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MeisterBabylon · 2014-08-28, 13:19

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

There's a difference in riding a horse in fabulous prince garment, and riding armored warhorse while brandishing 12 foot lance

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Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Yes, the former is quite secure with himself while the latter is clearly compensating for something.

*sees Riz's Tenmoku Uchigane riding her Trombe pony/golem*

I don't think she's compensating for anything.

Tempest35 · 2014-08-28, 17:07

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Originally Posted by Lhklan

Nah, the former feels like a spoiled brat while the latter feels like a warrior to me.

Wait, what happened to the Grail Wars/IS idea?

Lol, I just threw that out as a quick idea. While it can work with some tweaking, I don't have the patience to square out everything needed to write a quick one about that.

Speaking of, I guess I better shell out a few more for Drabbles.

~*~

"Hnn, it's been getting too hot for long sleeves recently," Ichika mused as he stood in front of Chifuyu's closet, rubbing his chin thoughtfully. "Still, she does like them. I guess one of the cotton/linen shirts will have to do."

"How can you do that," she muttered, standing by the doorway.

"Do what, Madoka," he asked, not bothering to turn around as he lifted three dress shirts out of the closet.

"Be so 'domesticated'," she said the word as if it tasted awful. "If I didn't know any better, I'd say you enjoy it." She kept her arms crossed, looking at him in a passive-aggressive manner. "Do you enjoy being a -"

"Oi, Madoka," he had the gall to cut her off, which surprised her only slightly. He turned around as he held the shirts draped over his arm. "If you want me to cook something for you, I can do that." He then gave her a big smile.

"Tch," she glowered at him before leaning off the doorframe to leave. "You can't keep that up forever, you know," she warned him. "Sooner or later, it's going to come out and you can't stop it. Even Chifuyu couldn't stop it from coming out."

"What...are you talking about," he asked with a fair bit of trepidation.

"I'm talking about after that 'attack' on the Academy," she told him. "You saw Chifuyu's injuries. Where do you think she got it from?"

Ichika's eyes flared in both anger and guilt. Anger that he was, once again, a target in someone else's game and couldn't really do anything about it. The guilt of knowing that Chifuyu got hurt, not only for his sake, but for the sake of protecting the students as well...

Madoka snorted. "Don't buy her B.S. for a second - no one told her that she HAD to fight an IS on foot. Who would even consider something like that other than our mutual idiot onee-san? And she just had a few fractured ribs - considering she solo'ed against an IS for almost 5 minutes is unbelievable."

"Wait, how did you know all of that...?"

His 'little sister' smirked. "I did use to belong to a terrorist organization you know. I might not have cared to do info gathering, but I do know how and where to look." A more serious look came on her face as she looked at him.
"You repress your urge to fight so much but when you do want to fight, you simply suck at it. Stop pretending that it's all going away. It's not - in fact, it's only going to get worse."

"Wait, who told you that?"

"Wouldn't you like to know," she turned around and left him alone in the room.

~*~

Hnn, not there, not by a long shot. Felt weird as I was typing it but HEY - I typed a thing.

ZeroXSEED · 2014-08-28, 17:59

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Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Yes, the former is quite secure with himself while the latter is clearly compensating for something.

Superior reach for lack of skill

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Originally Posted by Lhklan

Nah, the former feels like a spoiled brat while the latter feels like a warrior to me.

Tis

MeisterBabylon · 2014-08-29, 04:51

Grrr... Don't hate it when you just can't start a fic?

Ive all these morning scenes that don't sync with the rest of the chapter storyboard...

demino_hellsin · 2014-08-29, 05:51

I ignore it and put it on the backburner. Something better and more excitng that sets the proper tone will come along.

ZeroXSEED · 2014-08-29, 07:03

Backburner? Try spare shelf

I've once or twice assemble a new chapter out of entirely leftovers, especially when I hit a writer's block.

bitmeister · 2014-08-29, 19:10

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Backburner? Try spare shelf

I've once or twice assemble a new chapter out of entirely leftovers, especially when I hit a writer's block.

Meanwhile, in the dwelling of my mind, when I attempt such things as creating out of leftovers, I simply end up creating more leftovers that are overly specific to the point of uselessness.

ZeroXSEED · 2014-08-29, 21:10

You do not create leftovers :V

You shaft a draft you felt wouldn't fit the latest chapter, THAT's called leftover

MeisterBabylon · 2014-08-30, 03:42

Stories of my writing life. :/

Hmm... I do have a lot of leftovers here. I wonder what can I find...

*scruffling sounds*

bitmeister · 2014-08-31, 13:02

OK, I'm working on weapon design for my ff. How does this sound?

Phoenix Breath:
A huge version of the saiga 12 gauge shotgun, instead of regular shotgun shells, it fires 40mm grenades, which hold a small shaped charge at the front, a tiny amount of napalm, and a rocket motor which keeps the shell at close the speed of sound. Unfortunately, this gun holds only 6 per magazine, and in combination with fully automatic operation, operators tend to find this gun to be empty at the worst possible moments. In the hands of anyone with more than half a brain (aka anyone who isn't a teenage girl) this becomes a deadly weapon.

