The Phail Thread

[Kelisidina]

I'm new here. xD; But um... here:

Spoiler for Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's:

Spoiler for Recolored:

I'm not good, but I hope that through your critique, I eventually will =D

[Daniel E.]

Welcome to Fan Creations!

Be sure to check the sig rules now!

[Larthak]

Originally Posted by Kelisidina

I'm new here. xD

Another fresh artist! Seems like our population is growing back these days.

Let's see if I can help in any way.

Originally Posted by Kelisidina

But um... here:

Seriously, this is hilarious. I can't stop chuckling every time I see it. It's impossible, I tell ya! XD

The text and her expression, that's a perfect combination. Genius.

So, what did he do?

Originally Posted by Kelisidina

One thing...watch out for the text. It's a bit painful to read here.

Now that I think of it, you use the same font everywhere. Try changing it from time to time. Of course, it is nice looking and all, but sometimes it's not the most efficient way to do things.

Originally Posted by Kelisidina

I must praise the colors here; those are really nice transitions.

Originally Posted by Kelisidina

I'm not good, but I hope that through your critique, I eventually will =D

Well, you sure ain't bad. And you surely deserve some cookies for the effort!

[Kelisidina]

Hey guys. Sorry for the size, but all the forums I'm in allow those sigs. I'll edit those and I hope to adjust.

Originally Posted by Larthak

So, what did he do?

He picked her up bridal style and put her on his motorcycle, then drove her to the hospital xD;

[Kelisidina]

Bumpage.













Redid my Kelisidina banner:

[Rikimtasu]

Source of this character please? If possible,render too.

[Kelisidina]

Originally Posted by Rikimtasu

Source of this character please? If possible,render too.

Unfortunately, I can't give it to you as I was told not to. Renders for her are hard to find. But she's the Sun Goddess of Japanese Folklore, anime style. ^^; Also, I would like it if you critique my banners instead of just asking the stocks. ^^;

[Daniel E.]

Originally Posted by Kelisidina

Unfortunately, I can't give it to you as I was told not to.

And who told you not to? The person that did the extraction? if that's the case you could always post the full version of it.

EDIT: <-- thinking back on it

Guess I was a bit pushy with that second comment, sorry. >_<

My offer to do it still stands, though.

[Aurelie]

Didn't know you had an account here. xD

Looking at the 'Shoes of Glass' one again, the text doesn't really match the render, the text is quite sad while Saya is smiling.

[Evil Rick]

Welcome to the club, (yeah, I'm a bit late giving "welcomes" but, bah, what the heck )

It's a good style of graphics, a pretty cool job.

[denice25]

Welcome and Enjoy....

[Kelisidina]

Well I haven't been here in forever xD; I realize that the render my friend did isn't all that good, so I just did it myself. Here, enjoy 8D

Http://s866.photobucket.com/albums/a...cks/render.png

[grylsyjaeger]

Originally Posted by Kelisidina

I quite like this one. Mind telling me where it is from?

[Kelisidina]

I'm not quite sure, but I think the girl's name is Sachiko from Maria Watches Over Us

Edit: Yeah the stock's a fanart of her. xD;

[Kelisidina]

Update, like anyone cares ;D

[Chaho-Chi]

Originally Posted by Kelisidina

Update, like anyone cares ;D

Anything but poker face. D:

[Kelisidina]

I like Poker Face D:

Hrm let's see if people still give me critique. If not, I shall have to accept the fact that I will never improve with graphics:

[Larthak]

Originally Posted by Kelisidina

I like Poker Face D:

Hrm let's see if people still give me critique. If not, I shall have to accept the fact that I will never improve with graphics:

Bah, don't just give up. How about some tutorials online, they help a lot. I'd also suggest venturing into the unknown; most of your sigs have a very similar pattern - get rid of that, I say, experiment! Blending, render enhancements, background enrichment, C4D brushes...There's a vast ammount of possibilities so don't limit yourself.

Do you do your renders or do you download them somewhere? If the former, good job on that, that's flawless so far. The main problem would be your sigs' impact on the viewers, the impression they give.

[Kelisidina]

Aww... Thanks Larthak That really got me out of the slump. And you're right, I do tend to use textures a bit much. And yes I do my own renders thanks xD Tried changing that:

<--- textures

<--- c4d's

<--- Stocks+Lighting+C4d's+Render Enhancement. I honestly tried lowering the quality, the size, God knows I did. But the damn thing WOULDN'T GO DOWN. Even when I limited it to AnimeSuki file sizes. If someone can help me with such technical difficulties, I'd appreciate it.

[Mon Cheri]

Nice stuff you got here! You're MUCH better than me when I was 'fresh'.
The only thing I'd like you to do more is blending.
And try to experiment more with the text! You should try escimo's styled text tutorial, that helped me out a lot.

Have fun, and NEVER give up!

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