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ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 00:48

Hmm, how about we take this example

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Originally Posted by first

"You're saying that 4 people took down a unit? Even if they were using anti-IS weapons, it would be near impossible to do it with no casualties." Sasha interjected.

"It's not skill that saved them, but an invention. My invention." His voice took on an angry edge, "One of them was wearing an advanced suit, the small one. It's an invention of mine from before." He balled his hands into fists, "Most likely it scanned the suit and allowed the user to get close since it recognized it from a database somewhere.

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Originally Posted by Second

"You're saying that 4 people took down a unit? Even if they were using anti-IS weapons, it would be near impossible to do it with no casualties." Sasha interjected.

"It's not skill that saved them, but an invention. My invention." His voice raised intensely, "One of them was wearing an advanced suit, the small one."

One can see how angry he is consider how his fist curled into a dense red ball "It's an invention of mine from before."

He continued to express his rage as he explained how the suspect can achieve such miraculous achievement. "Most likely it scanned the suit and allowed the user to get close since it recognized it from a database somewhere.

There it is, apparently you almost enough transition, you just need to add some spacing and prose as seasoning. (just don't overdo it)

demino_hellsin · 2012-06-16, 00:49

Doesn't have to be matrix dodge =))

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 00:53

@ Senpai - Thanks, I'll keep that in mind

Does the Professor seem to stuish to you?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 00:55

Nah, if anything, he does sound like a bumbling idiot (intelligence =/= common sense)

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 01:07

Sasha's basically the Token Good teammate (in a sense) while the other 3 look psychotic.

Side note - Need to add more people since 3 isn't enough. Any ideas?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 01:11

For what? THe terrorist? PT?

agetreme · 2012-06-16, 01:13

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Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Doesn't have to be matrix dodge =))

Dude, I already assume that it is not matrix dodge.

Which is why I claim it is impossible unless the shooter really suxs at shooting or the dodger luck out....or may be a little of both

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 01:19

As in I'm going to revise the scene and need to add more people. 3 clearly isn't enpugh. Need like 5-6 at least.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 01:20

@ Eras
Eh, I don't see anything wrong.

Give me the three's profile (one paragraph is enough) and I'll make other 3

@ Age
Which is exactly the case with Ultraviolet

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 01:29

@ Senpai - The three's profile...do you mean the one's already there or new ones?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 01:33

Err, wait a minute.

Lessee, you can add Autumn meddling with the conversation (wasn't supposed to) and a PT grunt commander (a guy), the other one... hmm...

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 01:37

Wasn't PT all female, though? Anyway, I need one's from any other org. It's more than just those three who want Tabane's location.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 01:52

Maybe a Sarashiki spy?

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 01:56

Wait, you mean a spy for or against? The leader's right there already.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 02:12

D'oh....

Okay, last thing, a CIA/KGB/Whatever agent.

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 02:15

Can't put any law enforcement there, unfortunately. Pne of the main things there is that the Government isn't aware of what's happening there.

Sid note - DO you plan to include Tearju Lunatique (Yami's creator) in TLR Stratos?

agetreme · 2012-06-16, 02:22

......

Feeling very conflicted, too many stories in my head right now....

But very little for IS......

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 02:28

@ Eras
Then I give up, maybe a delegation of a I.S. corporation then.

Probably, but sure as hell I won't include Nana or Momo, legality is way too dubious (Mea and Yami at least has excuse). At best they'll appear as cameo and won't join the harem.

Note - Drawing canon unit is a PITA, too detailed.

Eratas123 · 2012-06-16, 02:29

Just write what you want.

@ Senpai - Why too dubious? If you're willing to make Saruyama a male pilot, I think putting them in seems like a minor thing.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-06-16, 02:36

Problem is that they're both 12-13, and unlike Sainan High, I.S.A. sure as hell not leeway enough to let them in for the lulz. Besides, Gid's raid on I.S.A. already leaving a black mark on the Devilukeans, where Zastin and Lala is more or less treated a captive. (It's explained in story of course)

Besides, Saruyama is example of Male pilot gone wrong, Motemitsu at least a decent one, just not good enough to fill the expectation. Both are a take that against bog standard male Pilot idea, but not without their own development.

2012-06-16, 00:53	Link #32343
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Thanks, I'll keep that in mind Does the Professor seem to stuish to you? __________________

2012-06-16, 00:55	Link #32344
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Nah, if anything, he does sound like a bumbling idiot (intelligence =/= common sense) __________________

2012-06-16, 01:07	Link #32345
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Sasha's basically the Token Good teammate (in a sense) while the other 3 look psychotic. Side note - Need to add more people since 3 isn't enough. Any ideas? __________________

2012-06-16, 01:11	Link #32346
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	For what? THe terrorist? PT? __________________

2012-06-16, 01:19	Link #32348
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	As in I'm going to revise the scene and need to add more people. 3 clearly isn't enpugh. Need like 5-6 at least. __________________

2012-06-16, 00:49	Link #32342
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Doesn't have to be matrix dodge =))

2012-06-16, 01:20	Link #32349
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Eras Eh, I don't see anything wrong. Give me the three's profile (one paragraph is enough) and I'll make other 3 @ Age Which is exactly the case with Ultraviolet __________________

2012-06-16, 01:29	Link #32350
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - The three's profile...do you mean the one's already there or new ones? __________________

2012-06-16, 01:33	Link #32351
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Err, wait a minute. Lessee, you can add Autumn meddling with the conversation (wasn't supposed to) and a PT grunt commander (a guy), the other one... hmm... __________________

2012-06-16, 01:37	Link #32352
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Wasn't PT all female, though? Anyway, I need one's from any other org. It's more than just those three who want Tabane's location. __________________

2012-06-16, 01:52	Link #32353
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Maybe a Sarashiki spy? __________________

2012-06-16, 01:56	Link #32354
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Wait, you mean a spy for or against? The leader's right there already. __________________

2012-06-16, 02:12	Link #32355
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	D'oh.... Okay, last thing, a CIA/KGB/Whatever agent. __________________

2012-06-16, 02:15	Link #32356
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Can't put any law enforcement there, unfortunately. Pne of the main things there is that the Government isn't aware of what's happening there. Sid note - DO you plan to include Tearju Lunatique (Yami's creator) in TLR Stratos? __________________

2012-06-16, 02:22	Link #32357
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	...... Feeling very conflicted, too many stories in my head right now.... But very little for IS...... __________________ Ara Han

2012-06-16, 02:28	Link #32358
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Eras Then I give up, maybe a delegation of a I.S. corporation then. Probably, but sure as hell I won't include Nana or Momo, legality is way too dubious (Mea and Yami at least has excuse). At best they'll appear as cameo and won't join the harem. Note - Drawing canon unit is a PITA, too detailed. __________________

2012-06-16, 02:29	Link #32359
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Just write what you want. @ Senpai - Why too dubious? If you're willing to make Saruyama a male pilot, I think putting them in seems like a minor thing. __________________

2012-06-16, 02:36	Link #32360
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Problem is that they're both 12-13, and unlike Sainan High, I.S.A. sure as hell not leeway enough to let them in for the lulz. Besides, Gid's raid on I.S.A. already leaving a black mark on the Devilukeans, where Zastin and Lala is more or less treated a captive. (It's explained in story of course) Besides, Saruyama is example of Male pilot gone wrong, Motemitsu at least a decent one, just not good enough to fill the expectation. Both are a take that against bog standard male Pilot idea, but not without their own development. __________________