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Old 2012-02-11, 21:28   Link #21721
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pain or no pain, he'd probably die
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Old 2012-02-11, 21:34   Link #21722
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Hey Zero, I'm finally working on Dancing in the Rain.

I am going to make it epic. From life as the son of a poor farmer, struggling to keep himself at the top of his class, to being the CEO of a gigantic company, and Charlotte's birth.

I have even fleshed out her mother's character, and how she met Rafael. I'm going to include his reaction to her death, and the awkwardness of trying to connect with the distant child that resulted of their relationship.

I have many plans.

Estimated length: 30 thousand words.
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Old 2012-02-11, 21:37   Link #21723
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Lol, kind of a prequel Movie of sort. But Rain, Dunois is a royal family of many generations, not for a sudden. This is the reason Charl & Mom is disowned. or is it an AU?
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Old 2012-02-11, 21:38   Link #21724
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pain or no pain, he'd probably die
Well, we could always test out how much pain he can take before he croa--

Ichika: "DON'T GO DECIDING THAT ON YOUR OWN, BAKA!!"

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Lol, kind of a prequel Movie of sort. But Rain, Dunois is a royal family of many generations, not for a sudden. This is the reason Charl & Mom is disowned. or is it an AU?
- A man who marries into a wealthy family afte rmuch effort will stop at nothing to hide the fact that he was not a part of said family.
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Old 2012-02-11, 21:41   Link #21725
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how about embarrassment? People keep saying that they could die of embarrassment, and I always wanted to be a mythbuster.
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Old 2012-02-11, 21:44   Link #21726
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If you're embarrassed enough to A. get a cardiac arrest B. gent an asphyxiation C. get a suicide.

Myth declared Plausible
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Old 2012-02-11, 21:49   Link #21727
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There's also the possibility that the embarrassing act itself is what kills you. Sonny Bono died skiing into a tree...
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Old 2012-02-11, 21:53   Link #21728
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Lol everyone regular is here except Eras, Age and Box.
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Old 2012-02-11, 21:53   Link #21729
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nothing is true until proven by data > : )

EDIT: In the older harem. Who would be your favorite?
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Old 2012-02-11, 21:59   Link #21730
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^ Tabane, with resounding applause.
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Old 2012-02-11, 21:59   Link #21731
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Maya, definitely.

Note: And SaintX is somewhere watching over us
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Old 2012-02-11, 22:15   Link #21732
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@ Zero: You could count the fic like a prequel movie.

Spoiler for Short sample segment between Rafael, and his wife, Arianne. Pure practice:


Just some random practice. Hope I did well with it.
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Old 2012-02-11, 22:22   Link #21733
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Umm.... Rain....

Charlotte is born way before I.S. is invented...

Anyway, anyone knew Ichika's precise birthday is? What's the date and the day?
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Old 2012-02-11, 22:25   Link #21734
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@ Zero: I know that.

But the Dunois Company had to start somewhere.

Starlight Systems: Programming AI for combat vehicles.

Revive Systems: Programming AI for combat vehicles.

When IS was released, the AI and associated technology was applied to IS, giving them the ability to create and produce IS at a head start. The Revive systems were created to support multiple weapons systems, while the Starlight systems were created to support long range combat.

Which results in how the respective IS work.

Rafael Dunois (in this fic) is relatively famous for producing France's military technology, i.e weapons, tactical gear, and vehicles.
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Old 2012-02-11, 22:28   Link #21735
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Old 2012-02-11, 22:29   Link #21736
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@ Zero: Expect a humorous, entertaining, and highly captivating and awkward "how I met your mother" tale between Rafael and an 8 year old Charlotte.
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Old 2012-02-11, 22:30   Link #21737
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Oh god here come the memes.
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Old 2012-02-11, 22:33   Link #21738
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You've gotta be shittin me, just... go ahead, never mind Charlotte is banished at the age of 7 and picked again t the age of 13, just do it. Fan reaction be damned. This would be awesome
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Old 2012-02-11, 22:33   Link #21739
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@ Zero: So was it good? The sequence?

It probably could use a bit of editing. Right now, I want to know if it was melodramatic, or the more important point: Did it hold the right emotional weight to hit the readers, the kind of weight that is supposed to persist through out the story?

It's going to be the same as canon timeline. The how I met your mother thing happens when he goes to meet Charlotte due to a social worker thing. It's a few months after Arianne dies.

He forces himself to talk to his daughter, weighing himself responsible for his death, and not finding it within himself to even look her in the eye.

Which is then in turn interpreted by her as "he doesn't really care about her". Which spawns canon viewpoint on what kind of person he is.
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Old 2012-02-11, 22:35   Link #21740
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Ichika's birthday is Saturday or Sunday? I'll use it as reference for the calendar.

@Rain: It's good, just need to fix the timeline. Charl is banished at young age (7-8 years) while Charl's mom died 2 year prior to canon, so when she's 13. And In canon, he only talk to Charlotte... for about 30 minutes...

And he talked about her new job as Cadet Rep during that time, not even about their blood connection or their mother
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