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With all the scifi stuff flying around the thread, I thought it was 2135-2142!
Completely removing the Foundation and going with my original plan, taking over Australia (IRL, we've just bought over their financial industry and half of their telcos, and we form 20% of their student population in their universities) and turning it into a giant version of Singapore (which if you look closely Australia IS a giant island state). With Stratos changing the world, that is possible. That would mean that in my fic, the Caliphate doesn't exist, the One Year War occured for a different reason, and Saintess' OC and various historical concepts will have to be tweaked to fit in. I hope you don't mind... Quote:
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- The Halycon: Built with 1G spare parts and a Yggdra condensor. Later models were refitted with a battery which holds core energy charge better and has a larger reserve. These were classified as battlesuits and by lacking an IS core exempt from the Alaska Treaty. However, the Halycon would still lose in a straight up fight against a complete IS (as stated by you), and would have to compensate with numbers. They still have to recharge using a complete IS. This generation has been half phased out of active service. The condensor is inferior in all ways compared to the battery, but miniturized designs are still found in various Singaporean IS subsystems. They have spilt over to the rest of the conventional forces as men have been found to be able to operate these machines powered by Y-cons. - The Halybon: Built with Rafale parts and was integrated with a Yggdra battery from the get-go. In most technical specifications, it is equivalent to a 1G IS, but still lacking the higher executive functions found in a complete IS. While these units are scattered throughout the armed force divisions, they all form the 1st Battlesuit Regiment, informally known as the Black Knights. Like the Halycon, these battlesuits have to recharge using a complete IS, but can only be operated by females. - The Halyeon: Promised to be the next 3G transformation of the armed forces, the Halyeon mounts an independent Yggdra engine, the final evolution of core energy systems that began with the capacitor a decade ago. Its frame was wholly developed in Singapore, based on data from the GLADIATORS project. Theoretical models estimate it to be close to late 2G IS. It is still under development.
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2011-02-19, 19:03 | Link #364 | |
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Erika: "Orimura-kun is quit nice, but hasn't he a thing for Dunoa-kun? I mean... I saw them blushing and holding hands the other day.
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2011-02-19, 20:57 | Link #365 |
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Join Date: Sep 2009
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please remove all my OC (except for Ayara) from the list for now
I am going to be doing a major reconstruction on the characters and the plot of my story. Ayara is going to be the main character for the new story. (Her profile is completed) Some modification Kamijou Yuu. (Still working in progress) Removing Ayada to work on new profile for Third character (Teliawa) (Still working in progress) Planning for the Second CASaIO character (Still working in progress) @Terminator98: Teliawa will taking over Ayada's role (You know....about Love?).
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2011-02-19, 22:11 | Link #366 | ||
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Very nice drawing! Makes me wonder who's going to be carrying Helena about while she's snoozing. I suggest Jung-chan! Quote:
Rachel: Whatever happened to the Support Houki Plan?! EDIT: After watching episode 7, I realized that I made the Fairlion Imouto the perfect counter to the AIC: - All energy shots pass through it because they lack mass. - Karon has the talent to match Laura's so dodging the railgun is no problem. - Trapping her in the AIC doesn't stop her detached claws, or even the remote Imouto coming from behind. - Saji diverting overboost power to the IS inertial dampeners can create a field that annuls the AIC's effect by enforcing the gravitational constant at a lower value(Taken from Star Trek) Its like Axel VS Kyousuke all over again! Granted after checking the designs of all 4 units of Shooting Star, Sherry, Marina and Hoksui all can do that, and do it much better, as the other girls are not only honors graduates but veterans...
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2011-02-20, 00:22 | Link #367 | |
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Spoiler for Fighting the Black Rain, tactical primer, AC Edition:
Details on the Canon Verse will be explained soon.
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2011-02-20, 03:17 | Link #369 |
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Just to point out: In American Military parlance, "Alpha Strike" is used only by the navy and by Marine Corps fighter squadrons, and refers to a launch of every aircraft in an air wing, for a single massed strike on a target.
Alpha striking, in the usage of firing all weapons on a manned unit, is an appropriation by first the Battletech community, later gamers as a whole, and would rarely be used by a professional serving military officer. Also, not keen on the male OC. What makes Ichika unique is he's the only guy in the world who can use an IS. ...now, a male OC who has to ride herd over one or more female OC IS pilots while trying to remain sane - eg a squadron commander, perhaps....
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2011-02-20, 05:57 | Link #371 |
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Heh. I'm not really sure I'd have any OCs in here; if I did have a male OC, it'd be a combat controller who's stuck with teaching the 3rd year classes how to fight in groups and follow Ground Control Intercept orders.
