Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[MeisterBabylon]

Hmm... Which OC was paired with Laura? Kyuukai?

[ZeroXSEED]

@Meister
Kyuukai

Request for all the bio of Riz and Celeste (again). Also, would you mind if I post a parody of IKaron story, 4-koma style? (though in fanfiction form).

[Eratas123]

@ Meistah - In what story?

@ Senpai - Most likely it's Laura who's gonna be driving Wouldn't surprise me if the police stop her and she shows that she actually has a license

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - You mentioned a 4koma story?

[ZeroXSEED]

In the style of Gag 4-koma, each chapter is very short. Sometimes there's full chapter.

Since I wasn't serious in writing that, fridge logic is abound and MST3K Mantra is needed.

"So, who are you. kid?" Kajie mumbled as he saw this 14 year old, silver haired kid tied to a chair, constantly struggling even though it's futile.

"Are you sure he hacked our ship's system for the sake of stealing information?"

"There is no mistake" The operator explained as she shown the young Captain the backlog and traces of illegal activity. He mumbled something then get a conclusion.

A Very important Conclusion

"At least he's not stalking my sister"

"Wait a minute" The entire crew in the room screamed

Yeah...

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Seems fine to me I'll read any you post.

Side note - Why do you and Meistah keep saying he has silver hair? I'm pretty sure I stated multiple times that it's white like an Albino's.

[ZeroXSEED]

For the sake of cool duh, I know Irish has white hair like an old man. Also, there's no "Silver Haired Pretty Boy" trope. But Bishie Sparkle gave silvery effect.

When the Hurricane meets glacier

Curiosity filled his blank mind, wonder why this petite, black haired girl is even here. Her mini dress added more effect to her childlike feature, but for some reason, he felt that their age isn't very far apart.

"So, what are you doing here?"

"Quiet" she smirked innocently, much to his wonder "Celeste is angry and I have to hide in an unexpected place"

"Anyone sane wouldn't think of hiding in a brig" he flatly said and clenched his, "Besides, I can use you as hostage to get out this cursed place"

For a while, her smile turned from those of hyperactive child into one that's slightly more mature and playful "You wouldn't, you haven't even think about escaping."

He banged his head to the wall.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Silver hair looks odd for me. Besides, the white hair makes him look older

Side note - What's happening in the draft there? Did Irish get arrested?

[MeisterBabylon]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

@Meister
Kyuukai

Ah... I haz my mystery gentleman in an IS who helps the SHOOTiNG ST@RS.

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Request for all the bio of Riz and Celeste (again). Also, would you mind if I post a parody of IKaron story, 4-koma style? (though in fanfiction form).

Definitely its a go.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Meistah - In what story?

There were others?

Spoiler for Celeste Eisenberg:

Celeste Eisenberg

Original: http://forums.animesuki.com/showthre...55#post3452155

Name: Celeste Eisenberg
CV: Ise Mariya
Nickname: Tenshi
Age: 15
DOB: ??-??
Eyes: Purple (Left eye is gold, but she wears contacts over it out of combat)
Hair: Shoulder-length, grey-blue
Gender: Female
Affiliation: Infinite Stratos Academy Class 1-2 / 1st Schwarzenhase
Occupation: Officer Cadet
Classification: Pilot
IS title: MPIS Schwarz-type “Seraphim”
IS CV: Kevin J. England [YES, SIR.]
IS style: Heavy weapon pods
Generation: 3G
Storage Form: None

Celeste is a quiet girl that does not stand out in the roudy class of 1-2. She doesn't smile, or give off any expression. Even Marvelous is somewhat unnerved by the lack of human expression from the girl in the back row. She is an officer cadet and enrolled in ISA to further her training of IS operations. In future, she will rejoin the 1st Schwarzenhase from which Laura Bodewig is commanding officer. The diminuitive Celeste may not look like much, but, like her fellows in the elite military unit, she has been genetically modified and cybernetically enhanced to be the next generation of super soldier. Within the unit, she is ranked 10th. Lethal, efficient, tireless, she is the heavy weapons girl of the SHOOTiNG ST@RS.

Some people may think that from her exemplary discipline, Celeste is very rigid in following the rules, but that is very far from the truth. She always lets herself get dragged along into Karon's latest mad-cap scheme, then diligently carries out her role in the plan no matter how hard or how silly. So when Riz first looked to her to curtail Karon, she was very very disappointed. Likewise, many in school mistake Celeste to have "poverty of thought". But Eisenberg is actually a very artistic person. She is very into music, and is often found sitting quietly with her humongous Sennheiser headphones strapped over her head (though no one can tell if she's enjoying it or not). And that music is as varied as it comes; part of Karon's morning routine would involve pulling them off when she comes to class and she would find anything from the latest party rock anthem to the classical Bach to the bizarre tribal beat. As such, the cyborg’s early role at KG-P is disc-jockey and sound mixer. None of their live shows have ever run into any trouble with the AV department. She also helps Houki with coming up with the music for their songs. Furthermore, access to a sound-proof room, Celeste's enhanced physical prowess and her musical talents have combined to make her the ultimate dancer. Nothing is beyond her; in the privacy of the ISA Keionbun, Celeste does a mean robot, shuffles like a maniac, sets the floor on fire with salsa, all while maintaining that doll face of her's. Later, she also coaches the other ST@RS in dance routines as their idol work load increase with their popularity. At the same time, the other girls teach her expressions and elements of ‘normalcy’. Before long, Celeste grows to be able to join them on the same stage.

