hand I also find working in the library to be a lot of fun. I’m part of the school’s library club, I would have joined the archaeology club, but we don’t have one.” He finished as he scratched his cheek. “However, I’m part of an archaeology club outside school. Our professor can be demanding at times, but he knows what he is talking about. I’m learning a lot from him.”

As we sat there talking, I could see his face look far away into the future when he was talking about the things he had planned in life.

I let out a small giggle at the irony, which drew Yuuno’s attention.

“Was it something I said?” He asked with a questioning look.

“No, no” I waved my hands. “Well, I just found it ironic that an aspiring archaeologist is looking so far into the future.” I explained, a small smile and chuckle still present.

“I dive into the pasts of others, not my own.” He replied with a smile. “What about you? Do you have anything planned for the future?”

…

Mental breaks in full reverse. That would describe my mind that moment. What had I planned for the future? I couldn’t honestly say something from the top of my head. I mean, I had thought about it, sure, but I didn’t have a clear picture of just what it was that I wanted to do.

“I… don’t know. I know there is something for me that I want to do, but I don’t know what yet.”

“Hmm.” Yuuno thought for a moment. “you could come down to the library some day, we could look through a few books and maybe we’ll find something that peeks your interest.”

I smiled and nodded, that certainly sounded like a plan. We stayed and chatted for while until it was getting too late. After that, we bid each other goodbye and I returned to my room in the school dorm. My room was still tidy, no surprise considering I hadn’t really done much with it yet, the kitchen had a separate chamber, and the main room simply had a desk on one side, the bet on the other, and a TV at the opposite end of the bed. I let myself fall forward on the bed with a sigh. Today had been a great day.

~-~-~-~

The next day arrived with the sound of my cellphone alarm going off and the sun glaring in my eyes, poking me to wake up. I groaned as I sat up straight in my bed and looked around; it took me a moment to realize I was in a different room.

Oh yes, that’s right, my family moved and I’m boarding now…

That realization woke me up faster then a splash of water could. Obviously it hadn’t really sunk in yet that I was no longer living home before. I let my head hand forward for a moment as a slight feeling of nausea welled up.

Still, it was a school day, so got changed, munched down a small breakfast and went off to school. Once I got near the entrance I could see Fate waiting for me.

“Good morning Nanoha, how was your first day yesterday?”

“It was great, Hayate showed me around the school and I also talked to Yuuno-san.”

“That’s great.” Fate smiled, whew, maybe she won’t ask- “So, how are you feeling?”

Nuts.

The nausea returned, truthfully I was feeling horrible, but tell that to Fate and she goes complete worrywart. Most likely she will talk me out of going to school, but I can’t skip on my second day!




A: [lie] “I feel fine, come on, let’s go.”

B: [small lie] “A bit homesick, I guess.”

C: “I feel horrible.”

[Ryand-Smith]

As Smith Prime, the Superion, I vote C, because the idea of Shamal X Nanoha seems off

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Spoiler for Raising Heart:

I decided to explore the park; I could always go shopping later with Hayate and Fate, its more fun with more people anyway. The park was lovely, a large grass field with a small pond to the north, the entire area was surrounded by a wall of trees making it seem as if you were in a forest if it wasn’t for a few of the larger buildings that were visible above the treetops. Speaking of trees, the southwest was where the most trees stood. A nice little bit of woodwork.

Walking along the path I noticed a familiar face. It was the blonde haired boy from my class. He was sitting on a bench not even a few steps away, reading a book. He obviously must love reading, I wonder what he reads?

“Uhm… Hi.” I decided to greet him.

The boy’s eyes shifted for a moment before they looked up from the book he was reading and to me. “Oh, hello. You are the new girl in the class, Nanoha-san, right?”

Wow, he already remembers my name? This is the first time we’re talking!

“Ah, I’ll introduce myself.” The boy placed a marker on the page he was reading and stood up, making a light bow as he introduced himself. “My name is Yuuno Scrya, pleased to meet you.”

“Ah, no, the pleasure is mine.” I responded with a bow of my own, though I expected mine to be a lot more nervous. I didn’t really think he would be this polite; he looked more like a shy bookworm.

Although he did smile at me when our eyes met in the classroom.

“What was that book you were reading?” I asked him, trying to keep the conversation going.

“This?” Yuuno asked as he held up the book. “This is a book about ancient Egypt. The first Pharao’s, to be exact.” He sat back down on the bench and I followed his example.

“So, are you interested in archaeology then?” I guessed. He smiled.

“Yes, among other things. Archaeology is a profession I might pick up, but on the other hand I also find working in the library to be a lot of fun. I’m part of the school’s library club, I would have joined the archaeology club, but we don’t have one.” He finished as he scratched his cheek. “However, I’m part of an archaeology club outside school. Our professor can be demanding at times, but he knows what he is talking about. I’m learning a lot from him.”

As we sat there talking, I could see his face look far away into the future when he was talking about the things he had planned in life.

I let out a small giggle at the irony, which drew Yuuno’s attention.

“Was it something I said?” He asked with a questioning look.

“No, no” I waved my hands. “Well, I just found it ironic that an aspiring archaeologist is looking so far into the future.” I explained, a small smile and chuckle still present.

“I dive into the pasts of others, not my own.” He replied with a smile. “What about you? Do you have anything planned for the future?”

…

Mental breaks in full reverse. That would describe my mind that moment. What had I planned for the future? I couldn’t honestly say something from the top of my head. I mean, I had thought about it, sure, but I didn’t have a clear picture of just what it was that I wanted to do.

“I… don’t know. I know there is something for me that I want to do, but I don’t know what yet.”

“Hmm.” Yuuno thought for a moment. “you could come down to the library some day, we could look through a few books and maybe we’ll find something that peeks your interest.”

I smiled and nodded, that certainly sounded like a plan. We stayed and chatted for while until it was getting too late. After that, we bid each other goodbye and I returned to my room in the school dorm. My room was still tidy, no surprise considering I hadn’t really done much with it yet, the kitchen had a separate chamber, and the main room simply had a desk on one side, the bet on the other, and a TV at the opposite end of the bed. I let myself fall forward on the bed with a sigh. Today had been a great day.

~-~-~-~

The next day arrived with the sound of my cellphone alarm going off and the sun glaring in my eyes, poking me to wake up. I groaned as I sat up straight in my bed and looked around; it took me a moment to realize I was in a different room.

Oh yes, that’s right, my family moved and I’m boarding now…

That realization woke me up faster then a splash of water could. Obviously it hadn’t really sunk in yet that I was no longer living home before. I let my head hand forward for a moment as a slight feeling of nausea welled up.

Still, it was a school day, so got changed, munched down a small breakfast and went off to school. Once I got near the entrance I could see Fate waiting for me.

“Good morning Nanoha, how was your first day yesterday?”

“It was great, Hayate showed me around the school and I also talked to Yuuno-san.”

“That’s great.” Fate smiled, whew, maybe she won’t ask- “So, how are you feeling?”

Nuts.

The nausea returned, truthfully I was feeling horrible, but tell that to Fate and she goes complete worrywart. Most likely she will talk me out of going to school, but I can’t skip on my second day!




A: [lie] “I feel fine, come on, let’s go.”

B: [small lie] “A bit homesick, I guess.”

C: “I feel horrible.”

Because it's hard for me to imagine lyingI chose C.