Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[GaelicDragon]

Originally Posted by Lhklan

New idea

Spoiler for Lucky Bastard:

*KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK*

"Yuuno! ARe you in there?" Vice called out as he knock on the door.

It was Sunday, and seeing as they have all received a day-off, Vice had decided to organise a day out. They had all agreed, but unfortunately the last member of their group haven't showed up yet.

"Yuuno, hurry up would ya?" This time, it was Zafira who hollered.

Suddenly, the door opened violently, and the guys frozed.

"What the hell do you want?" On the other side, stood the Number Due, her face twisted in annoyance. What draw their attention however, was the fact that she seems to be dressed only in a green shirt, which supposedly belonged to Yuuno.

"What? Cat got your tongue?" the blond asked, tapping her foot impatiently.

"We-err- we were supposed to meet him at the park, but he didn't show up so we came to see what's wrong." Chrono replied.

"Shouldn't you be with that nun of yours?" Due narrowed her eyes at the Admiral.

The man sitffened, as he can feel Verossa's glare on his back.

"She's busy, and I'd rather not bother her." Chrono swiftly reply.

"Due, who is it?" Another voice came from inside the house, and a purple haired woman emerge. She is also wearing only a partially buttoned white shirt.

"it's the Stooges." The Number replied. "They're looking for Yuuno."

"I'm sorry, but he's still sleeping. Last night was rather tiring for him." Uno said, offering a small bow.

"It's alright. We'll just leave." Vice replied. "Tell him we said hi."

"I will."

The moment the door closed, the four men stared at each other, before they let out a synchronised sigh.

"Lucky bastard."

Originally Posted by biodude711

Lucky bastard indeed.

Yuuno's prime numbers?

[Lhklan]

Prime numbers? I don't get it...

[biodude711]

Originally Posted by Lhklan

Prime numbers? I don't get it...

Prime Numbers

[Lhklan]

... *bang head* Bad brain! No more harem ideas! *bang head*

[Nagumo]

Originally Posted by biodude711

Prime Numbers

So... since 5 and 7 is a prime number, does that mean Yuuno is going to Loli on us with Cinque and then pique the interest of Sette into deciding to leave prison for rehabilitation or something?

[Lhklan]

Damn it guys! Stop giving me ideas already! T_T

Spoiler for spoiler:

I was planning for a jailbreak of sort, with the original 4 + Sette leaving. They later return, with Quattro under heavy surveillances, while the other lives with Yuuno.

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by Nagumo

So... since 5 and 7 is a prime number, does that mean Yuuno is going to Loli on us with Cinque and then pique the interest of Sette into deciding to leave prison for rehabilitation or something?

11 is as well...

Does that mean that Wendi will join in?

[Lhklan]

*hands up in surrender gestion* If it ever comes to that, then it would be an AU.
Main UYD is YuunoXUnoXDue only.
AU would probably be YuunoXPrimeNumbers (Might as well add Ginga to it, seeing as she's technicaly No 13)

[nemo1986]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

11 is as well...

Does that mean that Wendi will join in?

You for got 3

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by nemo1986

You for got 3

What? I thought Tre was a given in that situation.

After all, Sette follows Tre like a little (okay, big) puppy.

[YF19EX]

Wanted to see a Yunno x Ginga for a while...

[Akiyoshi]

Originally Posted by YF19EX

Wanted to see a Yunno x Ginga for a while...

I find funny to see Yuuno paired with almost any member of the female cast ...as long as it's not a harem story. He's so cliched in those that is almost painful to read. I find the stories where he's paired with a single character all the more enjoyable cause the story takes the time to actually develope why a relationship between the characters start to develope instead of just throwing him to a bunch of girls and have wacky harem hijinks xDU

Yuuno is better than that.

[YF19EX]

I most certainly agree. I enjoy the harem comedy aspect as much as anyone else, but it does take a bit more writing creativity to put out a one on one story build up on a relationship. From start to finish, it does make the journey more enjoyable if the writer can pull it off.