Her IS is a mass-produced version of the Schwarz from the previous generation. It shares only the frame of the Schwarz Regen, has no storage form until it was upgraded by Kougami Industries and lacks the powerful weapons of the Personal unit. Instead, it is armed with dual .75 caliber automatic grenade launchers integrated into the shoulder pods. Capable of a blistering 200 rounds per minute, all while re-arming as it fires, the Seraphim is best suited for setting up on high ground then mowing down anything that approaches. The unit's One Off Ability [Barrier Guard] is an Ongoing Action that complements this by utilizing differential harmonic projection to shape the IS' forcefields such that it can better deflect oncoming forces, making it the second most in defensive capability of the core team. This can also be used to shape blades and perform several additional functions. For example, [Hand Sonic], the most basic application, shapes a small part of her barrier to form power swords mounted on her wrist. [Distortion] uses the shields to literally distort space such that all vectors from the front is redirected aside; however this prevents her from firing or attacking through that facing. [Delay] condenses space as such, causing light to take longer to pass through, creating the illusion of an after-image for a second while Celeste has since moved off. Other examples exist as Celeste continues to dream up/reveal newer applications of Seraphim's One Off Ability.

Riz however has no profile done yet, because Vandam is still being written. But after the latest scene, I've more about what she's like.

Spoiler for Partial profile of Riz:

Risielle Koh Yukimura

Original: http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...9&postcount=46

Name: Riselle Koh Yukimura
CV: Kugimiya Rie
Nickname: Riz
Age: 14
DOB: ??-??
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Twin-tails, maroon.
Gender: Female
Affiliation: Infinite Stratos Academy Class 1-2 / Ishikawa Heavy Machinery
Occupation: Idol
Classification: Pilot
IS title: IHM Converted MPIS Uchigane-type + Tenmoku armor equalizer “Tenmoku Uchigane”
IS CV: Masashi Ebara
IS style: Samurai, Modern Warfare, Special Issue Ammunition
Generation: 2G
Storage Form: None

A child idol/actress famous for her appearance as the female protagonist in [Empatsu no Eiyuu]. Titled by her fans as [Goddess of Tsundere]. Her real personality is much more mellow, and conservative. Worked hard for her popularity, which endears her to her fans even more. Likes practicing swordcraft and reading light novels. Finds herself in the straight man role in much of ST@R craziness. Even though it may seem otherwise, she counts Gin and Karon as two of her closest friends.

The Idol of Anime wears an IS that is practically a walking shoutout to [Empatsu no Shaga], the character Riz is famous for playing. Heavy armor protects the unit from significant damage, and yet Riz is able to move it with impeccable grace thanks to her IS Ability, Pyrokinesis. Another shoutout is her companion Condensor Golem, Izanagi; this one references her character's love interest in [Goddess Survive! 4].

[ZeroXSEED]

@ Eras
yes, he got arrested for hacking into military facility... but totally forget why, and not even remember about his own identity.

@ Meister

Thank you, and first two segment is posted above.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - What's Karon doing in his cell? There must've been other hiding places

[MeisterBabylon]

Kajie resembles Woolf Enacle. So without personality changes, he'd fit right in a 4koma. Yeeeeeeaaaaah...

Btw, he's not Captain. Ozma Lee Aniki is.

Also, I added details of Riz's IS.


Trivia: Empatsu no Eiyuu is a shoutout to Shakugan no Shana, and Goddess Survive! 4 is Persona 4.

[Eratas123]

@ Meistah - What's a Shout out to persona 4?

[ZeroXSEED]

@ Meister
Oh shoot, I mixed up the names.... I though Gou Kajie is the name of Karon's bro. Who's the name again?

@ Eras
Riz and Celeste is really pissed at that time, and Karon want to hide in the LEAST possible place, and Brig is definitely one. Once again, MST3K mantra applies.

"I'm seriously gonna punish her" huffed angrily, Risielle 'Riz' Koh Yukimura walking through the dark alleys of the supercarrier's engine compartment.

"[Riz...]"

"Have you found her?" she asked frankly, dead tired of searching through the ship.

"[I've tampered with security camera, guess where she's hiding]"

".... definitely not kitchen"

"[Yes, she's in the ship's containment facility]"

She slapped her temple in anger.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Now I get it Last thing about that: Was Irish's cell the only one she could get into?

[ZeroXSEED]

No, but due to her nature, she need a companion, a harmless companion of course (she knew Irish has no intention of harm).

[Eratas123]

I'm assuming Irish is restrained during this segment since they don't normally leave the prisoner completely free when they're captured.

[ZeroXSEED]

The usual leg restrainer (technically he's free too move, but can't get out of the cell due to the limited length).

[Eratas123]

So they don't know each other here yet, right?

[Yachiyo]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Asked a question with an edit

@ Yachi - I like the first one better The second one looks ominous, but wind isn't exactly the most effective on an IS.

Ayt, I think I'll use it.

btw that wind is only a prop

gtg guys, gotta sleep now good night!