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Old 2014-09-08, 08:07   Link #41
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The first bit, where they are being a bit awkward isn't too bad. Once the actual sex starts, then yeah I found it a bit over the top; especially the notorious 'glug glug' ending. Also, to me it didn't really fit how the rest of the physics / physical interactions were described (not that there was a huge amount of detail to those).

Personally, I'd prefer to trade that story for a sentence or two in "morning dew girl", no need to be graphic, but something more than "they had been falling asleep everynight cuddling in each others arms".
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Old 2014-09-08, 10:51   Link #42
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The first bit, where they are being a bit awkward isn't too bad. Once the actual sex starts, then yeah I found it a bit over the top; especially the notorious 'glug glug' ending. Also, to me it didn't really fit how the rest of the physics / physical interactions were described (not that there was a huge amount of detail to those).

Personally, I'd prefer to trade that story for a sentence or two in "morning dew girl", no need to be graphic, but something more than "they had been falling asleep everynight cuddling in each others arms".
To hell with that, I want the two of them to have the most violent awe-inspiring sex the written word have ever witness. These two kids are too vanilla gotta start to learn how to spice things up at the rate they are going. (For those who don't know they go it a couple more times in 16.6 onwards.)
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Old 2014-09-14, 23:39   Link #43
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The point of 16.5, perhaps, is that that's how we imagine sex to be like, and 16.6 to illustrate, literally, how we imagine it to look like.

And then you finally get laid and try to do the same, and that's when you realize that among other things, Kirito has a humongous STR stat...
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Old 2014-09-15, 06:22   Link #44
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I doubt anything so well thought out. 16.5 seems to be 100% hard core fan serivce. The other 16.x that I've seen just recently found the translations for, also seem to be just about all fan service too (in that they don't really add anything to the existing plot), although more in line with other characterization.
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Old 2014-09-16, 03:06   Link #45
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(in that they don't really add anything to the existing plot),.
Of course not. The 16.x series (excluding 16.5) were just little stories Kawahara wrote to sell at COMITIA, and just for fun.
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Old 2014-09-16, 03:52   Link #46
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Of course not. The 16.x series (excluding 16.5) were just little stories Kawahara wrote to sell at COMITIA, and just for fun.
Are you sure? Are you sure Kirito isn't a sex god and he fucks Asuna so much she craves his d everyday? I thought so.
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Old 2014-09-16, 11:07   Link #47
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Are you sure? Are you sure Kirito isn't a sex god and he fucks Asuna so much she craves his d everyday? I thought so.
She'd be tsundere about her addicktion if the 16.x series are anything to go by.

More seriously speaking, if you're willing to write *that* many side stories celebrating one pairing, then... It's a chicken and egg question, really, to decide if it's Kawahara's fantasy or fan shipping. But i'm inclined to point out that throughout every single arc, Asuna is always described as the most beautiful. The prescence of competing haremettes seemed to merely serve to enhance her beauty in contrast to theirs.
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Old 2014-09-16, 18:41   Link #48
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The prescence of competing haremettes seemed to merely serve to enhance her beauty in contrast to theirs.
Kinda like how a chick will bring ugly friends with to the club, to make herself look hotter lmao
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Old 2014-09-16, 18:41   Link #49
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The later 16.x stories (which I enjoyed) seemed to be to be less directly tsundere and more about the shyness of two people who have just jumped into their first sexual relationship.

It seems pretty clear, based on what I've read so far (obviously incomplete) Kawahara is quite interested in the relationship (most likely partially as a form of wish fulfillment) but seems to have missed or decided to not follow any of the logical paths that would allow it to continue hence the 16.x stories have so far been set in the original SAO. I mean you have two people who have been through hell and all you can think of is to keep them together "off screen"? I guess that's why breaking up couples between major story lines has become the cliche that it is.
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Old 2014-09-17, 07:42   Link #50
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So after peeking into this thread and seeing all the talk about this "16.5" chapter, I went and read it. Well. How to say this.. it's certainly not good. "Comical" is a fitting way to describe it. "Embarassingly bad" also works.
Rather than Kirito and Asuna being virgins, I wondered the entire time whether Kawahara was
The piece reads like a sexual encounter, as imagined by a 14-year old virgin posting on a fanfiction site but certainly not a believably written piece by any stretch. Got a good laugh out of it though, and that's worth something.

Though I have to say, it left me somewhat creeped out. As if Kawahara wrote that for himself, based on his personal fantasies or something. Kind of like Meyer...
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Old 2014-09-17, 21:58   Link #51
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I was just on the askreddit thread about people who stayed virgins until marriage and boy do their experience differ from 16.5. But hey what can I say Kirito is a sex god.
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Old 2014-09-19, 09:39   Link #52
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Lol after reading this, all I have to say is wdf did I just see....

After a while of boring reading I found myself finding it funny to replace some of his words , like Penis to Sword. which would make all this ahh hhaaa ha ha ahh aah haa hahaha ahaa aah ahhhh ahhh hhaa ooh hooo oh hoooh hohhho Bs make sense.

I feel bad for people who read this. Must have ruined their KiritoxAsuna fantasies.
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Old 2014-09-19, 10:24   Link #53
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Actually, I think 16.5 was the spark for lots of Asuna & Kirito fantasies... I remember when 16.5 overtook 69 as the most popular sexual reference.
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Old 2014-09-19, 15:33   Link #54
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^ If that's not a joking reference, then that's awkward.
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Old 2014-09-19, 23:14   Link #55
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Out of curiousity I decided to check out 16.5 and like so many threads on 4chan and Reddit I wish I never looked lmao. It reminds me of this cheap porno knock offs like Forest Hump and Star Whores
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Old 2014-09-20, 04:03   Link #56
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Out of curiousity I decided to check out 16.5 and like so many threads on 4chan and Reddit I wish I never looked lmao. It reminds me of this cheap porno knock offs like Forest Hump and Star Whores
Except it actually stars Tom Hanks as Forrest Hump. "Hump Forrest hump!!"
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Old 2014-09-20, 05:36   Link #57
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1. 16.5 is not anime only (not even novel.) so i think all discussion about it, by this thread's rule, should be in spoiler tag.
Spoiler for and:
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Old 2015-03-08, 14:53   Link #58
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I know this thread is old now, but I'll give my 2 cents worth anyway.

I had no idea this existed and wish I continued to not know that this existed.

It's one of the most cringeworthy things I've ever read, I couldn't even finish it. I'll assume the author was really, really young when he wrote that.
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