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However, I replaced bows and crossbows with rifles, submachineguns and other modern weapons because they were much more easily bought from the black market via Shoran rogues who can transform into and disguise themselves as humans easily. Melee weapons are harder to procure as they have to be obtained from the magical black markets. This led to a divergence in combat preference amongst the warriors and hunters. The old-school preferred shorter ranged weapons like SMGs and handguns as secondary arms to their fists, claws, fangs or any melee weapon they can get their hands/paws on. The more humanized ones preferred long-ranged weapons and hit and run. These are the Fire and Air hunter castes. The Aun command great respect and reverence amongst the Shoran because of their gift of insight, and the ability to speak with and honor the elements directly; only they have any magical ability apart from transformation. Therefore, wolves still are shamanistic, but its due to availability that their weapons have changed. This was why I felt if they had contact with Chao, they could solve their weapons shortage. There are 2 more support castes, Earth and Water, but is this acceptable? Quote:
No complaints for me here; being post-StrikerS characters I won't be dealing with them till at least StrikeR2. But once I have an idea what to do... Kluize: ...everything will go according to plan.
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Now that's an idea worth following up on. I actually made a tacit nudge to this in an old build of something, but it never made final...hmm... Quote:
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Aha...this sounds quite...intriguing. What interests me most about this is where it'll go from here. You can do so much more from the shadows than from the light.
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2008-07-26, 20:18 | Link #3023 |
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*The scene abruptly switches to a remote and mostly barren lot somewhere in the backwoods of Michigan. Comartemis sits in a lawn chair on the shores of Lake Leelanau (look it up on Google Earth) with a squirrel sitting on his shoulder, looking at an old iBook G4 with Outer Cadia displayed on the page*
Greetings from the middle of nowhere, fellow Cadians. I seem to have lost myself on the road of life-- *Comar has been slapped with a lawsuit by Hatake Kakashi!* --and wound up stranded in the middle of nowhere for the next two weeks. Fortunately I'm not completely cut off from civilization, and I'm finally getting somewhere in writing up Alex's profile and backstory, so the haxxbusters should have something to do before next week is up. As far as the spell list goes, I'm taking a new approach to the creation process; I plan to start out small and add stuff until the general consensus says that Alex is a balanced character as opposed to my typical approach of creating the entire spell list before consulting anyone on it. The Negihaverse may actually cut off and diverge after the Chao arc, with the Magic World Arc not coming in to play until around StrikerS. Not a certainty, just a possibility, as I'd like to be able to work with solid facts about the questions introduced during the current arc, like what exactly Fate's motives are, who his partners in crime are, etc. I plan on having Fate be one of the recurring Big Bads along with Original JS and Cyphus Kane, but I need more information on him before I make any real movements in any direction. In other news, welcome back Kagerou! Alpha won't really be missed on this end, to be perfectly honest, but I'm looking forward to this new project of yours, assuming at least that it's decidedly less angsty than Alpha was.
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2008-07-26, 23:31 | Link #3024 |
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: Oxnard, CA
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Well, I'm just dropping by right now...seems you've been busy.
Anyway, I've got to working on my next chapter of SearcherS, so here's a preview... Spoiler for Ch.13- Preview:
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2008-07-27, 01:59 | Link #3025 |
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@Comar: I am not that far updated on Negi to understand what your plans are, but should be ok.
Been a while Satty! And in other news I finally worked out what to do, and dropped the caste system, replacing it with bloodlines, each with different characteristics and hence roles they play: Kor (Wind) and Shas (Fire) pedigrees may have slightly differing doctrines for the pursuit of prey, but they all have bigger physique and endurance, and so are the traditional hunter lines. They make excellent rangers and warriors. Por (Water) and Fio (Earth) pedigrees may be smaller in size, but are talented in softer skills, the former producing the best rogues and liaisons officers, the latter being better at professions, agriculture and cottage industry. Aun (Wilds) are even larger than the Shas. They straddle both soft and hard worlds in terms of skills. However, they are masters of neither worlds, and their greater humanity makes them reproduce much slower, resulting in their numbers being far fewer. The Aun are the only wolves with magical blood and spiritual insight, and so as shamans they are the leaders of the werewolves. And so, the naming system changes: Aun'la'Kouya would then notate family name, level of proficiency, then finally the individual's name. EDIT: Went back to basics, and gave Anna to another family instead. No more castes and stuff, Aun is their family name, pack is small, keep it simple and... ...Princess Anna x Kouya x Kero-hime rabu triangle. Of course I'm keeping the castes and stuff for in case Ken gives us the short stick in resolving the Chao problem unsatisfactorily, where I'll righteously throw my ideas back in and kick off Hitsuzen my way.