[ZeroXSEED]

Incidentally, I think Vice or Chrono fit the definition of harem hero more...

[Lhklan]

Like I said, this story OT3 is UnoxYuunoxDue. Hence the title UYD.
Anyone want a harem, look for Nanya. I'm not good with stuff like that.

[Koveras Alvane]

So... I have uploaded the final chapters of Part I of AtonerS yesterday. I would like some feedback from anyone who has read it, as well as maybe ideas for further developments of the story... Part II won't be published any time soon, since I am still about 40% done with the first draft.

[Filraen]

It's strange, I haven't read it yet I still have you/r story in my alerts. But I can tell it's a bit annoying getting one e-mail per chapter (3+) each time you update, any reason not to merge the whole update into a single chapter?

[Koveras Alvane]

Originally Posted by Filraen

It's strange, I haven't read it yet I still have you/r story in my alerts. But I can tell it's a bit annoying getting one e-mail per chapter (3+) each time you update, any reason not to merge the whole update into a single chapter?

Because each chapter has its own in-story timestamp for a title... Since I am jumping between characters and locations, I find it easier to navigate the scenes this way.

[Filraen]

That makes sense then.

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by Lhklan

Anyone want a harem, look for Nanya. I'm not good with stuff like that.

Nanya-muse: Mouuu... You make it sound like I make him write only harems!
DC-muse: And you don't?
Nanya-muse: *Dramatic pose* That's besides the point!
DC-muse: Uh huh, I think I'm going to leave now...
Nanya-muse: *Glomps DC-muse* WAAHHH! Don't leave me! Besides, I haven't washed your clothes from last night yet!
DC-muse: *Red* Guh! I told you not to bring that up!

My muse is weird.

StrikerS

Numbers

SSX 1-5

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - SSX 6:

It was getting to be late in the day when Teana found herself in a small cafe. "Thanks for meeting me, Mr. Zelgadis."

The older man nodded and sat down across from her. "While I appreciate the meeting, Enforcer Lanster, I wonder why we didn't meet at the Riot Force building or at the Midorya cafe."

Teana shook her head. "The Riot Force is under-staffed at the moment and I don't want too many people over-hearing. If I had my own apartment, I would have invited you to my place to talk." When Zelgadis raised an eyebrow and smirked, Teana blushed and shook her head. "Not like that. I meant over this case."

Zelgadis chuckled at her embarrassment. "It's fine, you're lucky that this place is slow right now, what did you want to talk about?"

"It's about this case, actually." Teana sighed and looked at her drink. "Tell me," she looked back at him, "what do you know about necromancers?"

Zelgadis raised an eyebrow. "Necromancers? Even where I was from, they weren't very common. Mazoku were the most common type, since they could animate bodies easily. But for humans, well, it depends. A novice necromancer can maybe control up to three zombies at a time. A more experienced one can have an entire army, the size depends on the amount of power they have. For example, if you were a necromancer when you joined Riot Force and had some skill, you could control maybe twenty zombies at a time. If Hayate was the one who made the zombies, she could control several thousand easily."

Teana stared at him. "There were necromancers that could do that?"

"Very rare, despite how strong myself or Lina are, most people where we came from aren't quite at that level." Zelgadis leaned back in his chair and thought for a few minutes. "Actually, if you want to know, if my grandfather was into that stuff, he could have revived every dead body on a continent within an hour. But then again, his skill and power was practically unmatched by any human."

Teana shuddered, she couldn't imagine having someone that could do that raise an army of undead to fight again.

"Of course, this assumes that you're just wanting cannon fodder that can march forward without fear of death against your enemies. If you put some actual effort into creating a zombie that's a bit tougher than those or has special tricks, you'll create less of them, but the rewards are more impressive."

Teana sweat-dropped as she listened to Zelgadis. "You... Know a lot about this. Why?"