And is perpetually nursing a headache at the antics of girls everywhere, until he's weary of everything.
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2011-02-20, 06:55 | Link #372 | |
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Not to mention constantly buried under unlimited paper works.
In other news, Gou Karon has been overhauled as promised. Hopefully I managed to catch all the fluff errors; its hard to read through so much text over and over on top of my textbooks about your guts... And I'd hate to bullying on a Marina Inoue character (she has been my mainstay voice for shoutas), but here's a little teaser from the completely revamped profile: Quote:
Now I can finally get back to writing.
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2011-02-20, 09:58 | Link #373 | |
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Mr. Controller might even get along well with a certain individual known simply as, "Coach", THE dreaded combat instructor of every first year.
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2011-02-20, 10:57 | Link #376 |
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well, here it is, my very first IS, hope you all like it!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...sI/edit?hl=en# the character will come soon |
2011-02-20, 10:57 | Link #377 | ||
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And I just realised that you added the "slacker" trait to Karon - exactly what I wanted because Rachel is her direct opposite. I forsee that Rachel will always be the one cleaning their dorm in the future. And the VA for Kari is decided. Mizuki Nana - motherly (to that lazy wolfgirl), supportive and friendly (towards Rachel when she doubts herself), and the DMZ (between Rachel and Karon), also that she has a brilliant voice for singing too. Atashi no uta wo kike! Though I haven't decided who for that little kuudere.
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2011-02-20, 11:00 | Link #378 | ||
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I don't believe it - less than 8 hours since I first dropped by the IS boards and I'm attempting a Nano Outer Cadia Backlog Breaker and I have a page claim!
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I don't think that tech has advanced THAT far yet to have moon colonies, Kha - and if there are any, those places would be US, not Singapore. Why? US has a bigger economy, plain and simple. Nationalism is all fine and well but keep it in check. That's why my OC will probably be British rather than Malaysian - then again we do send some cadets to Sandhurst and Dartmouth from time to time for training... Quote:
And assuming that this is a world that follows our world fairly closely, Widow Six Seven would have seen action and called in airstrikes of his own, and would therefore be less that pleased with prima donna grandstanding... You can make a male charecter if you wish - my OC, Widow Six Seven, is a British Army FAC. But as a pilot? No. Ichika is the only male IS pilot in the world. Let's keep it that way. As for male presence at the IS academy... most places would actually limit the male staff - it is a glorified girls school, afterall, but it's not unknown to have male teachers at girls schools. Place him in a teaching role, perhaps, or admin - be creative. With Widow Six Seven, he's an FAC who's training third year students in following ground control instructions and working together in groups... ...and he may be the only person in the academy who isn't cowed by Cecilia Alcott. In fact, she'd be cowed by him. Also something that's been bugging me - are IS used for warfare or not? Because Chifuyu apparently spent time with the German Army as an instructor, but there's mentions here and there that IS aren't supposed to be used as weapons. It's a bit maddening. I ask because I have thoughts as to how Widow Six Seven and the British Army would employ IS in the battlespace, working in conjuction with existing assets (because let's face it, when you've spent billion of Pounds Sterling on the Apache AH1, the Crazy Prepared improved British version of the American Apache Longbow, developed by the boffins at Westland, you're damned well going to use it).
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2011-02-20, 13:12 | Link #379 | ||
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But having a guy that's a badass normal like Mwu La Flaga isn't bad... My own char has this recorded in his bio. He pwned an IS with a modified F-22 raptor. XD Quote:
I already made her voice this yandere some time ago: Spoiler for Sophia Rainer "Aka" Platinum Princess:
I also slightly modified Alex's bio... namely, his personality. Beware the Stoic with a heart of gold that might turn into a male Yandere... Also fixed Lyn's profile a bit. Chapter 2 is around 75% done... should publish it tomorow.
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2011-02-20, 14:14 | Link #380 |
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I can't believe I'm doing this...
Okay, current thoughts - I am assuming that the British Ministry of Defence has a vested interest in following IS development and creating doctrine for IS operations in conjuction with ground forces. With the Apache AH1, they can modify existing US doctrine as well as create their own, but it doesn't detract from the fact that until 656 Squadron went to Helmand there was no Apache doctrine. This time around, the British Army wants to get a foot into shaping IS doctrine for when it will inevitably become a weapon, and so has a number of observers at the IS academy, one of whom is a British Army officer with the callsign Widow Six Seven, a Forward Air Controller... Spoiler for Widow Six Seven:
There's a certain bit of crack that can be found with this OC. Consider it my little in-joke at Cecilia's expense. XD
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