ZeroXSEED · 2014-08-31, 18:05

I figure the reason why it has small magazine is because complexity of the rounds?

Because while 40mm is large, it's easily within the range of I.S. weapon.

MeisterBabylon · 2014-08-31, 18:57

Gyrojet revolver.

*avoids Schwarzehase blitz*

ZeroXSEED · 2014-09-01, 04:17

First chapter of Cecilia/Ichika (or rather, opening prologue) is complete.

Grammar editor/beta reader needed badly.

DarkJak2050 · 2014-09-01, 04:37

Wish I can help, but I got my own problems here.

I have 4 more chapters of Phase 1 to clean up...

And they're not short.

bitmeister · 2014-09-01, 15:16

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

I figure the reason why it has small magazine is because complexity of the rounds?

Because while 40mm is large, it's easily within the range of I.S. weapon.

Yes, capacity is small because of the required space between each shell is needed to keep the heat of a shell launching from accidentally setting off the triggering mechanism in the warhead, the napalm, or the rocket motor.

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

First chapter of Cecilia/Ichika (or rather, opening prologue) is complete.

Grammar editor/beta reader needed badly.

Send em over. I've got nothing to do right now.

MeisterBabylon · 2014-09-02, 04:01

Graaaaaaaaah

Dont tell me I have to watch the anime to work out how Kanzashi is like!!

wavehawk · 2014-09-02, 04:40

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Dont tell me I have to watch the anime to work out how Kanzashi is like!!

- Yes. You will.

(I'll bring the chair, the duct tape, the naughty leather bodices, whips and the cherry chocolate bites)

bitmeister · 2014-09-02, 06:09

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Originally Posted by wavehawk

- Yes. You will.

(I'll bring the chair, the duct tape, the naughty leather bodices, whips and the cherry chocolate bites)

Don't forget the horse blinders. And the clamps. And the blowtorch.

ZeroXSEED · 2014-09-02, 06:11

How dare you forget rubber hose

MeisterBabylon · 2014-09-02, 07:16

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Originally Posted by wavehawk

- Yes. You will.

(I'll bring the chair, the duct tape, the naughty leather bodices, whips and the cherry chocolate bites)

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Originally Posted by bitmeister

Don't forget the horse blinders. And the clamps. And the blowtorch.

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

How dare you forget rubber hose

-_-

...

FOR SCIENCE!!

...

*watches 5 mins*

*starts puking*

IT AIN'T WORKING, CAP'N!!

2014-08-29, 04:51	Link #54524
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Grrr... Don't hate it when you just can't start a fic? Ive all these morning scenes that don't sync with the rest of the chapter storyboard... __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2014-08-29, 07:03	Link #54526
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Backburner? Try spare shelf I've once or twice assemble a new chapter out of entirely leftovers, especially when I hit a writer's block. __________________

2014-08-29, 21:10	Link #54528
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	You do not create leftovers :V You shaft a draft you felt wouldn't fit the latest chapter, THAT's called leftover __________________

2014-08-30, 03:42	Link #54529
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Stories of my writing life. :/ Hmm... I do have a lot of leftovers here. I wonder what can I find... scruffling sounds __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2014-08-31, 18:05	Link #54531
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I figure the reason why it has small magazine is because complexity of the rounds? Because while 40mm is large, it's easily within the range of I.S. weapon. __________________

2014-08-29, 05:51	Link #54525
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I ignore it and put it on the backburner. Something better and more excitng that sets the proper tone will come along.

2014-08-31, 13:02	Link #54530
bitmeister Expert Procrastinator Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: An air vent, staring at you	OK, I'm working on weapon design for my ff. How does this sound? Phoenix Breath: A huge version of the saiga 12 gauge shotgun, instead of regular shotgun shells, it fires 40mm grenades, which hold a small shaped charge at the front, a tiny amount of napalm, and a rocket motor which keeps the shell at close the speed of sound. Unfortunately, this gun holds only 6 per magazine, and in combination with fully automatic operation, operators tend to find this gun to be empty at the worst possible moments. In the hands of anyone with more than half a brain (aka anyone who isn't a teenage girl) this becomes a deadly weapon.

2014-08-31, 18:57	Link #54532
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Gyrojet revolver. avoids Schwarzehase blitz __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2014-09-01, 04:17	Link #54533
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	First chapter of Cecilia/Ichika (or rather, opening prologue) is complete. Grammar editor/beta reader needed badly. __________________

2014-09-01, 04:37	Link #54534
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Wish I can help, but I got my own problems here. I have 4 more chapters of Phase 1 to clean up... And they're not short.

2014-09-02, 04:01	Link #54536
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Graaaaaaaaah Dont tell me I have to watch the anime to work out how Kanzashi is like!! __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2014-09-02, 06:11	Link #54539
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	How dare you forget rubber hose __________________