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Somehow my mind kept translating Captain Schattenman's name. XD 'Captain Treasureman' has a bit of a piratish ring.
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2008-07-27, 07:17 | Link #3029 | ||
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Do something deep, with loads of service thrown in. And so, I did. This was the original script of Kouya's, just a handful of wandering wolves holed up in the Library. However, what I didn't like about Kouya was that he was one lucky Hanyou. No prejudice, doting mother, close-knit clan, a rare talent and is kept by his dream girl as a pet. Turns out I needn't have worried; that script was good until I started talking aobut Shamanism and realizing links to 40K... @.@ Throw all that 40K away, keep the core shaman, then add more fun. I recalled the school had a big forest full of eerie rumors; what better to still another pack of well-to-do werewolves there? Plus I had a lot of fun crafting Anna (after somebody protested about being left out. >.>), and the chance of a triangle would be very Ken-like. And the large density of werewolves could then be a secondary reason why Eva was sealed in Mahora, but that's just a random thought. ^^;;; Now the only problem is to think of what Kouya wears fresh out of transformation... What would you call the leather pants that a Red Indian Brave would wear? And that necklace made out of bones? And when I say "Blue-fur poncho", what kind of an image do you get? ^^;;; Quote:
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I'm gonna have to wait for Kouya's profile before I say anything final about that though.
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Like I said, it's just a possibility I'm toying with, not a sure thing. I'm already having some difficulties getting the Aces to stay in one place during their teenage years since they're going off on missions all the time, which may actually explain why they aren't around to interfere in key events or show up just in the nick of time in some cases. Nano/Alex/Fate/Hayate Quad Buster vs Demon Lord Sukuna, anybody? Or should Eva hang on to that Crowning Moment of Awesome?
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Keroko knocked some sense into me.
Indeed, I need to give Cadia-tan some attention as well, lest I become alienated from her. Me: *pats Cadia-tan's head* Cadia Zwei: Long time no see, Onii-chan! (She's becoming more literate. She matures thru the posts.) Quote:
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~Just like that... Grandis: Ahh. Just like that, I see... Me: Yep! That's how it i-ACK!!!! Grandis: I'm not sure if this kind of stuff is necessary... Me: B-but it'll be great! Grandis: And what do you mean by playmates for the Battle Maniacs...? Me: Oh that. Err... Um... Hehe... *RUNZ* Grandis: *sigh* =_= Quote:
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Though introducing sudden connections isn't really that hard. Akamatsu tends to make a number of sudden connections, after all. >:3 Anyway, back to work for me. *gives Cadia Zwei another pat* Cadia Zwei: See you again, Onii-chan! Me: Seeyaz. =3 *runs off*
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Looking at Aurion's traits so far, I assumed he scores a high I and an equally high D for the DISC tests hence the last line.