Zelgadis sighed softly. "When I was younger, I searched tirelessly for a cure to a problem I had. Along the way, I came across several scrolls and tomes that described necromancy in various forms and details. Some even described just how much power was needed by comparing how much energy it took to develop a fireball spell and how much it took to create one zombie and explained how the energy requirements worked at higher levels. I just used math to figure out the rest."

Teana nodded and lightly bit her lips. "Actually, is there anything in there about turning fresh corpses into zombies?"

"Fresh corpses?" Zelgadis blinked and thought about it. "Well, I never heard of anyone turning a fresh corpse into a zombie right away, unless they made it so that their zombies could do it, why?"

"Because I'm thinking that there's a necromancer that's turning fresh corpses into zombies." Teana twitched as she thought about her choice of words. "Okay, I'm never going to use fresh and corpse in the same sentence ever again."

Zelgadis chuckled at her discomfort. "I wouldn't worry too much about it. If there was a necromancer with that kind of skill, I'd like to think we would have heard of them by now." Teana nodded at that. 'Actually, I'm more worried about the fact that she might be right.' If Zelgadis could read minds, he would have found that Teana was thinking the same thing that he was.

"Still, I should be going, it's late, and I need to get home before Subaru gets too worried about me." Teana's face went red when Zelgadis chuckled and gave her a knowing smile. "Knock it off, it doesn't mean anything."

Besides, Teana wanted to get rested up for the next day, Caro and Erio were going to be coming in and she couldn't wait to see the two of them again.

(---)

The next morning...

Blinking as he woke up, Kuma merely raised an eyebrow as he saw Kyrie on the left side of his body while Amitie was laying on top of him. The two girls were wearing over-sized, long-sleeved shirts that covered their upper bodies but revealed a hint of their panties as the two girls moved. "Bad dreams again?" He whispered when he noticed that the girls were both awake.

"Yeah..." Amitie said as she moved her arms to hug him more and push her chest against his. "I'm sorry, I just..." She trailed off and smiled as he put an arm around her shoulders. "Thank you."

Kyrie was practically purring as she molded her body against Kuma's. "Mmm..." She put her head on his shoulder and sighed happily. "Can we stay like this for a little bit?" As Kuma's arm wrapped around her lower back, she smiled happily and looked up at him. "Hey, Kuma... Want to have some fun?" She let out a yelp as she felt him pinch her sides. "Hey, come on, I'm serious."

"That's why I pinched your side." Kuma rolled his eyes. If it wasn't for certain things, he wouldn't mind taking Kyrie or Amitie up on their advances. But whenever he thought of what they went through, it was hard on him to reciprocate the feelings.

That didn't mean that he didn't entertain fantasies of the two of them at various points. He did have an appreciative eye for good looking women, after all.

"Why?" Amitie asked softly as she looked at him. "Why do you keep pushing us away?"

Kuma took a deep breath as he thought about his answer. "Because, you two are hurting." Ignoring their confused looks, Kuma hugged them tightly. "If things were different I would have already taken you up on your offers."

"Kuma..." Kyrie whispered, burying her face against his chest. "I'm sorry."

"It's okay," he smiled at her and looked at Amitie, who was looking as depressed as Kyrie sounded, "you two aren't bad girls, and I do like you. I'm just worried that if I got into a relationship with you right now it would hurt you."

"Because we were used by our former masters?" Amitie asked, sighing as she felt his hand gently squeeze her back.

"Partially. I just don't want a relationship where you two would think of me as your master. You aren't my slaves, and I don't want that type of relationship." Kuma moved his arms so that he could caress Amitie and Kyrie's cheeks. "Maybe one day, but for now, I just want to make sure that you two are able to live happy."

Kyrie looked at Amitie out of the corner of her eye and sighed as her sister snuggled against Kuma. She didn't blame Amitie, Kuma was comfortable. "Can we still stay like this?"

"Sure." Kuma said and went back to rubbing their backs to get them to relax.