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2008-07-27, 11:06 | Link #3035 | ||||||||||||
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"Princess" Anna likes Kouya and tries many ways to kidnap/dognap him, but Kouya is more interested in Nodoka and prefers to hang around her. At the same time, Nodoka is infatuated in Negi and fails to notice the few times Kouya transforms to approach her until much later, either Kyoto or earlier. Meanwhile, Kouya doesn't want to hurt Anna's feelings and opts to dodge her if possible. And to add to his confusion, he recently has been receiving visions about a red-headed princess and juggles watching out for the Library Exploration Club with searching for this mystery girl... ...then comes the heartbreaker moment where Kouya finally gathers his wits to confess, only to walk into Nodoka kissing Negi at the Festival ... ...not as tangled as I am at full creation power, but I hope this works so far, so I can factor in Keroko in future. Quote:
I recalled there was a name for it... Dreamcatcher? No, no, no... I mean, bright blue on brown tanned gear is... -worthy. I've updated for a grey-black fur (so Kouya in wolf/puppy form will have grey-black fur like a Huskie as well) so that when he henshins out it won't be so jarring... ...however, it seems that Clerics can't escape Gunmetal Grey, like how Kerokos can't dodge Chaos Black. It's a rather hard concept to grasp. Took me lots of research to understand what CLAMP says, and frankly once you do its really illuminating. Quote:
Cos I was working from the latter idea, and so she'd hang out with (but isn't part of, so Chao wouldn't draft her in) the Engineering club, and then make cameos along with Chao and Hakase until the time for them to take center-stage. If its the former then... NOT AS PLANNED! However, both scenarios fit into Kouya's visions, so I can change that easily. Just woe to the loss of KeroChao. Quote:
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Remember...? Hurt Nanoha = Face Keroko's Dark DragonBreath Hurt Fate = Face Kha's Divine Zamber Hurt Hayate = Face my 'Normal But No Less Painful' punishment. Now that I've thought about it, You like to use Darkness, Kha likes using the Light. =3 So that means I get Normal? :3 Not that I'm complaining, though. I love my neutral magic and how to use it advantageously! >:3 Quote:
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2008-07-27, 20:28 | Link #3039 | |||||||||||
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Profile coming soon, only problem is, I can't think of a name for his Pactio, nor his Artefact. And worst of all, I only have an idea of what happens to him in Kyoto arc and the Book of Knowledge arc. Mostly shafted. Quote:
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*hastily makes adjustments* Yes KeroChao is very unlikely. Now the problem is to resolve whether Kouya fits Keroko; she's a bit like Saber () and Kouya's a lot like Shiro () so I'll have to try really hard (). And no, no Unlimited Blade Works. The most is his variation of Ki-Magic Synthesis that combines the 4 elements instead: "I am the Son of the Wind and Rain." "Earth is my Body, and Fire is my Blood." ...it goes further, but yeah. ... () Quote:
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Pact: Certain Victory computes to hell and back again. No complaints about her abilities, in fact, I can safely say she's... Tohsaka Anna: "...the most powerful class of Ministra." ...like Asuna. Many Khrack crystals fell when her story came up... But from the story... I can feel the fire burning in mah brains! So many elements mesh together, just need to tweak a little here and there...! *a Khrack explosion ensues as new crystals form in place of the old*
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2008-07-27, 23:09 | Link #3040 | |||||
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Well, I'm back in. Sooo....
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....somehow.... I get the feeling you're disapointed in me, Kanchou.... -_-;; /me gazes sadly at the paperwork he has to do here and in real life. Well, I was planning on refining Franz and toning down a number of Halo elements. But.... i think I'll need to read more fantasy. My current readinglist is as follows: The Royal Marines: From Sea Soldiers to a Special Force, Downrange: SEALs in the War on Terror, Marine Sniper: 93 Confirmed Kills, Black Hawk Down and Inside Delta Force. Rebuilt!? Back to the roots of FA? @__@ Zinitra's skillset looks good and i can see more than a few spells that were dropped from previous concepts before... ....black-haired Rena does not compute. Yet is pretty and hawt and cute. History.... zomgzomgzomg this is the stuff we used to come up with! This spark! This thing that I have lost! Quote:
THIS! IS! SHIN ALPHA! The same vibe that ran in SA runs now in the Black Order! ... *goes off to read old SA to get back into the feel of things* I'm really, really, really excited about this. Looks awesome. *begins preparations to ship Zirnitra/Rena* Well, now that the OFM are mine to play with.... once I finish Soldiers of the Wasteland and Task Force 6, I'll take a break, do some long thinking on how I want to proceed... Oh and write sone Franz/Naomi hijinks. Been meaning to write more light-heartedly about them. Having said all that.... I should have never brought Chief in. -_- SHoulda just left him out and kept Johnson. The Black Badass Sergeant Major is both a trope and Truth in Television.
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